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 Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 4:12 pm
Kir shook his head, dazed for a moment. " Damn memories..." He said shaking is head again. "Just so you know, I'm talking about the children... That last guy ran into a daycare center alley... You killed two men infront of three year olds." Kir said sitting on the other side of the desk from David, Responding to his puzzled expression earlier. " You really didn't notice did you?" Kir said laening forward. " To think that our brightest genin shinobi didn't analize his surroundings..." Kir said shaking his head. " Anyways my brother has something to say to you." Kir said smiling. " Nice job anyways, aside from the scarring small children, that was a pretty clean kill." Kir said honestly inpressed with the quick kills.
" Bye Bye Mr. Mission man!" Yuu said waving good bye to the old man as he happily skipped away to a hotel where he could stay until david left. " Man that old guy is cool!" Yuu said walking up to the other two. " So what missions you got?" Yuu said smiling at David " Hiya remember me?" Yuu said still smiling.
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 4:16 pm
(( -1 Respect point for meta gaming a thought process. -1 Respect point for not noticing I dragged the two men back to the start before decapitation. -1 Awesome point for making the hobo leave. Please fix the meta game bit.
Edit: And you've been silent for so long that that conversation is no longer relevant anyways. ))
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 4:20 pm
Hinote Tosatsu (( -1 Respect point for meta gaming a thought process. -1 Respect point for not noticing I dragged the two men back to the start before decapitation. -1 Awesome point for making the hobo leave. Please fix the meta game bit. Edit: And you've been silent for so long that that conversation is no longer relevant anyways. )) (( ??? It is easy to tell somewhat what someone is thinking by thier body language, if you looked puzzled, nothing anyone else could have confused you, and he was the only one saying things that were confusing. you still stabbed the two guys in the place... I haven't read that post today, be happy I remembered the decapitation. And I npced that guy. leave him alone. besides, now you can kill him in a hotel and freak out a house keeping lady, who will then not talk to anyone for 4 hours outside of her native language. Edit: I've been laying concrete, and now my back hurts... oh well though.))
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 4:48 pm
(( Rephrase it so that it doesn't look like it's continuing from that point. And phrase it in such a way that it doesn't assume confusion. David is quite good at hiding away his thought processes. They're only there for the sake of the reader, and a bit of amusement. ))
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 4:51 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 5:01 pm
 David GreysonSunagakure | Ichibi Host | GeninTactics | Speed | Strategy | InsanityDavid raised an eyebrow at the boy. Did he just lapse into flashback for.. Quick glance at the clock.. Ten minutes? And he claimed David didn't analyze surroundings? "I had a target, and I took them down. Should I have waited until he could use one of the kids as a shield?" The boy questioned, staring the boy in the eyes. Turning to the hyper duplicate, David narrowed his eyes. "Yes. I have a mission." He bit out. "Bring back the hobo." The old man had been a pretty good perk of the job, examining the different people who gave him tips, and those who walked right by. It was mostly blonde girls that tipped him. Odd that. [Chakra Point Total: 35/35]
[Smoke Bomb Total: 5/5]
[Makibishi Total: 25/25]
[Shuriken Total: 15/15]
[Flash Bomb Total: 5/5] "Life should be as fun as possible, who cares what other people say?"
[Mission/Learning Post: ?/?]
[Mission Points: 52]
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 5:07 pm
" Still... You could have kept them from running. kept them in the market place hwere the people they were heckling could have the pleasure of seeing them go after putting them through so much grief." Kir said rubbing one of his temples. " Damn flashbacks..." He muttered.
" Ok, I got this one bro, I know where he went." Yuu said laughing as he ran out of the Mission hall.
{ Exeute to a thread that doesn't exist... be back in 5 posts }
" would you believe he is the downer half and I'm the Hyper half?" Kir said watching his brother go. " It is sad really, no matter how happy I am, we have to balance eachother, one has to be deppressing, the other overly happy... it is just the way things work." Kir said shaking his head again. " Anyways, Tell me about the Ichibi, does it really take control?" Kir asked, vaugely hinting that he thought the idea of a demon was cool. " Still... It has to suck, not having any say so in if it got put in you or not." Kir said looking back out.
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 5:08 pm
Nanashi walked back into the Mission Hall for the third time and he's getting tiered of it."Well dude I cleaned up the crap,noodles,signs,dead dog.And I'm callen it a day.Thanks for giving the the chance to kill somthing.Have a nice day now."He made a quick get away before David had the chance to give him another mission.He was mor focused on learning Stage To of the Flawless style.
