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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 7:01 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:13 pm
approved. please note you won't be able to use any of these abilities until after you take your next soul
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 9:05 pm
xXLord OokamiXx xXx-Wulf-xXx RPC Name: Noctis RPC Rank: Master RPC Bloodline: Reaper RPC Class: Besesker RPC Element: Fire Name of Weapon/Armor: Legion's Claw and The Lifegiver Description: http://i842.photobucket.com/albums/zz347/Yasashikaze_Seiken/gauntlets720p.png(Left Is Lifegiver, Right is Legion's Claw) These are his gauntlets that have fused to his body at his rebirth, like all gauntlets they take time to get their true forms. Unlike the pictures these gauntlets cover his entire left and right arms.(Well they are his arms). Each shows the two sides of this reaper. Legion's Claw as his rage and anguish, The Livegiver is the reaped side of his being, showing the pure energy of life. Each speical in their own way. Rank: S Passives: Reaper's Soul When both gauntlets come to activate, the energies in his gauntlets start to become easier to control and use in and out of combat. The opposites of the two gauntlets help train his abilites. Due to this his reaper abilites cost one rank less to use. Skills: Livegiver's: Skill Name Giver's shield C Rank Description Livergiver expands it's energy from the gauntlet and forms a medium sized shield of energy around his forearm. It expands out to 2 feet across and 2 1/2 feet tall. This Shield Can Block up to C ranked attacks. Skill Name Ascending B Rank Description: Ascending is the next form of Risen, by charging the energies in his body for two posts. After the two posts have finished, the energy from his body goes to his back and forms a massive pair of energized wings like Risen but the strength of the wings have become stronger and gives them more speed.(+2speed) Since he is master rank 6 posts like risen. Reborn. S Rank This skill takes great amounts of energy, the true life giving nature of this gauntlet comes to life.(Pun). This skill uses the energy in the users to slowly bring back someone who has been killed. This skill needs five whole posts to use. The energy goes into the body and slowly starts to reanimate the body's systems and slowly the soul of the fallen brought back by gods will. This skill can be used every Two months and leaves a massive burn on his body. Legion's Claw's Crimson Bolt C Rank The energies in the gauntlets slowly build up in Legion. As this is done the energy is purified and prefected. Once the energy is purified, the user points Legion at the target unleashing a blast of crimson energy. Legion Vanguards B Rank One of Legion's interesting skills, the energy it slowly bubbles out and drips to the ground in what looks pools of blood. These pools of blood after three posts form a creature know as a Crimson Vanguard. They are liquid like creatures carrying large scythes and have stats of 6/6. Only three can be used at a time and it cost B rank energy for each. Rage... S Rank This skill covers the user in a dark red aura as it begins to charge for five posts. During these five posts the user slowly becomes enraged slowly becoming more hostile each post. At the end of the fifth post the user goes insane with rage. During this mod he increase 3 strength and his speed goes down by one. The user will attack anything on sight if it didn't have a target at first. It lasts for five posts and after words the user loses two strength during a 7 post period Rp Sample: (Editing later need to check somin.)
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Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 8:43 am
Wulf, my comments are in bold within your submission. xXLord OokamiXx xXLord OokamiXx xXx-Wulf-xXx RPC Name: Noctis RPC Rank: Master RPC Bloodline: Reaper RPC Class: Besesker RPC Element: Fire Name of Weapon/Armor: Legion's Claw and The Lifegiver Description: http://i842.photobucket.com/albums/zz347/Yasashikaze_Seiken/gauntlets720p.png(Left Is Lifegiver, Right is Legion's Claw) These are his gauntlets that have fused to his body at his rebirth, like all gauntlets they take time to get their true forms. Unlike the pictures these gauntlets cover his entire left and right arms.(Well they are his arms). Each shows the two sides of this reaper. Legion's Claw as his rage and anguish, The Livegiver is the reaped side of his being, showing the pure energy of life. Each speical in their own way. Rank: S Passives: Reaper's Soul When both gauntlets come to activate, the energies in his gauntlets start to become easier to control and use in and out of combat. The opposites of the two gauntlets help train his abilites. Due to this his reaper abilites cost one rank less to use. This passive is denied. If having a Reaper's Soul causes Srin to be able to use all of his Reaper abilities for one rank less, it would apply to all Reapers as well.Skills: Livegiver's: Skill Name Giver's shield C Rank Description Livergiver expands it's energy from the gauntlet and forms a medium sized shield of energy around his forearm. It expands out to 2 feet across and 2 1/2 feet tall. This Shield Can Block up to C ranked attacks. This skill needs to have a post cooldown, and the creation of a shield made of energy requires energy use every post. It should be rank B, and use B rank energy per post if you really expect it to block ALL damage from incoming attacks C rank or lower.
