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 Posted: Sat Jun 26, 2010 1:05 pm
Allso remember to preform the hand seals unless the jutsu says it dosnt need them. Also You need to physically say jutsus when you preform them.
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 3:51 pm
Rpc Name:
Nara Abure
Village:
Konoha
Rank:
Academy
Bloodline or Clan applied for:
Nara
What you know about the clan/bl:
They are based out of Konoha, and are capable of manipulating their shadows to such an extent that they can manipulate their opponent, making them mimic their movemnts exactly, they can also make their shadows do other things such as their shadow strangle jutsu, in which the user strangles their opponent with the shadows.
Rp Sample:
" How bothersome... Just because we have been short staffed doesn't mean you have to send me after a B-Rank criminal... I was happy with my little C-ranks... " Abure said sighing, turning towards a Girl who was holding a clay spider.
" Beautiful isn't it?" She said, the spider standing up on her hand and scuttling around. Careful... The woods are dangerous around here..." She said laughing, more spiders crawling owards the boy.
" Tch... Like that's going to happen..." He said, making a couple of handsigns and sighing, his shadow developing tendrils that reached out and spitted each of the spiders, one by one until it had all of them. " You really think that'll work on someone as intelligent as me?" He said sighing, the tendrils extracting themselves from the spiders, piling them next to Abure.
" Like I said... The woods are dangerous..." The girl said again, making a handsign with one of her hands, throwing the spider in that hand straight up, causeing all the spiders to explode, laughing, but stopping short.
" Like I said... how do you expect that to work on someone like me?" Abure said, sighing a Kunai in the back of the girl.
" How... Dare you..." She said, falling forwads.
" How saddening..." Abure said sighing, kicking his opponents dead body over, jumping back as the body exploded. " Damn... how bothersome... you are from the chakra mouth Bloodline..." He said, turning to see a girl walk out of the shadows.
" Darn you got me... wait..." She said trying to look down. " Oh s**t... you really did get me..." She said, seeing that his shadow had gone into the forest's shadow, and attached to hers. " Dammitt..." She said, looking like she was trying to struggle with it.
" Hmmm... I wonder if you're the same as the other one I killed..." He said, reaching his hand down, and acting like he was rummaging in a bag.
" What the hell are you doing! that is my Kunai pouch!" She said, the bottom of the pouch starting to turn red in some spots.
" Just what I was looking for." He said, making his hand grip, pulling it up, and laughing, she had taken hold of one. " Perfect... now let's get this party started." He said, taking his hands, and positioning them over his throut.
" Wait wait wait! We can settle our differences, just et me go please!" she said, starting to cry, the kunai pressing against her adam's apple, piercing her skin, and making her start to bleed.
" You'd better shut up orelse you could kill yourself." Abure said, sighing. " Sorry... but orders are orders..." He said slowly bringint His hands closer to his throut, her's giving little resistance, and going through well, poking out the back as he finished. " Sorry... but I enjoy my orders..." He said, standing and starting to walk, bringing her dead body with him. " Oh well... time to cancel this..." He said, lifting his foot, canceling the jutsu, her body falling to the ground twitching vierously. before it exploded. " Hmmm... I don't think that that was a clone... she must have had some Explosive clay stored up in there somewhere..." He said sighing. " Damn... now what the hell do I do for a head?" He said, looking around.
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:08 pm
Rpc Name: Senkei Akuma
Village: Kumo
Rank: Gennin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Rinnegan ( If your the one reading it Orchid it's a little ovius XD )
What you know about the clan/bl: Well... I know that it was the " Jutsu " that gave " birth " to all other techniques, it was used by the sage of the six paths and was later used by Nagato in the Akatsuki. The ninja that are both blessed an cursed whit this technique are granted incredible power in exchange for other power ( Ninjutsu and all the elements for taijutsu and genjutsu )
Rp Sample:
... Xemnas stared at Senkei in a rather odd way. " Fine... you can go to the temple..." He said as he crossed his arms. " Thanks Xemnas-sama..." He said as he turned around and headed to the gates. Senkei put his hand in his pocket and took a clay spider out " Kuza... I'll find you... and whit this... I'll take down everything that is in my way." He said as he put the spider back on his pocket and walked out of the gates. Before long Senkei took out a scroll that held the map of the current ninja world, " I see, so I need to go to the grass contry..." he said as he gave the scroll a good last look before he put the scroll away once more.
