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 Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2005 4:25 pm
I Gave Everything I had To Givethis poem/song thing is based on a friend.
ectasy is a sub for love it sounds better to me...
I gave you everything!
my love which you took for granted.
I gave you everything!
my heart which you ripped out stabbed and put it in a blinder
and mutilated it!
but that wasnt enough so
you stole my trust and cheated on me...
I gave you everything I had to give!
and got nothing but pain in return.
Damn you to the hottest pits of hell!
I gave you everything!
now I hate you but I love you
I'm wrapped aroudn your finger
and warped on your damn ectasy!
I gave you everything I had to give
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 9:19 am
I realize I spelt blender wrong....
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 10:17 am
I'm glad you like it =D here's a song I wrote and sung for a competition. I didn't win but it was fun.
Serene Dream
In the place of my serene dream,
A little girl waits unseen
She has eyes like that of a solider at war
And her sadness seeps into my core
The dream would never cease if I plead
But to her I am her sustinary need.
Lay me down to sleep this one last time
So that I may break this mental bind,
In the place of tranquil surmise,
Lingers the girl with haunting eyes.
Her purpose forgotten, her head bent low
She whispers that she must go.
In the place of calm illusion,
Relief is my conclusion.
My dreams themselves are a sight to behold.
And no longer will I be tortured with cold.
Her eyes haunt me from time to time
But my dreams are forever mine.
And now that she is gone they are clean
And can truly be called serene.
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 10:29 am
Sadism_Godess I Gave Everything I had To Givethis poem/song thing is based on a friend.
ectasy is a sub for love it sounds better to me...
I gave you everything!
my love which you took for granted.
I gave you everything!
my heart which you ripped out stabbed and put it in a blinder
and mutilated it!
but that wasnt enough so
you stole my trust and cheated on me...
I gave you everything I had to give!
and got nothing but pain in return.
Damn you to the hottest pits of hell!
I gave you everything!
now I hate you but I love you
I'm wrapped aroudn your finger
and warped on your damn ectasy!
I gave you everything I had to give Very nice! Incredibly deep.
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 11:20 am
Enubia Sadism_Godess I Gave Everything I had To Givethis poem/song thing is based on a friend.
ectasy is a sub for love it sounds better to me...
I gave you everything!
my love which you took for granted.
I gave you everything!
my heart which you ripped out stabbed and put it in a blinder
and mutilated it!
but that wasnt enough so
you stole my trust and cheated on me...
I gave you everything I had to give!
and got nothing but pain in return.
Damn you to the hottest pits of hell!
I gave you everything!
now I hate you but I love you
I'm wrapped aroudn your finger
and warped on your damn ectasy!
I gave you everything I had to give Very nice! Incredibly deep. Thank you but its just dribbel I cam up with it....out of bordem...
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:18 pm
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 4:46 pm
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2005 9:46 am
So...
Tie me up
and call me
yours...
seek refuge
in my body.
Go on...
Chain me up
I want
you...
me...
us...
Please...
Throw me down
and violate
me...
break away
my everything.
Just...
Cuff me down
and gag me
I only want
you...
and your treacherous love...
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Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2005 8:10 pm
xTierx So...
Tie me up
and call me
yours...
seek refuge
in my body.
Go on...
Chain me up
I want
you...
me...
us...
Please...
Throw me down
and violate
me...
break away
my everything.
Just...
Cuff me down
and gag me
I only want
you...
and your treacherous love... Intense. It was good.
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Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2005 8:16 pm
Fuuka_Faery xTierx So...
Tie me up
and call me
yours...
seek refuge
in my body.
Go on...
Chain me up
I want
you...
me...
us...
Please...
Throw me down
and violate
me...
break away
my everything.
Just...
Cuff me down
and gag me
I only want
you...
and your treacherous love... Intense. It was good. I agree its very intense.
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2005 3:24 am
Please for the love of what little sanity I have, POST SOMETHING RELATIVELY HAPPY!! ANYONE!!!!!!
crying
Your lives can't be THIS miserable can they?! That hurt and pain are the only things to inspire you?!
Can't y'all find more positive ways to vent your anger and depression?!
sad It's so sad to see the youth of our nation clinging so desperately to these negative emotions...
There are other ways to write good poems and stuff.....
*frowns*
I'll have to post one of my cheap poems... >.<
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2005 10:50 am
Kujamaru Please for the love of what little sanity I have, POST SOMETHING RELATIVELY HAPPY!! ANYONE!!!!!!
crying
Your lives can't be THIS miserable can they?! That hurt and pain are the only things to inspire you?!
Can't y'all find more positive ways to vent your anger and depression?!
sad It's so sad to see the youth of our nation clinging so desperately to these negative emotions...
There are other ways to write good poems and stuff.....
*frowns*
I'll have to post one of my cheap poems... >.< Kuja Im sure there is any easie way but most of them hurt....
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2005 11:12 am
Okay, Im gonna attempt something realtively happy, so here goes.....
*Sung to the tune of, "Sing us a song, you're the Piano Man" by Billy Joel*
Poor Sheena was crying on the sidewalk
She couldnt have been any worse
She wiped away all the tears from her eyes
And stoodd up and grabbed her purse
But then one day she walked to the Happiness Bus
She hopped on and paid the driver
She then sat down and watched the bus fly into the sky
She the grabbed a bag of smiles and paid just a fiver
La la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la
Sing us a song, you're the Happines Man
Sing us a song, tonight
There are people that need a smile today
And we think you can do alright......
END!!
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2005 11:32 am
Untitled.
Your fake concern is touching
Even though
I know
You couldn't care less
So strike the thunder, Taint the rain, Touch the sky like we used to
Paint the stars, Shred the kiss, Touch the angels' fingertips
Seperated by a telephone wire
Writhing in the moonlight
Don't point that gun at me, My dear
What should I do with you?
Spread your wing and fly now, Exit the theatre
There's nothing to see here, Not anymore
It's not happy, Kuja, But It's not s**t-miserable either.
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2005 11:37 am
This is a poem I wrote today after hearing something on the news!!
Innocent Children not knowing what is going on,
Doing what thier told, but still it is wrong,
Yelling and screaming, hitting and beating.
Oh...the poor children are crying and screaming.
What are you thinking?
What did they do?
Why are you beating what belongs to you?
Your Innocent children, your own flesh and blood.
You should be Loving and caring for them.......
As they Deserve!!
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