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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 11:32 am
Prompt 1.
The foal hadn't planned on exploring today infact he had rather decided to try his fathers way of things and to make himself look good. His father seemed to take so much pride in the way he looked and of course it would be natural for father and son to be alike, wouldn't it? He could think so anyway.
Maybe it was fate or one of those strange things people talk about when he came across the muddy path. His parents weren't looking at him and without a doubt the first thing he wanted to do was to run down it and roll in the mud! After all isn't that what all foals do? However there was a slight dilema. If he got himself caked in mud his father would be far from pleased but, he would have a good time and get to explore some. Maybe he could find a shallow stream to wash in before coming back. Yep there had to be one around somewhere.
Checking to make sure no one was watching he did the one thing he knew he would probably regret later, he walked down the path. Well trotted down the path was more accurate. In fact even that might not have been right. As each little hoof fell and lifted in and out of the mud, the mud decided to have a flying lesson at the same time and it wasn't long before the lower parts of his legs were suddenly a rather brown colour. He would however deal with it later.
It was strange growing up as he did, he loved to look good because he gathered it was right to be proud in his appearance but yet he liked to play and the two never seemed to fit together properly. He was sure it would when he was older for it had worked for his father hadn't it? His father always looked good and he was certain his father had fun, everyone did didn't they?
As he made his way down the path, getting muddier as he went he found it wasn't really leading anywhere apart from into one of those deep dark forests you hear about in stories. However he hadn't heard any of those stories so instead of realising that the light was fading due to the mass of leaves above him, he thought that the sun was going to bed already. How strange.
He turned to head home, knowing his father wouldn't be happy about his now really muddy coat and he didn't want to be in trouble for wandering off because it had got dark! However something strange happened. As he was walking home the sun for some reason had changed it's mind about going to bed. Though the sun wasn't going to fool him not today. He knew he would get in trouble if he wasn't back before it was dark and so he headed back, going as fast as he could without realising that doing so was just making him dirtier.
As he reached the end of the path, he saw at least two sets of eyes looking at him. He just gave them a sheepish smile, his beautiful body caked in mud and his short mane and tail matted with mud. Oh what a sight! Then again, some people think mud is good for the skin, what an excuse!
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 12:32 pm
Username: cyhorse Foal name: Arman (meaning Dream) Prompt: #2
Reply: His eyes gazed around, there wasn't much to look at. In the background, he could hear his mother and father arguing while his siblings played in front of him. The two siblings were quite annoying. They had high pitched voices, which he had as well but his wasn't as annoying, and they liked to tug on his mane. A snort was heard from him as one of his siblings came up and pulled on a single braid that he shared with his father. "Ugh! Get your disgusting mouth off my hair." His eyes darted to his mane and he sighed a little. Drool... digusting!
The sound of his parents returning made Arman turn his head. Something wasn't quite right, the foals would find out soon enough. His gentle mother told the foals what was happening and Arman's siblings decided on their mother. The little colt thought hard about his decision. Mother had a caring personality, but also had the annoying siblings. Father could teach him how to defend himself and how to perfect his looks.
A long pause and silence surrounded the family as Arman thought. Father had more pluses than mother. Quietly, he walked over to his father and stood, looking at his mother and siblings. His decision was made. When he was an adult, he'd probably search for his mother again... maybe. His mind raced for a moment. Was this the best idea? Of course, father would teach him what colts were supposed to learn. He puffed up a little and when his father left, Arman followed close behind. Father didn't seem too happy with his decision, but Arman figured that it was better to stick with someone that wouldn't annoy you all your young life. Father and son, who knew what would happen.
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 3:02 pm
Username: Kyribird Foal Name: Zahrah Prompt #2: Your father and your mother decide its within your best interest to part and go their separate ways. Your two siblings have chosen to go with your nurturing mother, and now it is your turn to decide whether to join your mother and siblings or tag along with your self-absorbed father. What choice do you make and why? Please RP out the child's response to the scenario~
"I..." The small foal started, eyes looking back and forth between the two Soquili which had brought her into the world. She didn't quite understand why her mother and father would decide to go their separate ways, and she had a million questions she wanted to ask. Would she be able to see Mother, if she went with Dorian? Or would she be cut off from her mother and siblings until she was old enough to venture out on her own? Would Dorian ever come to see her, should she stay with the safety and security that 'Lani offered? But these weren't the only two things the filly had to consider.