A few hours passed since Senkei left the village, he began to see various rogue ninja on the area so he decided to take his headbands off to destroy any form of suspition. He made his way to the village ruins, he then took out the scroll and finished reading it. " Alright then..." he said as he placed his hand on one of the pillars on the ruins, he then aplied chakra on to it, once he did that a loud noise came out and a star way was reveled. Senkei walked down the stairs and found himself on a strange temple whit varius carvings of the rinnegan eye and 6 statues, each one whit a diferent word on it, he walked toward the one on the far left, which said wind on top, he began to examine the statue, but suddenly it turned from stone to flesh and blood.
The statue turned into a man whit a big axe, " Greetings... My name is Fuu, Fuu the Sloth " He said in a slow way as he moved his axe relecing a powerful gust of wind, Senkei did some seals and burned Fuu before he even had a chance to attack him, the same thing happened to the rest of the statues. After that all the bodies turned back to stone and then to dust, the dust then revolved around Senkei getting in his eyes transforming them into the Rinnegan, " So... you finnaly arrived..." A voice was head from the begining of the staircase as Kuza jumped down and Kay was above walking down. Kuza then grinned at Senkei " Well then... will you do this the easy way... or the hard way..." she said as she got 3 pounds of clay and got them into her hands, Senkei closed his fists and stared at Kay " This is all your fault... you took her away!" he yelled at him as he could hear Kate the Prideful's voice in his head I am your guide, since we both posses the fire element. Close your eyes.. picture a body of one of us... then summon it... Senkei did just that as two bodies came out, the body on the right opened it's eyes " My name is Lust, the lightning user." She said as chakra began to rush around all three of them, the one of the right placed his thumb on his mouth " I'm Gluttony, the earth user, and can I eat you know." he said as he grabbed lust's hand " So can I eat him?" He asked her as he compleatly ignored him, instead she ran toward Kay, she then did some seals " Raiton: Raikou Boruto no Jutsu" She said as she shoot him whit a bolt hitting him whit a light shot simply inmovilicing him. " Hm.. I see..." Senkei said as he made some seals " Fire style: Mythical fire flower" he said as he shoot three balls of fire at Kuza " Earth Style: Military movement" Gluttony said as he hid under ground and grabbed Kuza by the leg making her fall, " Relm switch" Senkei said as he changed from his body into Gluttony, he then made some seals " Earth Style: Pebble barage" he said as varius stones lifted from the ground, he then releced the other two bodies and shoot the stones at the staircase making them collaps, " Earth Style: Earth Military Movement" He said as he slipped under ground and apeared outside of the temple.
Done!!
