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 Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2011 5:31 pm
There's still no quantity on the Iron Balls <.<
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2011 5:40 pm
sweatdrop Ah sorry, deleted it when I rewrote that little bit, it's there now!
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2011 5:53 pm
Er... Sorry, I just noticed the size of the things, they're too small to way that much. They're more like a pound two pounds or so each if they're the size of a golf ball <.<
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2011 5:55 pm
Well, they're meant to be dense and heavy....so that if I launch one at something, it actually does damage e.e'
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2011 6:14 pm
Fix the weight so it's... 2.5lbs and she's approved.
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2011 6:24 pm
How about I increase the size to baseballs rather than change the weight?
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2011 8:59 pm
That could work. Approved then 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2011 10:06 pm
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 8:24 pm
(OOC: I know it's not finished. I still have to write up my history, which will likely take a while and which I cannot do at the moment since it heavily depends on another rpc that is currently in the early stages of being made. For now, I just wanted to see if I got everything else down correctly. I also know that portal rpcs are no longer being accepted. However, I was hoping that since I'm not auto-ranking or auto-learning, I could have this rpc be a portal rpc simply for the history and perhaps future non-combat talent.)  NixXA __________________________________________________ 【.main info.】
❖ f u l l n a m e: Nix A
❖ n i c k n a m e s: n/a
❖ a g e: 15
❖ b i r t h d a t e: ??/??
❖ g e n d e r: Female
❖ n a t i o n a l i t y: Indelca
❖ r a n k: Student
❖ c l a s s: n/a
❖ t i t l e: n/a
❖ b l o o d l i n e: Human
❖ s p e e d: 6 [8 with situational modifier]
❖ s t r e n g t h: 4
❖ p l a y e d b y: Kagetsukiko
__________________________________________________ 【.major info.】
❖ e n e r g y c o l o r: transparent black with silver shining through
❖ e n e r g y r e s e r v e: 225
❖ e l e m e n t: n/a
❖ b a t t l e s t r e n g t h s: (excluding things pertaining to talents and such)
•Unconsciously gathering information (even without knowing it, Nix constantly judges the situation, often times leading her to know facts or dodge attacks even to her surprise)
•Battle reflexes (in a sense, the muscle memory version of the previous strength)
•Efficiency (whatever Nix does, she naturally does it in the easiest way possible without sacrificing quality)
•Cunning (predicting the opponents moves has always been second-nature to Nix, at least in her known past)
•Flexibility (able to bend the body into numerous positions in a short amount of time)
•Experience (while she cannot remember being in any past fights, her body and subconscious still remembers)
•Will to live (Nix will always do anything in her power to live as long as it doesn't conflict with her other values, leading to surprising feats of combat)
❖ b a t t l e w e a k n e s s e s: (excluding things pertaining to talents and such)
•Naivety (can be too trusting at times)
•Passive (tries to avoid most fights, sometimes too hesitant to attack)
•Merciful (when someone asks for forgiveness, it's usually given)
❖ t a l e n t: Combat Talent
__________________________________________________ 【.equipment info.】
❖h e a d: Blacked-out goggles hanging around the neck. A clean white bandage wrapped around the head to cover the right eye.
❖t o r s o: A tan/cream jacket with a hood over an airy, white dress that reaches down to mid-thigh and is held up on the shoulders by thin, knotted straps (look at picture). The dress is cinched at the waist by a belt with various pouches attached.
❖b a c k p a c k: A simple brown rucksack, big enough to hold some food and spare changes of clothes. Carried only when needed.
❖l e g s: Tan, knee-length leggings.
❖f e e t: Comfortable white socks peeking out from under light boots, brown in color and simple in design, that reach up just far enough to cover the ankles. The boots are flexible and comfortable to run in while still thick enough to offer some protection.
❖h a n d s: Brown gloves, but only when they're needed. When not being used, they're usually in her jacket pocket.
❖m i s c e l l a n e o u s: Bandages, rope, pain-relieving salves, disinfectant.