Somewhere in her child like comprehension of the world, Zahrah knew that there were more lives to consider than just her own, and the lives of her sister and brother. More than the lives of her father and mother. There were two sets of grandparents, and aunts and uncles and cousins. This wasn't a choice between Dorian and Anolani. This was a choice between two whole and complete families that she was a very integral part of!
She was waffling, and she knew it. This was power, she recognized it. The power to choose her own road, and it was something her parents had given her in confidence. This, she should be proud of. That she had earned the right to choose, and not follow blindly. Somewhere, though, the filly wished to just be a filly and follow her parents wherever they went. Let them choose, and make the harder decisions. Wouldn't adult hood come soon enough?
"Zahrah," Her mother said gently, "No matter what you choose, both your father and I will love you no less. You must follow your own heart, little one."
"What about Aunt Resonance, Aunt Daphne? Uncle Reflection and Uncle Sigao? Or Uncle Eccelcese and Uncle Sianadh? Grandma and Grandpa? What about my cousins?" The question finally poured from the filly as she looked about ready to cry, "I really like my cousins," her voice hushed, "What road to take? What family to go with? Why make me choose?"
The filly went back and forth, her brain going into hyperdrive as she tried to sort her thoughts from heads and tails. "And why are you so selfish as to even bring the problem of making us choose? You're mother and father. You are supposed to protect us, love us, and be there. But you are splitting apart, and making us go through life without one or the other? Do what's right for us, and not yourselves! What's best for us is to stay together!"
The hushed voice raised to an angry one as her head moved back and forth between her parents. How was she supposed to choose? Her parents seemed at a loss for words, obviously not expecting it from the soft spoken filly.
"I choose not to choose," Zahrah said after a few moments of silence as she gathered her wits and bundled them neatly together. Her breathing calmed, she deflated. What point was there being angry at something that she could not change? Rationality wasn't something she generally fell back on, but this time it was all she had to hold on to. "Asking me to choose between people I love is cruel, and I will not do it. May the decision be in your hands."
Without waiting for a response from either parent, Zahrah turned on her small legs and galloped off to her quiet spot. The place she went when she wanted to be alone, to think. Where the silence was her best friend, and the calmness of the trees and the stillness of the water gave her strength.
This time, she prayed that her parents would make the right decision, and the one she refused to make herself.
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 3:04 pm
Username: Mintaka Prompt: #2 Foal Name: Andavi (male)
Andavi sighed, looking at the rest of his family. It was clear something was up, but he'd been more engrossed in exploring then paying attention up until now when his father and snapped at him to get his attention. His siblings were hanging close to his mother who were all a bit away from hsi father. His father seemed slightly upset, or perhaps irritated, and looked at Andavi pointedly.
"Dear," Anolani said quietly, trying to smooth the situation a bit. "We've decided that it's best if your father and I stay seperate awhile. It's going to be hard, but it's for the best for all of us."
Andavi blinked a few times, peering between every. "Wha?" he blurted out, feeling even more confused. Everything had seemed nice, their dad was there helping raise them, and his mom nurturing too, but now... what, dad and mom weren't going to be around together? "But - but I want to see you both all the time!" It sounded so unreasonable to ask in a way, but... he liked his dad, he thought he was cool and everything, but mom was so nice!
"Your mother and I need sometime to ourselves," Dorian said evenly, giving a toss fo his head to fix hsi mane. "You really should go with your mother so she can take care of you..."
Andavi screwedup his face a bit, still not liking this situation. "I know mom takes great care of me, but ... but I want to learn from you too, dad!" He bounced almost as he closed the gap between himself and his father. Heignored the noises made by his siblings and the obvious eyeroll from his sister. "I don't want to not see one of you! It's not fair!"
His mother sighed, and shook her head. Andavi was always the more difficult one to get to understand thgins as they were and accept them. Headstrong and obstinate almost like his father in having things his way it seemed, but all in a failr of his own. "You can go with your father if he'll accept that..."
Dorian didn't look pleased at being put in the spotlight like this, especialyl voer a foal he wanted to be seperated from to go have his own life again. She was a lovely mare and a good eprson, but... he needed space. A foal was not going to allow well for that, but he could make the little thing ... go away... when it was an adult. It shouldn't be that forever, and it'd give him time to roam and scope out things. Hopefully... "Fine," he mumbled, turning. "You take care of yourselves." He started off, taking hsi eyes off his 'family' as he headed out.
