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honestly, yes. i dont mean to sound harsh, but your technique needs work

dont worry. it all comes with time, also, an excercise i could suggest: ( i do this all the time) think in your head, like you are narrating what you are doing. or if you see something that catches your eye, try thinking it out in your head, like how you would write it.

like just now i would think in my head "Adrinix sat idly at his computer. It was a pretty boring night. The cold winds outside were drowned out by the music from his mp3 player."

but dont force yourself to do it, just whenever it happens go for it

Good start~ writing is pretty difficult x.x at least, I find it kind of hard >.>; but Adrinix definitely gave you great critique so I'm sure you'll head down the path of awesomeness soon enough biggrin

lol nice!

The dark elf skin is kinda cool ... but I'm a bit antsy to get it off again.

Gaia's assured people in the event info that their current skins will be returned once the event's over ... so I hope that extends to special skins Liiiike the 2005 grombie skin I've been wearing since the event. gonk I don't want to lose it!

i like me dark elf self lol

If we don't get to keep the skins, I'll be bummed. I love the zombie skin. The dark elf skin reminds me of smurfs. Way too blue for me. I'd have preferred more gray sweatdrop Which reminds me... mebbe I'll swap back to dark elf for a little bit and see if I can cosplay as a smurf xp

There's a serum in Skin Tyte that changes Grombies back into grombies if they turned themselves into something else for whatever reason biggrin Doesn't work on anyone else, though. Which sucks. I wanted to be a grombie, lol!