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 Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 12:54 pm
Kari Jean
Army
Bus Stop
Arrival
Kari looked up and saw people getting off, 'We're there already?'. She grabed her bag and got in line with the other recrutes filing off the bus. 'Well dad I've made it this far, lets just hope I get home alive'. She started to tug on her fathers dog tag around her neck. Then realising what she was doing, Kari let go of the tag and put her hair up into a ponytail and waited for what was going to happen next.
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 9:09 pm
Mizore Alston
Air Force
Exiting the bus
Arrival/getting off the bus
Mizore had been staring out the window from almost the moment she sat in her seat, but she stared without seeing. It looked like she was not paying attention to anything going on around her, but in truth, she was listening intently to every word that fell from the Drill Sergeant's mouth. In fact, she would probably get yelled at for appearing to be in a daze. But she knew it was best to stay calm while dealing with those whom were higher rank than herself, even if they were right in your face yelling at her. They meant nothing personal by it, in fact, they probably don't remember yelling at you a moment later. All new recruits look the same. No, she knew they would only do this for one's own good.
The sudden lurches and bumps of the road were grown accustomed to after the first few moments of being on the bus. But the last, slightly worse one, caught Mizore off guard ,and caused her to crash the side of her head into the window beside her. Gritting her teeth, she kept herself from making any sort of sound, even though she felt like cursing loudly. A moment later, the Drill Sergeant told them, no ORDERED, them to get off the bus in an orderly fashion. Though she was a bit dazed, she complied, following the rest of the recruits off the bus, and into the open air.
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 9:46 pm
onix9392 Mizore Alston
Air Force
Exiting the bus
Arrival/getting off the busMizore had been staring out the window from almost the moment she sat in her seat, but she stared without seeing. It looked like she was not paying attention to anything going on around her, but in truth, she was listening intently to every word that fell from the Drill Sergeant's mouth. In fact, she would probably get yelled at for appearing to be in a daze. But she knew it was best to stay calm while dealing with those whom were higher rank than herself, even if they were right in your face yelling at her. They meant nothing personal by it, in fact, they probably don't remember yelling at you a moment later. All new recruits look the same. No, she knew they would only do this for one's own good. The sudden lurches and bumps of the road were grown accustomed to after the first few moments of being on the bus. But the last, slightly worse one, caught Mizore off guard ,and caused her to crash the side of her head into the window beside her. Gritting her teeth, she kept herself from making any sort of sound, even though she felt like cursing loudly. A moment later, the Drill Sergeant told them, no ORDERED, them to get off the bus in an orderly fashion. Though she was a bit dazed, she complied, following the rest of the recruits off the bus, and into the open air. ((YAY! Very good job, you have passed and been accepted, woot! You may NOWnot choose a branch of your choice. ))
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 10:57 pm
Suicidesoldier#1 onix9392 Mizore Alston
Air Force
Exiting the bus
Arrival/getting off the busMizore had been staring out the window from almost the moment she sat in her seat, but she stared without seeing. It looked like she was not paying attention to anything going on around her, but in truth, she was listening intently to every word that fell from the Drill Sergeant's mouth. In fact, she would probably get yelled at for appearing to be in a daze. But she knew it was best to stay calm while dealing with those whom were higher rank than herself, even if they were right in your face yelling at her. They meant nothing personal by it, in fact, they probably don't remember yelling at you a moment later. All new recruits look the same. No, she knew they would only do this for one's own good. The sudden lurches and bumps of the road were grown accustomed to after the first few moments of being on the bus. But the last, slightly worse one, caught Mizore off guard ,and caused her to crash the side of her head into the window beside her. Gritting her teeth, she kept herself from making any sort of sound, even though she felt like cursing loudly. A moment later, the Drill Sergeant told them, no ORDERED, them to get off the bus in an orderly fashion. Though she was a bit dazed, she complied, following the rest of the recruits off the bus, and into the open air. ((YAY! Very good job, you have passed and been accepted, woot! You may not choose a branch of your choice. )) (^-^ thank you very much!)
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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 11:19 pm
((Eek I meant now btw xd ))
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 1:22 pm
Sidney Hyton
Marines
Bus Stop
Sidney was staring down at his feet then the bus jerked him forward*BAM* his head hit the seat infront of him. After he got up he rubbed his head "I ment to do that",he said. He gathered his things and got of the bus. He saw everyone else and looked down non of his friends made it "darn if only I knew someone training would go by so much easier",sidney thought to himself.He was so scared he heard drill instructors can be tough. He waited for his DI to come.
