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PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 12:06 am


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okay i fix it i hope its good now 3nodding


Thanks! It's better, but I'm still finding some problems with the bio though. So they didn't want her anymore? Why didn't they just dump her down a lake or throw her off a cliff? Why did the kidnappers pick Rosentale? Is Rosentale Academy really that horrible a place?

I did mention that shyness is a flaw that you want to avoid. Friendliness and shyness kind of contradict. And unless this school was all about swimming, I don't think your character has to worry about swimming in water so I can't count that as a flaw.

Fortunately one of the moderators made a more detail clarification of flaws. So you can check Character Flaws - Doing it right for reference. I hope it helps!

i fix it again ,i hope that will be fine... sweatdrop


I'm sorry but I don't think those will work. Shyness and friendliness clash with each other. She can't be running up and chatting with people if she's too shy. No magic ability is not considered a flaw but a lot of people like to add it in as extra information in the flaws section when they've met the at least three flaws criteria. There are a lot of characters that sleep a lot in the academy and they don't have it even listed as a flaw. It's just a normal habit. Not a flaw.

I'm think I'll list some possible flaws that might work for your character. That way, I hope I can give you some ideas.

- Naive: Way too trusting and doesn't understand the evils of the world. She is easily tricked and doesn't notice details easily.
- Childish/Immature: She is silly and acts like a child. She has trouble understanding things unless it's spelled out to her. It's annoying for some people to deal with a childish character.
- Idiotic: She's not very smart and will do silly things that just gets her and the people around her into trouble.
- Distracted: Can't stay on one subject and often goes off to random tangents which makes it impossible for her to get her work done.
- Always wishes to please others: This causes her to get taken advantage of all the time.

Hopefully the examples above work for your character and if not, I hope they gave you good ideas for flaws for her. ^^

Thank you for your hard work! And I'm sorry for being so picky!

okay i used those flaws :3 i hope its good now whee
PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 1:19 am


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Because your character has a panty shot (without the panties) of what appears to be a minor, we are worried it does not meet Gaia's TOS and could be considered reportable. Gaia takes any form of child pornography very seriously and we do have moderators that are not in the guild but read the RP for laughs. Please crop the picture above the waistline or find another picture so we can ensure that neither you, nor the guild gets in trouble.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 1:22 am


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okay i fix it i hope its good now 3nodding


Thanks! It's better, but I'm still finding some problems with the bio though. So they didn't want her anymore? Why didn't they just dump her down a lake or throw her off a cliff? Why did the kidnappers pick Rosentale? Is Rosentale Academy really that horrible a place?

I did mention that shyness is a flaw that you want to avoid. Friendliness and shyness kind of contradict. And unless this school was all about swimming, I don't think your character has to worry about swimming in water so I can't count that as a flaw.

Fortunately one of the moderators made a more detail clarification of flaws. So you can check Character Flaws - Doing it right for reference. I hope it helps!

i fix it again ,i hope that will be fine... sweatdrop


I'm sorry but I don't think those will work. Shyness and friendliness clash with each other. She can't be running up and chatting with people if she's too shy. No magic ability is not considered a flaw but a lot of people like to add it in as extra information in the flaws section when they've met the at least three flaws criteria. There are a lot of characters that sleep a lot in the academy and they don't have it even listed as a flaw. It's just a normal habit. Not a flaw.

I'm think I'll list some possible flaws that might work for your character. That way, I hope I can give you some ideas.

- Naive: Way too trusting and doesn't understand the evils of the world. She is easily tricked and doesn't notice details easily.
- Childish/Immature: She is silly and acts like a child. She has trouble understanding things unless it's spelled out to her. It's annoying for some people to deal with a childish character.
- Idiotic: She's not very smart and will do silly things that just gets her and the people around her into trouble.
- Distracted: Can't stay on one subject and often goes off to random tangents which makes it impossible for her to get her work done.
- Always wishes to please others: This causes her to get taken advantage of all the time.

Hopefully the examples above work for your character and if not, I hope they gave you good ideas for flaws for her. ^^

Thank you for your hard work! And I'm sorry for being so picky!

okay i used those flaws :3 i hope its good now whee


Thank you for putting up with my pickiness! She will be staying at the Emerald Dorm.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 12:33 pm


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Name: Penelope J. Road

Species: succubus

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Appearance description: Pretty much the same as the picture, she has strawberry blonde hair and blue green eyes.

Personality: Penny has two different sides to her personality, one when she is hungry, and one for the rest of the time.