Skill Name Ascending B Rank Description: Ascending is the next form of Risen, by charging the energies in his body for two posts. After the two posts have finished, the energy from his body goes to his back and forms a massive pair of energized wings like Risen but the strength of the wings have become stronger and gives them more speed.(+2speed) Since he is master rank 6 posts like risen. Denied. This is simply a buffeed version of a skill you already have. If you want Risen to be upgraded, resubmit the skill with a tier ladder of how it changes per rank. This skill also lacks a post cooldown.
Reborn. S Rank This skill takes great amounts of energy, the true life giving nature of this gauntlet comes to life.(Pun). This skill uses the energy in the users to slowly bring back someone who has been killed. This skill needs five whole posts to use. The energy goes into the body and slowly starts to reanimate the body's systems and slowly the soul of the fallen brought back by gods will. This skill can be used every Two months and leaves a massive burn on his body. You need to specify how much damage Srin takes from the massive burn on his body. To bring someone back from the dead, the damage afflicted should be equivalent to the dead character's rank. So if you're reviving an S Rank character Srin takes S Rank damage, a B Rank character B Rank damage, etc. Is the two month period related to RL or Rykros Time?
Legion's Claw's Crimson Bolt C Rank The energies in the gauntlets slowly build up in Legion. As this is done the energy is purified and prefected. Once the energy is purified, the user points Legion at the target unleashing a blast of crimson energy. There is not detail here. This skill is denied unless you can provide me with the bolt's level of damage, a post cooldown, and a logical explanation as to why a gauntlet fueled by rage and anguish "purifies" the energy in it. As a bolt of energy you may consider the potential for a slight knockback in the attack as well.
Legion Vanguards B Rank One of Legion's interesting skills, the energy it slowly bubbles out and drips to the ground in what looks pools of blood. These pools of blood after three posts form a creature know as a Crimson Vanguard. They are liquid like creatures carrying large scythes and have stats of 6/6. Only three can be used at a time and it cost B rank energy for each. Denied. Reaper Gauntlets do not grant Summon Powers. If you want a Summon of any kind, it is to be submitted through the Summons/ Pets thread.
Rage... S Rank This skill covers the user in a dark red aura as it begins to charge for five posts. During these five posts the user slowly becomes enraged slowly becoming more hostile each post. At the end of the fifth post the user goes insane with rage. During this mod he increase 3 strength and his speed goes down by one. The user will attack anything on sight if it didn't have a target at first. It lasts for five posts and after words the user loses two strength during a 7 post period Denied. This skill is practically cooky cutter from the Berserker list, and simply meant as a stackable benefit to your class's current powers. Additionally, this seems like a reference to all that rage and anger from Sin, who has been completely removed from Srin's body. There's no justification for it, and you can already gain these benefits from your Berserker skills.
Rp Sample: (Editing later need to check somin.)
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Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2012 12:54 pm
RPC Name: Kinetav Erth'azar RPC Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=24&t=21896169#328395871 RPC Rank: Student: RPC Bloodline: Anima RPC Class: Dark Avenger
(Just giving this a go since Kinetav is part of the highest technological continent in Rykros...can also restrict Kinetav to hacking Citadel buildings/systems/doors only if need be if the hacking process is considered too "complex" to perform everywhere, but please do not let my willingness to settle for less cause you all to immediately shoot this down in the first place.)
Gauntlets of Projection (See profile pic for gauntlet visual):
As an adolescent, Kinetav knew that he'd have to wander around eventually because of his birth and class. For a means of easy, on-the-go mapping and hacking into abandoned buildings for refuge, the Anima paid a friend to design and create these gauntlets just for him. Via a mental command, the gauntlets can project a 3-D screen for maps that can also turn two dimensional for hacking against a surface such as an electrical lock or computer.
Hacking a known system or door requires direct contact by the 2-D screen (can only be projected at point blank range), and takes two posts during which Kinetav cannot defend, attack, or move and is detectable by people in the vicinity. Hacking an unknown system for additional data or door takes three posts of vulnerability; any hacking can be willingly stopped at any time by Kinetav, but resets the post count to hacking. Successful hacks on an unknown system upload additional data from that system, or if on a door uploads additional data about that one door to an additional, seperate from the gauntlets data chip that Kinetav carries in his belt, and can only download additional information from that chip to the gauntlets via a hardline link overnight.
