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 Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 3:20 pm
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It's gorgeous, but it needs a bit more balancing out colour-wise.
Try adding more of the dark turquoise used in the text, and some more grey around the head and arm area.
Maybe try adding a slight gradient to the background to make the abckground seem less empty.
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Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2008 8:04 am
Coming along very nicely.
I hope you intend to clean-up some of the focal points, like her boots.
Resolve it to the same level of rendering as her face and it will look killer.
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Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2008 12:06 pm
I shall do all of the above. Thanks everyone for your continued input! People on ConceptArt don't even get this thorough *_*
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Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 4:20 am
 I'm still not done but I think you all deserve some mad thankyous. Even if you don't see your criticism put into play, I'm definitely filing it all away for my next pictures. I really appreciate your time.
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Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 4:44 am
looking really great
screen right arm between the sholder and elbo looks a little short and the ribs create a bit to much shadow (so it looks like she would be really skinny but she isn't)
GOOOD LUCK with your entry!
Concept art is great for tutorials but the crit is always a bit 'do lots of lifedrawing and read some tutorials...' <3
Does the pepper project have any connections to the film paprika? She's a red head, also imaginary and also a spice???
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:06 am
Whoaaa, I almost forgot this thread existed. Bad Feli! Alrighty, I'm finally going through and finishing up her body and accessories so I can get this thing to IFS. Crap, I should have worked on this more over the break >_< parents dragging me to colleges *mumble mumble* essays *headdesk* work *headkeyboard* xczm,,m zvc,m zvd,m EVERYONE. GO LISTEN TO STINKFIST BY TOOL. I COMMANDETH THEE. 
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 3:39 pm
I love it.
All the colors compliment themselves very well!
Did great in merging them together. smile
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 3:54 pm
it would e nice if everything was as refined as the face
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Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2008 6:39 pm
Thanks guys, still working on it DX
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Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 3:44 pm
THREE AFTERNOONS MINUS HOMEWORK TIME LEFT TO WORK ON THIS
POINT OUT EVERYTHING WRONG THAT IS FIXABLE BUT ISN'T OBVIOUSLY STILL UNFINISHED (like her right glove).
...I LOVE YOU ALL.
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Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 8:14 pm
The tattoo looks weird, like you drew it on another layer and put a put a 'overlay' filter on it, like just slapped on. It would be nice to see some lighter highlight definitions in her skin. I think some aqua colored reflective light from the ground up would look cool, like a faint ambient light from the chair reflecting off her skin and boots and cloths and things. O:
EDIT:
Also forgot to mention something that I noticed. The shadowing on her breasts need to be somewhat smoother. Like blend the lighter reflective light further down like underneath her breasts instead of right in the middle in a very hard stroke.
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 7:57 pm
low-slung bra vs mid-slung red top looks weird to me idk
Tattoo is distracting and doesn't blend with the rest of the piece, if you can't successfully make it work I'd just scrap it and you should be fine
Also dude put some sweet rims on her roller heels omg
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Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 2:36 pm
...I think I might just end up going with the rims idea.
Thanks guys, I'l take all of your suggestions into consideration when I can finally take advantage of the only free time I have rightbeforethedeadline omg.
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Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 11:33 am
Oh wow, NO PRESSURE AT ALL RIGHT. Good luck on it! xp
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Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 12:04 pm
IT IS DONE. Argh. Argharghargh okay back to life.
I took the SATs after staying up until midnight working on that damn picture. BUT IT IS DONE and I was able to stay awake for the entire 3:45 it took to do that test.
Finished version is on DeviantArt.
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