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 Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 8:02 pm
 Character Information:
Student Name: Penelope J. Road Species: succubus Age: 17 Gender: Female Appearance description: Pretty much the same as the picture, she has strawberry blonde hair and blue green eyes. Personality: Penny has two different sides to her personality, one when she is hungry, and one for the rest of the time. Usually: Penny is a sweet thoughtful girl, a bit shy but charming none the less. She has a sort of innocent graceful air to her that draws people in. Hungry: Emitting Pheromones in order to seduce her pray Penny is like a panther on the hunt. Her whole body oozes sexuality, she is what some might call a dominatrix. Bio: Penny was raised in southern Ireland for most of her life. She was raised by her mother and father, which is quite unusual considering that succubus see humans as more of a meal then a partner and usually children of mixed couples are raised by the succubus parent. But Penny's parents had truly fallen in love. Penny had a pretty good childhood, her father showered her with love and spoiled her rotten, and her mother raised Penny with a firm hand and a soft heart. It wasn't until she hit puberty and the other Penny started coming out that she had trouble. By the time she turned sixteen they had moved six times due to Penny getting in trouble. there were even a few cases of boys ending up in the hospital after a bit too much fun. Finally with no other options Penny was sent to Rosentale in order to Learn how to control her powers. Skills and Abilities: - Hypnosis (Pretty undeveloped so only really good for putting people into a trance.) - Pheromone control (Can change the atmosphere in a room, not always voluntary.) - Super strength and speed. (Helps in combat situations.) Character Flaws: When hungry she has little to no self control. When she isn't hungry she is terribly awkward around boys, to the point that she freaks out every time one touches her. When she is hungry she can be ruthless and wont think twice about draining someone completely. Sexual Orientation: Bi-sexual but she can only feed from the life sources of men. Status: Single Likes: - Plants. - Sweets. - Fae. Dislikes: - Rats - Thunder - Spinach Extra Information: Banana a Road family friend and Penny's companion is with her almost always.
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 8:22 pm
Hello! Before I approve your character, I am going to ask you to make some changes. 1. Please note the limitations of her abilities. Control powers are, by nature, very godmoddish so please ensure that you will not be controlling characters without the permission of their owners. 2. You will need to add real flaws. Natural instincts do not constitute flaws. In addition to her awkwardness with males, please give her a couple of other real flaws. 3. This isn't a change but I wanted you to be aware that we do have a character essentially just like her, but male (an incubus). This isn't a problem really, but it's always nice to know when there is another character with extreme similarities to your own.
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 8:36 pm
 Character Information:
Teacher Name: Alchea Daikii
Nickname: Chea
Species: Human?
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Appearance description: Always mistakenly seen as a student. Then the rest, please see image at right
Personality:
♥Friendly
♥Approachable
♥Energetic
♥Extrovert
♥Boyish
♥Prefers to hang out with students
♥Long-tempered
♥Stubborn.
♥Stubborn.
♥Stubborn
♥and STUBBORN!!
Bio: I live my days of youth in Neid, another hometown for Elves. I came from an average type of family; the one and only child of Sarah and Winston Daikii. I’m proud to say that my dad is a well-known blacksmith. His heart and passion for crafting metal armors and weapons recognized him by our townspeople and most of our entire leader. From the finest armors, weapons, shields.. all straps of metal worn by Neid’s army was handmade by dad. Meanwhile, my mother is a plain housewife. I had a wonderful mom, I’m her die-hard fan *giggles* I love to venture other places, unravel stuffs which are not yet discovered and most of all close to Mother Nature, which all young tykes are fond of doing so. Shingo Forest is one of my favorite places near Neid, where I usually spend most of my time. I could be whoever I want as long as I’m in that forest.. It’s my secret hiding place
My parents confessed that I’m not their real child, that’s why I’m different from all of them. My mom found me at Shingo Forest when I was a young tyke; I was asked back then where I've came from, but got nothing in return. The only thing may recognized me was a piece of a metal pendant, a symbol of divinity.
