william_ruby
Actually I would say your information was kind of pointless really. You obviously didn't read what my clan can do because it is way beyond the normal. People cannot train to become this powerful. So please once again read and understand before you post. You probably just don't get it because you do not know all the rules of the guild and d20 system.
Ok, I have no problem admitting you are probably right... and I probably don't know as much about the system as you do... but it doesn't meen I didn't read, or understand it. Because I understood just fine. But your clan TO ME doesn't seem it would be something worthy of a clan per-sey.
It seems it would be GREAT as a unique fighting style and skill... but not a clan. The eyes, as I said before... seem very uninteresting, nothing that isn't already existant in a different clan. I'm not trying to be rude, just stating what I think... and your title says you want to hear it. As did mine... which you didn't hesitate to use to your advantage.
When I first saw your clan... I was a bit surprized that you had such a high skill upgrade right from the start. +20 to Hide, Move silently, and Sneak attack? Isn't that a bit high to instantly start off with?
The dexterity taking place for attacking IS a very cool idea. I have to aplaud you for throwing that in there. Very creative.
Your shadow strike- Would this attack REALLY be unique to a clan? It seems like something anyone could learn if they knew enough about anatomy and sneak attacks. Seems more like a tiajutsu usable by the masses rather then a single clan.
Shadow Bending- This really doesn't make sence... and on top of that... it seems obvious at the same time. Of coarse someone can move into the shadows useing thier body... it's how everyone moves... is it not? And, it would also seem if someone's hide and sneak skills were high enough they could pull something like this off.
Dispite my thoughts of this clan... being short of clan material... I must also say, it would be nice to see a clan that doesn't have anything SUPER-EXTRAORDINARY about them. Just simply a family line that speciallizes in an everyday skill, making them better at it then most. Well, I'll leave you be to making your clan. Good luck I suppose. And dispite your aditude, I hope to see you around!
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