❖w e a p o n s: Two broken/damaged bladed tonfas with some sort of trigger (looks like they also doubled as a gun before they were broken), two small daggers, and ten metal needles. Nix has no formal knowledge on how to use any of the weapons and she carries them around only because they were the only things she could salvage from the tatters of the outfit she was found in. Other than her mementos, Nix also carries a bladed shield and a pair of chakrams, weapons that she can actually use to some extent.
__________________________________________________ 【.skill roster.】
❖ e n e r g y:
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❖ c h a o s:
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__________________________________________________ 【.summons.】
❖ p e t s:
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__________________________________________________ 【.character description.】
❖ p e r s o n a l i t y: Nix is a bit of a paradox, as is expected from a teenager with lost memories. The girl can be quite mature: acting quiet, calm, and gentle for the most part and displaying outstanding insight, observation, and memory. However, she can also be childishly naïve at the same time: acting oblivious to social norms that most her age would find obvious and displaying a carefree curiosity that only a child would display. Despite the uncertainty about herself, Nix almost always shows a genuine smile; a frown is rare for her. Even when she is pushed over the edge, the girl doesn't frown. Instead, she copes by withdrawing into herself, falling silent and doing only what is absolutely needed in the most efficient manner that almost seems robotic and definitely unnatural in its exactness. For the most part, though, such listless…. No, not listless. For the most part, such empty phases do not last too long. Usually before people start to even begin missing the old Nix, the girl is back to her usual, happy self.
When in battle, no large change comes over Nix. Unless noted otherwise, she maintains the same personality, being just as curious, calm, and gentle as always even if those personality traits are expressed in a different behavior, one more solemn and matching the situation. She almost always stresses for a peaceful resolution and it would be highly abnormal for her to turn cold to her opponent. Strangely enough, though, the girl has an amazing sense for battle despite her wish for peace. This unnatural sense for combat is so natural that it's practically instinct; as if Nix had been forced to fight to survive since she was young.
❖ q u o t e: "I am the master of my fate:/ I am the captain of my soul."
❖ h e i g h t: 5' 6"
❖ w e i g h t: 111 lb.
❖ e y e c o l o r: Black
❖ p l a c e o f b i r t h: Portal [Indelca]
❖ t h e m e s o n g: Date of Rebirth
❖ b a t t l e t h e m e: Player
__________________________________________________ 【.background information.】
Link
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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 8:48 pm
BloodXIben'la Ahad  __________________________________________________
【.main info.】
❖ f u l l n a m e: Blood Iben'la Ahad
❖ n i c k n a m e s: BIA, Bloody Red Queen
❖ a g e: 16
❖ b i r t h d a t e: 12/5
❖ g e n d e r: Female
❖ n a t i o n a l i t y:
❖ r a n k: Student
❖ c l a s s: Dark Avenger
❖ t i t l e: N/A
❖ b l o o d l i n e: Human
❖ s p e e d: 7
❖ s t r e n g t h: 6
❖ p l a y e d b y: _Manpish_
__________________________________________________
【.major info.】
❖ e n e r g y c o l o r: Crimson
❖ e n e r g y r e s e r v e: 300
❖ e l e m e n t: Earth
❖ b a t t l e s t r e n g t h:
- Dark Avengers are arguably the finest trackers in the world, capable of smelling, seeing and marking a creature's very soul.
- Dark Avengers gain abilities to confuse, trap and incapacitate their quarry
- Dark Avengers are masters of deception and stealth
- Dark Avengers gain abilities to manipulate shadows and darkness, making their stealth abilities all the more formidable. They also develop the ability to cast shadow glyphs - traps that have different affects based on the glyph.
❖ b a t t l e w e a k n e s s:
- Dark Avengers cannot use Medium or Heavy armor
- Dark Avengers' shadow manipulation abilities are limited to 50 feet in range
- Dark Avengers rely heavily on their Chosen weapons, and this dependency can be exploited
- While Dark Avengers are not inherently evil, the Oaths they have sworn and the rituals they've undertaken make them particularly vulnerable to spells of bright or divine light. Any Dark Avenger caught in the wake of such a spell, regardless of its rank, is blinded and disoriented for one round. Any darkness or shadow related skills in use are dispelled. Any Dark Avenger affected by such a spell that is higher than their rank is disoriented and blinded for 2 posts PLUS the difference between their rank and their opponent's
- Dark Avengers lack the constitution of many melee classes
- Dark Avengers' shadow and darkness related abilities are more difficult to use in well lit environments
- When a Dark Avenger is killed, their Soul is immediately seized by The Shadow World and sucked into its dark abyss. A dead Dark Avenger CANNOT BE RESURRECTED, REVIVED OR OTHERWISE REINCARNATED, EVEN THROUGH DIVINE MEANS, UNLESS THEIR SOUL IS RECLAIMED.
