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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 3:52 am
Tatsuman Damn. I am one bad Mo Fo. xd I just read all 10 chapters. I thought I had already, but I guess not. Favorite quote Quote: swearing in various ways, different words, different emphasis’s and even an alternate language or two. I forgot all about that one, that is a very good quote xd , and Thank you for reading and Yes you are one Bad Mo fo
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 3:54 am
Sauvie Tatsuman Damn. I am one bad Mo Fo. xd I just read all 10 chapters. I thought I had already, but I guess not. Favorite quote Quote: swearing in various ways, different words, different emphasis’s and even an alternate language or two. I forgot all about that one, that is a very good quote xd , and Thank you for reading and Yes you are one Bad Mo fo No problem. I wouldn't have if I didn't like it.
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 8:15 pm
Thanks Tatsu
NOT A BUMP EITHER!
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 8:19 pm
Sauvie Seaphron Am I the only Cultie who was glad to see a new chapter? ...Depression +5 It should go back up, you have another reader. (I love that we all bump are stories)
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 8:20 pm
Seaphron Sauvie Seaphron Am I the only Cultie who was glad to see a new chapter? ...Depression +5 It should go back up, you have another reader. (I love that we all bump are stories) Depression -1 ( xd )
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 8:20 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:24 am
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:25 am
The depression joke, that was funny.
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:27 am
Seaphron The depression joke, that was funny. that was a cleverly hidden conversational Bump, but now my plan is known ninja
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:28 am
The best was when you, Mune, and I all did it with in half an hour ago.
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:43 am
Sorry Sauvie I missed this chapter. I have now rectified the mistake. I like dit alot full of action . 3nodding
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 7:33 am
Diana Godstone Sorry Sauvie I missed this chapter. I have now rectified the mistake. I like dit alot full of action . 3nodding Glad you like it mrgreen
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Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 9:56 am
New chapter is up, but I am off my game so the punctuation may be a bit iffy, but it is still readable mrgreen
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Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 4:00 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 6:44 pm
Nice chapter. I like how you introduced some new villians (that mess with people's heads.)
For some reason when Fish dreams that he's dead, it reminds me of when Betman dreams that he's dead in my story. Except that when Betman woke up he had grey skin. And from that point on slowly became more and more insane. 3nodding
ALSO: Confusion + 3
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