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:29 pm
xXZetsubou-KaesuXx Rpc Name: Nara Abure Village: Konoha Rank: Academy Bloodline or Clan applied for: Nara What you know about the clan/bl: They are based out of Konoha, and are capable of manipulating their shadows to such an extent that they can manipulate their opponent, making them mimic their movemnts exactly, they can also make their shadows do other things such as their shadow strangle jutsu, in which the user strangles their opponent with the shadows. Rp Sample: " How saddening..." Abure said sighing, kicking his opponents dead body over, jumping back as the body exploded. " Damn... how bothersome... you are from the chakra mouth Bloodline..." He said, turning to see a girl walk out of the shadows. " Darn you got me... wait..." She said trying to look down. " Oh s**t... you really did get me..." She said, seeing that his shadow had gone into the forest's shadow, and attached to hers. " Dammitt..." She said, looking like she was trying to struggle with it. " Hmmm... I wonder if you're the same as the other one I killed..." He said, reaching his hand down, and acting like he was rummaging in a bag. " What the hell are you doing! that is my Kunai pouch!" She said, the bottom of the pouch starting to turn red in some spots. " Just what I was looking for." He said, making his hand grip, pulling it up, and laughing, she had taken hold of one. " Perfect... now let's get this party started." He said, taking his hands, and positioning them over his throut. " Wait wait wait! We can settle our differences, just et me go please!" she said, starting to cry, the kunai pressing against her adam's apple, piercing her skin, and making her start to bleed. " You'd better shut up orelse you could kill yourself." Abure said, sighing. " Sorry... but orders are orders..." He said slowly bringint His hands closer to his throut, her's giving little resistance, and going through well, poking out the back as he finished. " Sorry... but I enjoy my orders..." He said, standing and starting to walk, bringing her dead body with him. " Oh well... time to cancel this..." He said, lifting his foot, canceling the jutsu, her body falling to the ground twitching vierously. before it exploded. " Hmmm... I don't think that that was a clone... she must have had some stored up in her somewhere..." He said sighing. " Damn... now what the hell do I do for a head?" He said, looking around. >.> em what? >.> i cant understand half of that
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 8:32 am
Orchid Moon xXZetsubou-KaesuXx Rpc Name: Nara Abure Village: Konoha Rank: Academy Bloodline or Clan applied for: Nara What you know about the clan/bl: They are based out of Konoha, and are capable of manipulating their shadows to such an extent that they can manipulate their opponent, making them mimic their movemnts exactly, they can also make their shadows do other things such as their shadow strangle jutsu, in which the user strangles their opponent with the shadows. Rp Sample: " How saddening..." Abure said sighing, kicking his opponents dead body over, jumping back as the body exploded. " Damn... how bothersome... you are from the chakra mouth Bloodline..." He said, turning to see a girl walk out of the shadows. " Darn you got me... wait..." She said trying to look down. " Oh s**t... you really did get me..." She said, seeing that his shadow had gone into the forest's shadow, and attached to hers. " Dammitt..." She said, looking like she was trying to struggle with it. " Hmmm... I wonder if you're the same as the other one I killed..." He said, reaching his hand down, and acting like he was rummaging in a bag. " What the hell are you doing! that is my Kunai pouch!" She said, the bottom of the pouch starting to turn red in some spots. " Just what I was looking for." He said, making his hand grip, pulling it up, and laughing, she had taken hold of one. " Perfect... now let's get this party started." He said, taking his hands, and positioning them over his throut. " Wait wait wait! We can settle our differences, just et me go please!" she said, starting to cry, the kunai pressing against her adam's apple, piercing her skin, and making her start to bleed. " You'd better shut up orelse you could kill yourself." Abure said, sighing. " Sorry... but orders are orders..." He said slowly bringint His hands closer to his throut, her's giving little resistance, and going through well, poking out the back as he finished. " Sorry... but I enjoy my orders..." He said, standing and starting to walk, bringing her dead body with him. " Oh well... time to cancel this..." He said, lifting his foot, canceling the jutsu, her body falling to the ground twitching vierously. before it exploded. " Hmmm... I don't think that that was a clone... she must have had some stored up in her somewhere..." He said sighing. " Damn... now what the hell do I do for a head?" He said, looking around. >.> em what? >.> i cant understand half of that I edited it so that it starts at the begining.
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 1:05 pm
just to let you know... explosions from chakra mouth clay is rather big >.< if that was a clone you were talking about >.> the explosion would be using c3 and the explosion would be rather big >.< in the episode the explosion almost took out naruto kakashi sakura lady chiyo think that's who was all there for that explosion... or something >.< but kakashi had to use it newly activated Mangekyou sharingan ability to get rid of the explosion >.<
but anyways .>.> you didnt use any of the other jutsus in the example so ima have to say denied
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 1:51 pm
judging that the user of the chakra mouth was inexperienced, and only had a couple dozen spiders, then the explosion wouldn't be that hard.
