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 Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 4:13 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 4:27 am
I had to make a sonnet for English, so I decided to make one. I wrote the first on a whim, and it turned out better than my actual one.
Our Amaranth
The amaranth that we search for
Is the flower of Love
That lies in the core
Of our being's Dove.
What can we hold
If not such a thing?
Our hearts become cold
What forth shall it bring?
If we are not blind
And finally seek
Much Love shall we find
At its highest peak.
For the amaranth blooms
When our hearts love consumes
-Kazrai
Here is the second:
The Sonnet of our Amaranth
The Amaranth, the flower of the mind
So beautiful and wonderful is it
Blooming when there is love that we can find
And at its fullest when we just submit.
When lacking love the young plant lies helpless
No defense against what may bring it harm
Unless our ways change it will die doubtless
A sign that should set off the heart's alarm
When love can finally be found in us
When finally we open both our eyes
Being able to see the sight and thus
Be able to view the Amaranth's dyes.
The Amaranth reveals its impression
The strongest when our hearts give confessions
-Kazrai
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 4:46 am
Kazrai I had to make a sonnet for English, so I decided to make one. I wrote the first on a whim, and it turned out better than my actual one. Our AmaranthThe amaranth that we search for Is the flower of Love That lies in the core Of our being's Dove. What can we hold If not such a thing? Our hearts become cold What forth shall it bring? If we are not blind And finally seek Much Love shall we find At its highest peak. For the amaranth blooms When our hearts love consumes -Kazrai Here is the second:
The Sonnet of our AmaranthThe Amaranth, the flower of the mind So beautiful and wonderful is it Blooming when there is love that we can find And at its fullest when we just submit. When lacking love the young plant lies helpless No defense against what may bring it harm Unless our ways change it will die doubtless A sign that should set off the heart's alarm When love can finally be found in us When finally we open both our eyes Being able to see the sight and thus Be able to view the Amaranth's dyes. The Amaranth reveals its impression The strongest when our hearts give confessions -Kazrai Those are great poems. Thank you for sharing them. they're absolutely true. An amaranth is a beautiful flower, and i can compare these poems to God. When we humble and open up our love to the world, the world will see God in his beauty. I wanted to post a picture for our members to see. 
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Posted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 3:46 am
That is very true. My mother said that in the first version, my free verse, was very close to how we live for God. Now a few things on my first poem. Though I wrote it, I made it to have many types of meanings, and the symbols can represent quite a bit. Though I, the writter show what I see, it is not set firm.
"Of our being's Dove. "
Dove here means our Peace, and Innocence, which is what God gives us.
"What can we hold
If not such a thing?
Our hearts become cold
What forth shall it bring?"
This here can be refered to God's Holy Word. If we do not have it with us, we lose touch with the Father.
If we are not blind
And finally seek
Much Love shall we find
At its highest peak.
If we seek God, we will find him, as the verse in the Bible says, "Seek, and you shall find." And God is Love, so we shall find Love when we search for Him.
Now the amaranth is an imaginary flower that we create with our minds. It is however we desire it to appear, blooms, and it dies when we want it to.
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 4:57 am
Kazrai That is very true. My mother said that in the first version, my free verse, was very close to how we live for God. Now a few things on my first poem. Though I wrote it, I made it to have many types of meanings, and the symbols can represent quite a bit. Though I, the writter show what I see, it is not set firm. "Of our being's Dove. " Dove here means our Peace, and Innocence, which is what God gives us. "What can we hold If not such a thing? Our hearts become cold What forth shall it bring?" This here can be refered to God's Holy Word. If we do not have it with us, we lose touch with the Father. If we are not blind And finally seek Much Love shall we find At its highest peak. If we seek God, we will find him, as the verse in the Bible says, "Seek, and you shall find." And God is Love, so we shall find Love when we search for Him. Now the amaranth is an imaginary flower that we create with our minds. It is however we desire it to appear, blooms, and it dies when we want it to. You're a great writer. I love how you express things into symbols like that. You should enter the poetry contest in the anniversary forum
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Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 10:36 pm
I only write well when I am in the mood. It really depends on what I am going through, and other variables. So for that reason, I would not be able to join any contests. Too much pressure XD
Also, I'm also in that guild you have in your sig. Haven't been on there for a while. Anything decent nowdays?
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Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 4:16 pm
Kazrai I only write well when I am in the mood. It really depends on what I am going through, and other variables. So for that reason, I would not be able to join any contests. Too much pressure XD Also, I'm also in that guild you have in your sig. Haven't been on there for a while. Anything decent nowdays? yeah i guess, people are inconsistent. i'm vice capt in it, lol went off for a year and came back to a buncha new people...
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Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 3:20 am
Are you saying there is something wrong with new people? stare
Haha, don't worry, I'm only kidding.... I think.
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