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 Posted: Sun Sep 26, 2010 4:21 pm
Updated the points from the critiques to his FAQ! My goodness it's becoming a monster in and of itself! Hopefully things are clearer now! cool
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Posted: Mon Sep 27, 2010 10:12 am
Trying to think of a good emblem for Christof... but what??
So far I'm debating between:
- A Shovel
- A spool of Thread and a Needle
I'd love to hear thoughts/suggestions!
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Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 8:55 pm
From the looks of it you've basically got all your bases covered with the FAQ and your prompt responses.
Though I would like to see a bit more on his personality, even if it seems trivial. Does he have a really bad habit that pisses people off, but he does it anyway because he can't help himself? Like does he make weird noises all the time and won't stop even if told?
IDK.
Heterochromia for the win!
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Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2010 10:11 pm
Rown From the looks of it you've basically got all your bases covered with the FAQ and your prompt responses.
Though I would like to see a bit more on his personality, even if it seems trivial. Does he have a really bad habit that pisses people off, but he does it anyway because he can't help himself? Like does he make weird noises all the time and won't stop even if told?
IDK.
Heterochromia for the win! I'm not sure XD I could expand a bit but it's easier to just put him in action than write it out if you know what I mean. XD He's a tricky sort of guy. LOL HIS EYES BELONGED TO TWO DIFFERENT PEOPLE. One might be his original eye, idk what the body/brain ratio on him is XD
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2010 6:19 am
I have nothing useful to add or contribute as you've addressed a lot of the pertinent issues. So just wanted to say that I think he's absolutely adorable and wish you the best of luck in getting him! heart
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2010 10:31 am
Huni Pi I have nothing useful to add or contribute as you've addressed a lot of the pertinent issues. So just wanted to say that I think he's absolutely adorable and wish you the best of luck in getting him! heart Awww thanks so much! rofl Made a christof avatar last night for fun. X) HRRRMMMFFF! <3
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 9:48 am
Minor updates to his Fear! Just some growth specifics. X)
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 10:02 am
This, over all, seems like an AMAZING concept. I like his overall character, and he seems like he'd been incredibly fun to play. I just have one question about his FEAR though. o wo When he gets into the "adrenaline-induced moments, what exactly happens? Can he, or can he not, control himself? And if you would, would you take a look over my quest? Quest Thread. c:'
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 10:04 am
Eikkie This, over all, seems like an AMAZING concept. I like his overall character, and he seems like he'd been incredibly fun to play. I just have one question about his FEAR though. o wo When he gets into the "adrenaline-induced moments, what exactly happens? Can he, or can he not, control himself? And if you would, would you take a look over my quest? Quest Thread. c:'I just mean that's the only time he can make claws or scales appear. XD He can't just do it willy nilly, he has to be in FIGHT MODE! That's what I get for trying to be flowery in my language >o> Thanks so much! I'll crit back asap! <3
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 7:20 pm
Urgh, I really wish I could think of a good crit to leave you, but he's so wonderfully well-rounded that I'm having a hard time thinking of anything! @ A @ I think you covered all the bases pretty well ( even the ones I normally cover when critiquing people ), and he sounds like a lot of fun. <3 I guess I could ask what other things he enjoys doing, aside from sewing and doing things for people. Does he have any other hobbies or skills? You did a wonderful job and I really hope he becomes a part of the shop. ; A ; I would enjoy following roleplays with him! If you have some time, can you leave me some crit for Tsetsiliya? :3
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Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:11 am
Thanks so much for the kind words and crit! I'm not sure how to embelish his hobby, like I said, this would be his first time "on his own"- his usual hobbies include doing everything his Master told him to, so once he's in school I'm sure he'll expand from there. X) In the meantime while I wait I doodled some doodles because I'm too poor atm to commission other artists. emo ENJOY.  
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Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2010 9:19 am
Trying out for a custom slot! Bribe sent, we'll see how it goes! pirate If not, it's time for THE NEXT PLAN OF ACTION.
In any case let's bump this off of page two u_u
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Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2010 9:38 am
I had to reply again because ffffff your art is amazing. heart I do hope you get him. :3~
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Posted: Mon Oct 04, 2010 1:04 pm
haliekins I had to reply again because ffffff your art is amazing. heart I do hope you get him. :3~ Thankkssss! ;A; <333333 HERE'S HOPIN'! I love this shop, it seems there's always options even if one fails the next opportunity isn't that far behind!
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Posted: Tue Oct 05, 2010 10:39 am
Added an RP example BS'ed quickly. XD complete with footnotes because I've been reading too much Terry Pratchett. edit: Got bored of it, just storing it here XD RP Example Christof blinked in horror at the mess in front of him. Hell oh hell oh hell oh hell, he was going to be in trouble. He twisted and grabbed at his hair in a momentary panic attack before calming himself with a deep breath and debating his options. Maybe no one would notice? Or perhaps maybe they would. And then there'd be angry mobs and pitchforks and torches and- no, possibly not. He was over reacting. This sort of thing probably happened all the time in a place like this- experiments go awry and.. things get broken. He glanced around the hall and thanked his luck that no one was around. For how long, though? Right. Right just.... fix it and no one will notice. He was quick to jump to work, gathering up the broken pieces of stone and glass as carefully he could without cutting himself* and quickly rummaged through his bag for anything useful. A tube of GhoulGlue or Mucktape, anything.... AH! the roll of tape was stuck to one of his notebooks but intact and available all the same. He could swear he heard footsteps... The hunchback, in retrospect, wished he had taken more time, but the statue was now.... in one piece at least. Or at any rate many pieces all stuck together into the semblance of a lopsided figure, and Miss Cricket never looked lovelier.** The footsteps were coming closer now- time to run. As he made his lumbering but speedy get-away, he made a mental note that if a statue looked delicate, perhaps it was best NOT to lean on it or try to see how it was assembled. Probably a good idea. You live, you learn. You probably get detention. If they caught you of course. footnotes: *Not an easy task when sharp shards of glass and stone are often hungry for fingers and bite whenever possible.
** That is to say, to a young man with the proportions of a Van Gough, she looked lovely. Christof's judgment was never exactly spot on.
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