[Leaves]
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 5:30 pm
Akura entered from the window and walked beside David " So, David how would you like to go to Konoha whit me for a little while" he whispered to David as he jumped back " If you want to tell me who esle you want to come whit us" he then said as he handed the mission thing to David, " Also; I finished the mission I applied for earlyer, I took so long because the kazekage called me to give me a new possition" he then said.
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 5:46 pm
David GreysonSunagakure | Ichibi Host | GeninTactics | Speed | Strategy | InsanityDavid smirked at the talkative boy, he didn't know where he had heard about him, but at least he wasn't being all dramatic. Well, he was, but it wasn't as bad as most. "Who says I was the one with no say?" David grinned, purposely dropping hints. "And no. It only gets out of control if I let it." He brushed off, smirking once more as the incessant voice in his head starting screaming. Seems he didn't like that line. Glancing at the door as the cigarette kid came back, David nodded in affirmation, and quickly jotted down the completion on his paperwork. He didn't have three seconds to spare before another one stepped in, and also had apparently completed his mission. Jotting down that bit, he was about to pull out another, when he paused. What had he just asked him? "A mission to Konoha?" He questioned, before dropping into a systematic mode. "You'll need a chuunin to even leave town." He put in, not really understanding what the kid was up to. [Chakra Point Total: 35/35]
[Smoke Bomb Total: 5/5]
[Makibishi Total: 25/25]
[Shuriken Total: 15/15]
[Flash Bomb Total: 5/5] "Life should be as fun as possible, who cares what other people say?"
[Mission/Learning Post: ?/?]
[Mission Points: 52]
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 5:50 pm
" And for some reason our Chunnin are in short supply, I'm going out on a limb, but ?I don't think your going to be going anytime soon." Kir said shaking his head. " You should try for a smaller mission, not an intervillage mission, unless the Kazekage has issued you that mission directly i don't see you going to that village." Kir said looking at David. " Is that about right?" He asked, knowing it was.
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 5:52 pm
" Here is where things are diferent; it's not a mission, I'm going there to learn bout puppets and I already asked for permition and the kazekage said yes, so David, you in? he asked David as he would have hopefully proved the boy wrong.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 5:53 pm
David GreysonSunagakure | Ichibi Host | GeninTactics | Speed | Strategy | Insanity"No." David replied simply, pointing at a small file he had on the desk. "One of the village chuunin just reported in yesterday." He pointed out, smirking. Maybe he would get to see the people who thought they could attack his entertainment and get away with it. "I'll go if you can get the chuunin." He said with a smile. His usual slightly evil smile. [Chakra Point Total: 35/35]
[Smoke Bomb Total: 5/5]
[Makibishi Total: 25/25]
[Shuriken Total: 15/15]
[Flash Bomb Total: 5/5] "Life should be as fun as possible, who cares what other people say?"
[Mission/Learning Post: ?/?]
[Mission Points: 52]
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 5:58 pm
" not how it works... do You have proof that the Kazekage said yes?" Kir asked, sighing. " And anyways, Why would you leave suna to learn about puppets, We are the foremost village when it comes to puppets, Sasori of the red sand's skills have been passed down!" Kir said sighing. " But it is up to david not me, he is in the position." Kir said laughing. " Once you get that, I wouldn't mind going, and neither would Yuu." Kir said noticing his brother entering the mission hall. { Entrance from non existing page } " I'm Back!" Yuu said, the old man looking insanely happy behind him. " Turns out he is a pervert, caught him in a club, and not the good kind. Had to knock out the Bouncer though..." Yuu said still laughing. " Oh yeah! " Yuusaid putting hisfist in the air, then bringing it down in victory. Mission Complete!
D-Rank : * , *
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Posted: Tue Jun 08, 2010 6:04 pm
" Here is the diference, if the people from the other village attack a team of four, we wouldn't only have you as our inpenetrable shield, but as out main attack force; if something happens and you do well I could put in a good word so she counts it as a mission, also, if we get attacked I will show the letter to the ninja attacker so if the other ninja still attacks it will be an act of war don't you think." he said as he tried to reason whit the kid, " Also knowing you, the attacker wouldn't live to see the letter" he added to persuade the boy as a small draft swept into the hall.
"Yuu, Kir look" he said as he got out the letter the Kazekage gave him " Also, there are no current puppet masters inb our village which it why I have to go to the hidden leaf" he then said.
(( Aw come on man >_>))
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