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 Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 1:21 pm
Taylor_Highwind I'm serious...if I were to post any of my stories...everyone would be scarred...
Or bored...depending on the story... can u send the to me or pm me them or something? i wanna read um now
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Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 1:42 pm
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Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 3:33 pm
loginbin3000 gonk How are you people so good at these things. *looks sad.* I couldnt write anything like those... gd job... awww dont worry *hugs* I used to suck at writing, it just takes something to really inspire you to write sometimes ^^
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Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 3:58 pm
I'll post the intro to my novel that I'm currently working on. I think it should count for something. Sesshoru She stood alone in a crowd of people. Her radiance shone unlike any other living thing. She was the most beautiful thing in the world, with an innocence that no one person could match. Her hair flowed like a ribbon blowing in the wind, and her smile warmed the soul of those who gazed upon it. This was how I saw her. I worshipped the ground she walked on, and even the air she breathed. I was just another one of those people that thought nothing could go wrong. But just when you become a true believer in that theory, everything seems to go wrong. The day shone almost as beautifully as the sight in front of me. She wore a plain dress with matching earrings; nothing a girl would really be proud to show off, but in my eyes, her stunning features had no comparison. A pair of short black cat ears protruded from the side of her head and an elegant tail stuck out from under her dress. Light patches of purple fur on her face hid her constant blushing, and complimented her deep blue eyes. Not to mention the essentials that no cat-girl should be left without; a set of claws and a pair of fangs. She was not only a girl of grace and beauty, but of wit and intelligence, and her positive outlook on the world made her all that more beautiful. I really should get back into a consistent habit of writing...
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Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 9:20 pm
Ok, i think ill try n write something...
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Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 9:12 pm
DAmn... i just cant seem to right one! Damn in not in the mood
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Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 9:54 pm
Ok, I'd really like to post this, but I don't wnat people stealing my work. I won an award from poetry.com for this peice.
Keeper of the Light
Away from the world,
Hiding in my tower upon the sea.
This place isn't my home,
And it isn't anywhere you can go.
I reside in this place,
Only to make others happy.
I keep a light lit,
For the lone ship that sails.
Only to see them turn around,
And sail away.
Again, please don't steal this. My work is an expression of my deepest thoughts and feelings. I greatly fear for others stealing my work.
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Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 10:00 pm
Yet again... another brill poem @ emo ^^
Well ive decided to give it a go.
The edge.
Hair swaying,
Sweat dripping,
Legs failing,
Arms spread.
Approach the edge,
Look down one everyone,
And for once in your life,
Take the leap of faith.
Glide through the air.
Soar like an eagle.
Fly like an Angel.
Fall like a brick.
Rate?
Please no stealing.
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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 3:10 pm
-sigh- here goes
I used to feel i had everything all figured out
Now i just dont know
The way you look at me
Isnt how it used to be
You confuse me
Why cant we just go back
Go back to how things used to be
When you still looked at me in that way
When you still cared
When i knew what was going on
But now i just dont know
And really i just dont care
Not about anything
Not anything but him.
Because you just dont care anymore
And he does
He cares more than you
And i do too
I tell him things
Things i never told you
Because you would never listen as he does
And you just dont know
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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 3:52 pm
This isn't mine I write novels and short stories but this is a pome a friend of mine wrote and would kill me if he knew I'd shown it to anyone, but he doesn't have a gaia account xd anyway here it is and then latter I'll post some exerpes from a story of mine...
A letter comes in the mail
But one was just received
A kisser ponders kissing
But nobody believes
If you and I were open
And all the malls were closed
Would you refuse to see me
And that I don't know?
Don't answer me right now
Don't answer me at all
But think about tomorrow
And the day that I will fall
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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 3:57 pm
Hanging On
A cry to the unknowing
Not subtle at all
But if no one takes you seriously
How else can you make them see?
All your horrible feelings kept inside
Every embarassing moment
That hurt more than just your pride
When you're fetup with suffering
Not sure you can survive
When you lack control in your life
And are just to tired to carry on
You've run out of things to say
And nothing goes as planned
Now it's near the end of the day
And you can't see the good side of life
No matter how you look at it
It never sits quite right
You're not quite sure who loves you
If anyoneout there truely does
All you know is you have not had
A decent sleep in weeks
You're completely exhausted
But you know sleep will fail to come
You don't know what else to do
So you pick up the bottle
Finish all that is left
Then you just wait for everything to end
As you start to slip away
You find the end doesn't come
Something saves you
It pushes you through
That one insignificant thing
Might be worth living for once again
Until it is truly your time to leave.
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Posted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 11:15 pm
My stuff won't fit here...all of this is mostly poetry...
Except for Sesshoru's. Well done. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 12:11 am
Meh cool... shame i'm not in the mood... i'm really angry and i don't have enough time to express my feelings... STUPID DAD crying
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 10:09 am
Er... I'm actually a regular in the writers forum, and there is a REASON they act the way they do. People do not post their works in the proper subforums, and frankly, chatspeak or netspeak or n00bspeak does not belong in writing. If you want to be taken seriously, just take a little extra time to make your writing look nice. I'm going to post a link to my story, I'm sure you'll still be able to read it. If not, then you can always join the guild it's in, cause it's much the same as this one. http://www.gaiaonline.com/forum/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=169428Tada! Yay!
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Posted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 10:11 am
Okay, I'm going to post up one of my favorite poems now, about me and my inner spirit. (just letting y ou guys know that because most people read it and assume its about a guy and a girl. IT'S NOT)
Tangled
Together, tangled, we live
Cold limbs pressed together
Spirits holding hands
Longing for shadow
For seduction to begin
She craves it constantly
She needs eternally
Thrown into darkness
Doomed to search
Through pain and hate
Her soul's been raped
And tossed together
She's here to stay
A prison of flesh
She stays inside
I keep her captive
I keep her alive
Tangled together, we live
So lonely the future seems
Would be so cold without her
And one who would drag her
Would kill her
Desires her, so far away
Yet always so near
We don't want to feel him anymore
Now, the blood again
Our heart beats
We share the one
Tangled, we are tangled
She takes my hand and writes
My words spill like her blood will
When they meet again,
When they bleed again
When they meet for the last time.
I am her keeper
She is my lover
A soul inside, so solid
Like flesh
She takes my hand, my mind
While I sleep, she claims me
No difference between us
We share one body
But two minds
Together, we lay tangled
Breath catching from a long night
How she longs to live again
We can't escape the cravings
Given by long darkness
Who stole your body?
Who stole your freedom?
and sent you inside me?
Who sent you inside me?
Who sent you inside this ravaged cage
My love
Where, like your raped soul
Mine cries out to you?
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