••* Burn's Official {WRITING} Contest / SHORT STORY RES

[Mt Ocean]

Entry One: razz oetry

Ocean Breeze

Saved from the cold desert, I have been.
Stolen from the dead darkness, I have been.
Now I wake and I see the light of Day.
Instead of that awful, drowning gray.
You pushed it out with your radiant light,
As if my dark heart was shadows in flight.
All because of you, I broke free, wings broke free.
High I fly...take my hand, come with me.
Onto this beautiful beach, by this gorgeous sea.
You said you'll get me through this, we'll do it together
You're right; that's the way it was, the way it shall be.

Looking out into the shimmering ocean of blue,
I couldn't have gotten here without you.
So high...together we fly.
Never again do I want to die.
For I soar for the now-visible Sun.
No more do I feel numb,
For I feel your thawing love on the breeze;
Your love for me on the Ocean Breeze.

Repaired are my broken dreams,
Gone are the demons from your bright Sunbeams.
Rid me of pain, rid me of sorrow.
I want to live for you, live for tomorrow.
Never again do I want to breathe the night,
Never again do I want to feel nothing.
Everything about me, you've been right,
And now my weightless heart can sing.

Looking out into the hopeful ocean of blue.
I wouldn't be here if not for you.
So high up I fly
Into the sky, don't let me die.
Here I soar to the reachable Sun.
Shunned away is the feeling of numb,
As I'm touched by the dancing leaves,
Whirling, twirling in the Ocean Breeze.

Forever on the beach, I'll stay with you,
Soaring with clouds, you feel it, too.
The trees in sway,
The Breeze of Day.
The water in motion,
Shows the Breeze of the Ocean.

Lying on the sand, in the ocean of blue.
I'll never be lost if I'm with you.
Lost of the cold, now an everlasting high
Found in the sky, I cannot die.
My nightmares burned away by the Sun
For a long time, I haven't felt numb.
I feel your care saturated in the seas,
As the waves are pushed by the calm, warm breeze,
Touched by the dancing of the leaves,
Dancing, dancing in the Ocean Breeze.

~
Mt Ocean
~

 

[Mt Ocean]

Entry Two: razz oetry

Gray Death Snow


Running, but going nowhere, through this dead grass
Struggling to keep up, enclosed in air’s dead mass
Trying to break through the everlasting dead night
Trying to see with the dead moon’s light
The dead senses feel nothing
The dead senses hear nothing
The dead senses smell and taste nothing
The deadened senses see only black and gray
Of the dead, dying snow that starts to fall
All around, All around
No more running, begin to crawl

Gray, gray, gray is the color of the dead snow
Even alone without the symbolic death crow
That blends into the black landscape.
Shouting wordlessly, “Will I ever escape
This dark metaphoric blow
Of my life suffocating in dead, gray snow?”

Black, up above, the death sky haunts
Gray, up above, the dead moon taunts
Black-gray clouds continue to cover
Birthing dead, gray snow that causes to shudder
Cold with numb and numb with cold
Never been with a personality so bold
To extend heart or hand to the light
Of the Sun of Vive for any right
Stumbling out of this dead place
There’s only one way to end this race
Stop running, stop trying, just let go
And soon be buried underneath the snow
Cannot outrun the thick, numb snow
Cannot escape the dead, cold snow
Once it starts to fall

Gray, gray, gray is the color of the dead snow
Even alone without the symbolic death crow
That blends into the black landscape.
Shouting wordlessly, “Will I ever escape
This dark metaphoric blow
Of my life suffocating in dead, gray snow?”

Gray clothes, gray hair, sink underneath,
Desperate for color, my gray skin, dig teeth
Until a rich red poured
And into eyes it bored
But more snow came and slowed breathing
Yet feeling red anger, still seething
Memories of an abusive past
Until gone, they were, when buried fast
Then slowly a new, restricting, silence sounded as all was dead
Suffocated and choked under a pile resembling lead
Tomorrow now would never be today
As the red turned into gray
So nothing is gained
And nothing is stained
Of the color of the deadly snow
That fall and numb and whip and blow
The color of the gray, death snow

~
Mt Ocean
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[x -L o v e C h a o t i c]

Crazed Misfit

BockiBear

@ Crazed: Brilliant! I love this story in it's entirety. You did just about everything right in this. I loved the story. The clear story line, the painful emotions, the astounding true love. I'm simply amazed.

Yeah, I couldn't believe how much I had to cut down my original plot just so I didn't do about four post and fill up three pages. Lol. I just tried putting the main points in. Thank you. <33

Your story made me cry.
D:  

[Crazed Misfit]

HaNaYaH

Crazed Misfit

BockiBear

@ Crazed: Brilliant! I love this story in it's entirety. You did just about everything right in this. I loved the story. The clear story line, the painful emotions, the astounding true love. I'm simply amazed.

Yeah, I couldn't believe how much I had to cut down my original plot just so I didn't do about four post and fill up three pages. Lol. I just tried putting the main points in. Thank you. <33

Your story made me cry.
D:

D: Is that bad?!