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 1:36 pm
Olaroe Sidney Hyton Marines Bus Stop Sidney was staring down at his feet then the bus jerked him forward*BAM* his head hit the seat infront of him. After he got up he rubbed his head "I ment to do that",he said. He gathered his things and got of the bus. "Boy am I hungry", he said. He could smell cheap fast food burgers just thinking about it made his mouth water." they won't notice if i'm gone" when he came back a short pugy bald man wearing a smoky bear hat looked at him and said "name". "Sidney", sidney responded. "I ment your last name dumbass", the man said. "oh, Hyton", sidney said with a red face. "were the ******** have you been everyone was waiting for you",the old man asked. "I went to get some grub",sidney replied."Oh, well that makes every thing better doesn't it"the old man said sarcasticly."I don't know... I guess",sidney said."SHUT THE ******** UP AND GET ON YOUR FACE",the old man mresponded. Sidney did as told and began doing push ups then he reliazed this is only the beginin."oh crap", sidney said. ((...That was horrible. Your spelling and grammar was horrendous, you displayed no basic understanding of roleplay, and you blatantly disregarded the AMP. Essentially, you just controlled my character, gave him a new name, and changed the story concurrent with the story teller, and you controlled the bus, the bus driver, and everyone on it. Read the AMP, and also try to use your integrated spell check feature. ))
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 1:45 pm
rosemarry13 Kari Jean Army Bus Stop Arrival Kari looked up and saw people getting off, ' We're there already?'. She grabed her bag and got in line with the other recrutes filing off the bus. ' Well dad I've made it this far, lets just hope I get home alive'. She started to tug on her fathers dog tag around her neck. Then realising what she was doing, Kari let go of the tag and put her hair up into a ponytail and waited for what was going to happen next. ((Um... okay. I see where your story line picked up at. Your spelling, grammar, and excitingly your sentence structure and syntax were all top notch. You pass! blaugh ))
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 1:47 pm
I edited my post and await for your opion emo
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 1:52 pm
Olaroe I edited my post and await for your opion emo ((Much better! I shall test you one more time, but if you keep up your minor altercations, I'm sure you'll do fine. Roleplaying is tough and, understanding it at first is even tougher. With your enthusiasm and obvious perseverance, I'm sure you'll make it! )) The DI glared at the new recruit, Sidney. His first disgraceful appearance on this bus left the DI in disgust, but fully capable of molding this hunk of clay into something useful. "ATTENTION! Soldier, forward march. I want to see entirely what you are capable of! Present your name, height, and weight soldier. Refer to yourself as 'this soldier' and not as 'I' as well." The drill sergeant barked and spat as he spoke, his blue vein trembling in the upper right corner of his forehead, almost like it was about ready to explode.
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 2:09 pm
"holy s**t" Sidney tought. "SIR THIS SOLDIER'S NAME IS SIDNEY J. HYTON. THIS SOLDIER'S HIEGHT IS 5 FOOT EIGHT INCHES, AND THIS SOLDIER'S WEIGHT IS 168 POUNDS SIR!",sidney yelled at the top of his loungs, hoping what his brother said about being loud to try and scare of a DI would work.
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 2:23 pm
Olaroe "holy s**t" Sidney tought. "SIR THIS SOLDIER'S NAME IS SIDNEY J. HYTON. THIS SOLDIER'S HIEGHT IS 5 FOOT EIGHT INCHES, AND THIS SOLDIER'S WEIGHT IS 168 POUNDS SIR!",sidney yelled at the top of his loungs, hoping what his brother said about being loud to try and scare of a DI would work. ((lol, you passed xd See what a little bit of reading and a few changes can do! blaugh )) "Really, I didn't know that they stacked s**t that high. The smell seems to be in order. I guess your a pretty heavy pile of s**t too huh? That's alright recruit, you can get in line with all the other piles of s**t and remain were you were before." The DI smirked at the soldier, and determined that he would be good enough to begin training as a soldier.
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 2:28 pm
Suicidesoldier#1 rosemarry13 Kari Jean Army Bus Stop Arrival Kari looked up and saw people getting off, ' We're there already?'. She grabed her bag and got in line with the other recrutes filing off the bus. ' Well dad I've made it this far, lets just hope I get home alive'. She started to tug on her fathers dog tag around her neck. Then realising what she was doing, Kari let go of the tag and put her hair up into a ponytail and waited for what was going to happen next. ((Um... okay. I see where your story line picked up at. Your spelling, grammar, and excitingly your sentence structure and syntax were all top notch. You pass! blaugh )) thanks xd
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Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 2:28 pm
Suicidesoldier#1 Olaroe "holy s**t" Sidney tought. "SIR THIS SOLDIER'S NAME IS SIDNEY J. HYTON. THIS SOLDIER'S HIEGHT IS 5 FOOT EIGHT INCHES, AND THIS SOLDIER'S WEIGHT IS 168 POUNDS SIR!",sidney yelled at the top of his loungs, hoping what his brother said about being loud to try and scare of a DI would work. ((lol, you passed xd See what a little bit of reading and a few changes can do! blaugh )) "Really, I didn't know that they stacked s**t that high. The smell seems to be in order. I guess your a pretty heavy pile of s**t too huh? That's alright recruit, you can get in line with all the other piles of s**t and remain were you were before." The DI smirked at the soldier, and determined that he would be good enough to begin training as a soldier. ((I'm sorry, this made me laugh so hard I fell out of my seat! XD ))
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