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 Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 7:39 pm
Also @kalindara: Her final attack was based off the second half of the ballet Giselle, where the Queen of the Willies commands her charges, the Willies, to dance until morning when the prince comes to Giselle's grave. There was absolutely no "rip-off" of Princess Tutu, at all.
I can understand how it looked like it was a rip off, but that wasn't my intention.
Oh well.
Total revision of her attacks in process. Ideas anyone?
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 9:16 pm
AHEM:
Attacks are being editted, with ideas and help from Ende, LP, and Lemon. THANK YOU GUYS!
Also, Terpsichore is becoming a support-senshi (most, if not all of her attacks being based on supporting her allies and not necessarily being able to attack anything lol) and Alexandra is going to have a hard time getting use to that. just think, a support-senshi who wants to become leader of the group, but can't directly hurt the enemy. That'll be interesting plot, if she becomes into being.
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 3:08 am
Update Jan 11, 2010, 3:05am:
-Overhauled her attacks. Not sure if I'm going to keep the first two as they are, or rework Captivating Dance so it starts off as her starting ability, and then gets powered up so she can capitvate more enemies with her dancing.
-Need a name for the Eternal stage attack
-Made a note of what Sailor Terpsi will be in most battles, and that she /can/ attack, though its in very very basic, weak (in comparison to someone who knows how to fight) kicks.
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 8:55 pm
Looking for crits on her attacks, and ideas for ideas about her fuku. I do not want any on the rest of what Alex is, just Terpsichore's attacks. That is what needs the most work right now.
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 8:59 pm
Attack #2--
Does she get in the way of the other senshi? Does this attack hinder them at all, considering she's dancing around them?
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 9:39 pm
Terpsichore will try to keep her movements in such a way that she does not hinder the other senshi, but because she /is/ dancing around them, inevitably she will get in the way. It is not a complete hinderance, for the senshi she is healing does have the option of breaking out of the attack prematurely. This interruption with have a bit of a backlash onto Terpsi, disorienting her and leaving her open for attack.
If she is told by the senshi she's healing to stop, Terpsi can end the attack early, with less of a backlash. This only works if she is told however.
Otherwise, miss dancing senshi is very lost, almost like she's lost the count of the 'music' or forgotten the steps.
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Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 11:13 pm
-Updated her second attack, though it still needs a name.
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Posted: Fri Jan 15, 2010 1:57 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 1:25 am
Updated Jan 16, 2010 1:24am
- Named attack #2 "Dance of Healing!"
- Semi-designed her fuku, tho allowing Natsu to take artist licence and liberties with it as necessary.
- Opening her up for crits, and marking attempts again.
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 8:31 am
Got a wittier name suggestion for your second attack, but do as you will with it: "Recovery Steps".
The rest looks good to me. heart
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 8:47 pm
Musashi, that's actually a great name! :O I couldn't think of a better one last night. 'Recovery Steps' sounds really good, and witty. lol
Thanks for the suggestion!
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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 7:43 am
Updated her attack name. I think she's good for marking now, but time will tell. ^^
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 9:38 pm
Not much of a critique, but I like the idea, her name, and her attacks. Her first attack reminds me of that thing in capoeira where you pick someone around you, roda (?), to dance with.
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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 10:42 pm
Thank you Tenko. ^^ -had to look up what a capoeira was- Lol, I didn't even think of that. That's hella cool. ^^
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 11:29 am
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