CANNOT HACK MEACHA RPCS FOR INFO OR ANY OTHER PURPOSE.
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Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2012 12:58 pm
Verideathul RPC Name: Kinetav Erth'azar RPC Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=24&t=21896169#328395871 RPC Rank: Student: RPC Bloodline: Anima RPC Class: Dark Avenger (Just giving this a go since Kinetav is part of the highest technological continent in Rykros...can also restrict Kinetav to hacking Citadel buildings/systems/doors only if need be if the hacking process is considered too "complex" to perform everywhere, but please do not let my willingness to settle for less cause you all to immediately shoot this down in the first place.) Gauntlets of Projection (See profile pic for gauntlet visual): As an adolescent, Kinetav knew that he'd have to wander around eventually because of his birth and class. For a means of easy, on-the-go mapping and hacking into abandoned buildings for refuge, the Anima paid a friend to design and create these gauntlets just for him. Via a mental command, the gauntlets can project a 3-D screen for maps that can also turn two dimensional for hacking against a surface such as an electrical lock or computer. Hacking a known system or door requires direct contact by the 2-D screen (can only be projected at point blank range), and takes two posts during which Kinetav cannot defend, attack, or move and is detectable by people in the vicinity. Hacking an unknown system for additional data or door takes three posts of vulnerability; any hacking can be willingly stopped at any time by Kinetav, but resets the post count to hacking. Successful hacks on an unknown system upload additional data from that system, or if on a door uploads additional data about that one door to an additional, seperate from the gauntlets data chip that Kinetav carries in his belt, and can only download additional information from that chip to the gauntlets via a hardline link overnight. CANNOT HACK MEACHA RPCS FOR INFO OR ANY OTHER PURPOSE. Not a mod...but offering a little advice.. 1. Anima can only use their Exodus weapon. 2. This would be more of a custom item than weapon.
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Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2012 1:19 pm
Antonio Kage Inferni Verideathul RPC Name: Kinetav Erth'azar RPC Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=24&t=21896169#328395871 RPC Rank: Student: RPC Bloodline: Anima RPC Class: Dark Avenger (Just giving this a go since Kinetav is part of the highest technological continent in Rykros...can also restrict Kinetav to hacking Citadel buildings/systems/doors only if need be if the hacking process is considered too "complex" to perform everywhere, but please do not let my willingness to settle for less cause you all to immediately shoot this down in the first place.) Gauntlets of Projection (See profile pic for gauntlet visual): As an adolescent, Kinetav knew that he'd have to wander around eventually because of his birth and class. For a means of easy, on-the-go mapping and hacking into abandoned buildings for refuge, the Anima paid a friend to design and create these gauntlets just for him. Via a mental command, the gauntlets can project a 3-D screen for maps that can also turn two dimensional for hacking against a surface such as an electrical lock or computer. Hacking a known system or door requires direct contact by the 2-D screen (can only be projected at point blank range), and takes two posts during which Kinetav cannot defend, attack, or move and is detectable by people in the vicinity. Hacking an unknown system for additional data or door takes three posts of vulnerability; any hacking can be willingly stopped at any time by Kinetav, but resets the post count to hacking. Successful hacks on an unknown system upload additional data from that system, or if on a door uploads additional data about that one door to an additional, seperate from the gauntlets data chip that Kinetav carries in his belt, and can only download additional information from that chip to the gauntlets via a hardline link overnight. CANNOT HACK MEACHA RPCS FOR INFO OR ANY OTHER PURPOSE. Not a mod...but offering a little advice.. 1. Anima can only use their Exodus weapon. 2. This would be more of a custom item than weapon.
I appreciate the advice. No, it's not a weapon. And this is also the custom armor page, the gauntlets, although having no combat effects, are still a part of his armor. i can transfer this post to a custom items spot if need be.
