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 Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:53 pm
What no comment on my RP confused
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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:56 pm
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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:00 pm
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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:10 pm
alright. now this is just a personal preference. just for the eyes i would pretty it up a little, you dont have to add pictures like i did, but add color and use different color for people when speaking, which goes hand in hand with the next part, organize the speaking, a little confusing and what not.
lets see, i would have picked to go for tentomon or floramon separately, so not at the same time. focus more on devoting all your attention to rping, and in another time write the song.
now here is sorta the main thing i didnt like, but the problem is its a personal preference. You made it seem too far fetched, about getting the money that is. Im not a street performer, but im sure they dont make that kind of money in that time, especially if people were already going to see music playing.
those are the only pointers, and im not the best editor so you dont have to listen to me, thats only what i like and i have no clue what the judge likes
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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:21 pm
USSR_canine alright. now this is just a personal preference. just for the eyes i would pretty it up a little, you dont have to add pictures like i did, but add color and use different color for people when speaking, which goes hand in hand with the next part, organize the speaking, a little confusing and what not. lets see, i would have picked to go for tentomon or floramon separately, so not at the same time. focus more on devoting all your attention to rping, and in another time write the song. now here is sorta the main thing i didnt like, but the problem is its a personal preference. You made it seem too far fetched, about getting the money that is. Im not a street performer, but im sure they dont make that kind of money in that time, especially if people were already going to see music playing. those are the only pointers, and im not the best editor so you dont have to listen to me, thats only what i like and i have no clue what the judge likes Ok well thank you for that review I would like to make a few comments about the review , I wasn't trying to get Floramon I didn't intend to obtain her I just thought it seemed like a good idea to put if no one entered , which they did , but good for them . Um lets see oh yes here is one , um Lance is one to do challenging things to do stuff so I made the story based on his persona . Many people are anxious to enter the concert so to pass the time find a live perfomer , but honestly I don't think I did a good job (because of the many comments I get in the outside world) , but to me I thing I may have a shot
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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:24 pm
anyone has a shot, yea im no professional so you dont have to listen to me, just what i like lol. and i dont think i did the best to my abilities. after i posted i read ichigos and i was like damn, its sorta like a longer version of his, we almost have the same digimon too
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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:29 pm
USSR_canine anyone has a shot, yea im no professional so you dont have to listen to me, just what i like lol. and i dont think i did the best to my abilities. after i posted i read ichigos and i was like damn, its sorta like a longer version of his, we almost have the same digimon too Well good luck too you
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Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:30 pm
and to you too, may the best rper win
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 4:45 am
uhh kira when is the contest going to end?
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 7:02 am
USSR_canine levelnight20 USSR_canine levelnight20 Lets see Penguinmon-Windy Gabumon-Kain Floramon-I'm gonna say King Tentomon-No clue for tentomon i would say its between me and liger, sorry ichigo ha ha. i think he might have a little more idk *Night punches USSR* I'm not a good writer so mean , page 2 or 3 sorry didnt see it i know i have a 1% win ratio but it is more on 0%
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 7:16 am
way to stay positive ichigo
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:53 am
I like that Canine... I really do. Best of luck to all of those in the rp contest.
We all have an equal shot because we don't know what Kira is looking for exactly. He could be looking for something short and to the point like Night & Ichi's or he could be looking for something longer like Caninie (can I call you canine) or mine.
Keep positive and to whomever the winner maybe I just want to say they deserved it...
Umm... I do have one comment though, Night. If you're gonna ask for someone to give their thoughts and comments on your work, you should politely accept what they have to say rather than shoot it down.
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-InsertEgoHere- Liger Crew
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:02 am
-InsertEgoHere- Liger I like that Canine... I really do. Best of luck to all of those in the rp contest. We all have an equal shot because we don't know what Kira is looking for exactly. He could be looking for something short and to the point like Night & Ichi's or he could be looking for something longer like Caninie (can I call you canine) or mine. Keep positive and to whomever the winner maybe I just want to say they deserved it... Umm... I do have one comment though, Night. If you're gonna ask for someone to give their thoughts and comments on your work, you should politely accept what they have to say rather than shoot it down. Ok *Night grabs rootbeer and some anime*
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:45 am
Hmm... Maybe I should enter the RP contest..
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Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:12 am
Pummel_musss Hmm... Maybe I should enter the RP contest.. Pummel! *hugs soft fur* It's so soft :3
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