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PostPosted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 10:05 pm


Thank you Hark.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 08, 2010 8:26 am


Your Rank: Genin
Name of Jutsu: Youton: Yougan Globs (Lava Release : Lava Globs)
Rank of Jutsu: B
Range of Jutsu: Short to Mid
Jutsu's Element: Youton (Lava)
Description: Utilizing the Doton and Katon elements, the user performs a few seals, puts their fingers around their lips, (just like with Katon: Powerfull Fireball Release) and fires lava bullets at the target. The globs, obviously are shaped like globs, are shot in groups of three, out of the users mouth. These bullets are, in fact, made of lava, which would burn the target greatly.

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Kaze was in a forest, 'alone', in the Fire Country. Ever since becoming a Chuunin, Kaze had been traveling and training his Youton element, his teacher being the Yonbi. "Okay..." Kaze said as he listened to the Yonbi's instructions, and performed a few seals, and used his index finger and thumb, putting them into a ring shape around his lips, and thought.'Youton: Yougan Globs' In that instant, he shot out three globs, fairly large, composed of lava, out at a nearby tree. Which, was about 5 feet away from Kaze. Obviously, the tree burned. "Hmm. This jutsu can be very very useful!" Kaze exclaimed to the Yonbi. Kaze then leaped from the ground, onto another nearby tree. He laughed, and channeled chakra to his feet as he stood on the side of the tree. He did handseals once more and thought,'Youton: Yougan Globs' And did the same fingering, and fired globs of lava out at seperate times. One was aimed at, and hit the ground. The second hit a tree, and began burning it, and the third hit the leaves of that tree, causing them to slowly burn. "Hmmm" Kaze thought. He was basically setting this place ablaze. Oh well.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 08, 2010 8:32 am


I know you're the Yonbi Host and all, but I think I already have this Jutsu in the Yougan Bloodline that's still being discussed.

So I'm warning you now. This may be recalled. I approve.
PostPosted: Thu Jul 08, 2010 9:18 am


Name: Josei mushi - Female bug technique -
Rank: D
Range: 1m
Jutsu Type: Supplementary
Clan: Aburame
Description: An Aburame will plant a female bug somewhere one the opponent. These bugs cannot be detected as they make no noise and very little sound. This bug exudes a pheromone that attracts other destruction bugs. A ninja with a female bug on them cannot avoid detect and it becomes a lot more difficult to dodge. This is often used for tracking people, although it can be used to increase the effectiveness of attacks. This technique does not need to be said.

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Arcus was having the hardest time tracking this shinobi. It seemed he was using a flicker jutsu of some sort. Either that or he was just really good at hiding. But for some reason, Arcus couldn't get a read on him. Suddenly the shinobi burst out from some bushes behind Arcus. He turned around just into to see the kunai flashing in the man's hands. Arcus grabbed at the man's hand, planting a tiny female bug on him as he used the man's momentum to throw him over Arcus' shoulder. The man landed in some bushes and once again disappeared. This has run its course , he thought as he released his bugs. Hundreds of them flew around him in a random swarm. They suddenly stopped, they could smell his chakra, and although they couldn't get an exact location from it, they could easily track the female. Arcus watch as his insects rushed in unison towards a tree about 20 meters to his left. He heard a suprised yelp as a man covered in insects fell from the tree and slapped at his arms trying to get the bugs off of him. There is no hiding, with that bug on your arm. He said revealing the nature of the shinobi's defeat.


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Name: Mushi Kontorōru Insect Manipulation
Rank: D
Range: (0~30m)
Jutsu Type: Supplementary
Requirement: Kikaichuu no Jutsu (Destruction Bug Technique) is active
Clan: Aburame

Description: A member of the Aburame clan will focus there insects into the shape they need such as ninja tools, appliances, or other shapes and use them. They can make the swarm into any shape they want and use it upon the enemy. The bugs sap the chakra of the enemy on contact. Because they are filled with chakra the can also explode on contact but this isn't harmful unless used 'an masse'.

