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MusicBitch

PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 8:48 pm


here is a new poem i wrote it earlier today after i finished talking to my friend and i got really upset (I am a very sensitive person though i dont show it to many people)

Slit my wrists

I slit my wrist knowing the pain will go numb.
I slit my wrist hoping to forget that pain I feel.
I know it hurts after you cut but the emotions hurt more.
My only hope I cut to deep and ill die.
Bleed to death upon my floor no one really caring why.
I want to die because you cause me pain.
I wish I didnt meet you cause you hurt me to much.
Youre the one who makes me smile but kills me from the inside.
You hurt me more then anyone before even if you dont mean to.
I dont want to know you anymore from this pain I feel id rather die.
I slit my wrist knowing the pain will go numb.
I slit my wrists hoping to forget the pain I feel.
If you dont know by now, id rather die, then to ever be alive.


yeah yeah it sucks i know...*thinks dont let codi see it she wil kick my a**. xd
PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 8:56 pm


MusicBitch
here is a new poem i wrote it earlier today after i finished talking to my friend and i got really upset (I am a very sensitive person though i dont show it to many people)

Slit my wrists

I slit my wrist knowing the pain will go numb.
I slit my wrist hoping to forget that pain I feel.
I know it hurts after you cut but the emotions hurt more.
My only hope I cut to deep and ill die.
Bleed to death upon my floor no one really caring why.
I want to die because you cause me pain.
I wish I didnt meet you cause you hurt me to much.
Youre the one who makes me smile but kills me from the inside.
You hurt me more then anyone before even if you dont mean to.
I dont want to know you anymore from this pain I feel id rather die.
I slit my wrist knowing the pain will go numb.
I slit my wrists hoping to forget the pain I feel.
If you dont know by now, id rather die, then to ever be alive.


yeah yeah it sucks i know...*thinks dont let codi see it she wil kick my a**. xd
DAMN STRAIGHT I WILL!!! IT DOES NOT SUCK!!!! IT IS ONE OF THE MOST BEAUTIFUL POETRY I"VE EVER READ!!!!! ALL YOUR POEMS ARE!!!!!!!!!

Whip It Out!


MangaJoe

PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 9:11 pm


Savior
As darkness falls neon lights turn on,

A city that does'nt sleep and has no stars in the sky,

A lost little girl trys to find a star to wish upon,

A search that is pointless, but upon an old neon sign,

A sign thats a little dull, but with the vibrant shape of an angle,

The little girl makes her wish on this sign,

A wish to go home, but is a neon sign enough to grant this wish,

Foot steps from afar, fright jults up the girls spine,

A man in a trench coat with horridly pail skin aproaches,

As he aproaches though a warmth seems to be given off,

The girl hides in the shadows slightly, though she seems drawn to him,

He walks to the corner where she hides, a smile apears on his face,

Not a smirk or a grin, but a genuinley warm smile,

The girl steps forward greeting him with a wimper,

He sees her and notice her trouble,

With a smile and an outstretched hand he offers her help,

A cab is called up and a roll of money is given to the driver,

As the pale man waves goodbye he sees the smile of a girl,

A young little girl going home,

He stays at the corner until the cab is out of sight,

As the man walks off, he disapears, without noise or worrey,

For all is right, all is safe, let no one cry...
PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 9:18 pm


joe......that be beautiful!!!

Whip It Out!


MangaJoe

PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 9:19 pm


TenshiDarkAngel
joe......that be beautiful!!!

redface awww, shucks.
PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 10:31 pm


awwwww! Great poem joe!!! Oh and thanks codi you made me feel better and thanks for talking me out of that stupid idea. Oh yeah you animation is done if you like i can redo it since it isnt my best sweatdrop

MusicBitch


MangaJoe

PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 10:36 pm


Heh I did'nt know my poems was gonna be considered this good.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 11:56 am


MangaJoe
Heh I did'nt know my poems was gonna be considered this good.
THEY ARE BEAUTIFUL, YOU IDIOT!!!!! scream heart heart heart heart heart heart domokun

Whip It Out!


MangaJoe

PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 11:59 am


TenshiDarkAngel
MangaJoe
Heh I did'nt know my poems was gonna be considered this good.
THEY ARE BEAUTIFUL, YOU IDIOT!!!!! scream heart heart heart heart heart heart domokun

Hehe, I guess I should post more poems then ehh?
PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 12:06 pm


MangaJoe
TenshiDarkAngel
MangaJoe
Heh I did'nt know my poems was gonna be considered this good.
THEY ARE BEAUTIFUL, YOU IDIOT!!!!! scream heart heart heart heart heart heart domokun

Hehe, I guess I should post more poems then ehh?
yes. Or my domo army shall come after you...... domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun with their gnashy teeth of death

Whip It Out!


MangaJoe

PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 12:15 pm


TenshiDarkAngel
MangaJoe
TenshiDarkAngel
MangaJoe
Heh I did'nt know my poems was gonna be considered this good.
THEY ARE BEAUTIFUL, YOU IDIOT!!!!! scream heart heart heart heart heart heart domokun

Hehe, I guess I should post more poems then ehh?
yes. Or my domo army shall come after you...... domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun domokun with their gnashy teeth of death

Gah! Domo scares me, he's like a big smarmy terd!
PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 12:31 pm


WOW JOE! that was so beautiful! crying

Oo_Cooney_oO


MangaJoe

PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 12:57 pm


sweatdrop You guys are really given me way more than I'm worth.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 12:59 pm


MangaJoe
sweatdrop You guys are really given me way more than I'm worth.


lol no they are not. Its and swesome poem! You got to post more @.@ I have my eye on you ninja whee

MusicBitch


MangaJoe

PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 1:02 pm


MusicBitch
MangaJoe
sweatdrop You guys are really given me way more than I'm worth.


lol no they are not. Its and swesome poem! You got to post more @.@ I have my eye on you ninja whee

Heh, to think my real passion is comic book writings.
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