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 Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:24 pm
watching the brush dance across the paper
filling the paper with life
colors spinning never completely dimming
they brighten and expand but they are never out of hand
brush continues to dance with its on partner
be it paper or be it clay
they all turn out the same way
pieces of art they come straight from the heart
the pencil scribbling across paper
filling the paper nothing but nonsense
or sometimes filling the paper with nothing but beauty
the beauty is all around sometimes its not easy to find
if we keep an open eye and we shall undoubtedly fly every so high
and always keep a open heart there is no end to what we can do
our talent, our art shall never stop
a little piece of our heart goes into each piece of our art
we shall never stop not even after we die
our art shall live on so we are never truly dead
treat each thing like a piece of heart
you shall never go wrong
let your artistic self soar
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:25 pm
jadeyman lol looks like ur my top competitor in poems? xD nah your much better at poetry then me! your poems are amazing mine are nothing special
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:26 pm
Beast of my Heart
My heart beats in a steady passe,
When I'm sleeping,
To when I'm awake.
My heart raises when,
I jog,
And when i see you.
As my heart races faster,
And faster,
From when i see you.
As it felt so real,
The butterfly's flew so high.
As i get close to you,
My heart feels brittle,
And my feet are as stone.
As you speak,
I feel like I'm only person left,
The only person who's really here.
My face will light up,
With nothing but blush,
Red as the perfect sunset.
Only thing is,
I'm so far away,
And your gone now.
You left me behind,
And i cant see you with out tears,
Only thing that can show up.
The old times used to make me smile,
But now that smile turns nothing but into tears,
From when i think of the old times.
The butterfly are gone now,
My heart slows down,
And i turn cold.
As your gone,
I feel small,
And i wanna go.
Maybe one day,
You can come back,
And make me warm again...
That's if you want my heart,
And to make it beat faster and faster,
As sit here and waiting for you.
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:27 pm
Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman lol looks like ur my top competitor in poems? xD nah your much better at poetry then me! your poems are amazing mine are nothing special my poems are eh ok lol
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:27 pm
jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover i just write poems on my computer as they come to me x3 but u gota take time on them or els they would end up all the same ya ur right each poem takes time and care like when i scalp with clay it takes time care and a gently caring hand to make it come out as something beautiful and differnt im very glad that i got asked to join this guild i like the chance to talk to other creative people with creative ideas ^^ i just joined it not to long ago lol same here XD i just joined like 30 min or so ago x3 you are really creative jadeyman! im glad i get to chance to share my poetry with someone whos creative like you
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:28 pm
jadeyman my bad same post as before! XD XD its no problem its a very good poem your poems are so full of such raw emotion its INSPIRING!
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:29 pm
jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman lol looks like ur my top competitor in poems? xD nah your much better at poetry then me! your poems are amazing mine are nothing special my poems are eh ok lol your poems are not just eh ok i think they are amazing pieces of art that are practically over flowing with pure talent
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:29 pm
Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover i just write poems on my computer as they come to me x3 but u gota take time on them or els they would end up all the same ya ur right each poem takes time and care like when i scalp with clay it takes time care and a gently caring hand to make it come out as something beautiful and differnt im very glad that i got asked to join this guild i like the chance to talk to other creative people with creative ideas ^^ i just joined it not to long ago lol same here XD i just joined like 30 min or so ago x3 you are really creative jadeyman! im glad i get to chance to share my poetry with someone whos creative like you lol np! ^^ and thank u but i just write whats ever on my mind lol but songs love to inspire me... u know? btw cute avi ^^
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:30 pm
Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman lol looks like ur my top competitor in poems? xD nah your much better at poetry then me! your poems are amazing mine are nothing special my poems are eh ok lol your poems are not just eh ok i think they are amazing pieces of art that are practically over flowing with pure talent now im starting to blush lmao
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:31 pm
jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover i just write poems on my computer as they come to me x3 but u gota take time on them or els they would end up all the same ya ur right each poem takes time and care like when i scalp with clay it takes time care and a gently caring hand to make it come out as something beautiful and differnt im very glad that i got asked to join this guild i like the chance to talk to other creative people with creative ideas ^^ i just joined it not to long ago lol same here XD i just joined like 30 min or so ago x3 you are really creative jadeyman! im glad i get to chance to share my poetry with someone whos creative like you lol np! ^^ and thank u but i just write whats ever on my mind lol but songs love to inspire me... u know? btw cute avi ^^ thanks you too and OMG i exactly understand the songs of love to inspire us we can never go wrong! they start our path they will never lead us astray!
