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tall guy, isn't he?
He's got such a great history, ties in so well with the story and all.
are you planning on throing in more night trinity stuff?

Gaian Name: Syleste
Character Full Name: Syndri Syleste (Syndri is her first name)
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Appearance: She has lightly tanned skin from being outside in the sun most days. Her thick, long red hair hangs to about waist length and carries a dull shine to it. Her blue eyes are normally calm but not inviting in the least towards strangers.. The grey shirt she wears hangs loosely around her torso; she stole it from a slightly heavier set woman and finds herself unable to grow into it due to her sparse diet. She wears blue shorts where she kept her sword, dagger, and throwing knives attached to her belt. Syndri is rather skinny, but underneath the thin layer of fat that she still held, she has muscles. Mind you, it wasn't enough to overpower a grown man on brute strength alone so she attempts to avoid direct combat as much as possible. Her skin isn't soft and unbroken like you would expect from a girl her age. On the contrary she has scratches on her legs and arms; and she sports a scar down the outside of her right arm from a knife fight a few years back.
Personality: Syndri is very independant and is a bit out of touch with other people sometimes. There are times when she seems harsh, uncaring, and cruel but she tries to think before she says anything that might insult another (assuming that she doesnt mean to insult them) She's fiery but at the same time she still laments on her past which is never far behind her.
Weapons: A sword, a dagger, and a few throwing knives.
Skills: She can fit into small spaces where most full-grown males cannot, instead of working on her overall swordplay she worked on her dextarity to help avoid attacks that come towards her. Her best honed skill is survival both on the battlefield and off it.
Background: She was born into a noble family but when her father died her step-mother was plotting to kill her to get the estate for herself. Rather then face her step-mother she ran away at the age of twelve. Her biggest regret was that she had been away at her aunt's house when her father died. She went through various trials to turn from the rich girl into the thief she is now--but she doesn't regret the path she took after she left home.

To Just-Kill-It-Please, Yeah, I'm proud...My little baby! lol

THis is an interesting profile. Which RP does it belong to? or do you just have it on the back burners for a rainy day?
mixed metaphors...damn.

Anyways, very eclectic character, sounds very fun to play.

I don't think she's coming back...

and just to piss off Shad...
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...who's the one person who thinks I suck?
oh god, now I'm upset...
crying
buahahahahaaaaaaa rofl rofl

Gaia Name: Architectural_Mayhem
Name: Michael Oleander
Side (good, evil): Neutral
Age: Looks: 28 Actual: 314
Race: Dark Elf (Elf+Vampire)
Appearance:
Class (ex. mage, soldier, elite.): Combat Mage/Mercenary
Weapon:
-Magics: Sphere of Darkness (20’ diameter), Time Slow (slows down time for everyone
except the user, only for short periods of time).
-Physical weapons: Two Katanas, both forged using magic to be incredibly sharp, and
Almost unbreakable.
Powers: Transform into a black panther, quick precise movements, great balance
Weaknesses: Cannot stand bright light (if so he will become almost blind, and unable to fight well).
Personality: He is generally a quiet person, he keeps to the shadows during much of the day so as not to be blinded by the sunlight, and is most active during the night, he is very untrusting, but once you gain his trust he will follow his fellow adventurers almost anywhere. Sometimes though he misplaces his trust, he sometimes trust women to readily and is tricked by them later on.
Bio (MUST): His mother was an elf who was seduced by a vampire and bore his child. His father was a vampire who lived alone and hunted often in the woods that his mother lived in. He had decided to give up human blood, and instead drank animal blood. Michael grew up in an underground city, that was inhabited by many such misfits and other creatures like him. There was very little light in the city, so the people grew to see light on the infrared spectrum, but this made him and the other people of the city very sensitive to the bright lights of the outside world. When he got older he left the underground city, and traveled through underground tunnels to Japan, which is where he learned the art of the katanas. He spent almost a whole life time there perfecting his skills with them. This was his first time out in the light, and he wasn’t used to its brightness. He was blinded in one eye for a time, making the change in color. As he lived on on the surface, he grew more used it, but he still is very sensitive to it, and spends much of the day time hours in shadows, or under the protection of his dark cowl. Now he travels around much of the Earth using underground tunnels, they provide much quicker travel, but at a price, they are infested with many types of monsters in them. He decided to help people and not distrust everybody, anymore. So he decided to help people who asked for it, and fight against that which he thought was evil.