And there, I came forth to Rosentale Academy hoping to find my real self. I need to know and trace where I really came from, race, and who exactly are my real parents..
Skills and Abilities:
limited range of Teleportation.The ability to move from place to place.
Telekinesis. Can move any NEARBY desired objects using mind control.
Cast spells and magics (she's still working on with these)
Character Flaws:
✘Fails to cast spells and magic correctly
✘Terrible singer and dancer
✘Sometimes weird
✘Prideful
✘Careless/clumsy
✘Unlady-like
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Status: Single
Occupation: Art Teacher
Likes: (at least 3)
✓Quiet Places
✓Tea
✓Sweets
✓Draw
✓Culinary Arts
✓Nature
✓Adventure
Dislikes: (at least 3)
✘Treated as a child
✘Stalkers
✘Worms and Cockroaches
✘Left out
✘KETCHUP!
Extra Information: I won't allow anyone to separate me from my sketchpad and pencil! scream
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 8:48 pm
Well I already knew what to expect. XD
She'll be staying in the Luminescent Light Dorm.
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Posted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 8:54 pm
xLieselotte Well I already knew what to expect. XD
She'll be staying in the Luminescent Light Dorm. LOLLLL.. emotion_awesome thanks.. I'll start to roleplay her now.. then Ayu xD
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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 2:41 am
Student Character Profiles:  Character Information: Teacher
Name: Izebella Marrie Richardson
Species:angel of death
Age:19
Gender: female
Personality: Izebella is a very quiet but outgoing person
Bio: Izebella has a child to raise but she hopes not to raise the child alone. She isnt pregnant but she had the child a while backand the child doesnt speak yet but she hopes to fix that. She is an angel of death and she doesnt understand why she was cursed by this. She sees demons and hates the fact that her husband left her to raisee thier child Alexander by herself.
Skills and Abilities: Izebella has the gift of foresight which enables her to see the past and future
Character Flaws: Izebella is over anylitical, ignores good advice and speakes before she thinks.
Sexual Orientation: straight
Status:Izebella is as of now single
Occupation:Reading
Likes:
- music
- poetry
- writing
Dislikes:
- Alexander for leaving her
- her life
- what she is
Extra Information: nothing to be known
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 8:07 am
Hello! Before the approval process can be completed, your character will need some adjustments. First and foremost, her character flaws are unacceptable. You say she's outgoing, but list shyness as a character flaw. Outgoing is the opposite of shy. She really can't be both. Secondly, pregnancy--especially due to marriage, is absolutely not a flaw. It is a medical condition that is a natural part of life. I highly doubt any pregnant woman who conceived because she was in a loving marriage, is going to consider that something is wrong with her because she is carrying a child. I'm not sure what you mean by "tormented by demons"--real ones? If so, that is definitely not a flaw anymore than being bullied is a flaw. I would ask that you steer clear from the following "flaws" as too often people tack them on to meet the requirement but rarely play them appropriately: "clumsiness" "naivety" "inability to cook" "trust issues" "being weird" or "quick temper." Any sort of fear/phobia or irrelevant flaw (like lacking a random, superfluous skill) is unlikely to be approved as well. Please note that at 19, she would be one of the oldest students in the school, and heading toward graduation in the spring (which will be here before you realize it.) If you plan to stay around a while, it will leave you in the position of needing a new character before too long. Finally, I will not say that you are not allowed to play a pregnant student, but FYI, we do not often like sudden extreme angst so I would advise against planning a dramatic miscarriage. I don't wish to sound suspicious but I've seen people do this far too many times. Rosentale is a very light hearted place and that kind of extreme angst and drama would likely be disruptive and unwelcome so please RP her pregnancy respectfully and thoughtfully. Please visit the Mary Sue 101 thread in the resource forum for help in creating flaws, if you like. And I apologize for being a little more strict but many of our female characters in particular are lacking in flaws, and have identical personalities We try to inspire realistic characters with unique qualities. You may quote me when you've edited. Thank you!