Andavi snorted, unsatisfied with this but not having much fo a choice. He lingered a bit, looking at his mother and siblings. "I'll see you again, really!" he chirped, before taking off to follow his father, although maybe a bit away. Something about dad's mood made it gloomy, and maybe he needed to think. Maybe he'd realize this was dumb and go back. So he followed, hoping, and not paying attention to just how long or far they were really going...
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 3:09 pm
Name: Kaisan Prompt of Choice: 1 Name of foal: Amynta (Am-yan-ta)
Amynta yawned, neck stretched out as she shook her wild spiky mane. A mane that made both of her parents despair when ever it came to grooming time. For it simply would not do as it was told, much like their wayward daughter. Mane and filly both stuck out like a sore thumb in the well groomed and beautiful family. Not to say that the filly wasn't beautiful, with her dark coat sporting luminescent teal stripes and her blue-white belly looking like a burning flame. But she wasn't the well groomed, polite little filly her mother thought she was, or the well groomed future stallion-magnet her father expected.
Gyaaaaah!! The filly mewled in her head, blue eyes lifting to glare at the back end of her parents as they walked in front of her. She did not want to go to the wide open pasture and chat to random aunts and uncles about how much she had grown since yesterday or what she was planning to do with her future. The filly couldn't give a flying hoof what her future held if it was beyond the next five minutes. She was bored damnit!
Something caught her eye off to one side. A half hidden pathway that looked gloriously muddy and wonderfully fun. Sneaking a look at her chattering parents behind's from under the silken mass of her forelock, the little filly gave a wicked grin and slipped off the path and crept carefully into the bushes where the faint trail started. This was so much better than standing in a grassy field talking with dear ancient Aunt Mildred!
Hidden in the thick brush, the little filly crept forward, barely able to contain her excitement. Dirt! She would get to play in the dirt!!! With a sudden flick of her heals the little dark-coated female dashed along the path, leaping and dancing in the thick heavy mud and taking flying leaps into any puddle of water she came across.
Some time and several coats of mud later, Amynta finally had her fill of rolling around in the rain-soaked earth and returned to the main path. Ears pricked forwards, one decorated with a small twig that had gotten stuck to the mud, the little filly pranced happily down the track towards where the rest of her family had gathered.
Grinning from ear to ear, the little mud-covered imp trotted out from the trees and into the open area where the family always held their little get-togethers. Showing no sign of repentance the filthy little female pranced over to her two siblings who looked completely aghast at the state she had gotten herself into. Mud covered every inch of her normally clean coat, leaves and bits of twig stuck to the mud, making her resemble some primeval ooze monster more than a petite and rather beautiful soquili filly. Her mane, normally long and silky, if somewhat unruly, was plastered to her face and neck by the muddy mess, forming lumps and knots under the mud-coat. Her tail was in a similar condition, the fluffy baby-tail gone, replaced by a lank, limp glob of muddy strands interwoven with twigs and leaves and even bits if bark.
Leaving her two siblings cringing in abject horror, Amynta pranced proudly over to her two parents where they stood chatting to one of her relatives. She grinned as her father glanced at her, watching gleefully as he did a double take, staring at his daughter-come-mud-monster with his mouth open in shock. Her mother, noticing that something had re-directed Dorian’s attention, also looked over at what had once been her clean daughter. Amynta beamed at her parents, ignoring the horrified look on her father’s face and the startled one on her mother’s. “Hi!!!!” She chirped happily, mud-heavy tail flicking with youthful joy before she darted off to go torment her siblings, a game that involved chasing them around and threatening to get them muddy too. Oh what a life!
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Prompt of Choice: 2 Same filly as prompt 1
Amynta sighed softly, dark ears dipped to each side. The filly was for once calm and quiet, curled up against her dam’s back as the family lay sleeping for the night. She didn’t know where her father was, presumably he was close by; waiting for her decision. Though she knew it was only her mother that had kept him even that close since the announcement earlier that day.
Short little tail shifted, tucking in closer against the filly’s rump as a silent breath escaped tiny nostrils. Slender, delicate legs tucked tight under her body she lay quietly, listening to the soft sounds of her family sleeping around her. It seems almost like a dream, or a nightmare… how could they have told her just hours ago that their family was splitting up? That she had to choose between her parents? She loved her mother, so much so that she even regretted the smallest upset between them. Even though they happened frequently she really did want to make her dam proud. The thought of never seeing Anolani again made her chest ache and her eyes water. Squeezing her lids tightly together, ears dropping a little further she took a deep breath and calmed herself.
They had asked her as an adult, she wanted to live up to their expectations and make an adult’s decision. But… No. She scolded herself mentally. She wouldn’t cry like a baby, she was a mare… or, would be some day. She wanted to make her mother proud even if that ment not seeing each other.