Not to mention the jutsu list on the Nara clan has no english translation, so I can't tell whatthe names are, and I rped from a Chunnin pointo f view, a new chunnin at that... I'm just going to re apply...
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 2:22 pm
well >.> a genin chakra mouth user couldn't have a exploding clone >.< and if spiders were made from c1 chakra >.> a couple dozen is about as much as a few paper bombs >.>
Then dont say the english translation >.> the language used in the real naruto world is Japanese >.> but it was changed over to english for us lazy americans who refuse to learn another language >.>
Just add in a few jutsus from the clan and your done >.> not hard, also you didnt show nara's clan weakness
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 2:45 pm
Rpc Name:Nara Abure Village:Konoha Rank:Academy Bloodline or Clan applied for:What you know about the clan/bl:The Nara clan (奈良一族, Nara Ichizoku) or Nara family (奈良家, Nara-ke) is known for their manipulation of shadows and tending of deer, which graze in a large area of Nara clan forest. They have kept a book with medicine preparations and effects for generations which imply they are skilled in the area of medicine. Among the medicine described in this book are the secret pills used by the Akimichi clan. Despite being considered geniuses, the men from this family are prone to being lazy and hard to motivate. Ironically, they tend to be attracted to stern, overbearing women. However, there appear to be other factors as well. The Nara men seem to hold women in high esteem, and as a result, willingly defer to their female partners. Shikaku Nara tells his son "Without women, men can't be born. Without women, men go to ruin. Even the hardest of women will show a sweet side to the man she loves and respects." Rp Sample:" Tch leave me alone... " Abure said sighing, walking away. letting his wrist fall with it over his shoulder, waving good bye to the Hokage.
" You get your a** back here! " She said, picking up a paperweight on her desk and throwing it straight at the back of His head.
" Sorry... Won't work. I'll go take care of the stupid Bounty... But I'd better get a week of doing nothing... " He said Side stepping and catching the paper weight with his hand that was over his shoulder. even if she promised, she'd still have him training.
" Fine! but you'd better bring me back a head! otherwise You are training for !n entire month non stop!" Lady Hokage said, sighing and sitting down. " He is my best chunnin... but he is the most annoying..." She said sighing, doing more paperwork.
~~ 2 Days Later ~~
" Tch... I tracked her to this stupid forest, and now it is dark.... " Abure said sighing, looking around, noticing a Girl standing in the shadows, half of her body completely shrouded in darkness, hundreds of spiders crawling around her.
" Hello little Nara boy. " She said smiling, turning to face him. " Nice to see you. " She said, taking a step into the light. " I'm Ka-" She said, geting cut off.
" Kagura, The explosive demon, ex rock shinobi, killer of 20 men, 30 females, 10 children, and a rather large assortment of animals, you are ranked as B in the Bingo book, and before leaving your old Village you only learned a few of Jutsu, most of which consist of Your Chakra mouth Bloodline Techniques, if you were to be categorized, you would be a Chunnin Rank ninja, with some Jonnin capabilities..." Abure said, not even taking a breath during all of that information. " I've memorised my Bingo book front to back, no one is capable of hiding information about themselves from me, not as long as it is in a bingo book." He said sighing, turing towards her. " So are you going to fight me, or just send your little pawns?" He asked, looking up at The girl.
" My my, you seem to know alot about me, and I know nothing of you, Humor me and tell me something I don't know. " She said, jumping into the tree and resting on her stomach. " Oh and don't worry, I've already got you trapped. " she said laughing.
" Tch. did you trap me?" He said, snapping his fingers, and jumping, Black Spiders jumping at him, missing him and getting hit by the Kunai launched out of the trees from his trap. " I was hoping to avoid using this trap until later, but it has given me a great Idea." He said, The spiders exploding, sending him up higher into the air, his shadow spanning a far larger area. " Now! Time for you to feel the Wrath! " He said, making a few handsigns and smiling. " Kage Mane no Justu... " He said, his shadow on the ground attaching to her shadow.
" What the hell! I can't move! I can't even make my Clay spider's move!!!" She said, striggling against the Jutsu.
