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 Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2011 5:40 pm
RPC name: Jebus
Is it a Free skill?: FREEEEEEEE~
Type of skill: Cursed Souls (BL)
Skill name: Kuro Kakumau
Rank: B
Skill description: Hardens your Kuro Kotogara into a wall like shape, blocking anything and everything, taking 1 rank of energy more then what the skill was, therefore, a blocking a D ranked skills would take C rank energy. As a master, this cost is removed.
Sample:
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RPC name: Jebus
Is it a Free skill?: FREEEEEEEE~
Type of skill: Cursed Souls
Skill name: Kuro Bakuhatsu
Rank: A
Skill description: Causes the Kuro Kotogara to speed forward, exploding repetitively across the ground for 5 Meters
Sample:
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RPC name: Jebus
Is it a Free skill?: FREEEEEEEE~
Type of skill: Cursed Souls
Skill name: Kuro Tekken
Rank: E
Skill description: The Kuro Kotogara forms around the users fists, protecting them, as well as giving their punches an added boost, making all their hand to hand techniques one rank stronger. Can also be used on the feet.
Sample:
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Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2011 8:25 pm
This is for Urban or Fenrir to judge, Kage has already said she doesn't feel right judging it. I_am_Ronnel_no_Fenniksu Username: Stab stab stabbity. -.- RPC name: Mikhail Is it a Free skill?: Yup. Type of skill: Sword Master Skill~! Skill name: Blade Works Unlimited Rank: SS rank If it uses ammo how much: None Limits: Must be a Sword Master. Must be Master or Sage Rank to use. Must know the Phantom Weapon technique. Skill description: It pwns. -shrugs- alright. Blade Works Unlimited is one of the ultimate techniques of the Sword Master Class. The area around the Sword Master and their opponent shimmers and twists, before reality seems to snap. In the ground around the Sword Master and his/her opponent, an infinite number of weapons appear, stuck into the ground. Any weapon the user of this technique has ever seen or held is recreated here in its entirety. Special abilities of these weapons is usable ONLY IF the user of Blade Works Unlimited has permission from the creator of the weapon. Without this, they only have the weapon in its appearance and strength. This technique is not limited to swords - axes, hammers, punching blades, scythes... if it is something a Sword Master can use, it will appear here. Only Sword Masters can even touch these blades. If the opponent of the user is a Sword Master, they too can pick up the created weapons. But again, to use the abilities of any special weapons, they too must get permission from the weapon's creator. If the opponent is not a Sword Master, trying to pick up these weapons will just give the person a handful of mist. Sample: -cracks neck- Alright, here we go. Mikhail grunted as the Master Vampire knocked Glabrezu from his hand, pulling the sword to herself. She laughed, an evil, malicious sound. "What will you do now little Sword Master? I've taken your precious blade from you." The man sighed in annoyance before standing up straight and focusing all of his energy together. "What am I going to do? Why, I think that I will do this." His eyes snapped open wide as the air around himself and the Vampire began twisting and bending. When nothing happened to her, she thought the technique had failed. That was, she thought it had failed until she looked around and saw that countless blades surrounded them, stretching as far as the eye could see. She turned her gaze back to Mikhail to see him pull a sword from the ground - an identical copy to the sword that she had just stolen. Looking around again, she could see that there were several other swords out in the field of blades, matching the ones that they both now wielded. But other weapons could be seen, from scythes to massive hammers. "Wh-what is this" Before she could finish her question, she was being forced to defend against the sudden onslaught from Mikhail. He stabbed his Glabrezu into her foot, then grabbed a gleaming silver blade and plunged it through her other foot. A cross-shaped sword impaled her right hand, while a mace crushed her left arm and pinned it down. "This...this is Blade Works Unlimited. And you are its first victim." She looked up to see a massive axe in the shape of a perfect cross plunging down into her.
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Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2011 10:26 pm
RPC name: Typhon E.
Is it a Free skill?: No, though can be teachable
Type of skill: personal
Skill name: Threatening Growl
Rank: E (though cost varies)
Limits:
Skill description: A technique dragons use when threatening another creature to back off. The deeper and bigger the growl, the easier it was to make a creature take off in fear. Typhon adapted this trait into a skill, by focusing an amount of energy into his vocal cords, he can emit a growl that'll set a monster (summons included) running away and incapable of fighting. The amount of energy used must match the rank of the target.
Sample:
The mage was all out of options, but instead of handling becoming a prisoner like a man, he summoned a tiger between himself and the draconian. Typhon didn't care, as bringing another being to be killed was wrong in his book. Instead, energy flowed into his vocal cords, and a deep and chilling growl emitted from his throat that filled the room. The tiger shivered for a moment and took off, running away from the room to get away from the draconian, leaving it between the mage and Typhon once more.