Lifting her head she looked round, over her dam’s back at her two siblings. They had already chosen to stay with their mother. Only her father, Dorian, was leaving on his own. Who would she go with? She knew that she would have a safe, easy life with her dam. Well, maybe not safe, but she knew with that child’s trust and certainty, that her mother would protect her and her siblings. But that was the easy way out… there was something in her that wanted more, something that demanded that she test herself, and grow into a strong soquili mare who could hold her own in the world.
Turning her head she looked out at the darkness, to where she guessed her father had gone to for the night. Yeah, she knew Dorian wasn’t the best father in the world. He was self-interested and rather absent minded where the foals were concerned, and a life with him would be harder, but full of new places and new soquili to get to know. He might ignore her and run away if there was trouble, or otherwise not be the perfect role-model, but he could provide the experiences she knew she needed. She could follow him to new lands, meet all kinds of new creatures.
The thought of surviving on her own merit, of earning the respect of other soquili and maybe even a finding a familiar of her own made her heart swell with excitement. She knew who she would choose when morning came.
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 6:03 pm
this one's gorgeous, too! @___@ I may faint from all the pretty baskets up for grabs. I'll have to try for this one. give me tonight, possibly tomorrow, and it'll be up soon.
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 6:09 pm
You technically have until Saturday, at 12:00 p.m. central [noon] to make one. ;D
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 7:24 pm
I honestly can't resist entering this contest, not when there's a chance at winning a beautiful basket and RP. XD I'm never good with names, so I hope you guys don't mind a nameless foal being the subject of this reply. <3
Prompt One reply:
One could say the dark little foal had inherited the best of both worlds. Already he was showing signs of his father's own masculine beauty, the stunningly dark coat, the handsome azure eyes... Yet the dramatic swirl of teal was his mother's touch, as was the delightfully soft, straight mane and tail.
His personality was an entirely different matter.
Although he showed quite a bit of promise when it came to grooming and preening, he was less serious about showing off his natural beauty in it's finest form. Happy-go-lucky was a better way of describing the colt, so when he happened upon the path in the ferns there was no way he was letting a little mud stop him from exploring! He could always be pretty again after his adventure, right?
With a joyful giggle he dove into the underbrush, letting the moisture from the leaves and the mud on the ground soak into his coat. It was both horrible and delightful at the same time, the sheer rebelliousness of getting dirty made his adventures that much more thrilling. He didn't explore too far before growing tired of the game and returning to his parents' side. Literally.
Trotting back through the field he sidled in between his parents, smearing one half of his muddy body across his mother's side, and the other half along his father's side. All the while he giggled like the nuisance he was.
"Mom, Dad, can we go to the river and get clean and pretty again?" He asked, wearing a grin big enough for a soquili twice his size. Getting dirty had been an adventure, but swimming and grooming with his family afterwards was part of the fun!
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 9:29 pm
i'm repsonding to both prompts Name: fatcat17 Foal Name/Gender: Amalio/male
Quote: Why do they fight so? Why aren't they happy like everyone else? Is it my fault that they fight all the time? Who should I go with? I don't want father to be lonely, but i don't want to hurt mum cause i chose him over her...Amalio thought to himself as the colorful family walked along a peaceful path in the woods. He hadn't really thought of it before, but he didn't think it was entirely impossible that his mum and pop were always this irritated with each other. The path that they walked was a shady one, not quite in the sun because the many trees lining the way. If it weren't for the loud arguments coming from his parents, this would probably have very easily become Amalio's favorite place in the world. Oh well, that faint hope was ruined because they just kept on going at it with longer and longer words the young foal didn't understand. At one particularly sunny patch on the path Amalio glanced to his left to see a small trail leading off a little downhill. The little trail looked muddy at best, but nonetheless a thankful escape from the long words and harsh remarks going back and forth between Amalio's parents. Amalio slipped off to the side and started his own adventure down this new trail, still pondering his choice between which parent to spend what seemed like forever with. Ahead on the path, the the downward slope made a drastic drop, in a near vertical hill. Amalio hadn't noticed the sudden drop ahead of time, and thus had begun skipping. Upon reaching the edge of the slope, Amalio managed to trip on a small rock, and began a long slide down the slippery slope. He slid, down down down, all the while the small, colorful foal was screaming for someone to save him. Luckily fro Amalio, his parents had been walking unbelievably slow and so they heard him screaming away. They turned around, seeing that Amalio wasn't behind them, they began running back along the path, they quickly came upon the muddy path. Dorian paused a moment before continuing his gallop after his son. At the bottom of the steep slope, Amalio had finally stopped sliding, the new problem was: how to get back up. He stared at his hooves for a moment before looking up just in time to see his father crashing down the slope and his mum standing at the top of the hill staring in disbelief. Amalio jumped up and nuzzled his father, just glad that neither of them were dead or stranded. It was then that he had decided he would go with his father. He definitely didn't want his mum to be overwhelmed with three foals running around her ankles, and his father needed the companionship, and something to look after, and someone to look after him.
