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Oooooooo, I like how I'm one of the title characters biggrin

Looks good so far.

Thanks. =3

Edit: Ok so I finally did the bios for Rag-Tag, but they suck. xD
If anyone knows what the Resonance souls for Mercain, Amigo, Roy, and Shoy are, let me know.

I'd also like to know what Insom's Rez is...

ok so chapter 5 is up. I also added a horribly written plot summary for those who have trouble remembering what's happened like I do.

I usually have two updates int he updates post (previous and current) but it seems like I'm writing much longer chapters, and knowing myself, they'll only get longer, so I guess it's better to have the plot summary than a really bigass post.

comments/critique on the story, bios, and everything are all accepted and appreciated. THEY FUEL MEEEEE

I hope one day you go more in depth on some of the characters Bios. The first ones are awsome and deep but the later ones seem to just be touched on.

I based my character bios on Maggeh. One of the reasons a few of them don't go too far is because Maggeh didn't really explain the character very well in her story, and I don't want to make something up. So I'm waiting on her.

I just have this big fear of, in my process of trying to make my own story, COMPLETELY changing all the characters unintentionally.

I mean, Ismaru's changed almost completely. He even acts differently even though I didn't intend to. And Askasa's technically the same character but he acts different. At this point I think the only characters I got right were my own, Edmond, and Mercain. And maybe I'm halfway there with Sim/Sib, but his bio's pretty lacking since I don't know much about his history, either.

If you can find the character bios from the old old sniper story thread, that'd be a GREAT AWESOME help. Even though they're different from the 2nd story, it'd still give me some flooring to work off.

Until then I'll either have to get over my fear of changing characters around unintentionally or out of need, or wait it out until Maggeh makes more developed bios of his characters. cry

It is. Her profile sounds mysterious.

was anyone else way too amused at roy's little finger-toy-musical thing?

because i got the giggles. x3

Finally I made Chapter Six.

YESSSSSSS @ amazing battle scene.

EDIT:
Finally made Opal's bio, and redid Shoy's. Also added some stuff to Roy's bio.