" Now to Bind you in place completely! " He said, moving his hands into another Sign, falling closer to the ground. " Kage Kubi Shibari no Jutsu " He said smiling as the Shadow reached up and began to choke her, as well as restrict her arms and legs even more, so she couldn't even mimic his movements. " now lets add a little touch..." He said, moving his hands again. " Kage Yose no Justu " He said, shadow threads comming out and lacing around all the Spiders, picking them up and placing them in a circle around her, completely covering her body.
" What the hell are you acomplishing from this!?!?!?!?" She yelled, even though she was starting to turn a different color.
" Shut up... Time for you to be finished..." He said, making yet another seal, smiling. " Ninpou: Kage Nui " He said, the smile fading as he closed his eyes. Black tendrils came up from the Shadow, piercing all of the spiders, making each one explode. " Now... Let's finish this!" He said, spreading his arms out, turning, letting the wind from the explosion hit him, slowing him down considerably. " Good I'm within Range now..." He said, making more handseals. " Gou no Doro!" He said, the ground only 20 feet infront of him turning to Mud. " This is going to hurt alot..." He said, throwing an explosive tag into the Mud, making it explode and go the extra 10 feet, hitting him, stopping him, and bringing him back down to the ground safely. " Ow... I really didn't ant to have to do something like that..." He said, standing up, and almost falling over. " Tch... Ishi Yoroi no Ude " He said, a Bracer appearing, straightening his broken leg. " Tch... That hurt a bit..." He said, standing, limping over to the Remains of Kagura's Body. " Good... There is still enough left for me..." He said sighing, gripping it by the hand and dragging it along with him.
~~ 9 Days later ~~
" all right mister, It's time for your next assignment." Lady hokage said, walking into the room, plopping a bunch of papers on Abure's bad leg.
" Holy Sh!!! What the hell! " Abure said, curling up his leg and rubbing it softly.
" You had your week. So now you have to start again. " Lady Hokage said laughing. " You did so well, I think I'll give you an A rank this time! It was your own fault that you fell from so high... Still can't believe you made it to ten miles straight up... " She said scratching her chin.
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 2:48 pm
Orchid Moon well >.> a genin chakra mouth user couldn't have a exploding clone >.< and if spiders were made from c1 chakra >.> a couple dozen is about as much as a few paper bombs >.> Then dont say the english translation >.> the language used in the real naruto world is Japanese >.> but it was changed over to english for us lazy americans who refuse to learn another language >.> Just add in a few jutsus from the clan and your done >.> not hard, also you didnt show nara's clan weakness I have learned another language, and anyways, Exploding clones are chunnin which would be a Brank bounty. also, in my new one I put in I used all jutsu besides one... The nara clan has no weaknesses... look at the clan for yourself...
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 3:11 pm
Em >.> shadows have a weakness even though it dosnt say it
also
Self-Destructing Clone Skill [Jibaku Bunshin no Jutsu]
High in skill, the user can create one unique bunshin without the use of their hands. The clay bunshin can ingest 2 pounds of the explosive clay and focus its chackra to that internal spot in its body, namely the stomach. The chackra will activate the clay causing the bunshin to blow up in a violent explosion. Mainly the bunshin is used in Kamikaze attacks. The bunshin and explosion can also act as a decoy, allowing the user to escape from enemy detection.
is a jounin rank jutsu
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 3:22 pm
Either way, I did as was said, and also, if your talking about light, then there is shadow with light, Shadows are something that are always there. they are never gone, shadows cannot be eradicated, otherwise we would have done it already...
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 3:37 pm
sorry to interject, but Nara's cnt use their power at night because of the absence of light.
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 3:40 pm
kayavient_thundergod sorry to interject, but Nara's cnt use their power at night because of the absence of light. moonlight, it allows for enough light, there is always shadow, even in an abence of light, as long as someone can see, there is light. only pitch blackness can make shadows dissappear.
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 3:53 pm
Shika said those exact words. Once it got dark he needed to use a light bomb in order to use his clan technique.
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