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 7:20 am
Kagetsukiko Shruikan: Gaining Air- Approved. Glide- Approved. Sandpaper Scales- Umm.... I have the urge to have the energy cost go up slightly (maybe just an increase of one rank when the user reaches expert rank) with the Draconian's rank because (if I remember correctly) the scales of a Draconian get harder as they rank up, meaning that this skill would probably become a lot more dangerous with time. Am I right or am I wrong? Oh, and I think you meant "angle" when you wrote "ankle". I'm revoking this decision. All of these skills are Denied. Shruikan, dragons can't fly until Adept. Period. Your two skills practically make them do it anytime they want before. As for Sandpaper Scales, thats just you trying to get away with increasing the draconian's toughness even more than it already is. You have a habit of doing that. Remember it took at least B-rank techniques to even have a chance of killing your last character, and that was ALL the time. Kage, I would advise you to be particularly careful with shruikan's requests. He's a tricky one he is.
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 7:52 am
Kagetsukiko Shruikan: Primal Range- Write an rp sample. While part of the reason why we require rp samples for personal skills is to clear up any discrepancies, we also require them to make you work for the personal skill (at least, that's how I've seen it). Other than that, it's good. And this one. This is definitely Denied. A C-rank skill that increases the power of all skills by a rank and gives the user an additional 2 strength and even gets rid of their speed nerf? I don't know what kage was thinking when she thought of accepting this. >.> *whacks kage upside the head with a rolled-up newspaper*
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:03 am
dg: All Denied
sorceress: Just as kage said, this is Denied. Its too much, and while it could pass as a talent (maybe), its too much for a normal skill.
urban: Kuro Kakumau- Denied. This is just like that paladin skill but without the cost at master. Also, realize that this skill was in the paladin's list because paladin's have a decreased amount of energy, so it was acceptable for them to block just about anything so long it cost them a ton of energy. Your bloodline is different.
Kuro Bakuhatsu- This is an A-rank skill and it has a one sentence description. stare What did you think I was going to say?
Kuro Tekken- How does it protect them and how long does this technique last?
ronnel: Blade Works Unlimited- Now this is cool. But every weapon the user has ever seen or heard? What if its their opponent's weapon? Does it immediately teleport in the ground or something? What happens to the user's real weapon if somebody suddenly puts their sword in the ground a nation away?
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:13 am
That's the reason that the user of Blade Works Unlimited has to know Phantom Weapon. What's being created here is not the swords themselves being summoned - they're copies of all of the weapons they have encountered. So if the person has seen the punching blades that you got from Ronnel back when you killed him, then a copy of them will appear stuck into the ground. The real weapons themselves are not affected by this technique.
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 9:33 am
Fenrir Graveheart Kagetsukiko Shruikan: Primal Range- Write an rp sample. While part of the reason why we require rp samples for personal skills is to clear up any discrepancies, we also require them to make you work for the personal skill (at least, that's how I've seen it). Other than that, it's good. And this one. This is definitely Denied. A C-rank skill that increases the power of all skills by a rank and gives the user an additional 2 strength and even gets rid of their speed nerf? I don't know what kage was thinking when she thought of accepting this. >.> *whacks kage upside the head with a rolled-up newspaper* Gaining Air isn't flying, its merely flapping your wings to go a few feet into the air for a one post deal. Gliding is merely extending your wings and gliding down....how the hell is that flying? If anything that would be a prep for flying. Sand paper scales, dude you accepted the previous version of this before. Shruikan had this skill, I lost it and had to resubmit it and now its being denied? Thats kind of shitty, and Shruikan was that tough to injure because of his talent. All this is doing is increasing the hardness of the scales by one rank and making it have a shredding effect if you rub against it like shark skin. As for Primal Rage, dude your power rush is stronger then it and more free then Primal Rage. Im restricted to draconian only skills and get a boost in speed and strength. If you want the speed gone ok but the rest should be fine. You can dish out two power rushes with me only one primal rage.
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 9:36 am
Fenrir Graveheart RPC name: Fenrir Graveheart Skill name: Power Rush Rank: C If it uses ammo how much: N/A Limits: Can't be held for more than two posts. Only Berzerker class. Skill description: User expels energy from their body, doubling the effects and power of their other skills. However what goes up must come down, so after the rush dies off the user's skills will only have half of their effect and power for however many posts he rush was kept up. If I cannot have Primal Rage, then this skill should be banned as well. Doubling the effects and power is insane in comparison to my technique. All your stat boosting skills will be doubled, and you could keep reusing this in between time periods and suffer no backfire. My skill only boosts strength and speed and powers draconian only skills. The backfire is I can only use draconian skills, I basically attack the closest thing to me. And after use my recharge post is longer then yours. So you could break out two to three power rushes while I am in active/recharge state for this skill. So Fenrir how is it fair at all?
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 10:02 am
Wait a second, I fix what was wrong with the skills that you told me to fix to get them approved, and you deny them without even giving me a reason?
Fen, you're starting to look more and more like a tyrant a*****e each day.
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 1:19 pm
Fenrir Graveheart
sorceress: Just as kage said, this is Denied. Its too much, and while it could pass as a talent (maybe), its too much for a normal skill.
Okay Fen. Thanks for taking a second look.
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 2:56 pm
*whimpers*
Umm.... What was I thinking? I think I was thinking about trying to block out my mom complaining about how I was spending time on Gaia in the morning when I'm supposed to be studying. Either that, or I was concentrating on making sure my dad couldn't see the computer screen as I pretended to research scholarships. One of those two sweatdrop . Sorry gonk ?
