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 Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 8:24 pm
Fortune-Hunter NEW RECRUIT John "Soap" MacTavishJohn "Soap" MacTavish  Recruit "John Mactavish"
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp "Boot Camp obstacle course" Soap stood at the starting gate and pulled down his issued night vision goggles. Soap flipped the safety off his Glock 18 and made sure his sights were not off. The gate opened and he heard 'GO!' Soap took off and slid behind cover, and took a proper firing position firing bursts at each target [differant sentences] the two red targets fall and the three green targets stay up. Colour was hard to tell through NV he did not hear a buzz so he just hit the red targets. Soap ran the rest of the course and finished in 3 minutes. Soap walked out of the obstacle course area and went to the viewing room. The night air was cool and the wind was getting harsh. Soap walked into the viewing room. He watched his tape of running the course he had missed one target that was hidden behind ply wood cover something he could have shot through but he didn't notice. "DAmn Soap remember check your corners..." he reminded him self. (I realize that you may think colour is spelt wrong. Its not. We spell it with a U in canada) ((I stand corrected, I did make that mistake when correcting your first post. My only suggestion is to use more promouns instead of 'Soap')) Fortune-Hunter Has Passed Boot Camp
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Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 2:59 pm
New Recruit Chris Redfield First Post
Recruit Chris Redfield
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp Bus Stop
After the long trip returning from Africa I, Chris Redfield, was ordered to continue training under S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp facility. As I get off the bus at the front entrance, I lay my bag down on the ground and look around and say to myself "Damn this looks way diffrent then the last time i was here". Then I see out of the corner of my eye the instructor i was assigned to. I walk up to him and say "Hi, my name is Chris Redfield i belive i was assigned to you for training"?
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Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 4:45 pm
iChrisRedfieldRE5 New Recruit Chris Redfield First PostRecruit Chris Redfield
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp Bus StopAfter the long trip returning from Africa I, Chris Redfield, was ordered to continue training under S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp facility. As I get off the bus at the front entrance, I lay my bag down on the ground and look around and say to myself "Damn this looks way diffrent then the last time i was here". Then I see out of the corner of my eye the instructor i was assigned to. I walk up to him and say "Hi, my name is Chris Redfield i belive i was assigned to you for training"? Spelling is all correct. Observations however: It feels too short; though it is not wrong, it is prefered to talk about yourself in the third person such as "As Chris got of the bus..."; make your thought's italic as well. Captain A. Wesker
S.T.A.R.S. Boot Camp
Sun-blasted bus stop
The watch on Captain Wesker's wrist hit 1 O' Clock. As usual the bus appeared in the distance and stopped same as it did on schedule, full of new recruits. The captain turned his shaded eyes towards the fresh meat exiting the bus. Among them was teh recruit asigned to him this time. He looked at the clipboared and saw the name CHRIS REDFIELD written there. This should be interesting.... Wesker scratched his chin as the man walked towards him and indeed introduced himsef as the latest recruit that would 'enjoy' the pleasure of Wesker as Drill Instructure. "You were indeed Redfield. Now get moving to your barracks on the double!"
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Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 4:55 pm
Recruit Chris Redfield
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp Bus Stop
Chris looked confused as he looked at the man infront of him. What are the barracks? he said as he started out walking with his new instructor and nervously said Its been a while since I been to this base so I need alittle refreshing.
(( sorry if my posts are a little short but ill imporve over time))
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Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 5:24 pm
iChrisRedfieldRE5 Recruit Chris Redfield
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp Bus StopChris looked confused as he looked at the man infront of him. What are the barracks? he said as he started out walking with his new instructor and nervously said Its been a while since I been to this base so I need alittle refreshing.(( sorry if my posts are a little short but ill imporve over time)) Again, spelling is good. Don't forget to place what your character says in "..." and I'll let the lengh pass as long as you work on it. I want one more post out of you though. Capt. A. Wesker
Boot Camp
Main base camp
Wesker had kept the introductions short. There was no need to get to know the man after all, he was justa nother grunt that would benefit from hsi training, but would most likely never reach his full potential. As soon as the recruit asked for the barracks turned his back to him, hidding his annoyed glare from the man and got on his jeep. "Figure it out yourself, but if you are not ready in 0300 for afternoon training, I'll have you scrubbing things that'll give you nightmares. Now get moving!" With that said, Wesker turnd the vehicle on and hurried off as he grinned and though to himself, I love New Recruit Day.
