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 Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 7:50 pm
Cory:1. Choose your poison : Sand or Cloud
2. Other then the above, you are approved!
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 8:43 am
(edited) Full Name:Kuronichi Ichiura Uchiurra
Nicknames: Kuro Uchi, The Raven
Age: 18
Birthdate: 4/13
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: German (including the accent)
Nindo: Pain is but an emotion, and like all emotions it can be suppressed, so please try to not suppress your... emotions, when I slide my blade into your heart
Personality: crazy, enjoys killing, killing dulls the pain by distracting it and making it concentrate on the kill
Behavior: always happy to kill, willing for a challenge
Biography: trained as an assassin since a child, he truly loves his "art"
Village: Kumogakure
Rank: Genin ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation Summoning: N/A
Bloodline: Konaga Clan
Curse Mark: N/A
Weapon of Choice: Hidden Blade
Ninja Class: Assassin
Strengths:
● Agility
● Stealth
● Cunning
Weaknesses:
● Weak-Bodied
● Elemental Vulnerability to Fuuton
● He must kill people to distract his mind from the pains that endlessly rake his bodies cells.
Shinobi Skills:(Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark)
● Can sense other members of his clan that are nearby
● Has nearly unlimited chakra (Up to a Jounin's level before in danger)
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Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: Raiton
- Secondary: Katon learned at Chuunin
Chakra Color:
Orange
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation Non-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
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→Kai - Dispell
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu Styles Known: 1
Primary Style: Yaiba no Mokumoku [The Way of the Silent Blade] Genin
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________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed: 1
the picture is the Link, The last on the list
Custom Weapon 1: Byakurai
Weapon Type: Hidden Blade
Weapon Range: 1 foot
Weapon Description: a blade that is in a sheath under Kuro's right arm. It is slid-out by flicking his wrist. The blade catches onto the sheath once one foot of blade is exposed
Special Properties: It can absorb ninjutsu, unless its demon jutsu, then he only absorbs some of it.
Weapon Location: under right arm
Associated Weapon Style: Yaiba no Mokumoku
Maneuvers
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Headband Location | Style | Color: keeps in pouch
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Flack Jacket Style | Color: doesn't wear one
Kunai Holster Location | Color: right hip
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Projectile Holster Location | Color: left hip
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Scroll Holster Location | Color: right thigh
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Exploding Smoke Grenade: 5
Makibishi: 0
Shuriken: 10
Sinbon: 20
Flash Bombs: 5 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation Height: 5'11
Weight: 150
Body Build: skinny, strong but not muscular, tall, smallish feet
Eye Color: Bright Yellow (cats eye)
Hair Color: black
Family: wandered alone since the age of 5, killing people and living off of what he could find in their homes.
Theme song: Beethoven 3rd Symphony ________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 8:55 am
Hey Kuro:Your profile is Approved!
...however, I have yet to approve your bloodline fully. I was actually able to read more of the role playing you did with the bloodline in the custom weapons thread. As long as you understand the concept of body augmentation and (the burn), you should be fine. That's what I was looking for that I didn't see in any of your posts... the use of the augmentations and the negative effects that follow.
So much of the bloodline centers around the balance of power and pain that I thought a bit of that was missing in the Bloodline post.
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 12:31 pm
Full Name:Rhulain Lutra
Nicknames: Rhu-Rhu
Age: 17
Birthdate: 9/12/09
Gender: M
Ethnicity: British
Nindo: Life's a stage, so put on one hell of a show
Personality: Rhulain's the kind of guy who is made of sunshine (not in a gay way). he is often upliting and happy, nothing gets him down
Behavior: cheerful, childish
Biography: Rhulain was born and raised in a small vilage bordering konoha. his family owned a small shop in the town, and had a pretty car free life. his sister was a jounin of konoha, and was also his main souce of inspiration for becomeing a ninja. Rhulain had a pretty good life, eh? wrong. one day, a group of rogue nin came to his villae and slaughtered everyone. his sister fell trying to defend from the rogues. Rhulain managed to make it to safety within Konoha, where he joined the ninja academy. He vowed that once he became a ninja, he would do his best to protect the weaker people in the world.
Village: Konoha
Rank: academy student ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation Summoning: (Supply a link to the Summoning)
Bloodline: Waiting to see if hyouton is accepted
Curse Mark: (Supply a link to the Cursemark)
Weapon of Choice: Senbon
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu
Strengths:
● High Chakra Reserves
● Cunning
● Great Chakra Control
Weaknesses:
● Elemental Vulnerability (lightning)
● Rash
● Over confident
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Shinobi Skills:(Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark)
● Can learn Ninjutsu in 1 less post than required
● 1 more post than required to learn Genjutsu and Taijutsu.