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Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2012 4:31 pm
Verideathul RPC Name: Kinetav Erth'azar RPC Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=24&t=21896169#328395871 RPC Rank: Student: RPC Bloodline: Anima RPC Class: Dark Avenger (Just giving this a go since Kinetav is part of the highest technological continent in Rykros...can also restrict Kinetav to hacking Citadel buildings/systems/doors only if need be if the hacking process is considered too "complex" to perform everywhere, but please do not let my willingness to settle for less cause you all to immediately shoot this down in the first place.) Gauntlets of Projection (See profile pic for gauntlet visual): As an adolescent, Kinetav knew that he'd have to wander around eventually because of his birth and class. For a means of easy, on-the-go mapping and hacking into abandoned buildings for refuge, the Anima paid a friend to design and create these gauntlets just for him. Via a mental command, the gauntlets can project a 3-D screen for maps that can also turn two dimensional for hacking against a surface such as an electrical lock or computer. Hacking a known system or door requires direct contact by the 2-D screen (can only be projected at point blank range), and takes two posts during which Kinetav cannot defend, attack, or move and is detectable by people in the vicinity. Hacking an unknown system for additional data or door takes three posts of vulnerability; any hacking can be willingly stopped at any time by Kinetav, but resets the post count to hacking. Successful hacks on an unknown system upload additional data from that system, or if on a door uploads additional data about that one door to an additional, seperate from the gauntlets data chip that Kinetav carries in his belt, and can only download additional information from that chip to the gauntlets via a hardline link overnight. CANNOT HACK MEACHA RPCS FOR INFO OR ANY OTHER PURPOSE. Thinking over dinner I realized something. Posts are indeed simply too fluid of time to be used for hacking. So before the mods bring it up, how about this: 30 minutes of real-life time inbetween each post, or one post after a certain amount of time IRL. That's an hour of RL time for known systems, and an hour and a half of RL time for unknown systems for anyone who can control an NPC or RPC to catch me (or try to, who knows...if within the Citadel guards could be surrounding my char for all as I'm trying to hack into an unfriendly occupied area).
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Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2012 10:15 am
Verideathul Verideathul RPC Name: Kinetav Erth'azar RPC Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=24&t=21896169#328395871 RPC Rank: Student: RPC Bloodline: Anima RPC Class: Dark Avenger (Just giving this a go since Kinetav is part of the highest technological continent in Rykros...can also restrict Kinetav to hacking Citadel buildings/systems/doors only if need be if the hacking process is considered too "complex" to perform everywhere, but please do not let my willingness to settle for less cause you all to immediately shoot this down in the first place.) Gauntlets of Projection (See profile pic for gauntlet visual): As an adolescent, Kinetav knew that he'd have to wander around eventually because of his birth and class. For a means of easy, on-the-go mapping and hacking into abandoned buildings for refuge, the Anima paid a friend to design and create these gauntlets just for him. Via a mental command, the gauntlets can project a 3-D screen for maps that can also turn two dimensional for hacking against a surface such as an electrical lock or computer. Hacking a known system or door requires direct contact by the 2-D screen (can only be projected at point blank range), and takes two posts during which Kinetav cannot defend, attack, or move and is detectable by people in the vicinity. Hacking an unknown system for additional data or door takes three posts of vulnerability; any hacking can be willingly stopped at any time by Kinetav, but resets the post count to hacking. Successful hacks on an unknown system upload additional data from that system, or if on a door uploads additional data about that one door to an additional, seperate from the gauntlets data chip that Kinetav carries in his belt, and can only download additional information from that chip to the gauntlets via a hardline link overnight. CANNOT HACK MEACHA RPCS FOR INFO OR ANY OTHER PURPOSE. Thinking over dinner I realized something. Posts are indeed simply too fluid of time to be used for hacking. So before the mods bring it up, how about this: 30 minutes of real-life time inbetween each post, or one post after a certain amount of time IRL. That's an hour of RL time for known systems, and an hour and a half of RL time for unknown systems for anyone who can control an NPC or RPC to catch me (or try to, who knows...if within the Citadel guards could be surrounding my char for all as I'm trying to hack into an unfriendly occupied area). The RL time stretch won't work, because RL time is too inconsistent when it comes to RP activity. There are extentuating circumstances (such as work, school, etc) that would render a person unable to "catch" Veri in the act even if they were able. What I would recommend is that for every post where Kinetav is attempting to hack a probability dice needs to be rolled to determine if he is detected or not, the probability of detection increasing or decreasing based on the location, NPC presence/ numbers and RPC presence considered. It will be more case by case than an actual time limit, but there's not another way to effectively give other players the chance to detect him. Now, as far as the gauntlets go, they are very technologically advanced even for The Citadel. I'm willing to pass them, but I want to know how Kinetav came across them, their importance to him, and to see a full RP sample regarding the item. Additionally, please increase the time it takes to hack by one post, to a total of 3. Hacking is a total novelty in Rykros because outside of The Citadel, there's not much of a purpose to it. As such, it will be more difficult and require more effort to do it effectively.