Usually: Penny is a charming thoughtful girl. She always seems to have a calm innocent smile but just beneath the thin surface of her facade is her true face of a self centered egomaniac with little interest in the well being of others, although most people cant see through her 'mask'. She has a graceful regal air about her that people seem to be drawn to.

Hungry: Like a predator stalking her pray She can be a ruthless uncaring dominatrix taking what she wants from a man and casting him aside. She oozes sexuality with every step and takes pleasure in toying with painfully shy and overprotected.

Bio: Penny was raised in southern Ireland for most of her life. She was raised by her mother and father, which is quite unusual considering that succubus see humans as more of a meal then a partner and usually children of mixed couples are raised by the succubus parent. But Penny's parents had truly fallen in love.

Penny had a pretty good childhood, her father showered her with love and spoiled her rotten, and her mother raised Penny with a firm hand and a soft heart.

It wasn't until she hit puberty and the other Penny started coming out that she had trouble. By the time she turned sixteen they had moved six times due to Penny getting in trouble. there were even a few cases of boys ending up in the hospital after a bit too much fun. Finally with no other options Penny was sent to Rosentale in order to Learn how to control her powers.

Skills and Abilities:
If she feeds from a human she becomes stronger and more agile for a day or two but if she feeds from a supernatural she can obtain one or more of their traits for an hour or so along with the added strength.

Character Flaws: When she isn't hungry she is terribly awkward around boys, to the point that she freaks out every time one touches her. She is horrible in combat situations. She is a very self centered and wont do anything if it doesn't benefit her. When she doesn't like someone she wont think twice about hurting there feelings and can be quite cold and uncaring at times.

Sexual Orientation: Bi-sexual but she can only feed from the life sources of men.

Status: Single

Likes:
- Herself.
- Sweets.
- Fae.

Dislikes:
- Rats
- Thunder
- Spinach

Extra Information: Banana a Road family friend and Penny's companion is with her almost always.





I edited the personality, Ability, flaws, and like section. Hope it is better now. smile

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 12:44 pm


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Because I had nothing better to do Out of the kindness of my heart [and for the sake of my eyeballs] I edited it horribly so they wouldn't have to crop it. T'was gross.

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 12:56 pm


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thank you! that was the one thing that bothered me about the picture, i'm just a terrible editor ;D
now the picture looks so much better! >W<

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 12:57 pm


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Because I had nothing better to do Out of the kindness of my heart [and for the sake of my eyeballs] I edited it horribly so they wouldn't have to crop it. T'was gross.

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YAAAY! XD
You are a lifesaver! >w<" That means she wont' have to change her picture. =D
PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 1:00 pm


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sooo, can she be accepted now?

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 1:00 pm


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Another letter duly delivered. A postman's job is never done. *shot for playing too much Paper Mario*
PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 1:04 pm


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saw your announcement and was a little disappointed, didn't think there were other young teachers. I just didn't want to play another male teacher since it seemed kind of sexist to always play a male, doctor teacher type character since they are so common, well I think they are anyways.... i hope my character is still okay >.>

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 1:09 pm


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saw your announcement and was a little disappointed, didn't think there were other young teachers. I just didn't want to play another male teacher since it seemed kind of sexist to always play a male, doctor teacher type character since they are so common, well I think they are anyways.... i hope my character is still okay >.>


She's accepted. XD Just make sure you don't go and use her powers on other people's belongings as well as a person since I don't think people would take it kindly if they had to make their characters chase something of there's that ran off. ;D Make sure to ask the RPer if you do.

Also, we decided that's enough child teachers in the school. One and two is fine, but if we get anymore, that's just pushing it. =w="

She'll be staying in the Luminescent Light Dorm.

PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 1:11 pm


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Cool beans, and don't worry, I always ask permission before I do anything like that. Victoria will only be controlling her special little rabbit doll mwhahaha ;D

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 1:15 pm


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Cool beans, and don't worry, I always ask permission before I do anything like that. Victoria will only be controlling her special little rabbit doll mwhahaha ;D


Oh and one more thing, which days would be a good day for you to be online? =O Can you list at least three if you can? >.<"
PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 1:16 pm


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During the week day, monday or tuesday would probably be the best times i could get on, since there isn't really anything due on those days for school :3

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2012 1:24 pm


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During the week day, monday or tuesday would probably be the best times i could get on, since there isn't really anything due on those days for school :3


Her class is scheduled on Week 2: Monday and is a fourth period class. =D
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