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A Naruto role-playing guild using the d20 system, for semi-lit and above RPers. 

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RhikoDemson

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 1:02 pm


Well, you asked for comments, i'm going to give my imput. I've read most everything from begining to end... and I have to say... this clan really seems a bit pointless.

Now hear me through first... The reason I say this, is becaue everything your clan can do, is attainable through normal extensive training. Anyone can learn & trian hide, and sneak, and sneak attack skills till they are blue in the face... and they can be ten times better at what your clan is. If you want a character that can do stuff like this, just train for it! If you're trying to compete with uchihas, just train a bunch, and get these skills... and the upside to this way, is you get experience on top of everything else! If you succeed at getting this stuff through training, you can have the advantage of skill and lvl to woop any uchiha's butt.(Not so sure about Kenk though... sweatdrop )

Your eyes, to me... seem like you looked at yuor pet cat and went, "HEY, my clan can see in the dark, and have bright yellow eyes!"

If you want to see in the dark, EAT LOTS OF CARROTS!... ok that was a joke...but you get the point. I hope I havn't made you mad... I just thought I'd give you my opinion, and try to be constructive for you. Anyway, see ya around! 3nodding
PostPosted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 2:41 pm


Actually I would say your information was kind of pointless really. You obviously didn't read what my clan can do because it is way beyond the normal. People cannot train to become this powerful. So please once again read and understand before you post. You probably just don't get it because you do not know all the rules of the guild and d20 system.

william_ruby


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PostPosted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 2:45 pm


Carlos Ralfer
what, the going blind thing? I copied everything that was on the clan list for the clan off the front page. theres nothing there about blindness. just a penalty if someone turns on the lights.

Yeah... lol... I actually didn't say blind... you were the first one to refer to it as blindness so I just started calling it that to. But still... that is a penalty.... Eh fine I will take off the ninjutsu and get this clan finished with.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 7:03 pm


william_ruby
Actually I would say your information was kind of pointless really. You obviously didn't read what my clan can do because it is way beyond the normal. People cannot train to become this powerful. So please once again read and understand before you post. You probably just don't get it because you do not know all the rules of the guild and d20 system.


Ok, I have no problem admitting you are probably right... and I probably don't know as much about the system as you do... but it doesn't meen I didn't read, or understand it. Because I understood just fine. But your clan TO ME doesn't seem it would be something worthy of a clan per-sey.

It seems it would be GREAT as a unique fighting style and skill... but not a clan. The eyes, as I said before... seem very uninteresting, nothing that isn't already existant in a different clan. I'm not trying to be rude, just stating what I think... and your title says you want to hear it. As did mine... which you didn't hesitate to use to your advantage.

When I first saw your clan... I was a bit surprized that you had such a high skill upgrade right from the start. +20 to Hide, Move silently, and Sneak attack? Isn't that a bit high to instantly start off with?

The dexterity taking place for attacking IS a very cool idea. I have to aplaud you for throwing that in there. Very creative.

Your shadow strike- Would this attack REALLY be unique to a clan? It seems like something anyone could learn if they knew enough about anatomy and sneak attacks. Seems more like a tiajutsu usable by the masses rather then a single clan.

Shadow Bending- This really doesn't make sence... and on top of that... it seems obvious at the same time. Of coarse someone can move into the shadows useing thier body... it's how everyone moves... is it not? And, it would also seem if someone's hide and sneak skills were high enough they could pull something like this off.


Dispite my thoughts of this clan... being short of clan material... I must also say, it would be nice to see a clan that doesn't have anything SUPER-EXTRAORDINARY about them. Just simply a family line that speciallizes in an everyday skill, making them better at it then most. Well, I'll leave you be to making your clan. Good luck I suppose. And dispite your aditude, I hope to see you around! 3nodding

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 8:44 pm


Yes... like I said... you really need to learn a lot more about the d20 system before you start commenting on peoples profiles. I want people that know a thing or two. Normal people cannot hide in plain sight like my clan no matter their skill. It just isn't possible. Like... I could be standing right in front of you and then vanish because I hid and you wouldn't be able to see me.

The other move though probably could be used by someone else but to somone that can sneak as well as my clan and what not it would be so much easier to do and the move could still be guarded by my clan just like the nara does their shadow justsu.

So... There you go.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 9:02 pm


You make it sound like I don't know anything... I know plenty, I only said I likely don't know AS MUCH as you. I know a thing or two about the game system. And I've studied it alot in order to get things down pat. you have no busness judging people on what they know, when you know nothing about them. You jump to conclutions... a big mistake.

No one is perfect... not you OR me. Your clan, is not perfect, and neither is mine. That's why we ask for suggestions and comments from others. I've given you my comments, but you refuse to acknolege them... and your reason for doing so is that you say I don't know what I'm talking about. Your reason for brushing off my comments is unfounded, and flawed. I suggest you bring you head out of your dream world, where no one is as knowlegable as you when they don't see things your way. Otherwise, one day, you'll be in for a big and painfull surprize.

I have nothing more to say to you. Buh bye!

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 10:17 pm


Okay... the people I want commenting are people that know this part of the system and if you didn't get what the move does then obviously you are not qualified to post. Nor did you say one useful thing. You just said you thought this was all a bad idea. Well I am in a bad mood and really dont want to hear it from someone that makes clans that suck himself okay? Got it? Good. Now don't post in my thread again. I don't want your comments. Now I said it loud and clear.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 10:14 pm


oh lord, not another argument. Am I gonna have to stop an argument in every single damn clan thread?

Jeeze, anyway. This clans abilities aren't jutsu, they are enhancers. Many ninjutsu you learn in the academy do nothing but enhance your probability of succedding in skill usage so what's wrong with a clan that does simular things?

Both of you know the system and both of you are only stating your opinions. Don't b***h if you don't want comments and don't gripe if the b*****d won't listen to your suggestions. That goes to both of you. NOW SHUT THE ******** UP!

Carlos Ralfer


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PostPosted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 10:17 pm


lol Carlos... I love you man. I just read that and laughed my a** off. So anything I need to change in my clan though?
PostPosted: Mon Dec 17, 2007 9:45 am


hmmm not that I see. It's approved Still nto sure exactly how well the clan will work but oh well. Good luck.

Carlos Ralfer

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