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Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:07 pm
Ferregar Wulf, my comments are in bold within your submission. xXLord OokamiXx xXLord OokamiXx xXx-Wulf-xXx RPC Name: Noctis RPC Rank: Master RPC Bloodline: Reaper RPC Class: Besesker RPC Element: Fire Name of Weapon/Armor: Legion's Claw and The Lifegiver Description: http://i842.photobucket.com/albums/zz347/Yasashikaze_Seiken/gauntlets720p.png(Left Is Lifegiver, Right is Legion's Claw) These are his gauntlets that have fused to his body at his rebirth, like all gauntlets they take time to get their true forms. Unlike the pictures these gauntlets cover his entire left and right arms.(Well they are his arms). Each shows the two sides of this reaper. Legion's Claw as his rage and anguish, The Livegiver is the reaped side of his being, showing the pure energy of life. Each speical in their own way. Rank: S Passives: The Soul of Grandmaster When both gauntlets come to activate, the energies in his gauntlets start to become easier to control and use in and out of combat. The opposites of the two gauntlets help train his abilites. Though all his works and power he come top the true peak of his reaper status as one of the Grandmasters of The Reaper Order. Due to this his reaper abilites cost one rank less to use. EditedSkills: Livegiver's: Skill Name Giver's shield B Rank Description Livergiver expands it's energy from the gauntlet and forms a medium sized shield of energy around his forearm. It expands out to 2 feet across and 2 1/2 feet tall. This Shield Can Block up to C ranked attacks. It uses B rank energy for each post in use and has a 5 post cooldown Edited
Reborn. S Rank This skill takes great amounts of energy, the true life giving nature of this gauntlet comes to life.(Pun). This skill uses the energy in the users to slowly bring back someone who has been killed. This skill needs five whole posts to use. The energy goes into the body and slowly starts to reanimate the body's systems and slowly the soul of the fallen brought back by gods will. This skill can be used every Two months and leaves a massive burn on his body. This burn cover most of his upper chest and neck area, since his gauntlets do not burn like his skin only becomes charded. This cause S rank damage to srin but does not kill him.. it simply wounds him greatly and making most attacks doubled the damage when he is hit if not healed. The time is 2 months in Real Life Edited
Legion's Claw's Crimson Bolt C Rank The energies in the gauntlets slowly build up in Legion. As this is done the energy is shaped and aimed at the target. AS this done a bolt of this crimson energy is shot at the target which can leave up to 2nd to 3rd degree burns. Beside that they may be knocked off their feet from the force depending on the strength differance of the target and Srin. It has a 3 post coolown Edited
Legion Vanguards B Rank One of Legion's interesting skills, the energy it slowly bubbles out and drips to the ground in what looks pools of blood. These pools of blood after three posts form a creature know as a Crimson Vanguard. They are liquid like creatures carrying large scythes and have stats of 6/6. Only three can be used at a time and it cost B rank energy for each. IF you look at creation skills it can. See this isnt summoning them it making them. And creation gives the reaper ability to form creatures of guardains with enough energy
Legion's Fist S Rank This skill covers the user in a dark red aura as it begins to charge for five posts. During these five posts the user begins to slow down by 2 speed, as this happens the gauntlets both begin to change, as this happens no really physical attack can be made so the process isnt messed up. When the time is up the gauntlest have changed into massive forms of their selves giving his gauntlets more striking power. During this mode his striking power sends a shockwave though the person body either bring them to their knees of breaking bones. It can also be used in another way.. By simply waiting 2 more posts and than charging for another the massive gauntlets can be launched at a person. The range is up 35ft but after that its a slight chance to hit. After launch his arms are gone for 3 posts intil they finally come back to him..(Pretty much the gauntlets fired will turn into energy and reform his arms.) in which time he can not use any reaper based skills. The cooldown is one week in rl Edited and remade.
Rp Sample: (Editing later need to check somin.)
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Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2012 2:07 pm
Wulf: Legion Vanguards is denied fully. In all context, this is a summoning skill.
