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 Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 4:36 pm
Well what I notice right off the bat as being wrong is that your clan/bloodline is made up. In order to exist, and get your free meal card and whatnot, you would have to get it approved. The stuff you said about your mother in your history is ridiculous. You can't have stats that high, and your mother is not a ghost ... Your squid summoning, among other summons, needs approval. The average height of a 12 year old is 4'10-5'5 ... your 14 inches below the minimum. Do you intend on portraying a midget? You cannot start with equipment. I'm not a mod, I've just been here for a minute, and that is what I see wrong.
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 5:14 pm
I haz RETURNED! So yeah I finally got my laptop back from the repair shop, three days my a**... Anyway, anything/anyone need me?
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 6:02 pm
Gideon Commando I haz RETURNED! So yeah I finally got my laptop back from the repair shop, three days my a**... Anyway, anything/anyone need me? ... Check previous page, and what Sage said on this page...
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 6:09 pm
Gideon Commando I haz RETURNED! So yeah I finally got my laptop back from the repair shop, three days my a**... Anyway, anything/anyone need me? SoSo -- post
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 10:14 pm
Gideon Commando I haz RETURNED! So yeah I finally got my laptop back from the repair shop, three days my a**... Anyway, anything/anyone need me? Also awaiting Zombies in the event, and waiting on you in the academy to wrap up my library mission. Note to self: I found a lethal combo. Mist + clone. They have to look throw the mist as one action. Then find the correct Masa as their second action, then they may attack as their third. Downside is it takes me four actions to pull off, but its awesoooooooooooome.
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 10:20 pm
Nekkid Sage Also awaiting Zombies in the event, and waiting on you in the academy to wrap up my library mission. Is it just you left because no one else in your team has posted since the lase two zombies? If so I could continue posting with the zombies I started.
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 10:24 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 10:31 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 11:43 pm
bleh. Looks like I have to make a new character anyways. sad
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 3:29 am
Luff Explosion bleh. Looks like I have to make a new character anyways. sad Why's that? I mean I do agree with Sage's observations, but that's no reason to completely start over lol.
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 7:08 am
Gideon Commando Luff Explosion bleh. Looks like I have to make a new character anyways. sad Why's that? I mean I do agree with Sage's observations, but that's no reason to completely start over lol. 1. kirigarkure is full appearently. 2. too much red tape left. Its not like I'm almost done and the character was meant for a place I wont be at
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 7:37 am
Luff Explosion Gideon Commando Luff Explosion bleh. Looks like I have to make a new character anyways. sad Why's that? I mean I do agree with Sage's observations, but that's no reason to completely start over lol. 1. kirigarkure is full appearently. 2. too much red tape left. Its not like I'm almost done and the character was meant for a place I wont be at Kiri isn't full ... people are just jealous. And really you can solve your problems easily for now.
Keep your last name, delete it from the bloodline section.
Delete your summons/tattoos from the profile and put them on the approvals forum.
Adjust your height.
Adjust the bit about your mom, keeping in mind that even a Kage maxes out his stat at 80, so the highest you will ever see is probably 120 in all seriousness. And that is doing 40 skill trainings for just that skill.
Delete the lockpicks and the meal pass. Not being able to have ryo is sort of stupid anyways. It'll hurt you in the long run.
I would also recommend going for STR 8, DEX 10 instead of STR 7, DEX 11. It will help you out a great deal.
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 12:53 pm
Gideon Commando I haz RETURNED! So yeah I finally got my laptop back from the repair shop, three days my a**... Anyway, anything/anyone need me? WB!! *parade begins*
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 6:34 pm
Nekkid Sage Luff Explosion Gideon Commando Luff Explosion bleh. Looks like I have to make a new character anyways. sad Why's that? I mean I do agree with Sage's observations, but that's no reason to completely start over lol. 1. kirigarkure is full appearently. 2. too much red tape left. Its not like I'm almost done and the character was meant for a place I wont be at Kiri isn't full ... people are just jealous. And really you can solve your problems easily for now.
Keep your last name, delete it from the bloodline section.
Delete your summons/tattoos from the profile and put them on the approvals forum.
Adjust your height.
Adjust the bit about your mom, keeping in mind that even a Kage maxes out his stat at 80, so the highest you will ever see is probably 120 in all seriousness. And that is doing 40 skill trainings for just that skill.
Delete the lockpicks and the meal pass. Not being able to have ryo is sort of stupid anyways. It'll hurt you in the long run.
I would also recommend going for STR 8, DEX 10 instead of STR 7, DEX 11. It will help you out a great deal.
note that, not being allowed to and not being able to are two different things. X_x and it seems like those few number changes will create a wave of random changes
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 6:36 pm
Will try and fix the character later
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