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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 9:42 am
StrawberryZ0mbie Hello! Before the approval process can be completed, your character will need some adjustments. First and foremost, her character flaws are unacceptable. You say she's outgoing, but list shyness as a character flaw. Outgoing is the opposite of shy. She really can't be both. Secondly, pregnancy--especially due to marriage, is absolutely not a flaw. It is a medical condition that is a natural part of life. I highly doubt any pregnant woman who conceived because she was in a loving marriage, is going to consider that something is wrong with her because she is carrying a child. I'm not sure what you mean by "tormented by demons"--real ones? If so, that is definitely not a flaw anymore than being bullied is a flaw. I would ask that you steer clear from the following "flaws" as too often people tack them on to meet the requirement but rarely play them appropriately: "clumsiness" "naivety" "inability to cook" "trust issues" "being weird" or "quick temper." Any sort of fear/phobia or irrelevant flaw (like lacking a random, superfluous skill) is unlikely to be approved as well. Please note that at 19, she would be one of the oldest students in the school, and heading toward graduation in the spring (which will be here before you realize it.) If you plan to stay around a while, it will leave you in the position of needing a new character before too long. Finally, I will not say that you are not allowed to play a pregnant student, but FYI, we do not often like sudden extreme angst so I would advise against planning a dramatic miscarriage. I don't wish to sound suspicious but I've seen people do this far too many times. Rosentale is a very light hearted place and that kind of extreme angst and drama would likely be disruptive and unwelcome so please RP her pregnancy respectfully and thoughtfully. Please visit the Mary Sue 101 thread in the resource forum for help in creating flaws, if you like. And I apologize for being a little more strict but many of our female characters in particular are lacking in flaws, and have identical personalities We try to inspire realistic characters with unique qualities. You may quote me when you've edited. Thank you! I've editied my profile. I hope it's to your liking and im working on a second character
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 9:46 am
vampire_princess8080 I've editied my profile. I hope it's to your liking and im working on a second character What is she going to do with her child during class? o.O; There isn't really a nursery or day care. This is a school for kids. I wonder if you might be better off making her a teacher since she doesn't seem very student like. She can't very well take a young child with her around to class--some classes are kind of dangerous. Also, I specifically said to avoid using clumsiness, weirdness and a temper as flaws. I am not going to accept those. Please read the Mary Sue 101 thread and come up with actual flaws for your character. I apologize for being strict, but this has become necessary due to the influx of people who either refuse to put real flaws, or try to scrape by with the bare minimum. This is practically the only requirement we have apart from the obvious no godmodding so we do insist that people try to be realistic. Thank you.
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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 9:53 am
Student Character Profiles: Code: Character Information:
Student Name: Beth Ane Richardson
Species:Angel of death
Age:14
Gender:female
Appearance description:she wears a necklace with her at all times
Personality: Beth Ane Richardson is shy and quiet. She can by mysterious at times.
Bio:Beth, like her sister Izebella is an angel of death. She doesnt understand what she is going through but at least she has her sister for now.
Skills and Abilities:Can only see into the past
Character Flaws:has scars from cutting on her arm(She basically has no self respect for herself) , over anylitical like her sister and cant open up to people
Sexual Orientation:straight
Status:single but looking for love
Likes:
- being around her sister
- school
- poetry
Dislikes:
- depression
- when her sister cuts herself
- math
Extra Information:She has a pet ravon that follows her around basically everywhere she goes.
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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 10:07 am
StrawberryZ0mbie vampire_princess8080 I've editied my profile. I hope it's to your liking and im working on a second character What is she going to do with her child during class? o.O; There isn't really a nursery or day care. This is a school for kids. I wonder if you might be better off making her a teacher since she doesn't seem very student like. She can't very well take a young child with her around to class--some classes are kind of dangerous. Also, I specifically said to avoid using clumsiness, weirdness and a temper as flaws. I am not going to accept those. Please read the Mary Sue 101 thread and come up with actual flaws for your character. I apologize for being strict, but this has become necessary due to the influx of people who either refuse to put real flaws, or try to scrape by with the bare minimum. This is practically the only requirement we have apart from the obvious no godmodding so we do insist that people try to be realistic. Thank you. again i've edited my profile.i changed her to a teacher and her child is 4 and can be left alone during the day because he sleeps during the day and wakes at night.