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Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2012 4:52 pm
Ferregar Verideathul RPC Name: Kinetav Erth'azar RPC Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=24&t=21896169#328395871 RPC Rank: Student: RPC Bloodline: Anima RPC Class: Dark Avenger Gauntlets of Projection (See profile pic for gauntlet visual): As an adolescent, Kinetav knew that he'd have to wander around eventually because of his birth and class. For a means of easy, on-the-go mapping and hacking into abandoned buildings for refuge, the Anima paid a friend to design and create these gauntlets just for him. Via a mental command, the gauntlets can project a 3-D screen for maps that can also turn two dimensional for hacking against a surface such as an electrical lock or computer. Each hack requires three posts, and each post a D20 is rolled; detection is based on those rolls and the area the hacker is in: Shadowy, Dark Environments: 6 or higher, no detection Well Lit Environments: 11 or higher, no detection Shadowless Environments: 16 or higher, no detection Failing a roll causes all hostile guards or RPCs in the area to notice Kinetav, and to rush at him during that post. Kinetav *can* keep hacking, but next post he would take damage a rank higher than normal as he is especially vulnerable unless he discontinued the hack. If surrounded by friendly guards, doesn't take damage if all attacks are successfully blocked by said guards. Successful hacks on an unknown system upload additional data from that system, or if on a door uploads additional data about that one door to an additional, seperate from the gauntlets data chip that Kinetav carries in his belt, and can only download additional information from that chip to the gauntlets via a hardline link overnight. CANNOT HACK MEACHA RPCS FOR INFO OR ANY OTHER PURPOSE. The RL time stretch won't work, because RL time is too inconsistent when it comes to RP activity. There are extentuating circumstances (such as work, school, etc) that would render a person unable to "catch" Veri in the act even if they were able. What I would recommend is that for every post where Kinetav is attempting to hack a probability dice needs to be rolled to determine if he is detected or not, the probability of detection increasing or decreasing based on the location, NPC presence/ numbers and RPC presence considered. It will be more case by case than an actual time limit, but there's not another way to effectively give other players the chance to detect him. Now, as far as the gauntlets go, they are very technologically advanced even for The Citadel. I'm willing to pass them, but I want to know how Kinetav came across them, their importance to him, and to see a full RP sample regarding the item. Additionally, please increase the time it takes to hack by one post, to a total of 3. Hacking is a total novelty in Rykros because outside of The Citadel, there's not much of a purpose to it. As such, it will be more difficult and require more effort to do it effectively. Kinetav came upon a friend when he was younger who was a mechanic during his education years; realizing that the Anima would eventually become an outcast himself, he asked the friend what electronics in the way of hacking into doors and projecting maps he could make. Kinetav had to steal, lie, and cheat his way into paying off the overwhelming amount of money he began to owe to the friend as the gauntlets created went above and beyond the call the Dark Avenger had asked for: the Gauntlets of Projection. *Kinetav walked up to an abandoned house at night as he was seeking refuge; a dark 3-D projection screen appeared above one of his gauntlets before using his hands as a way to twist and move to the proper section of the program. Finally activating the proper file, the 3-D image of the area around him flattenedd into a 2-D image with numbers and letters on the keypad; the Dark Avenger smiles as he places this hacking device on top of the electronic keypad. Numbers begin to be pressed randomly by the 2-D image, but only artificially as the hacking process began; the direct contact between the screen and the keypad allowing the screen to test thousands of random possibilities as the Dark Avenger stayed vulnerable to all forms of damage, having to place his hands close to the surface to secure and maintain the projected screen. (Successful hack, no detection) Kinetav grinned wickedly as he saw the projection in front of him confirming the door's code (or if a system, uploading all information from said system) and transferring it to a spare computer chip that the Anima kept in his belt. He would have to download the information into the gloves later overnight, as he forgets the codes he hacked into by morning. Reaching a finger through the screen, the Dark Avenger punched the code in manually and watched the door open up. (Unsuccessful Hack, detected) Kinetav cursed as he saw guards walking towards him. Fortunately, he was in a somewhat dark to perfectly dark environment; the Dark Avenger simply releases his hands from the wall and either continues to fight like normal, or shadow step away from the combat if he is clearly out-matched. (Unsuccessful hack, detected in shadowless environment): ((Well, let's just say it's the equivalent of "oh ****" unless Kinetav has guards around him XD ))
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2012 8:24 am
RPC Name: Srin Azio RPC Profile Link: Your Customs Link: RPC Rank: Master RPC Bloodline: Reaper RPC Class: Besersker RPC Element:
Name of Weapon/Armor: (Snazzier names sound better then none) Description: (you can also add a picture in here, but I want to know what it does, also include general dimensions and what it's made of. Clip size for guns is a must.) Rank: (I want a ranks because I want to know how tough they are going to be) Passives: (Not every weapon needs a passive but they can be useful) Skills: (If any. Any other custom skills will need to be done in the custom skill thread. Also use the following format)
Skill Name Rank Description Rp Sample: (Include one or a shoe will come flying out of your screen/monitor)
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 11:45 am
Verideathul Ferregar Verideathul RPC Name: Kinetav Erth'azar RPC Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=24&t=21896169#328395871 RPC Rank: Student: RPC Bloodline: Anima RPC Class: Dark Avenger Gauntlets of Projection (See profile pic for gauntlet visual): As an adolescent, Kinetav knew that he'd have to wander around eventually because of his birth and class. For a means of easy, on-the-go mapping and hacking into abandoned buildings for refuge, the Anima paid a friend to design and create these gauntlets just for him. Via a mental command, the gauntlets can project a 3-D screen for maps that can also turn two dimensional for hacking against a surface such as an electrical lock or computer. Each hack requires three posts, and each post a D20 is rolled; detection is based on those rolls and the area the hacker is in: Shadowy, Dark Environments: 6 or higher, no detection Well Lit Environments: 11 or higher, no detection Shadowless Environments: 16 or higher, no detection Failing a roll causes all hostile guards or RPCs in the area to notice Kinetav, and to rush at him during that post. Kinetav *can* keep hacking, but next post he would take damage a rank higher than normal as he is especially vulnerable unless he discontinued the hack. If surrounded by friendly guards, doesn't take damage if all attacks are successfully blocked by said guards. Successful hacks on an unknown system upload additional data from that system, or if on a door uploads additional data about that one door to an additional, seperate from the gauntlets data chip that Kinetav carries in his belt, and can only download additional information from that chip to the gauntlets via a hardline link overnight. CANNOT HACK MEACHA RPCS FOR INFO OR ANY OTHER PURPOSE. The RL time stretch won't work, because RL time is too inconsistent when it comes to RP activity. There are extentuating circumstances (such as work, school, etc) that would render a person unable to "catch" Veri in the act even if they were able. What I would recommend is that for every post where Kinetav is attempting to hack a probability dice needs to be rolled to determine if he is detected or not, the probability of detection increasing or decreasing based on the location, NPC presence/ numbers and RPC presence considered. It will be more case by case than an actual time limit, but there's not another way to effectively give other players the chance to detect him. Now, as far as the gauntlets go, they are very technologically advanced even for The Citadel. I'm willing to pass them, but I want to know how Kinetav came across them, their importance to him, and to see a full RP sample regarding the item. Additionally, please increase the time it takes to hack by one post, to a total of 3. Hacking is a total novelty in Rykros because outside of The Citadel, there's not much of a purpose to it. As such, it will be more difficult and require more effort to do it effectively. Kinetav came upon a friend when he was younger who was a mechanic during his education years; realizing that the Anima would eventually become an outcast himself, he asked the friend what electronics in the way of hacking into doors and projecting maps he could make. Kinetav had to steal, lie, and cheat his way into paying off the overwhelming amount of money he began to owe to the friend as the gauntlets created went above and beyond the call the Dark Avenger had asked for: the Gauntlets of Projection. *Kinetav walked up to an abandoned house at night as he was seeking refuge; a dark 3-D projection screen appeared above one of his gauntlets before using his hands as a way to twist and move to the proper section of the program. Finally activating the proper file, the 3-D image of the area around him flattenedd into a 2-D image with numbers and letters on the keypad; the Dark Avenger smiles as he places this hacking device on top of the electronic keypad. Numbers begin to be pressed randomly by the 2-D image, but only artificially as the hacking process began; the direct contact between the screen and the keypad allowing the screen to test thousands of random possibilities as the Dark Avenger stayed vulnerable to all forms of damage, having to place his hands close to the surface to secure and maintain the projected screen. (Successful hack, no detection) Kinetav grinned wickedly as he saw the projection in front of him confirming the door's code (or if a system, uploading all information from said system) and transferring it to a spare computer chip that the Anima kept in his belt. He would have to download the information into the gloves later overnight, as he forgets the codes he hacked into by morning. Reaching a finger through the screen, the Dark Avenger punched the code in manually and watched the door open up. (Unsuccessful Hack, detected) Kinetav cursed as he saw guards walking towards him. Fortunately, he was in a somewhat dark to perfectly dark environment; the Dark Avenger simply releases his hands from the wall and either continues to fight like normal, or shadow step away from the combat if he is clearly out-matched. (Unsuccessful hack, detected in shadowless environment): ((Well, let's just say it's the equivalent of "oh ****" unless Kinetav has guards around him XD )) Excellent Kinetav, so far so good. If you're willing to take the 3rd post and work with the probability die, then this is approved.