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Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 5:33 pm
Recruit Chris Redfield
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp Bus Stop to Barracks
As the instructor left in the jeep Chris stood at attention and yelled out "Yes sir!" Then he picked up his bag, with the strap over his shoulder he started to walk twords the center of the camp. When he got there he remembered that on the bus the driver presented him with a map to make things less troublesome. So Chris took the map out of his bag and stared at it for a second then saw an area labeled "barracks" and looked at how far it was from his current position. Then he place his map back into his bag and joged off tword his destination.
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Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 5:46 pm
iChrisRedfieldRE5 Recruit Chris Redfield
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp Bus Stop to BarracksAs the instructor left in the jeep Chris stood at attention and yelled out "Yes sir!" Then he picked up his bag, with the strap over his shoulder he started to walk twords [towards] the center of the camp. When he got there he remembered that on the bus the driver presented him with a map to make things less troublesome. So Chris took the map out of his bag and stared at it for a second then saw an area labeled "barracks" and looked at how far it was from his current position. Then he place his map back into his bag and joged off tword his destination. A simple error, most likely due to a slip. iChrisRedfieldRE5 HAS PASSED BOOT CAMP
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Posted: Mon Nov 23, 2009 8:14 pm
NEW RECRUIT HUNK FIRST POST
Recruit "HUNK"
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp "Bus stop"
HUNK was on his way to the S.T.A.R.S. boot camp facility. He had been in contact with Wesker and was being evaluated to see if he had what it took to work with him. HUNK looked out the faded bus window and saw a camp in the distance. He pulled the map of the boot camp out and observed where everything was then quickly put it away. The bus come to a halting stop just as HUNK put his gas mask on and flung his bag of equipment over his shoulder. Just as he exited the bus he saw a familiar face wearing sunglasses. HUNK immediately thought "Albert Wesker." He walked up to the man, dropped his bags then saluted. "Special Agent HUNK reporting for duty, Sir!"
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Posted: Tue Nov 24, 2009 1:49 pm
HUNK USS NEW RECRUIT HUNK FIRST POSTRecruit "HUNK"
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp "Bus stop" HUNK was on his way to the S.T.A.R.S. boot camp facility. He had been in contact with Wesker and was being evaluated to see if he had what it took to work with him. HUNK looked out the faded bus window and saw a camp in the distance. He pulled the map of the boot camp out and observed where everything was then quickly put it away. The bus come to a halting stop just as HUNK put his gas mask on and flung his bag of equipment over his shoulder. Just as he exited the bus he saw a familiar face wearing sunglasses. HUNK immediately thought "Albert Wesker." He walked up to the man, dropped his bags then saluted. "Special Agent HUNK reporting for duty, Sir!" Well done. HUNK USS HAS PASSED BOOT CAMP
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 8:15 am
Recruit The Communist
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Bus Stop
The Communist coughs as he inhales the settling dirt from the bus. He looked around for his instructor but due to the mass of people that would be similar to finding a needle in a haystack. Commie decided then that he would have to actually do some work to try and find him. Standing wouldn't bother him considering the long drive up here. Grabbing the shoulder of a random person with black hair and soft green eyes. "Could you tell me where Colonel Dean Winchester is?" Communist asks. The man pointed at another whom had the look of an up and coming military commander. Walking with a steady step despite his leg being asleep he walked straight up to Colonel Winchester and saluted.