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Arcus was being choked. He didn't know how the man had gotten so close so quickly, but bothering with how's wasn't going to fix thing, and he needed them fixed. The bugs in his hair were already rushing down to defend their caught of guard master. They'd began draining, but there weren't a lot of them and he didn't seem to be using any chakra to begin with. Dammit he thought as he began focusing to coordinate his bugs. Get off of me! he choked out. The bugs in his hair formed a small fist and rammed themselves into the face of the assailant, coating his face in bugs. He started clawing them away from his face, more out of disgust then pain. But it was too late. They were on him and they were going to stick to him like glue. Arcus rubbed on his neck and focused on breathing while his bugs slowly drained the crazed man dry.


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Name: Mushi Taifu - Bug typhoon
Rank: C
Range: 0-10m
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Requirement: Kikaichuu no Jutsu (Destruction Bug Technique) is active
Clan: Aburame

Description: A member of the Aburame clan will use their unique clan jutsu to sent of their insects at the opponent. The insects will then smash into the opponent repeatedly flying in a rapid circle around him/her increasing their draining powers. This gives the appearance of a large black typhoon surrounded the enemy. This attack is difficult to counter unless the opponent can avoid the bugs (which is nearly impossible if a female bug tagged has them) or somehow shield themselves from the bugs.

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Arcus was in a full on brawl. He ducked the shinobi's katana and threw a kick. He was blocked by the flat of the blade and his eyes widened as the blade came down upon him. He grinned as he watched the man fighting his bug clone. As the clone was struck, it dispersed and a few thousand bugs took flight fro it. Arcus formed a few rapid handseals and grinned as his bugs began flying in a tight circle around the man smashing into him repeatedly as they began to form a typhoon around him. The man hadn't had a lot of chakra to begin with, and with their increased draining ability from the technique, he was dry and unconscious within 15 seconds.


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Name: Mushi Mure - Bug Swarm
Rank: C
Range: ~
Requirement: Kikaichuu no Jutsu (Destruction Bug Technique) is active
Jutsu Type: ninjutsu
Description: The Aburame user sends his bugs to coat under his on all sides. When a bug comes into contact with the enemy, the rest of the bugs converge, and fly straight upward, blasting the opponent into the sky and then flying back toward the bug user. This attack is the equivalent to a very heavy upper cut. Draining only lasts until the opponent is on his way down, the bugs leave his body to avoid being squished.

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His opponent was quick. And there was no cover. Arcus found that he was at a disadvantage. He stayed on defensive as the man attacked him with blow after blow and then jumped back to avoid any form of counter attack. He's crazy if he thinks I'm just going to let him do this. Arcus thought as the man jumped back once more to avoid Arcus' hands. Arcus smiled. He'd already released his bugs and and now they dropped from his hands like black water from a faucet. The fighter stared at them uncertain whether he should make a move or not. The bugs rushed at him, running along the ground causing it to look as though a large shadow was growing along the floor. The shinobi jump to the left to avoid the wave of insects, but it did him no good, for they were rushing to cover everything. He landed in their midst and they instantly converged upon him, flying straight up and smashing him into the air. They sucked on his chakra as they lifted him about 7 feet off the ground, then they dispersed, flying back towards Arcus' awaiting arms. The man hit the ground hard, out of breath and feeling the effects of the sudden chakra loss.


I didn't quite understand the Description on this one correctly. Could you please go over it and revise you grammar and such to make it easier to read?


Name: Mushi no jutsu: hisame arashi (Insect Art: Hailstorm)
Rank: A
Range: 80m
Requirement: Kikaichuu no Jutsu (Destruction Bug Technique) must be active; Takes two posts to perform. For the first one, the bugs are sent into the air, leaving the user without bugs to help defend him.
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Description: The aburame user releases All of his bugs. They fly straight up into the air and form and gigantic dark cloud. The user then points his hand at the target shinobi. Small balls of insects hail from the cloud and s This is extremely hard to dodge without superior taijutsu or some sort of advanced blocking or dodging techniques. In conjunction with the female bug technique, the bug balls become seekers.