By the way, I have a couple skills for myself sweatdrop .
Username: Kagetsukiko
RPC name: Nai
Free skill: Sure, if anyone decides to have their talent linked to chaos <_< ….
Type of skill: Chaos
Skill name: Chaos Sphere
Rank: D-S
If it uses ammo how much: n/a
Limits: Must somehow be able to control chaos through either a talent, bloodline, sin, etc.. Only up to five can be created at any one time.
Skill description: A simple move that involves shaping chaos energy into a sphere that varies in size depending on the amount of energy put into it. The sphere can be thrown, kept in the hand, or even shot from a gun (silently like an energy bullet) and used for both offense and defense; it cannot be controlled after leaving the hand and only up to five may be created at any one time. Offensively, it slams into the target and delivers cuts upon impact, the power of the attack varying with the energy poured into it. Defensively, it can nullify skills (those that are mentioned in Nai's talent) that are equal or lesser in rank to it. Unless the opposing skill is at least two ranks below the rank of this skill, the sphere will disperse upon nullifying the attack. Below are the sizes:
D- a tennis ball
C- a soccer ball
B- a large rock
A- a boulder
S- a house
Sample: Nai chanced a glance at her partner only to see that he was having trouble with the mage. In the opening that she had after dodging an attack from the berserker she was facing off, the girl shot three shots of Chaos Spheres in her partner's direction, intercepting the three Halcyons that the mage had sent at him. Given an opening of his own, her partner quickly took his chance and managed to get in a painful blow, painful to the mage of course.
Free skill: No
Type of skill: Chaos
Skill name: Chaos Sphere (control)
Rank: E (or should I change this to D?)
If it uses ammo how much: n/a
Limits: Must somehow be able to control chaos through either a talent, bloodline, sin, etc.. Must know Chaos Sphere. Must be at least Adept rank.
Skill description: By investing an additional E-rank amount of energy into the Chaos Sphere when it is created, the user can control the movement of the Chaos Sphere even after it leaves his/her hand. As before, only up to five Chaos Spheres of any type may be created at any one time.
Sample: Nai kept her distance as she sniped her target from a distance. She knew where he was, the only problem was that she didn't think she would be able to shoot a bullet through the thick wall that he was behind. As if the wasn't the only problem, she was certain that he also had some sort of magic barrier around him. Setting her sights on the top of the wall that was blocking her view, the girl shot a Chaos Sphere, putting in a bit more energy so that she was able to control it from afar. The sphere skimmed over the wall and then abruptly dove down. Shouts of surprise could be heard as the target just barely dodged the attack. The gunslinger grimaced, hoping that she had least managed to cause some sort of energy. Shooting blind had been a gamble but it was too late to worry about it now. Now, she needed to get away before she was caught.
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 3:24 pm
Fenrir Graveheart dg: All Denied
sorceress: Just as kage said, this is Denied. Its too much, and while it could pass as a talent (maybe), its too much for a normal skill.
urban: Kuro Kakumau- Denied. This is just like that paladin skill but without the cost at master. Also, realize that this skill was in the paladin's list because paladin's have a decreased amount of energy, so it was acceptable for them to block just about anything so long it cost them a ton of energy. Your bloodline is different.
Kuro Bakuhatsu- This is an A-rank skill and it has a one sentence description. stare What did you think I was going to say?
Kuro Tekken- How does it protect them and how long does this technique last?
ronnel: Blade Works Unlimited- Now this is cool. But every weapon the user has ever seen or heard? What if its their opponent's weapon? Does it immediately teleport in the ground or something? What happens to the user's real weapon if somebody suddenly puts their sword in the ground a nation away? Paladins have normal energy. Knights have reduced energy. Go read up on your own guild. >>
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 3:26 pm
Fenrir Graveheart Kagetsukiko Shruikan: Primal Range- Write an rp sample. While part of the reason why we require rp samples for personal skills is to clear up any discrepancies, we also require them to make you work for the personal skill (at least, that's how I've seen it). Other than that, it's good. And this one. This is definitely Denied. A C-rank skill that increases the power of all skills by a rank and gives the user an additional 2 strength and even gets rid of their speed nerf? I don't know what kage was thinking when she thought of accepting this. >.> *whacks kage upside the head with a rolled-up newspaper* Lol. Yet you have a skill that DOUBLES the power of all of your attacks? Oh yeah. THATS fair. Haha. Lulz for contradictions. ;D
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 5:33 pm
dg: I'm not letting you create instant explosions several feet around your person without it even hurting you. Thats why its denied. Plus, I despise skills that do more damage with rank or with how much energy you put into it.
shruikan: Eh, point taken. Alright Gaining Air and the two sand paper skills we can keep. But Primal Rage and Gliding are still denied. Primal Rage is nothing even close to what my Power Rush skill is. For one my skill doubles the power of skills used in one post at the cost of all of the skills losing half their power the next post, and it can't last for more than two posts at a time. So my skill is a fair trade. My skill doesn't dramatically increase your speed, strength, power of skills, ect. So no. That stays Denied.
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