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 Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2010 6:56 am
since this is a weapon style, it should be applied for in the "Weapon Style Request" topic. Also, before you submit it there, you should read through your application. I saw many run-on sentences and the lack of conjunctions is disturbing. Many many MANY comma splices. If you can`t use correct grammar in an application, there`s no guarantee you`ll use it in the RP, and therefore you will be denied the use of the style. Not only that, but those errors make your application difficult to read.
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Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 12:54 am
Ah, that is true, actually that is what I also thought, but Jade inserted it in the Taijutsu Styles List so I posted it here. About the errors, I did not notice them, maybe that were just my eyes, because everyone has different visions on the perfect sample, that is why MODs are here. I'm sorry, but I could not do better with a single arm and that being the left. I've broken my right arm so I cannot write with both hands. I will try to correct them later. Thank You Anyways.
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Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 4:39 am
Ah, well that`s one of the things we`re fixing for TUP. It used to be that weapon styles and taijutsu styles both counted as "taijutsu", but we`re splitting them up now. It just makes more sense. However, we have yet to split them up, so the confusion is understandable.
Anyways, I`m sorry to hear about your arm. It really sucks to break your right arm, especially if you are right handed, because many of the keys you use the most are on the right side along with the mouse. Just take your time typing it out. We`ll understand. So, how much longer will you be in a cast?
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Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2010 7:29 am
On the cast? About Three or Four Weeks. It's not too much anyways.
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Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 3:50 pm
Deil Grist do you think you could incorperate named techniques in your RP sample? Other than that, it looks fine. I added some of the techniques and posted in our fight
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Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 4:05 pm
Ah, much better. The extra descriptiveness added some tangible personality to your RP sample. Approved! I'll add your name to the list of users within a couple days. My phone fails at editing long posts.
Edit: I posted in the spar.
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