● Cannot learn Medical Ninjutsu
(if hyouton gets aproved, more will come)
Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: Water
- Secondary: Wind
Chakra Color: White
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Team Mate:
Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation Non-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
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Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)
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Headband Location | Style | Color: Tied around neck, strap is white
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Kunai Holster Location | Color: left thigh
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Scroll Holster Location | Color: lower back
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Exploding Smoke Grenade: 20
Makibishi:20
Shuriken:20
Flash Bombs:20 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation Height: 5'8
Weight: 140
Body Build: Light
Eye Color: Blueish grey
Hair Color: blonde
Family: none
Theme song: The guillitine by Escape the Fate ________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation S Rank:
A Rank:
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 1:44 pm
Rhulain:You are Approved! ...(as soon as your bloodline is approved)
Aside from that, the only gripe I have is that I think it is both a little excessive and somewhat unbelievable that you can hold 20 smoke bombs, flassh bombs, kunai, and shuriken on your person without being weighed down and uncomfortable.
...this is really minor though as the rest of your profile is perfect. Just make sure that once you get your bloodline approved, that you update your profile accordingly.
(I still want to see the edits, so let me know when you make them, but feel free to start RPing whenever you like.
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 1:48 pm
cool, thanks i'll cut down on the bomb amounts..oh i posted a new RP example
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 2:41 pm
(pic here) Full Name: benito valdosta
Nicknames: beni
Age: 13
Birthdate: june 17
Gender: male
Ethnicity: italian
Nindo: "survival has always been the human goal. and so it is mine."
Personality: his moods change but he generally is friendly
Behavior: does what he needs to to survive. can be cold hearted but is usually very friendly.
Biography: his familly was a peaceful farming family that lived in the rice fields country. they were attacked and killed by bandits while beni was off hunting. he got back only to find the smoldering remains of his familly and home and a small group of bandits that stayed behind to loot more. he shot three with his hunting bow and killed two more with the weapons dropped by the first three. the others ran after seeing that their comrads were felled by such a young child.
Village: mist
Rank: ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation Summoning:
Bloodline:
Curse Mark:
Weapon of Choice: custom weapon.
Ninja Class: weaon master
Strengths:
● speed
● agility
● endurence
Weaknesses:
● low attack power without weapon
● weak bodied
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Shinobi Skills:(Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark)
● can channel chakra into weapons
● weapon related jutsu are 1 rank stronger
● can learn medical ninjutsu
Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: wind
- Secondary: ______ (learned at : Genin/Chuunin/Jounin)
Chakra Color: bright blue
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation Non-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
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Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)
________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1: _________ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)
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Headband Location | Style | Color: on belt. belt buckle. blue.
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Kunai Holster Location | Color: right hip
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Projectile Holster Location | Color: middle of back on the belt
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Shuriken:
Flash Bombs: ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation Height: 5'9"
Weight: 161lb
Body Build: (?)
Eye Color: dark green with a brown tint
Hair Color: midnight black
Family: no living familly
Theme song: ________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 6:11 pm
Full Name: Kumiko Love Michiyo
Nicknames: Love, Michi, Kiko
Age: 23
Birthdate: March 3, 1986
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: Caucasian
Nindo: To protect the weak and helpless
Personality: very outspoken, kind at times, but cold at others,very
Behavior: obidient, strong willed
Biography: She is the descendant of the Second, to be precise is the great, great great great great granddaughter of the second Mizukage, thankfully not many know this, but besides that she is very fickle at times, but dependable, and reliable, but still fickle
Village:Kumogakure
Rank: Genin ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation Summoning:Snake Summoning
Bloodline: Renmaru Kekkai Genkai (Stage 1)
Curse Mark: None
Weapon of Choice:
Ninja Class: Genjustu-Class
Strengths:
● Great Chakra Control
● Cunning
● Agility
Weaknesses:
● Low physical power
● Weak Body / Frail physique
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● Genjustu can fool the Byakugan, Rinnegan, and Sharingan
● Users are immune to all genjutsu
● Can sense life without looking at the source for up to 15m
Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: Water
- Secondary:Earth (learned at Chuunin)
Chakra Color: Green
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation Non-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
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Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)
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Custom Weapon 1: _________ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)
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Headband Location | Style | Color: navy blue , my neck
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Kunai Holster Location | Color:white/ waist
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Projectile Holster Location | Color: black/waist
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Exploding Smoke Grenade: 3
Makibishi: 3
Shuriken: 7
Flash Bombs: 2 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation Height: 5’4
Weight: 110
Body Build: slim
Eye Color: brown
Hair Color: red
Family: Michiyo
Theme song: ________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation S Rank: 00
A Rank: 00
B Rank: 00
C Rank: 00
D Rank:00
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:23 am
Akio:
I made a few manual edits to your post and linked your picture properly. there is however one big gap in your profile...