Please give me feedback on this character.

This is my character for the Role Play I made in my Guild. I based her off of two parts of myself, and I also put some stuff that had happened to me in there. Oh, yes... I know, I forgot to place the thing about why she's underdeveloped... sweatdrop
Alright, I'm ready for your criticisms people! xd


Your username:
[Foxcoon-chan]
Your name:
[Alex Kuni Sunder]
Your age:
[14]
What gender:
[Female]
Have you awakened:
[Almost]
Your abilities:
[I can sense beings who aren't there. I can also see curtain pieces of my future, but I can't remember them, and I can sometimes know where those being are. Also, sometimes I can hear or feel them and there's been a few times where they've come into my dreams.]
What your like:
[I'm a creative person who's not all that smart to tell you the truth, except for math. To my family and friends I feel like a burden and being like this seems almost crazy. Beginning to open up now wasn't such a grand idea since people don't trust me, so I have to hide my true self from them. At times I have thought of death, and how much things would have been if I wasn't here, but I know dieing would hurt everybody too much. I hate getting yelled at and I wish my life was a whole lot better.]
Your likes:
[I love the moon, rain and my dreams, I like animal, animes, and tones of other stuff too.]
Your dislikes:
[I hate getting yelled at from stupid mistakes I do, believing I'm a failure, thinking about death, and not knowing what to do or believe.]
What's your past:
[Well, when I was a few weeks old I had almost died from a heart injury, and when I was able to remember I had the unlucky chance of seeing my parents together. They blame so much on each other they can't even find it to acctually find out the truth. Sometimes I feel like I'm in a triangle of anger in which both my mom and my dads mom at mainly fighting. With my dad, he doesn't care for fighting at all, and I glade of him for doing that, but sadly I am unable to rust anybody except my step siblings and my sister plus my little brother. Things in my life I keep secret as so nobody needs to be mad at me or feel sorry because of this explanation. Sometimes I feel like nobody believes my and that my friends just feel sorry for me that they are my friends out of pity, but that is very rare now.
Every since I was little, I had this kine ability to see into my own future. I've noticed things and have been frightened tones of times. They stories my friends have told me seem true, but once they started fighting, I didn't know who to believe in. Thats one of the reasons why I don't believe in that anymore. The spirit realm used to be so intriguing, but now I find it burdening me with all the questions I have of it. Being alone isn't always that bad, sometimes I think of taking a break from friendships and working harder at school, though I never have the heat to do it. I know if I did, it would hurt me all to much.
At the moment I seem to be fighting a piece of myself which doesn't want me to succeed, but I believe everybody has something like that holding them back. At times I did think of death, but I know that it I do try hard enough, I will one day be able to become something grand that might make a small impacted in the world. Though, I guess sometimes the reason why I have it hard doing what right is because I pay more attention to hands on stuff... and my sueños, dreams, as well, though at times they give me more hope then other things I've tried. I am trying to do all that I can for others and sometimes myself, and please don't get mad if you've irritated me to the point where I hit, punch, or slap because I don't truly mean to do it.]
Family:
[My mother: Casandra; I live with her just outside the city. My father: Rosario; lives in the city. My step dad: Carser; he lives with us. My step mom: Rosette; lives with my dad. My sister: Sketch(17); lives with her boyfriend. My half brother: Dero(4); he lives with is mother. My step brothers: Jon(10) and Max(12); they live with me and the parents. My step siblings: Carter(15), Vallan (16), Alexandria(14), and Torren(6); they all live with my dad and Rosette.]
Your quote and or song:
['Mis sueños me dicen acerca de qué es venir en el futuro cercano.' meaning 'My dreams tell me about whats to come in the near future.']
Other:
[Just to let you know, I am a very kind person and right now I am focusing on not hurting people at all. Also, I am fairly flaunt in Spanish. Oh, and I barely ever have nightmares.]

Please, only constructive criticism. Dont tell me that you think my characters are stupid because you dont like that type of person. Dont be offended if I answer what you say I need to add with "it needs to be flexible from rp to rp" or fill in the gap you spotted. I have all of this and a lot more in my head. ^^