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 Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 8:34 am
@claru: What do you mean auras do nothing to him? Immune to mental trauma? Why is it that he can't see illusions? I'm fine with most of the rest but these are the things I have a problem with since this talent seems to give your character a lot of bonuses.
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Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 1:46 pm
i mean like mental trauma like things that make rpcs go insane, auras like dispair or seduction, and i think i'll take out the illusions thing because that would make him immune to a sins ability and I don't think that would work, and it doesn't make that much sense
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 6:56 am
RPC Name: Fenrir Graveheart
Rank: Master
Talent Description: Warrior's Resurrection: Allows Fenrir to fully heal all wounds and restore energy after dying.
Talent Weakness: Fenrir can only use this ability for every opponent he's killed that is at least two ranks within his own. All Regeneration energy costs are doubled.
How did the character get this talent?: After much abuse in his past life, from fighting in the coliseums and underground death matches to torture. His body naturally adapted to a more costly but efficient way of saving itself.
Sample: Fenrir's head rolled from its shoulders as a scythe took it clean off. The body of Nocturne's king slumped to the ground in a bloody mess and the victorious trickster laughed at the incredible feat he'd been able to perform. However, a moment later Fenrir's headless body started to rise. A mass of flesh extended out from his neck line and formed into a new head. Muscle laced over the skeletal bone and sharp teeth grew back. The trickster looked in horror as Fenrir's cold blue eyes returned to their sockets and his black hair grew back, exactly to its previous length. Fenrir grinned sadistically and simply cracked his head to the side, his regeneration complete. "So, you feel up for Round 2?" he asked as energy flowed out of his body. He was fully restored. "Because I'm looking forward to seeing more of my memories."
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Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 11:17 pm
Fen....I hate to say this, but that talent is total bs. The weakness is no where near to the strength. A total ressurection from death? Bs man, s**t I planned to make something like this, but much more costly. Come on, you can do better then that
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Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 5:47 am
Well what would you suggest? I mean I have to freakin kill people who are at least adept-rank for me to even be capable of using this talent so I don't know what else I can do.
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Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 9:51 pm
Fenrir Graveheart Well what would you suggest? I mean I have to freakin kill people who are at least adept-rank for me to even be capable of using this talent so I don't know what else I can do. Well for each use or permenantly, and if this is ok then I gotta pm you about something I thought about
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Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 7:58 am
For each use, naturally. If I've killed two people who are at least within two ranks of my own character (meaning that right now they have to be at least adept rank) then my character can only use this talent twice and no more until I kill again.
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Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 10:43 am
I approve this Fenrir. How else would the King of Nocturne live for so Long?
Claru: if I didn't already Approve it, it's approved.
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Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:15 pm
RPC Name: Alik Zeref Ruckstare (Pending)
Rank: Trainee
Talent Description: Enhanced Pride - The Talent is more of a physiological thing for him. He is so sure of himself that his stats grow. Strength +2, Speed +1
Talent Weakness: Although it is useful, Enhanced Pride also makes Alik him less aware of his surrounding so it is very hard for him to see traps and release himself of the Magic of a Succubus. Not to Mention his pride makes him feel better then everyone so it's kinda hard for him to make friends... harder then others at the least...
How did the character get this talent?: When he was young his parents like any other told him he was the best at everything. Most kids shrugged it off and took it as a compliment, but Alik took it seriously, he took it as a life goal and as he grew older and went to school he would be in last place in a race and then run as fast as he can and win the race even though his mass and body size say it's impossible. Same with Strength, he can lift more weights then even some Werewolfs.
Sample: Alik looked at his teacher and smiled at him, His teacher red a piece of paper and then looked at Alik "Okay Alik, today we're gonna work on Stamina... I heard the teachers before me couldn't break you but I will..." The teacher was a Dragonoid and was very strong he picked up a 1000 pound dumbell and dropped it in front of Alik, it smashed into the wooden floor denting it... Alike stared at it and then looked at his teacher, his slim exterior made him look weak. As Alik bent over to grab the Dumbell he got ready. It looked very awkward because litterally the Dumbell was bigger then him. Alik pulled with all of his might and the teacher laughed at him, Alik felt his pride get hurt then all of the sudden with ease he pulled the Dumbell up and over his head "YEAH! Suck it Teach!" the teacher was speechless... Alik smiled at him and then punched the teacher in the chest in a freindly way, but used a bit to much power "Pops! Your gears are rusty! Gettum fixed!" he laughed and walked uff and then ran up a hill "I'm better then all of you!!!!!!!!!" he pointed at the other trainees as he ran past them "WOOOOOOO!!!!!!"
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Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:27 pm
whats your bloodline again?
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Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:32 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:36 pm
Seriously please don't approve this, it's stat pluses for no valid reason.
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Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:39 pm
crying Fine, I'll think of another xD
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Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:41 pm
RPC Name: Malfatto Alani Aunezia
Rank: Adept
Talent Description: The talent -- named ''smite'' by him, at first, sheathes his weapon. His body will then be cloaked in a bright light, that will make him almost a completely white figure, though you can still see a bit of his coloring/etc. He can then shift around, leaving beams of light wherever he moves from. These beams of lights are basically target boards, and at any time, a giant ray of light, called, a 'smite,' can shoot down on them with extreme haste. The smites are very powerful on evil people, and creatures, though very ineffective on beings of light such as paladins, and clerics.
Talent Weakness: He's very easy to spot when using this. His energy is also completely clear for all to see. He cannot move while using this; ONLY shift. He can only shift up to 30 feet away. Which seems like alot, but when you think about it, not really. He can only shift twice a post. His second shift can only be up to 15 feet away. His only means of attacks are the beams. This mode costs 300 energy to enter. The beams are only about 15 feet in diameter.
How did the character get this talent?: Taught to him by the Pope of Fraxen. Who was later killed by this.
Sample:
Will do if approved.
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:37 pm
RPC Name: The Lover
Rank: Trainee
Talent Description: Raises his speed to the maximum, fifteen. He already has eleven, so basically, +4 speed.
Talent Weakness: He will lose all strength, and be unable to attack AT ALL. The ONLY attacks he can use are if he's possessing a body, but he can only do so on a trainee. Not only that-- but seeing as how ranking up will be nearly impossible, he'll probably stay Trainee forever.
How did the character get this talent?: When he died, he became in fear. In fear of fighting. And losing. He just wanted to run. So that's all he did. He abandoned all of his will... and all he can do is run.
Sample: This is how a sample will look like if I make one.
''Raphael ran. And ran. And couldn't attack. Pretty boring, huh?''
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