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 Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2011 10:02 am
Zippy my Zippy my Zippy <3
a) Gotta ask, he is a Mac or Pc? Or Linux? All of them? If he's a mac or pc, is he stubborn and 'protective' of his brand? (So many computer nerds have a favorite they champion).
Desktop PC for most of everything, Linux being the weapon of choice for servers and on his old laptop to have handy if he needs to develop on it. Macs are only good as doorstops. :V Yes, he did literally just tell me that.
b)Why does he like anime? When did he get into it, did it start as kid with things like Pokemon (and thus why he thinks it's a bit childish?). How does he feel about anime with adult or very dark content?
As a kid with Pokemon and Digimon, yeah. It's also a big part of why he thinks it's a little childish, and I do plan for him to get over it once he find other teens/young adults with that interest during rp.
Darker shows, I think, is something that will start to hold his attention more once he is corrupted - he is going to be slightly more attracted to darker things and concepts after his corruption. For now, he mostly watches Shounen shows.
c)Like his attacks! They're really interesting and pretty bad a**. I'm not sure what I think of his eternal making a person temporarily blind due the darkness, unable to get healing, and making them unable to hear anything. I don't usually think of an eclipse as being silent,. there's lots of creepy, scary sounds in the dark (owls, the wind, random noises). Total darkness yes, bad omen-y ( = no healing) yes. Hearing? Hmmm. sweatdrop I dunno about that one. It just seems like if you deprive a senshi of half their senses (especially ones essential for survival) it would be really, really, really easy to kill them. They'd be sitting ducks really! I could understand how darkness might play a bit of mind games with someone though, and how they might hear something that isn't actually there?
I kind of wrote his eternal with a "trapped in the dark side of the moon" idea in mind, but you make perfect sense, and I do agree it's probably a little too much. Just blindness will leave someone vulnerable enough, I think.
Thank you <3
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Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 3:26 pm
His Senshi section is very fleshed out and people have already critiqued that far better than I ever could so I'll just leave that alone.
Hmm, his personality seems pretty strong! Strong in-character and well written. This quest could have been posted before they put up that notice, but one of the guild threads they're seeing too many "reckless" flaws in characters. If you feel like changing it you could narrow it down to something more specific (for instance - "takes on more than he can handle" or something along those lines, since you mention him being the poodle vs the big dog) and still keep the same feeling of recklessness in his character.
It'd also be interesting to see if there's something underlying all his traits that knits them together. What, ultimately, is the biggest factor in his decision making? Does he think with his heart and follow his principles, even when they bring him into dangerous situations that he can't bear to back down from? Or does he think with his physical desires in mind and let himself be swayed by his passions... bringing him into dangerous situations that he's unwilling to back out of? Even though they're two different modes of thinking they can still lead to the same problems, the difference is how he gets there. Judging by his positive traits he sounds like he thinks with his heart and follows certain principles - he keeps his word, he tries to be fair, etc. However, his flaws (recklessness, grudge holding) sound more like they're ruled by passions rather than principles. He doesn't have to be uniform across the board, no one really is, but it's just something to think about for consistency's sake.
You've already received a lot of crits so I am sorry if this isn't very helpful. He's a very stable character (I admire his virtues, he seems like a good person to be around!), so I'm afraid all I could do was nitpick at things that he'd be with even if you didn't change anything. D':
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Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 4:32 pm
I think the too much of the reckless flaw is an old thing ? Im pretty sure I've seen characters with that flaw be approved since the re-opening, though you do bring a good point - im either going to tweak it like you said, or ill make up a backup just in case it's still effective. <3 I think taking more than he can handle is very ic for him, too.
I think he's more of a principle guy - im gonna tune up his flaws a little more, then <3
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Posted: Fri Mar 04, 2011 5:39 am
Oh, in that case then forget what I said. I had no idea how old those thread are. xD Ugh, I have been so totally useless... I am sorry! ><
Spelling error... I meant "he'd be fine even if you didn't change anything."
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Posted: Mon Mar 07, 2011 5:04 pm
YAY ALUNITE YAY!
(P.S. Alunite almost sounds like 'a long night', that's super clever XD. Just had to say so.)
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Posted: Mon Mar 07, 2011 5:14 pm
dude I never noticed. XD
I chose it because Lune means moon in french. A-lun-ite. Gettit ?
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 3:07 pm
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