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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 10:13 am
Hello! Beth Ane will not be approved until her personality section is filled out. Being "full of regrets" is not a flaw. It is the natural result of making mistakes in one's life. EVERYONE is full of regrets. Due to the difficulty in coming up with realistic flaws, I am also not going to accept "shyness" as a flaw. It is very difficult to RP this as an actual flaw and I am going to request that you do more work to think of something realistic--unless you intend to use it to make her look stuck up since shy people frequently come across that way. Flaws are not cute, and do not add mystery and melancholy. They are not things that should just be tacked on so you can scrape by and get accepted. Flaws are part of your character--they are things that are ingrained into your character's personality and can make them look foolish, bad, or unpleasant. They are negative aspects and vices that make your character realistic and add depth. Selfishness, poor hygiene, disfiguring scars and defects, snobbery, vanity, laziness, greed, violent tendencies, sarcasm, rudeness, indecisiveness, abrasiveness, being opinionated. Those are the kinds of flaws we're looking for. Not gentle, nearly nonexistent things like shyness and sorrow that rarely come across as flaws rather than normal personality traits unless they're played as being so crippling, it makes people look down on them. Again, I do apologize for being such a hardass on this but we have too many people trying to slide by with the bare minimum, or non-flaws and given the recent influx of characters, we have to start cracking down on this to ensure the quality of the RP. This is the only thing holding you up from being accepted so please give this some real consideration and come up with things that are a little more hardcore than sorrow. Thank you!! (Isabella works far better as a teacher, thank you. As soon as the issue with their character flaws is resolved, they will be approved.)
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 10:25 am
StrawberryZ0mbie Hello! Beth Ane will not be approved until her personality section is filled out. Being "full of regrets" is not a flaw. It is the natural result of making mistakes in one's life. EVERYONE is full of regrets. Due to the difficulty in coming up with realistic flaws, I am also not going to accept "shyness" as a flaw. It is very difficult to RP this as an actual flaw and I am going to request that you do more work to think of something realistic--unless you intend to use it to make her look stuck up since shy people frequently come across that way. Flaws are not cute, and do not add mystery and melancholy. They are not things that should just be tacked on so you can scrape by and get accepted. Flaws are part of your character--they are things that are ingrained into your character's personality and can make them look foolish, bad, or unpleasant. They are negative aspects and vices that make your character realistic and add depth. Selfishness, poor hygiene, disfiguring scars and defects, snobbery, vanity, laziness, greed, violent tendencies, sarcasm, rudeness, indecisiveness, abrasiveness, being opinionated. Those are the kinds of flaws we're looking for. Not gentle, nearly nonexistent things like shyness and sorrow that rarely come across as flaws rather than normal personality traits unless they're played as being so crippling, it makes people look down on them. Again, I do apologize for being such a hardass on this but we have too many people trying to slide by with the bare minimum, or non-flaws and given the recent influx of characters, we have to start cracking down on this to ensure the quality of the RP. This is the only thing holding you up from being accepted so please give this some real consideration and come up with things that are a little more hardcore than sorrow. Thank you!! (Isabella works far better as a teacher, thank you. As soon as the issue with their character flaws is resolved, they will be approved.) hopefullly its right this time
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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 10:28 am
I apologize, but no. Your flaws are nothing like the ones I gave as examples of what we're looking for. =( I really don't know how to be more clear that things like being sad and not making eye contact are not character flaws.
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Feb 16, 2012 10:44 am
crying StrawberryZ0mbie I apologize, but no. Your flaws are nothing like the ones I gave as examples of what we're looking for. =( I really don't know how to be more clear that things like being sad and not making eye contact are not character flaws. Please be right? i fixed everything you've asked....sorry im just over anlyizing things right not...i tend to do that a lot..
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