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 Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 7:33 pm
"Records Lost" is not an acceptable response for any part of your profile. These profiles are not public knowledge in the RP, so there's no reason for it not to be on your profile. Your character's age plays an integral role in its personality and maturity, and how other RPCs interact with it, so its important that you list the age.
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Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 7:38 pm
His age is fourteen, the birthdate is Records lost because he(if i get approved it will be in his history) cannot remember his birthday/rather does not care.
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Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 7:42 pm
little mintchan His age is fourteen, the birthdate is Records lost because he(if i get approved it will be in his history) cannot remember his birthday/rather does not care.
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Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 7:48 pm
Could you atleast help me out with the weight/height since you guys want to use a weird measurements...
then I guess i'll add a said to be- in the birthdate...
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Unrelinquished Despair Crew
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Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2011 2:35 am
Mint, for the love of all that is literate and knowing, they're not weird measurements. It's standard in most of the world except for, y'know, the US.
5'4' = 1.626 m
55.9 = 123 lbs
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Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2011 3:25 am
Said to be birthdate? You're not understanding us.
You should post every single information that is written unless Cobra specified something as optional. Even if he was brainwashed and noone could possibly know his history, we need to know it. Remember, if someone knows of something stated in your profile, just accuse them of meta-gaming, very easy. We may know, but our characters shall not if you wish so. Put the right age, the right birthdate and all.
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Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2011 7:32 pm
There. emotion_kirakira
The only measurements I know are how to measure cells and objects with Ft, cm, mm, m, Li, mL, not how to convert them...can't blame me...
and I put a birthdate now sheesh...
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Posted: Fri Oct 07, 2011 2:01 pm
@Mint: First off. Please read through my past comments and try to fix those common mistakes before posting a new/edited profile next time. Thanks.
- Though short, I'll let your physical and personality description go. Behavior though, you're gonna need to put something down. Unknown isn't really a proper answer as this is about how your character acts. How can that be unknown?
- Character History has to be linked. As I mentioned before, even if this rpc were not be accepted persay, you can always use back that same thread for the history place holder. Simply because the title and content can be easily altered.
- Tertiary attribute -> you don't get a benefit for it unlessed stated otherwise like GCR and Endurance. This is merely there as a added benefit. This just makes it easier for rpc comparison and gives your rpc a slight edge when it comes to cunning. Simply put how cunning fits in with your rpc
- Once again, you've taken out the little blurbs. Please insert them back in as they talk about why your character chose to go into the medical profession and why those three selected attribute words for him as the second one.
- Since you only get two elements, you can remove the tertiary element slot
- Only your chakra is 31, stanima remains as 25
- You get 1 universal E-rank and two elemental E-rank techs upon profile creation.
- Since you don't have a bloodline, you can take out the bloodline abilities section
- Enter the corresponding numbers for # of Taijutsu/kenjutsu/custom weapons allowed.
That looks about it. Let me know when you're done editing.
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Oct 07, 2011 2:06 pm
@Malfrost: Just checking, you had a mod approve of your class change right?
Two quick points.
- Taijutsu section, since your rpc can't learn any styles I would say remove it but I need to check first if Sharigan can copy taijutsu techs. You should be able to but I just want to make sure.
- Scroll Holster is missing it's description.
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Posted: Fri Oct 07, 2011 2:14 pm
@Eijo: Sorry again about the wait. Oh, and common mistake. Profiles need to be in document format.
Some general comments though,
- height and weight need to be put in both standard/imperial and metric systems. Best you check an previous approved profile for help if needed.
- To avoid cluttering of words, please link your url to your words. To do so your use the following: You also remove the <> as well as what's inbetween.
- You can remove the Bijuu info sections since they don't and will most likely never apply to this rpc.
- Attributes -> We don't need you to copy and paste their descriptions. Just the benefit and combat ability is enough
- Remove secondary/tertiary slots for elements since they are unused
- stanima is 28 thanks to the endurance benefit at teritary
- just have the jutsu name to avoid clutter, if you want, you can always place a link by the rank to link ppl to the jutsu page.
- You get 2 free elemental E-rank and 1 free non-elemental E-rank. Please remove one of the three techniques.
- you can remove the extra jutsu slot
- Bloodline abilities will also need to be learned so please remove them for now
And that should be about it. Let me know when you've reposted your profile along with the proper edits. Thanks.
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White Water Lilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Oct 07, 2011 6:11 pm
White Water Lilly @Mint: First off. Please read through my past comments and try to fix those common mistakes before posting a new/edited profile next time. Thanks.
- Tertiary attribute -> you don't get a benefit for it unlessed stated otherwise like GCR and Endurance. This is merely there as a added benefit. This just makes it easier for rpc comparison and gives your rpc a slight edge when it comes to cunning. Simply put how cunning fits in with your rpc
- Once again, you've taken out the little blurbs. Please insert them back in as they talk about why your character chose to go into the medical profession and why those three selected attribute words for him as the second one.
That looks about it. Let me know when you're done editing.
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 12:49 am
What Lily is saying:
1. For the tertiary you don't get the Combat Ability or even the full Benefit. You don't get +1 Rank in strength if you put Strength in the Tertiary slot, you're just stronger than the average person.
2. If you look back at the profile format, you see that there are several spots where it asks you to put in small blurbs defining the bond between class/atribute etc.. and your character's daily life and power.
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 9:49 am
@Lilly
Yeah, Deil said it was alright, and I fixed the scroll holster.
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Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 10:46 pm
this is gonna be a really nooby question but.
How do i make it Document format?
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