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 12:18 pm
xXLord OokamiXx RPC Name: Srin Azio RPC Profile Link: Your Customs Link: RPC Rank: Master RPC Bloodline: Reaper RPC Class: Besersker RPC Element: Name of Weapon/Armor: (Snazzier names sound better then none) Description: (you can also add a picture in here, but I want to know what it does, also include general dimensions and what it's made of. Clip size for guns is a must.) Rank: (I want a ranks because I want to know how tough they are going to be) Passives: (Not every weapon needs a passive but they can be useful) Skills: (If any. Any other custom skills will need to be done in the custom skill thread. Also use the following format)
Skill Name Rank Description Rp Sample: (Include one or a shoe will come flying out of your screen/monitor)Wulf, please do not post empty and incomplete customs in the customs thread. If you want to work on the weapon/ etc you are thinking of submitting, it doesn't need to be in here. It only attracts attention to work that I can't do. That being said, let's take a look at your revised Gauntlets... Rank: S Passives: The Soul of Grandmaster When both gauntlets come to activate, the energies in his gauntlets start to become easier to control and use in and out of combat. The opposites of the two gauntlets help train his abilites. Though all his works and power he come top the true peak of his reaper status as one of the Grandmasters of The Reaper Order. Due to this his reaper abilites cost one rank less to use. Edited - You didn't edit this. It's still a passive and the same as it was before. This remains denied. If you want any chance of getting this skill passed, you need to make it an ACTIVE skill, with a serious cooldown.Skills: Livegiver's: Skill Name Giver's shield B Rank Description Livergiver expands it's energy from the gauntlet and forms a medium sized shield of energy around his forearm. It expands out to 2 feet across and 2 1/2 feet tall. This Shield Can Block up to C ranked attacks. It uses B rank energy for each post in use and has a 5 post cooldown Edited This skill is approved. Nice work.Reborn. S Rank This skill takes great amounts of energy, the true life giving nature of this gauntlet comes to life.(Pun). This skill uses the energy in the users to slowly bring back someone who has been killed. This skill needs five whole posts to use. The energy goes into the body and slowly starts to reanimate the body's systems and slowly the soul of the fallen brought back by gods will. This skill can be used every Two months and leaves a massive burn on his body. This burn cover most of his upper chest and neck area, since his gauntlets do not burn like his skin only becomes charded. This cause S rank damage to srin but does not kill him.. it simply wounds him greatly and making most attacks doubled the damage when he is hit if not healed. The time is 2 months in Real Life Edited Approved. Again, nice work.Legion's Claw's Crimson Bolt C Rank The energies in the gauntlets slowly build up in Legion. As this is done the energy is shaped and aimed at the target. AS this done a bolt of this crimson energy is shot at the target which can leave up to 2nd to 3rd degree burns. Beside that they may be knocked off their feet from the force depending on the strength differance of the target and Srin. It has a 3 post coolown Edited Second or Third degree burns, while specific, isn't specific enough to determine the damage sustained. If you are expecting burns, please provide additional information (damage per post?) And also please provide a concrete amount of distance a target might be knocked. It won't be determined by the difference between strength, jsut if he is stronger than the target or not.Legion Vanguards B Rank One of Legion's interesting skills, the energy it slowly bubbles out and drips to the ground in what looks pools of blood. These pools of blood after three posts form a creature know as a Crimson Vanguard. They are liquid like creatures carrying large scythes and have stats of 6/6. Only three can be used at a time and it cost B rank energy for each. IF you look at creation skills it can. See this isnt summoning them it making them. And creation gives the reaper ability to form creatures of guardains with enough energy As Jacky said, this is denied.Legion's Fist S Rank This skill covers the user in a dark red aura as it begins to charge for five posts. During these five posts the user begins to slow down by 2 speed, as this happens the gauntlets both begin to change, as this happens no really physical attack can be made so the process isnt messed up. When the time is up the gauntlest have changed into massive forms of their selves giving his gauntlets more striking power. During this mode his striking power sends a shockwave though the person body either bring them to their knees of breaking bones. It can also be used in another way.. By simply waiting 2 more posts and than charging for another the massive gauntlets can be launched at a person. The range is up 35ft but after that its a slight chance to hit. After launch his arms are gone for 3 posts intil they finally come back to him..(Pretty much the gauntlets fired will turn into energy and reform his arms.) in which time he can not use any reaper based skills. The cooldown is one week in rl There are parts of this skill that will work and parts that will not. Srin will be unable to use ANY attacks (not just physical) as the ksill charges to activate. Broken bones would be largely determined by the damage a character's already sustained and their strength by comparison to Srin. I recommend focusing on the shock waves and the potential the skill gives Srin to knock its target prone. Additionally, if the gauntlets are fired they do not turn into energy. If you are intending for Srin to be able to fire his gauntlets, once they are fired off of his body they are SEPARATE and vulnerable for 3 posts until he gathers the power to retrieve them or they can be retrieved for him. If you want this skill to have a RL cooldown, please make it two weeks. A week isn't even an entire fight in many instances.
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