❖ t a l e n t: N/A
__________________________________________________
【.equipment info.】
❖ w e a p o n (s):
- Hidden Blades (1) (Right arm gauntlet)
- Crossbow Bolts (75) ( in holster on back)
- Throwing Knives (20) ( on belt. ten on each side. [like in assassins creed] )
- Dagger (1) (located in a sheath wich is strapped to right thigh)
- Crossbow (1) (strapped to back)
- Smoke bombs (10) (In pouch on belt. located above her left a** cheek)
❖ a r m o r:
- Black shirt (in pic)
- White pants
- White/Red knee length trench coat (in pic)
- White top hat (in pic)
- White gloves (in pic)
- basic leather armor under clothes
__________________________________________________
【.skill roster.】
Class:
E-rank:
- Soul Sense (Passive)
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D-rank:
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C-rank:
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B-rank:
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A-rank:
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Element ~ Earth:
E-rank:
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D-rank:
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C-rank:
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B-rank:
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A-rank:
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Custom Skills:
E-rank:
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D-rank:
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C-rank:
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__________________________________________________
【.character description.】
❖ p e r s o n a l i t y: Blood is pretty insane, she loves the color and taste of blood. But once you get to know her she becomes a more motherly figure and can be very kind and caring.
❖ q u o t e: "I want to make it rain red...."
❖ h e i g h t: 5'4"
❖ w e i g h t: 123lbs
❖ e y e c o l o r: grey
❖ p l a c e o f b i r t h: Devils Eye Desert
❖ t h e m e s o n g:
❖ b a t t l e t h e m e: The 13th Struggle
__________________________________________________
【.background information.】
Blood has been an assassin since she was little. The first time she picked up a dagger she knew she wanted to be in the family business. So she joined up and went through very intense training. But of course she did screw up a few assassinations here and there as she got older. As Blood matured she became stronger and better at her work. Eventually she managed to kill eleven people successfully, thus enabling her to be a true assassin in her family. Blood currently lives in the Devils Eye Desert where she is undergoing more training while taking jobs on the side to earn some rep and extra cash.
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[b][size=9][color=maroon]Dark Avenger / Devils Eye Desert / Student / Bloody Red Queen / Energy: 300/300[/color]
[color=grey] Hidden Blade (1) / Dagger (1) / Crossbow Bolts: 75/75 / Throwing Knives: 20/20 / Smoke Bombs: 10/10 [/size][/color][/b]
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[align=center][size=9]-----------------------------[color=crimson][i]"..But your fate has already been sealed.. There is no escape.."[/color][/i]----------------------------------[/size][/align]
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Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2011 9:00 am
Kagetsukiko (OOC: I know it's not finished. I still have to write up my history, which will likely take a while and which I cannot do at the moment since it heavily depends on another rpc that is currently in the early stages of being made. For now, I just wanted to see if I got everything else down correctly. I also know that portal rpcs are no longer being accepted. However, I was hoping that since I'm not auto-ranking or auto-learning, I could have this rpc be a portal rpc simply for the history and perhaps future non-combat talent.) NixXA __________________________________________________ 【.main info.】
❖ f u l l n a m e: Nix A
❖ n i c k n a m e s: n/a
❖ a g e: 15
❖ b i r t h d a t e: ??/??