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:33 pm
Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover ya ur right each poem takes time and care like when i scalp with clay it takes time care and a gently caring hand to make it come out as something beautiful and differnt im very glad that i got asked to join this guild i like the chance to talk to other creative people with creative ideas ^^ i just joined it not to long ago lol same here XD i just joined like 30 min or so ago x3 you are really creative jadeyman! im glad i get to chance to share my poetry with someone whos creative like you lol np! ^^ and thank u but i just write whats ever on my mind lol but songs love to inspire me... u know? btw cute avi ^^ thanks you too and OMG i exactly understand the songs of love to inspire us we can never go wrong! they start our path they will never lead us astray! lol love songs are not always way to go i mean everyone in the world has felt love and has felt losses thats y i write about that because every one has felt that atleast once
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:33 pm
jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman lol looks like ur my top competitor in poems? xD nah your much better at poetry then me! your poems are amazing mine are nothing special my poems are eh ok lol your poems are not just eh ok i think they are amazing pieces of art that are practically over flowing with pure talent now im starting to blush lmao you should be used to such complements i think your poems are amazing they speak to me you know what i mean? speak to my heart and soul and btw my name is Anna its a pleasure to meet you
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:34 pm
jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover ya ur right each poem takes time and care like when i scalp with clay it takes time care and a gently caring hand to make it come out as something beautiful and differnt im very glad that i got asked to join this guild i like the chance to talk to other creative people with creative ideas ^^ i just joined it not to long ago lol same here XD i just joined like 30 min or so ago x3 you are really creative jadeyman! im glad i get to chance to share my poetry with someone whos creative like you lol np! ^^ and thank u but i just write whats ever on my mind lol but songs love to inspire me... u know? btw cute avi ^^ thanks you too and OMG i exactly understand the songs of love to inspire us we can never go wrong! they start our path they will never lead us astray! lol love songs are not always way to go i mean everyone in the world has felt love and has felt losses thats y i write about that because every one has felt that atleast once true sometimes i write alot of kind of dark stuff because inside of every person there is something dark and sometimes we let it out but its always our choice weather or not to i keep my darkness inside and express it through poetry as you've seen x3
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:35 pm
Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman lol looks like ur my top competitor in poems? xD nah your much better at poetry then me! your poems are amazing mine are nothing special my poems are eh ok lol your poems are not just eh ok i think they are amazing pieces of art that are practically over flowing with pure talent now im starting to blush lmao you should be used to such complements i think your poems are amazing they speak to me you know what i mean? speak to my heart and soul and btw my name is Anna its a pleasure to meet you weird... first girl who ever broke my heart was named anna lmao xD rofl my name is jade and pleasure is all mine
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:36 pm
Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover jadeyman Angelic Moon Lover same here XD i just joined like 30 min or so ago x3 you are really creative jadeyman! im glad i get to chance to share my poetry with someone whos creative like you lol np! ^^ and thank u but i just write whats ever on my mind lol but songs love to inspire me... u know? btw cute avi ^^ thanks you too and OMG i exactly understand the songs of love to inspire us we can never go wrong! they start our path they will never lead us astray! lol love songs are not always way to go i mean everyone in the world has felt love and has felt losses thats y i write about that because every one has felt that atleast once true sometimes i write alot of kind of dark stuff because inside of every person there is something dark and sometimes we let it out but its always our choice weather or not to i keep my darkness inside and express it through poetry as you've seen x3 well not every darkness will come out light always prevails not matter how u look at it
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