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Arcus cried out as he felt every bug in his body leave him and fly straight into the air. The sudden loss of them was slightly disorienting. The bugs gathered in the sky forming a large circular cloud that cast its shadow over him, his opponent, and a great distance father. He pointed to his opponent who appeared to activating a sharingan. heh, as if Arcus thought as he pointed at the enemy ninja. A ball of bugs came crashing down. It was easily dodged by the opponent. More balls began to crash down smashing into the ground with force as the uchiha dodged about them, carefully trying to anticipate where they would land. The tempo of the missiles increased until finally, one clipped the uchiha's shoulder. Instantly the bugs began to drain as more slammed into the ground around him. The Uchiha began to slow as he struggled in vain to dislodge the bugs. Another ball slammed into him, taking him to the ground. This is over...Arcus thought as another ball slammed into the already nearly unconscious ninja.


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Name: Mushi no jutsu: sanagi - Insect Art: Pupa
Rank: A
Range 20m:
Requirement: Kikaichuu no Jutsu (Destruction Bug Technique) is active
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Description: At the Aburame user's command, The bugs will form a wide circle along the ground surrounding the opponent. A few handseals later and the bugs will quickly rotate and smash into the opponent, lifting him into an ever growing tornado. Unless the enemy has special shielding or can avoid the jutsu to begin with, they are almost completely helpless. As they fly around in a cyclone being drained. The bug user then walks into the eye of the tornado and plunges his hands inside the walls. He throws a large mound of bugs, which travels up the tornado in a spiral, eventually smashing into the enemy. The jutsu ends if the enemy manages to get out or when the bugs disperse to avoid being squished by the fall.

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I'll write this one as soon as i get a chance, but can you look over the other ones?


((I feel these jutsu should have a stated rate at which they drain, but as it is, no system has come up. I'd be happy to make one for the aburame if you'd like. ))

-1 Chakra Point at AC
-2 at Genin
-3 at Chuunin
-4 at Jounin
-5 at Sannin
-6 at Kage

This is one I just pulled outta my a** and I'll ask Crew about it.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 08, 2010 10:28 am


[[ok, sorry for the ooc, but i'm kinda lost. did my jutsus get approved? because they aren't really meant to be used as "sage" jutsus, just used by monkey summoners, similar to a kekkai genkai or something. if this is impossible, i understand. but yea....... i sw something about one of my jutsus getting denied......then the others get approved. any help here? sweatdrop

btw, my application is on page 27 if you don't know]]
PostPosted: Thu Jul 08, 2010 10:37 am


I would approve them, but them I don't work with Summons anymore. Not since this Guild started. I don't know the new rules that these kids have come up with!

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 08, 2010 12:04 pm


Name: kouchuu no Kobushi (Beetle's Fist)
Rank: D
range: 1m
Requirement: Kikaichuu no Jutsu (Destruction Bug Technique) is active
Jutsu Type: ninjutsu
Desrciption: This is accepted as the Aburame's fighting stance. Aburame techniques are generally for medium ranged opponents, however should they come into range, its good to have this ability available. The Aburame coats his hands and arms with bugs (much like bracers). The Aburame is then able to block incoming attacks, taking them with reduced force (albeit only slightly reduced). Upon blocking, the bugs along the Aburame's arms can crawl upon whatever force was in contact with the user. They promptly begin draining. These bugs will stay on the user's hands throughout a battle unless they are dismissed by the user, the user preforms a jutsu requiring 'all' of his bugs, or the bugs are killed by a katon or explosive.