❖ g e n d e r: Female
❖ n a t i o n a l i t y: Indelca
❖ r a n k: Student
❖ c l a s s: n/a
❖ t i t l e: n/a
❖ b l o o d l i n e: Human
❖ s p e e d: 6 [8 with situational modifier]
❖ s t r e n g t h: 4
❖ p l a y e d b y: Kagetsukiko
__________________________________________________ 【.major info.】
❖ e n e r g y c o l o r: transparent black with silver shining through
❖ e n e r g y r e s e r v e: 225
❖ e l e m e n t: n/a
❖ b a t t l e s t r e n g t h s: (excluding things pertaining to talents and such)
•Unconsciously gathering information (even without knowing it, Nix constantly judges the situation, often times leading her to know facts or dodge attacks even to her surprise)
•Battle reflexes (in a sense, the muscle memory version of the previous strength)
•Efficiency (whatever Nix does, she naturally does it in the easiest way possible without sacrificing quality)
•Cunning (predicting the opponents moves has always been second-nature to Nix, at least in her known past)
•Flexibility (able to bend the body into numerous positions in a short amount of time)
•Experience (while she cannot remember being in any past fights, her body and subconscious still remembers)
•Will to live (Nix will always do anything in her power to live as long as it doesn't conflict with her other values, leading to surprising feats of combat)
❖ b a t t l e w e a k n e s s e s: (excluding things pertaining to talents and such)
•Naivety (can be too trusting at times)
•Passive (tries to avoid most fights, sometimes too hesitant to attack)
•Merciful (when someone asks for forgiveness, it's usually given)
❖ t a l e n t: Combat Talent
__________________________________________________ 【.equipment info.】
❖h e a d: Blacked-out goggles hanging around the neck. A clean white bandage wrapped around the head to cover the right eye.
❖t o r s o: A tan/cream jacket with a hood over an airy, white dress that reaches down to mid-thigh and is held up on the shoulders by thin, knotted straps (look at picture). The dress is cinched at the waist by a belt with various pouches attached.
❖b a c k p a c k: A simple brown rucksack, big enough to hold some food and spare changes of clothes. Carried only when needed.
❖l e g s: Tan, knee-length leggings.
❖f e e t: Comfortable white socks peeking out from under light boots, brown in color and simple in design, that reach up just far enough to cover the ankles. The boots are flexible and comfortable to run in while still thick enough to offer some protection.
❖h a n d s: Brown gloves, but only when they're needed. When not being used, they're usually in her jacket pocket.
❖m i s c e l l a n e o u s: Bandages, rope, pain-relieving salves, disinfectant.
❖w e a p o n s: Two broken/damaged bladed tonfas with some sort of trigger (looks like they also doubled as a gun before they were broken), two small daggers, and ten metal needles. Nix has no formal knowledge on how to use any of the weapons and she carries them around only because they were the only things she could salvage from the tatters of the outfit she was found in. Other than her mementos, Nix also carries a bladed shield and a pair of chakrams, weapons that she can actually use to some extent.
__________________________________________________ 【.skill roster.】
❖ e n e r g y:
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❖ c h a o s:
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❖ t e m p u s p a p i l i o:
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__________________________________________________ 【.summons.】
❖ p e t s:
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❖ s u m m o n s:
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__________________________________________________ 【.character description.】
❖ p e r s o n a l i t y: Nix is a bit of a paradox, as is expected from a teenager with lost memories. The girl can be quite mature: acting quiet, calm, and gentle for the most part and displaying outstanding insight, observation, and memory. However, she can also be childishly naïve at the same time: acting oblivious to social norms that most her age would find obvious and displaying a carefree curiosity that only a child would display. Despite the uncertainty about herself, Nix almost always shows a genuine smile; a frown is rare for her. Even when she is pushed over the edge, the girl doesn't frown. Instead, she copes by withdrawing into herself, falling silent and doing only what is absolutely needed in the most efficient manner that almost seems robotic and definitely unnatural in its exactness. For the most part, though, such listless…. No, not listless. For the most part, such empty phases do not last too long. Usually before people start to even begin missing the old Nix, the girl is back to her usual, happy self.
When in battle, no large change comes over Nix. Unless noted otherwise, she maintains the same personality, being just as curious, calm, and gentle as always even if those personality traits are expressed in a different behavior, one more solemn and matching the situation. She almost always stresses for a peaceful resolution and it would be highly abnormal for her to turn cold to her opponent. Strangely enough, though, the girl has an amazing sense for battle despite her wish for peace. This unnatural sense for combat is so natural that it's practically instinct; as if Nix had been forced to fight to survive since she was young.