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Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 11:12 pm
Username: sailormoon72491 Prompt: #1
Glancing at her parents, then back at the trail Kei smiled to herself. As she planned to sneak off down the muddy trail. Though it looked so muddy, something about the path screamed to her. Maybe it had been the mud, and the risk of getting covered in it. As her father always had it to where she must be clean all the time. But that's not who she wants to be, she wants to be able to be a mess at times and be able to go and have fun.
So she quietly sneaked away from the family to head down the path, so playful and excited she was. Making her way down the muddy path her smile got bigger and bigger, being in the mud somehow felt good to her. And she liked how when she would walk it would squish under her hooves, the mud just was so fun. She started jumping up and down in it, making it splash all over getting her quite muddy. But little Kei didn't care it was fun to her, even with knowing how much trouble she would be in if her father had found out.
By this time she was splattered with mud all over her body, and even in her mane, and tail. And even with how much fun she was having, she knew her parents would notice that she is missing soon. But with how mud covered she was she didn't want to take a step near her father. But her mother would probably get mad too, but probably for different reasons. But as she made her way down the path to where she entered, and was prepared to see her parents freak.
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 3:15 am
Username: Brize Name of foal: Isley (if female, the name will be Ilona) Gender (for prompt): Male Prompt: #1
Isley trotted gingerly behind his parents, careful to keep his hooves clear of any slippery muck or vegetable matter strewn across the dirt path. The gangly colt had been going awkward growth spurts since the day he stepped out of his basket. His legs were too spindly to be steady, he constantly misjudged how fast he needed to canter to leap over dead trees and dry creek-beds, and on several memorable occasions he'd even tripped over his own tail.
Father never looked at Isley with anything other than impatience and disappointment. His little accidents had added up to make him one colossal failure of a son. Yet Isley was determined to change, even if it meant trailing far behind his family, and watching his steps while his siblings laughed and galloped through the ripe gold fields of summer. Father was strong, independent, and handsome - everything that Isley was not - and Isley was determined to become more like his hero.
The young soquili was so caught up in trying to keep his balance that it took him several minutes to realize that his parents had turned around a corner and out of sight. He had been left all alone in the forest, with only a fork in the road to keep him company.
"F-father? Mother?" Isley called out. Worry coiled and twisted in his gut. "Hello? Are- um, are you there?"
Only the chirping sparrows answered.
"Oh. Um. Oh. Oh dear."
Oh dear oh dear oh dear. What was Isley to do? He did not like being far from his mother. He frequently injured himself, and she was the only one who knew how to sooth him. Mother would take him to cold streams to ice his bruises and ruffle his hair and tell him that he was a handsome boy now matter how many tumbles he took. Isley was not good at being brave without her.
The colt shifted his weight nervously from hoof to hoof. It was obvious which path his parents had gone down. Father would never give preference to deep mud over hard-packed soil. B-but...
But Isley felt himself strangely drawn to the road less travelled.
It didn't make sense. All that mud was terrifying! It would ruin his mane, and Father would be so exasperated. Isley knew that his parents didn't always get along, and that it was all his fault for upsetting people with his clumsiness. He was the wedge between them. He had to work as hard as he could to keep his family together.
But if Isley tried to pick up his pace, he would only falter into a ditch or get caught up in a bramble, wasn't that right? Father would be disappointed either way. Isley would have to redouble his efforts at grooming that night.
He drew a shaky breath before allowing himself to stumble into the damp loam, letting it cool and soothe his aching muscles.
And for one brief, shining moment, he relaxed.