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 12:39 pm
JKCR626 Recruit The Communist
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Bus StopThe Communist coughs as he inhales the settling dirt from the bus. He looked around for his instructor but due to the mass of people that would be similar to finding a needle in a haystack. Commie decided then that he would have to actually do some work to try and find him. Standing wouldn't bother him considering the long drive up here. Grabbing the shoulder of a random person with black hair and soft green eyes. "Could you tell me where Colonel Dean Winchester is?" Communist asks. The man pointed at another whom had the look of an up and coming military commander. Walking with a steady step despite his leg being asleep he walked straight up to Colonel Winchester and saluted.
YOu should of put first post above your post but no big deal I suppose. I knew you could go through this fast. No errors but when you talk if you could change the color to darkred or any other color or just bold. Something that makes it easy to see that you are talking. Congrats
JKCR626 Has Passed Boot Camp
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 2:58 pm
New Recruit Cloud Blazer First Post
Recruit C. Blazer
S.T.A.R.S boot camp
Entarnce/Inside
As Cloud was walking to the entrance he looked up and thought "wow i cant believe im finally here". He then grabbed his suitcase with his belongings and entered the Boot Camp. "YAAAAAWN!!!!......man im tired!" Right then a tall man walked by and took his suitcase, Cloud took out his revolver,aimed and said "HEY!!!! Wats the big deal!!! Why the hell did you take my stuff!! Give it back a*****e!!!" Then the tall man turned and said "I'm sorry for the inconvenience sir, but im taking your luggage to your tent, ill be going now." he said with a bow. Cloud then put his revolver away and responded "Umm.....hehe...sorry for that.." then Cloud thought "Wow what nice service for such a lousy place.."And so he followed and saw all the other recruits "This is gunna be a very interesting year".Did not request an Instructor!!
Mistro
Leader of S.T.A.R.S
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 9:21 pm
New Recruit Jo Harvelle First PostRecruit J. Harvelle
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
First Day - Boot Camp
Jo got out of her seat as the bus came to a stop. She waited in single file as everyone tried to filter out of the now over crowded bus. How did I get myself into this mess? She often wondered to herself. Finally it was her turn to step off the bus. She glanced down seeing that the boot camp looked nothing like the ones in the movies. It resembled a hillbilly mud pit. All the time she spent looking around made her forget that she was holding up the rest of the line, until she was pushed from behind by a gentleman who had to of weighed over 200+ pounds. Falling into the mud she looked up to the man who just chuckled as he walked off. "Hey, a*****e that was rude!" She screamed to the gentleman.
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Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 9:24 pm
Joanna Beth Harvelle85 New Recruit Jo Harvelle First PostRecruit J. Harvelle
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
First Day - Boot Camp
Jo got out of her seat as the bus came to a stop. She waited in single file as everyone tried to filter out of the now over crowded bus. How did I get myself into this mess? She often wondered to herself. Finally it was her turn to step off the bus. She glanced down seeing that the boot camp looked nothing like the ones in the movies. It resembled a hillbilly mud pit. All the time she spent looking around made her forget that she was holding up the rest of the line, until she was pushed from behind by a gentleman who had to of weighed over 200+ pounds. Falling into the mud she looked up to the man who just chuckled as he walked off. "Hey, a*****e that was rude!" She screamed to the gentleman.
I see no mistakes made here. You may now RP if you so desire. Joanna Beth Harvelle85 HAS PASSED BOOT CAMP
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Posted: Mon Dec 21, 2009 9:31 pm
NEW RECRUIT JILL VALENTINE FIRST POST
Recruit Jill Valentine
S.T.A.R.S Boot Camp
Boot Camp Cafe
I was sitting at a wooden table by myself, my stomach growled as I stared at the tray of strange soup I taken from the women behind the serving counter who seem she has never been married and was grumpy. I stare at the food with a questionable look "What kind of people serve this kind of food... This is outrageous.." I mumbled to myself also avoiding eye contact to the other people eating here. I sigh to myself as I poked at the chunks of what it seemed to be liver and thought to myself Maybe I should just eat it... I need to eat since I might be here for a while.. With that, I took a small bite and then immediately spat it out and put my head on the table with my arms covering my face. "I want to go home..." I mumbled with hope that it will all end soon.
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