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Dammit, dammit, dammit! Arcus thought as he watched his opponent reveal a byakugan. These hyuugas totally cheat. He thought even as the ninja came rushing at him, his fingers pointed. Arcus achieved his own fighting stance, allowing his bugs to coat his arms and hands. 64 palms! He heard the man yell as he jumped close to Arcus, his fingers a blur. Yeah, right! He yelled back, as he got hit with the first blow. what the... he blinked, and had already been hit 15 more times. He found that he was having trouble drawing his chakra. He raised his hands in time to block the 32'nd blow. His bugs were on the man's fingers in an instant. The ninja didn't even sniff. he just keep on piling on hits, blasting Arcus backwards with the 64th blow. Arcus hit the ground, and struggled to breath as the man stood over him. He was caught between coughing up blood, and laughing because he'd gotten the man and the guy didn't even know it yet. The hyuuga looked at Arcus confused. Most people didn't laugh after 64 palms... More than half his chakra was gone before he'd even begun to notice, and once he did, his attempts to quickly brush them off only served to tire him while they went upon their work. Arcus was on the ground quite a while recovering from the attack. He eventually got up. The hyuuga was on the ground....He didn't get up. They had drained him of his chakra.....all of it.


Name: Mushi Mure - Bug Swarm
Rank: C
Range: ~
Requirement: Kikaichuu no Jutsu (Destruction Bug Technique) is active
Jutsu Type: ninjutsu
Description: The Aburame user sends his bugs out. They coat the floor around him for about 15m. Should the opponent touch even one of the bugs, the rest converge upon him, and begin draining as they rush upward, blasting him into the air. The draining only lasts as the man is going up. The bugs disperse on his way down to avoid being squished. This jutsu is the basically a very heavy, chakra draining upper cut.

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His opponent was quick. And there was no cover. Arcus found that he was at a disadvantage. He stayed on defensive as the man attacked him with blow after blow and then jumped back to avoid any form of counter attack. He's crazy if he thinks I'm just going to let him do this. Arcus thought as the man jumped back once more to avoid Arcus' hands. Arcus smiled. He'd already released his bugs and and now they dropped from his hands like black water from a faucet. The fighter stared at them uncertain whether he should make a move or not. The bugs coated the ground surrounding Arcus. Forming what appeared to be a large circular shadow. The Shinobi felt he would risk it. you should've just run.. Arcus thought as he threw a smoke bomb directly at the man who'd tried to jump over the bugs to reach him. The man was engulfed in smoke and was coughing on his way down. Arcus side-stepped him, causing him to plunge, on his knees, into the midst of the bugs. They instantly rushed at him, not giving him a chance to move. They smashed straight upwards, draining him on the way. He flew into the air and the bugs dispersed quickly returning to a smiling Arcus Aburame. The man landed...hard. He was left gasping for air as his body recoiled from the impact and chakra drain.


((I've completely reworked the skill and added another one i'd like approved. I actually edited the other skills to make them slightly more fair for enemies, but that edit seems to have disappeared. I'll fix them when i put these jutsu where they're supposed to go...where are they supposed to go anyway? on the aburame jutsu list? or in my own personal customs? They're aren't exactly a bunch of Aburame walking around. I could easily teach them the jutsu as i learn it, if thats preferred.

also, that system you have isn't exactly solid because some attacks have a greater draining rate then others. ))
PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:59 pm


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PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 1:00 pm


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I would approve them, but them I don't work with Summons anymore. Not since this Guild started. I don't know the new rules that these kids have come up with!
any crew can approve anything except for profiles and autoranks
PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 1:04 pm


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I would approve them, but them I don't work with Summons anymore. Not since this Guild started. I don't know the new rules that these kids have come up with!
any crew can approve anything except for profiles and autoranks


But that doesn't mean you should. Before approving anything, ask yourself if you're truly qualified for that spot. That is what Hark has done, and I respect him for it. We really don't need crew members approving things they know nothing about just because they can.

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 2:13 pm


i know that ,that why i have only been approving custom weapons,and jutsus, and regular bloodline/clan, because one i have either had mine approved or have done so in the past without much complaints
PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 2:25 pm


[[again, sorry about the ooc. but yea, alpha, any chance you can approve these custom jutsus? or are you not qualified either? btw, can you check my application in the custom weapons forum?]]

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 2:45 pm


Tree travel was denied,everything else was approved
PostPosted: Fri Jul 09, 2010 2:46 pm


oh thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you......you get the point. oh yea, and thank you 4laugh

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