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 9:07 am
Your father and your mother decide its within your best interest to part and go their separate ways. Your two siblings have chosen to go with your nurturing mother, and now it is your turn to decide whether to join your mother and siblings or tag along with your self-absorbed father. What choice do you make and why? Please RP out the child's response to the scenario~
Name: Uta Name of Foal: Denali (*subject to change) Gender (for prompt): Male Prompt: #2
It was funny how life always had to change, always had to keep on moving regardless of what those that lived in it felt. There were some changes for the good - seasons, or so he'd heard, could be wonderful things. Leaves changed colour from green to red (again, this was all hypothetical as Denali had yet to witnenss such a thing); the world transformed from a lush, comfortable green place to something cold, dreary, dead place in the height of winter. Change happened regardless one wanted it to or not and there was very little anyone or anything could do about it. From the rise of the sun to the take over of the moon at night, the world seemed to be in constant change. . . .
But Denali didn't like it.
Not. One. Bit.
Some changes he had learned to accept; days would always succumb to the evening, cutting his play time short. The dismal sun should pay more attention to what it was doing! If it but grew stronger, brighter, if it but realized that he was the one suffering because of its failure to glow maybe then it would realize its mistake. Bedtimes were never fun, even for a soquili! But, with that same notion, it was a good change that the night eventually moved over to let the sunshine back. . . . Sometimes clouds came and covered the light - that was change. But at the same time, as lovely as clouds could be, they also harbored a terrible price. Sometimes it rained! Ooooooh, Denali abhored the rain! Not only could it be fierce and frightening, and though he'd never admit it he was absolutely terrified of lightening and thunder, it made him look awful! His hair curled and frazzled, his little tail tuft looked like something hairy exploded on his hind end, and the world turned in to a mud playground. The nerve of it all, coming in to try to mess him up!
Hmph!
He was too beautiful for rain, thank you. Someday the rain would just have to learn.
But all those changes were minute. . . they came, they went, and usually the world fell back in to right. But today, and quite unexpectedly, something new took place. The bomb had been dropped and Denali was now placed in a most terrible situation. So it seemed that his most beautiful and most beloved parents were . . . . were leaving. And not together! They were separating, they were being ever so selfish and splitting the family apart! HIS family, mind, that was what was so terrible about it!
Denali had gained his father's ego, his desire for all things beautiful and lovely. He was often self-absorbed because, come on, let's face it, he was the most beautiful of them all. But he had also inherited traits from his mother, and while he was still quite naive about the world, he was also a bit gentle inside. Fragile. Things easily upset the little colt, easily hurt him and often his first defense was to get mad. Get angry. And overall throw a tantrum.
"You can't do this, I won't let it!" He snapped, little tail tip swishing angrily behind him. His ears pinned in anger and though he felt fear for talking back to his parents so, it had to be done. The sacrifice had to be made even if it cost him in trouble. He would't allow them to change up everything that he knew. . . It was father, it was mother, and his two other siblings. End of story. There was no deviation from such a trail - no one had asked HIM how HE felt about such an option!
This was family thank you. He wasn't stupid, he knew how the world worked. He had a little playmate, a little unicorn filly, who had a family. A mother, a father, and two other sisters. . . that was how it was supposed to work, that was how things went! And to now have to choose who he was going with, where he was going? No. . . "I never said this was OK." He reminded them all, huffing and turning his head. His little voice cracked, eyes beginning to sting in frustration.
And still his parents didn't listen. This was to be done. . . no matter his arguments. Oh, sure, 'Lani was all sorts of compassionate. She was talking now, trying to explain with his siblings looking on from a distance, but Denali refused to listen to such hogwash. They were a family. . . there was no reason for such separation! Didn't they realize they were upsetting him? Didn't they realize how much this hurt?
How could they do this to him?
Selfish, that's what they were. Thinking of nothing but themselves! Ears still pinned, he was wary of his father's sharp tongue or irritation. Oh, what did a foal like him do~! He wanted his family together, not separate. If he went with Lani, he had the protection of his mother and his two siblings along. But where would they go? What would they do? And if he went with her and her gentle nature when would he ever see his father again? He loved his mother, and his siblings. . . . but. . . what about father?
How could no one go with him? He'd be left alone out there to fen for himself. He was his father, after all. . . . Who would teach him how to curl his hair? Who would teach him all the secrets a colt needed to know that only a father could teach? Denali's anger grew. . . . This wasn't right! But if he went with his father, what would happen to mother? And he'd have to be separated from his siblings, possibly forever~!
His eyes continued to burn, blurring as his anger transformed itself in to tears. He tried to be strong and grew even more angry as the first tears rolled down his nose. Denali hated crying. . hated it more than anything. It made him dirty, made him look weak, and worst of all made him feel ugly. Ooooh - the horror of it all. And this was what his parents were doing to him. Making him cry. . . . Did they not care? Did they not see how ugly he was making himself!?