❖ q u o t e: "I am the master of my fate:/ I am the captain of my soul."
❖ h e i g h t: 5' 6"
❖ w e i g h t: 111 lb.
❖ e y e c o l o r: Black
❖ p l a c e o f b i r t h: Portal [Indelca]
❖ t h e m e s o n g: Date of Rebirth
❖ b a t t l e t h e m e: Player
__________________________________________________ 【.background information.】
Link
__________________________________________________ Your profile is not approved just yet, but that is because, as you pointed out, it is not finished. As far as your questions -hopes, rather- it is preferred that Nix is not a portaled character. That DOES NOT mean that she cannot be, for sake of her history, but if you intend for her to be portalled I need you to submit her non-combat talent before she is approved, and provide its connection to her history. Please revise the Battle Weaknesses you provided as well. They all contain the words Usually, sometimes or can be, which means that they are not consistent.
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Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2011 9:12 am
_Manpish_ BloodXIben'la Ahad __________________________________________________
【.main info.】
❖ f u l l n a m e: Blood Iben'la Ahad
❖ n i c k n a m e s: BIA, Bloody Red Queen
❖ a g e: 16
❖ b i r t h d a t e: 12/5
❖ g e n d e r: Female
❖ n a t i o n a l i t y:
❖ r a n k: Student
❖ c l a s s: Dark Avenger
❖ t i t l e: N/A
❖ b l o o d l i n e: Human
❖ s p e e d: 7
❖ s t r e n g t h: 6
❖ p l a y e d b y: _Manpish_
__________________________________________________
【.major info.】
❖ e n e r g y c o l o r: Crimson
❖ e n e r g y r e s e r v e: 300
❖ e l e m e n t: Earth
❖ b a t t l e s t r e n g t h:
- Dark Avengers are arguably the finest trackers in the world, capable of smelling, seeing and marking a creature's very soul.
- Dark Avengers gain abilities to confuse, trap and incapacitate their quarry
- Dark Avengers are masters of deception and stealth
- Dark Avengers gain abilities to manipulate shadows and darkness, making their stealth abilities all the more formidable. They also develop the ability to cast shadow glyphs - traps that have different affects based on the glyph.
❖ b a t t l e w e a k n e s s:
- Dark Avengers cannot use Medium or Heavy armor
- Dark Avengers' shadow manipulation abilities are limited to 50 feet in range
- Dark Avengers rely heavily on their Chosen weapons, and this dependency can be exploited
- While Dark Avengers are not inherently evil, the Oaths they have sworn and the rituals they've undertaken make them particularly vulnerable to spells of bright or divine light. Any Dark Avenger caught in the wake of such a spell, regardless of its rank, is blinded and disoriented for one round. Any darkness or shadow related skills in use are dispelled. Any Dark Avenger affected by such a spell that is higher than their rank is disoriented and blinded for 2 posts PLUS the difference between their rank and their opponent's
- Dark Avengers lack the constitution of many melee classes
- Dark Avengers' shadow and darkness related abilities are more difficult to use in well lit environments
- When a Dark Avenger is killed, their Soul is immediately seized by The Shadow World and sucked into its dark abyss. A dead Dark Avenger CANNOT BE RESURRECTED, REVIVED OR OTHERWISE REINCARNATED, EVEN THROUGH DIVINE MEANS, UNLESS THEIR SOUL IS RECLAIMED.
❖ t a l e n t: N/A
__________________________________________________
【.equipment info.】
❖ w e a p o n (s):
- Hidden Blades (1) (Right arm gauntlet)
- Crossbow Bolts (75) ( in holster on back)
- Throwing Knives (20) ( on belt. ten on each side. [like in assassins creed] )
- Dagger (1) (located in a sheath wich is strapped to right thigh)
- Crossbow (1) (strapped to back)
- Smoke bombs (10) (In pouch on belt. located above her left a** cheek)
❖ a r m o r:
- Black shirt (in pic)
- White pants
- White/Red knee length trench coat (in pic)
- White top hat (in pic)
- White gloves (in pic)
- basic leather armor under clothes
__________________________________________________
【.skill roster.】
Class:
E-rank:
- Soul Sense (Passive)
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D-rank:
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C-rank:
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B-rank:
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A-rank:
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Element ~ Earth:
E-rank:
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D-rank:
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C-rank:
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B-rank:
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A-rank:
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Custom Skills:
E-rank:
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D-rank:
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C-rank:
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__________________________________________________
【.character description.】
❖ p e r s o n a l i t y: Blood is pretty insane, she loves the color and taste of blood. But once you get to know her she becomes a more motherly figure and can be very kind and caring.