1. You are a weapons master who has no weapons listed.
...I would suggest trying to create a few custom weapons for your character (which is what the Weapon Master Class is all about). After they are approved in the Custom Weapons thread, you can post them in your profile. As a Genin you can have 2 (so far)
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:30 am
dreadno:
1. You are a weapon master without any custom weapons. I would suggest trying to create a few custom weapons for your character (which is what the Weapon Master Class is all about). After they are approved in the Custom Weapons thread, you can post them in your profile. As a Genin you can have 2 (so far)
2. Mist is currently full. Would you be willing to join either Cloud or Sand?
3. You didn't fill out how many kunai, shuriken, smoke/flash bombs you carry.
4. Please run your profile through a Spell check.
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 7:43 am
Alpha:
1. You didn't fill out any Behavior, personality, or Back Story. Please do this.
2. 'Causation' is not an ethnicity... its a sociological concept. If you meant 'Caucasian' however, that would be fine.
3. Kirigakure is currently full. Would you entertain joining Sand or Cloud?
4. Your Strengths and Weaknesses have to be chosen from the lists provided within the Genjutsu class.
5. As a Genin, you only know one element for the time being, and you don't start with any jutsu (You have to learn them through studying scrolls and posting in the RP itself)
...please remove all of the techniques (except the 4 Basic ones) from yuor jutsu lists and remember that when learning ninjutsju, until you become a Chuunin, you won't be allowed to use your second element.
6. The same goes for your Genjutsu as well, and any kekkai genkai jutsu.
Thanks!
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 9:57 am
 Full Name: Uzumi Ai
Nicknames: Heartless
Age: 10
Birthdate: January 3
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Japanese and Filipino
Nindo: 'I Will Make You Suffer As I Have Suffered'
Personality: Uzumi is a cold-hearted brat, he cares for no one and will do nothing for anyone. He hates everybody, and has come to the conclusion that everyone is a pest. He is a pesimist, and thinks badly about everything. Basicaly, all in all, he has no heart.
Behavior:
Biography: Uzumi was born from a Hitokui mother, and the former Otokage father. His mother died in battle with a Banpaia, and his father vanished shortly before he was born. He grew up in the Mist Village, not really remembering all the happened, but vowed to destroy the man named Gabriel Vlad Darcula. He grew up to be a very cold-hearted person, and doesn't believe in happy endings. he thrives for power, and will do anything to get what he wants
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Chuunin ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation Bloodline: Hitokui - Stage 1
Weapon of Choice: Custom Weapon
Ninja Class: Assassin
Strengths:
● Speed
● Agility
● Chakra Control
Weaknesses:
● Weak-Bodied
● Earth Element Vulnerabilitity
● Blood
Shinobi Skills:
● Pin Point Accuracy
● Stealth
● Accuracy
Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: Water
- Secondary: Fire
Chakra Color: Medium Slate Blue ________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation Non-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
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Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
Maneuvers
Techniques________________________________________|A|pparelHeadband Location | Style | Color:
Forehead | Long Straps | Blake
Flack Jacket Style | Color:
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Kunai Holster Location | Color:
Left Hip | Black
Projectile Holster Location | Color:
Right Hip | Black
Scroll Holster Location | Color:
None
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 3
Makibishi: 4
Shuriken: 4
Flash Bombs: 3 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation Height: 4'9
Weight: 98
Body Build: Weak-Looking, But Strong
Eye Color: Aquamarine
Hair Color: Muilti-Colored
Family:
Theme song: Let The Bodies Hit The Floor ________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 11:50 am
Sana-chan:
1. Is there any particular reason you aren't using the profile format i've placed on the first page of this thread? It's causing me a bit of confusion looking through everything.
2. Would you consider joining either Sand or Cloud instead of mist? We already have so many in Mist.
3. Elemental Vulnerability has to have a specific element defined to it. In your case, it would be "Elemental Vulnerability: earth"
4. You need to choose a second element (even if you do not yet have access to it)
5. I'm not sure what those Shinobi skills are based of. In the profile format i supply, I note that that section should denote abilities given by bloodlines/cursemarks/and Ninja Class.
6. Your mother was Hitokui... but did you not inherit the bloodline?
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 11:56 am
Cobra_X Sana-chan:
1. Is there any particular reason you aren't using the profile format i've placed on the first page of this thread? It's causing me a bit of confusion looking through everything.
2. Would you consider joining either Sand or Cloud instead of mist? We already have so many in Mist.
3. Elemental Vulnerability has to have a specific element defined to it. In your case, it would be "Elemental Vulnerability: earth"
4. You need to choose a second element (even if you do not yet have access to it)
5. I'm not sure what those Shinobi skills are based of. In the profile format i supply, I note that that section should denote abilities given by bloodlines/cursemarks/and Ninja Class.
6. Your mother was Hitokui... but did you not inherit the bloodline? Umm, I didn't feel like going all the way to the first page to get the profile thingy. I just used the old one. And as for the Shinobi Skills, I did use the skills based off the bloodline. I'm in the process of making the Kekkei Genkai request. I updated everything else
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