. . . . . but a choice had to be made, regardless of his physical state of affairs. He couldn't keep them waiting. Father looked impatient and mother looked concerned. . . This was his world they were tearing up. And they just didn't care.
But Denali was selfish through and through. He loved his father, but a colt needed playmates. It wasn't often one thought too deep about the feelings of those who were affected. It was strange that none were going with his father, but Denali refused to leave his siblings. If he couldn't have his family as it should be. . . he'd take the next best thing.
As much as he yearned to be in the company of Dorian, standing there looking back and forth between his family, the little colt had no choice. He wasn't strong enough to leave the allure of his siblings; he wasn't strong enough to leave his mother. . . . . Glancing at his father, sniffling, he walked up proudly to him and butted his head against his leg. ". . . . you could come too, ya know. . . . I want you to come. . ." It was a quiet, half sob-choked wistful plea, even if it was still all about Denali. A plea he hoped upon hoped would be answered in the way he wanted it to be.
But of course. . . the silence told him everything he needed to know.
So this was it?
No more picturesque family? No more father in his life? Ah, but it would never be the same again. Even if his father happened to visit. . . happened to think about them or feel for them. Pawing at the ground, giving his head a little shake to rid himself of tears, he bolted over to where his siblings stood. He wouldn't leave them for the world. . . . He had HIS family, even if he now was down and out of a father.
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 11:53 am
Name: Talassaene Gender for response purposes: Female Prompt: #2
This entire meeting would have gone over a whole lot better had it rained.
Everything, from the selfish request to the fake pageantry she should have been accustomed too by now, it all would have been at least laughable had the sad eyes been highlighted by thunderclouds, reflecting distant lightning and at least giving credible reason to shed tears.
But no, it hadn't been raining... not even threatening to rain.
Instead, the weather was lovely, idyllic and bittersweet. The just-right springtime warmth, normally the type to frolic in, failed to keep the cold horror from spreading through her delicate young frame as she patiently listened to her parent's recital. The breeze, laced pleasantly with the scent of an unknown flower, gently pulled at her mane and tossed her short tail about her hocks... mocking the silent limbs it usually caressed.
Frozen, as if caught in a rainstorm, Talassaene had just stared at both of her parents... selfishly unbelieving that they would do this too her, staggered by the fact that her other siblings had somehow already made their decisions... and wondering if the selfish part of her own nature would bring her to a decision of her own. Should she go with her mother; the gentle, nurturing spirit that had sung her lullabies in the night? Or Father; the often incomprehensible figure she felt close too.. yet so distant from at the same time?
Curiosity would have her go with her father, if only to finally unravel how she truly felt about him, while the need for security and comfort would probably bend her towards her mother's side.. as it had likely done with her two sisters. But what of her own will? The part of her spirit that would define her as an adult? What of what Talassaene, a holistic being, would want? To satisfy curiosity, she would give up security... to satisfy her need for security... she would lose that part of herself that was her father's daughter. She wanted to know WHY she had to choose, WHY were they laying this huge decision at the feet of three young fillies with scarcely a summer of life experience between them!
WHY!
She wouldn't let them do this too her! She couldn't! So she had kept her tears at bay, and told them she wouldn't have anything to do with either of them, not until she was grown and could understand WHY they had reached this point.
So that was why, now, she wished it had been raining... for a long downpour could have given her father a reason to run for cover... given her mother and her two sisters a reason to leave as well, after all, mother wouldn't want the little girls to get sick right? Right?
But no, her father had gone off without a reason, as had her mother and her sisters.
But not she, not Talassaene, for in her own mind.. it was raining.
And the rain gave her a reason to cry.
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 12:26 pm
Name: Aros Prompt: 2 Response:
Aros, for all his misplaced maturity and intelligence, couldn't understand why parting was in 'the best interest' of his brother and sister. Even so, it was a decision that the foals had no real say in. Whether they wanted to or not, their parents were no longer fond enough of each other to stay for their sake, and it was time to part. His brother and sister had chosen to stay with their mother, preferring her to the self-absorbed father. Aros hadn't yet decided whether he would go with Anolani, who would provide for him and his siblings equally, or go with Dorian.
If he went with Anolani, he wouldn't really be apart from his family. He would still have his brother and sister, and his mother, and her family to take care of him. As bad as he felt for thinking of it, Aros would have been better off going with Anolani then with Dorian, who might've cared for Aros but not half as much as he cared for himself.