❖ q u o t e: "I want to make it rain red...."
❖ h e i g h t: 5'4"
❖ w e i g h t: 123lbs
❖ e y e c o l o r: grey
❖ p l a c e o f b i r t h: Devils Eye Desert
❖ t h e m e s o n g:
❖ b a t t l e t h e m e: The 13th Struggle
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【.background information.】
Blood has been an assassin since she was little. The first time she picked up a dagger she knew she wanted to be in the family business. So she joined up and went through very intense training. But of course she did screw up a few assassinations here and there as she got older. As Blood matured she became stronger and better at her work. Eventually she managed to kill eleven people successfully, thus enabling her to be a true assassin in her family. Blood currently lives in the Devils Eye Desert where she is undergoing more training while taking jobs on the side to earn some rep and extra cash.
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[align=center][color=crimson][size=29]B[/size][/color][u][color=grey][size=18]lood[/size][/color][/u] [color=crimson][size=29]I[/size][/color][u][color=grey][size=18]ben'la Ahad[/size][/color][/u][/align]
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[b][size=9][color=maroon]Dark Avenger / Devils Eye Desert / Student / Bloody Red Queen / Energy: 300/300[/color]
[color=grey] Hidden Blade (1) / Dagger (1) / Crossbow Bolts: 75/75 / Throwing Knives: 20/20 / Smoke Bombs: 10/10 [/size][/color][/b]
[size=9]--------------------------------------------[color=grey][i]"You think you can escape me.."[/color][/i]-------------------------------------------[/size] [/align]
[align=center][size=9][color=crimson] text here [/color][/size][/align]
[align=center][size=9]-----------------------------[color=crimson][i]"..But your fate has already been sealed.. There is no escape.."[/color][/i]----------------------------------[/size][/align]
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Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2011 10:40 am
Alright, currently thinking of a non-combat talent. Is this better for battle weaknesses? I took out the problem words. Although, I also added words like "except for" so I'm not sure if I just ended up going around in a circle sweatdrop . ❖ b a t t l e w e a k n e s s e s: (excluding things pertaining to talents and such) •Naivety (too trusting except for when her cunning judges that something is definitely wrong) •Passive (avoids fights; hesitant to attack for permanent damage) •Merciful (forgiveness is always given unless it makes no logical sense, examples include repeat offenders and those who performed a completely unforgiveable act like killing just to kill)
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Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2011 11:10 am
Kagetsukiko Alright, currently thinking of a non-combat talent. Is this better for battle weaknesses? I took out the problem words. Although, I also added words like "except for" so I'm not sure if I just ended up going around in a circle sweatdrop . ❖ b a t t l e w e a k n e s s e s: (excluding things pertaining to talents and such) •Naivety (too trusting except for when her cunning judges that something is definitely wrong) •Passive (avoids fights; hesitant to attack for permanent damage) •Merciful (forgiveness is always given unless it makes no logical sense, examples include repeat offenders and those who performed a completely unforgiveable act like killing just to kill) Cunning's dictionary definition is, "skill employed in a shrewd or sly manner, as in deceiving; craftiness; guile." or "adeptness in performance; dexterity:", neither of which particularly applies to being trusting sensing someone's. The reason those words and casual exceptions to the rule need to be removed is because it's not really a full weakness. Just for example, it would be like saying Superman's weakness is sometimes Kryptonite, except when there's a full moon. Perhaps you meant Instinct? Also, if one weakness is Mericful and Naivety is another, why wouldn't she let repeat offenders go and someone who kills for pleasure? They could say "But please madame, I can change my ways! I'll never be able to forget or forgive what I've done. I shall serve the Gods now!" Or even convince her that they are doing it for a good reason.
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