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Raxle
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 5:09 am


Thank you. >.<
Ah yes, the king, the priest, and a woman that is looking for help. Well lets just say that the woman works within the castle... a secret love afair I do say so myself. ninja Lol... oh yeah, I thought that the three would work well through out the story, maybe that way; I can actually get some work done. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 9:11 am


...secret love affiar...uh yeah...not a good turn in my opinion

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 2:45 pm


Raxle
*moves close* Whys that? I must know. lol. ninja

ninja I am interested to see how it will all tie together, since there seems to be seperate things going on.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 5:44 pm


Ketsudan1589
...secret love affiar...uh yeah...not a good turn in my opinion
If I stated anything else it would ruin the story. stare Keep an open mind about somethings...

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 6:04 pm


Raxle
Ketsudan1589
...secret love affiar...uh yeah...not a good turn in my opinion
If I stated anything else it would ruin the story. stare Keep an open mind about somethings...

well i know that you'll keep it within the pg-13 rating smile and even though i hate haveing a story spoiled, i love being led in by little tibits lol wink
PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 4:36 am


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Raxle
*moves close* Whys that? I must know. lol. ninja

ninja I am interested to see how it will all tie together, since there seems to be seperate things going on.
Yeah. *scratches back of head* Iy's some what of a habit of mine. Glade that you like it. >.<

Chrissy :: I will, but I just want the woman to be a some what surprise. ^^; It's not going over board on PG 13, not sure if I even placed any severe (sp?) words yet.. don't remember. ^^;

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 1:18 pm


A sneer could be seen upon Shai's face, normally he was always found smiling, but today. No, today, Shai was beyond pissed; Zaki was out of bed, and refused to even go back into it, he was running low on poison, and would soon have his loyal servant to fetch some, and that wench. The wench with the ruby colored hair has gotten away from him, the woman found out that he was slowly killing their king and took off. He tried to get her within the castle, but some how she managed to escape, sending out some of the guards only to have them come back empty handed. With a heavy sigh, Shai quickly turned about. There was no way that he was going to let the woman get away from him, not when she knows so much.

"Oh come on Kajaro, we're almost there." Laughter filled the void of silence, as the two travelers slowly made their way, well make it one slow traveler, and and one hyper. They have just made it to the first pub, as yes, the two were walking non stop for nearly two and half weeks. Not a pub in sight, till now. Kajaro could not help but to smile lightly at his female companion. True, she would talk his ears off non stop, but he would always answer back. It may not be in full sentences, but he was never rude when it came to talking. Unless one would ask for a sensles beating. Chrissy laughed, as she was half way up the road from the man. "Hurry it up slow poke!" Kajaro could not help but to roll his eyes behind his shade. It never failed for the woman to crack jokes about or around him.

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Within a small village, laughter could be heard, as a young woman was doing tricks for the younger children. Her long black hair swayed ever so gently in the wind that was created by her hands. Green eyes were half opened half closed, as the children and other members of the village would laugh and cheer by her actions. Making faces, story telling and many other artistic abilities always made the villagers laugh. But one always thought of her as that way. A joker,
but it always seemed as if by night, the woman would always slip out of the village. No one knew why, well except for the fact of the woman who escapes the village, and the one that she secretly sees. More cheering could be heard as the woman was now standing on one foot as she seemed to be juggling items that looked as if they were on fire. She never
did this for money, but most of the villagers would often give her something here and there. Why, she had no clue, they
knew that she was the villager's elder's only daughter, but they seemed to give her items even when she tries to tell them
no.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 1:54 pm


Raxle
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...secret love affiar...uh yeah...not a good turn in my opinion
If I stated anything else it would ruin the story. stare Keep an open mind about somethings...


well not to say anything but part four included p-word, 'pubs' and such on...and that was simply all i could read to...

sorry to say this has taken a turn to where i might not be reading it anymore...

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 2:36 pm


You should Tektek the other characters. I'd like to have a good image of what they look like ^_^
PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 5:40 pm


Ketsudan1589
Raxle
Ketsudan1589
...secret love affiar...uh yeah...not a good turn in my opinion
If I stated anything else it would ruin the story. stare Keep an open mind about somethings...


well not to say anything but part four included p-word, 'pubs' and such on...and that was simply all i could read to...

sorry to say this has taken a turn to where i might not be reading it anymore...


well considering that this is set into the midevil setting pubs and inns (which had pubs in it) were centers of the community. and ya there were the occasional drunk person but the alcohol content was alot less than it is today. beer would be the only way people could drink safely as the alcohol would kill any parasites and bacteria in the water (well most of it anyways)

only word i really had a problem was with the wench, but again, seeing as its a midevil setting its referring to the position (i think....) and the only reason why its seen as a bad word today is that people looked down on them.Wiki definition

but its your choice to read it or not.

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 5:50 pm


I believe it is all pg-13 nontheless, so shouldn't be a problem with posting it at least.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 8:24 pm


Ketsudan1589
Raxle
Ketsudan1589
...secret love affiar...uh yeah...not a good turn in my opinion
If I stated anything else it would ruin the story. stare Keep an open mind about somethings...


well not to say anything but part four included p-word, 'pubs' and such on...and that was simply all i could read to...

sorry to say this has taken a turn to where i might not be reading it anymore...
Oh, I'm sooo sorry, what word would like me to use? stare I am in a certain state where I can become angry rather easily, and right now I am in it. What was wrong with it? Maybe I did not want to use the word angry. I am sure that there are some stories that you may have that read may contained them...

Chrissy :: Yeah, sorry about it, but I kinda thought that it was some what needed in the story. ^^; Force of habit I guess.

Phukking :: 4laugh

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kiwiibombs

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 10:39 am


I see myself! :'D
PostPosted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 11:34 am


Ketsudan1589
hmmm well i have a few suggests

ticked...

enraged...

Bothered By the fact...

ooh here's one dang good one - I't maxamilian's Armor's Name in Ketsu's story
Wroth - very angry or vengeful towards an object or person / filled with anger or wrath

and being of elder textual usage, that would have been perfect...

it's better than saying the p-word

here this:
my pastor says P-i-s-s is -not- a foul word, to him, it's dirty, but not foul...
and he's a YOUTH minister, and an extremely aclaimed one to

trust me the p-word is fot only used in rage...as you said Raxle, you are in a mood where you are ease-to-anger, so that fact backed my just-made point

and pelas eudnerstand raxle i know have achance of not having known 'wroth', but i'm glad to spread it's existance
stare do I look like your pastor? I think that I will stick to my own words and not use anyone elses for the fact that I may get "yelled" at. stare If you hate the way I write, then you can stop reading. Furthermore, I am done with this little subject. stare

Kiwi :: Haha! Yeah, it took me a while to come up with yours. sweatdrop

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