If he went with Dorian, he would have to fend for himself, he imagined. Not with protecting himself, not for the big things, but smaller things would depend on his own decisions and not the guiding thoughts of his father, if Dorian even allowed him to stay around that long. While he would be on his own for the most part, he could also take care of Dorian, like he knew someone should.
In the end, the decision was one that he could make with only the smallest twinge of guilt in his heart. He looked at his father, the egotistic Dorian, and then at Anolani. His brother and sister could take care of Anolani, he was sure. They would protect his mother, make sure she never had to fend for herself. But what of Dorian? He could boast all he want, would he be able to take care of himself if he did not have Anolani to do so?
"I... I'm sorry," He began slowly, looking down. "I don't understand." He looked up after a moment of staring down at the grass, turning his distressed gaze to Dorian. "Why do we have to choose?" Aros looked from Dorian to Anolani, and back at the grass again. His eyebrows knitted together while he tried to wrap his mind around the reason for the departure. "I don't want to choose." He moved so that when he looked up, he looked at Dorian and Anolani. "I don't want to leave my family."
Dorian seemed to think that this was his decision, and the stallion turned to leave the group on their own. When Aros spoke again, he paused and looked back. Aros looked at Dorian. "But if I do have to..." Aros turned his gaze to Anolani and his siblings, and smiled sadly. "You can take care of each other. Who will take care of Father?" He said quietly.
His decision was made, and for better or worse, he knew that Dorian would need someone. He trotted after Dorian, and looked back at Anolani. "But it's not forever." He said quietly, watching Anolani with an expression his face that was too serious to belong to any other foal. "Only for a little while."
When Dorian walked away, only one of the children followed him. Aros would find Anolani and his brother and sister again, of that there was no doubt. Until then, he would follow his father and take care of him, like he knew he should.
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Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2008 12:59 pm
Name: Katjive Foal Name: Khloe Gender (For prompt): Female Prompt#2: Your father and your mother decide its within your best interest to part and go their separate ways. Your two siblings have chosen to go with your nurturing mother, and now it is your turn to decide whether to join your mother and siblings or tag along with your self-absorbed father. What choice do you make and why? Please RP out the child's response to the scenario~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "But why!!!" Khloe sobbed, tears streaming down her face. "Why do I have to choose! I love you both, I don't want to never see one of you again!!" It had been a beautiful morning. The sky was blue and full of clouds, and Khloe had woken up from where she had been snuggled up to her siblings. She hadn't known what was going to happen that day, hadn't even the slightest hint. So when her parents, who she loved so very much, informed the foals that they were going to separate, she was devastated. Now, burying her face in Dorian's leg, she clung to her Daddy, feeling as if her whole world was falling apart. "I love you..." she said, almost pleadingly. "Please...stay with us..." But of course, that was not to be. Khloe had to make a choice. Wandering over to her mother, her face a mask of tears, she snuggled up to Anolani, and looked at her siblings, her mother, and her father, in turn. Who to stay with? Who would she leave? Her father...he wasn't the most lovable sort. But love him she did, as only a little girl could love her Daddy. He was strong and brave, but he didn't really want a family. Would he care for her? Khloe didn't know. Her mother was an entirely different story. Khloe's siblings had already chosen to stay with Anolani, so choosing her mother meant keeping the majority of her family together. Khloe could keep her playmates, and her wonderful mother. Khloe loved her mother more than words could say. She was so sweet, kind, and gentle, and she always knew what to say to make Khloe feel happy again...even when her heart was a storm of rain and ice. But even she couldn't stop the torrents of water flooding from Khloe's eyes. Not this time. Although she didn't understand the reasoning behind all of this, and she didn't want her parents to separate, she knew that she had to make a decision. Khloe walked over to her father, and gave him a last nuzzle. "I love you...always know I love you, and I want you in my life. But..." she broke off with a sob. "But, I need Mama...and my siblings." Khloe stepped back, and looked up at her father, the stallion she had always admired. "Goodbye...Daddy." Heartbroken, she walked back to her mother's side, burying her face in her mother's mane so that she wouldn't have to see Dorian walk away. She would never really understand why this had to happen, although she would eventually come to accept it. But she would always feel as if there was something missing, a void left by the absence of her father's love. Turning to Anolani, the mother that she couldn't give up, whose love and kindness were evident in the motherly smile that met Khloe's eyes, she whispered, "Mama...will he ever come back?" Her mother's smile dimmed with uncertainty, and Khloe turned and wept into her mother's mane.
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