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 Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 3:02 pm
ninja
Username: Zarud Helviiryn
RPC: Zarud Helviiryn
Rank: Genin
Puppet Name: Black Serpent
Puppet Rank: D
Description: The Black Serpent measures 4m long. It is a basic snake design but with a thick wire network through it's body to crush the opponent. The head it pointed not for attacking but to allow it to dig into the ground. The fangs in it's head flick out measuring 20cm and are connected to a poison supply in the top jaw.
Weak Joint: Head and internal parts.
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Puppet Name: Facade
Puppet Rank: D
Description: Zarud's main puppet. Facade is a three part puppet. The head, torso and legs all rotate on a central pole. Instead of hands and feet the puppet has large blades, though they aren't poisoned they are still dangerous. It the head Facade has two simple broad swords that Zarud can use incase his puppet is damaged and/or can't move.
Weak Joint: Central core and joints.
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 8:10 pm
Username: Burraku-Okami
RPC: Burraku, Okami
Rank: Genin
Puppet Name: Jokai
Puppet Rank: D
Description: This puppet is hidden in a black cloak like the Sandaime Kazekage puppet was. It looks like Karasu, Kankuro's puppet, only it has long black hair. It is equipped with poison tipped senbon in it's hands and arm pieces, as well as it's mouth. It also has a single blade in each of it's palms and both it's feet. It's limbs are also able to disconnect as Karasu's can and also has a hidden blade at the end of each limb.
Weak Joint: Top of the head
Puppet Name: Tenshu
Puppet Rank: D
Description: This puppet is hidden in a larger black cloak that looks like Jokai's. This puppet is somewhat like a mixture of Kurorai and Hiruko. Tenshu is a defensive and strategy like puppet. It has the body structure of a human being with two legs and two arms but it is trully a puppet(Not a human puppet) It has long black hair and it can hold people inside of it's body like Hiruko. It's body is much more tougher then Jokai's and is stronger then Kurorai when it comes to defense but slightly weaker then Hiruko in the same catagory. It can release a large amount of poisounous gas from it's mouth and holes in it's palm. It can do the same thing with senbon. It's chest cavity can expand like Kurorai's to capture enemy though it is already learge enough to hold Okami in it if needed.
Weak joint-Back of the neck(Like the hyuuga's blind spot)
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Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:54 am
Burraku-Okami Username: Burraku-Okami RPC: Burraku, Okami Rank: Genin Puppet Name: Jokai Puppet Rank: D Description: This puppet is hidden in a black cloak like the Sandaime Kazekage puppet was. It looks like Karasu, Kankuro's puppet, only it has long black hair. It is equipped with poison tipped senbon in it's hands and arm pieces, as well as it's mouth. It also has a single blade in each of it's palms and both it's feet. It's limbs are also able to disconnect as Karasu's can and also has a hidden blade at the end of each limb. Weak Joint: Top of the head
...I know, I know, it's a pain in the butt, but realistically, the effect of the poison needs to be defined so that someone affected by it knows how to respond. This includes length of poison's effect, time it takes to set in and physical effects as the poison sets in.Burraku-Okami Puppet Name: Tenshu Puppet Rank: D Description: This puppet is hidden in a larger black cloak that looks like Jokai's. This puppet is somewhat like a mixture of Kurorai and Hiruko. Tenshu is a defensive and strategy like puppet. It has the body structure of a human being with two legs and two arms but it is trully a puppet(Not a human puppet) It has long black hair and it can hold people inside of it's body like Hiruko. It's body is much more tougher then Jokai's and is stronger then Kurorai when it comes to defense but slightly weaker then Hiruko in the same catagory. It can release a large amount of poisounous gas from it's mouth and holes in it's palm. It can do the same thing with senbon. It's chest cavity can expand like Kurorai's to capture enemy though it is already learge enough to hold Okami in it if needed. Weak joint-Back of the neck(Like the hyuuga's blind spot)
...also, you may want to define the defensive capabilities of the puppet, in terms of what kind of damage it can take before being broken and smashed.
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