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 Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 6:43 pm
[ooc:] Darling, don't worry! ^^ We're all at least 13 here, so we should practically be used to this language. xD
Stonepaw yawned slightly, looking at her paws for a second. She growled, quickly biting a flea that was crawling through her pelt. She spat in anger. Disgusting....
Her ears perked at a scent. Blood....?! She hissed, quickly padding out of the apprentice den There, in the center of the clearing was a chipper Guardiankit, covered in blood. She hissed in shock, padding over to the kit. She nosed him a few times, checking for wounds. She growled. Guardiankit, what were you doing out of camp, you mousebrain?!" she demanded. To her suprise though, there was no wounds. She paused for a moment, sniffing him cautiously. "Whose blood is this?" she asked carefully.
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 7:27 pm
((When I read this I was gunna cry D8 omg Guardiankit! Time for Envykitness 83 Ille dit if it isn't right and yay FATHOM GUARDIANKIT AND LEOPARDSTORM WOOOOH SO AWESOME! also wait I can't edit, my cp wont let me quiote delete or edit ;-; *tear* so if u dun like meh posts just edit them with meh permission ^-^ <3)) ♥Envykit ஆ ***~ஆ¤♥ღ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ღ♥ஆ¤~*** ((I hope this isn't controlling Guardiankit, its a dream okie Timber? Ily ^^ and lol Ana 83)) [My eyes danced
like little blue pools of happiness as I trotted around a big tree
with Guardiankit, my jaw healed and he was happy, ((I plan on
letting Envykit's jaw heal maybe....she is suppose to be really
pretty not difigured lol ^^)) we both chased eachother,
landing in a pile of crunching gold leaves.] "Guardiankit this is
so fun! I wish everyday can be like this." [There was no
answer from the stone colored tom, I tilted my head, my smile vanished with
cunfusion by his lack of words, instead he looked like a statue
in winter.] "Guardiankit?.....you there? What's wrong?" [I
trembled as my eyes glanced at the large tree, it was crumbling
into little unprotected ashes, the whole peaceful world
shook into forgotten dust, I screeched as I looked at
Guardiankit frantically.] "Guaridankit wh-what's happeneing,
speak to me!" [Instead he collapsed into a limp pile of gray fur, blood
seeping from all directions as if he let out a soft goodbye, I
wailed with fury as I woke up from the
nightmare.] "GUARDIANKIT!" [I blinked back strange liquid pools
that streaked my face, my eyes like cracked ice as I looked around the cold den with agony.] ***~ஆ¤♥ღ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ღ♥ஆ¤~*** Fallen feathers...are as silent as death...
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 7:54 pm
Pinekit
(When I have the patience to stand my computers slowww computing, I shall find my posting stuff. )
[I stared grimly ahead of me. Every other thing was oblivious to me. Probably to caught up with their own problems. I let out a huff of a hair, and bounced away a few steps. Looking up at the trees seemed to give me a relazing sensation, just as a small cry of agony emitted from Envykit.]
[Flattening my ears, I padded farther away. If she didn't see me, then I wouldn't see her.] "No sirree" [I chuckled darkly to myself. I drew myself away from the crowd that seemed to be forming around camp, a cry of joy or pain --I couldn't tell- bouncing off the trees every minute. What ever. If they wanted to have a pity party, leave me out. I strutted away.]
-First sign of rebellion >8D. Next will be war paint and his bad humor-
Ducky
[Ducky's eyes popped open, her heart quickening it's pace. It knew it was going to need it. She looked around, the long nap had wiped away the weariness , so her body was bouncing with the potential energy.]
[She quickly nudged Marcy, urging her to get up.] "Let's play. Let's do sumthin'" [She murmured, nosing Marcy with more gusto.]
Blaze
[He gave a brisk glance at his crew. The scars of the few who were harmed, now bare, rough patches of skin. Their faces were filled with a charming sort of malice. 'Good.' He grinned, pointy teeth glistening. 'Always said that rage makes you fight blindly. Worked for me.']
[He betrayed nothing of his attitufe as he strut up to his pack.] "I think..." [He began, cocking his head to the side and grinning with amusement.] "I think that we should patrol some more. After all. We don't want whatever's out there-" [He flicked his ears toward the faint cry that had been heard awhile ago.] "Having all the fun."
[Small grins cracked upon all of the band's faces, a couple having full blown grins in humor of what Blaze had said.]
[Blaze slipped his way through the needles, and turned back grinning.] "Shall we go?" [He teased before sliding off, the band hot on his heels.]
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 8:56 am
 MarcyXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXI had a d r e a m my l i f e would be
So d i f f e r e n t from this h e l l I'm living
So d i f f e r e n t now from what it s e e m e d
Now life has k i l l e d the dream I d r e a m e dXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXNightclan Kit[Marcy sat up abruptly. She blinked and shook her fur, fluffing it out.] "Okay!" [she said, kneading the ground. Then she remembered.] "Eh. I'm not allowed to leave the nursery yet." [she muttered with a sigh.] "So let's do something in here." ▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 2:43 pm
 x x x▃▃▃ ▃▃ ▃ xxxONE MORExxDAY BEFORExxTHE STORMxxAT THExxBARRICADES OFxxFREEDOMx x x▃▃▃ ▃▃ ▃ xxxWHEN OURxxRANKS BEGINxxTO FORMxxWILL YOUxxTAKE YOURxxPLACE WITHxxMEx x x▃▃▃ ▃▃ ▃xxxTHE TIMExxIS NOWxxTHE DAYxxIS HERE╔════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════╗ ℰaℊℓℯsℴarXX┼XXNiℊℎtcℓanXX┼XXWarriℴrXX┼XXPrℴud, ℒℴyaℓ, Aℳbitiℴus ╚════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════╝  ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂x x x (Leo: No worries, I think you'll be VERY surprised if you hear how many times I say the "F" word in a day XD)
[Eaglesoar's eyes widened as he saw the bloodied Guardiankit return to camp. Was he injured? By what? If so, what could have done this...and why was he still walking normally? Seeing that other cats had gotten the situation under control already, he thought that in his injured state he probably would be no help anyway.]
Now...where's that Vanillapaw? Run off somewhere? About time to start training with her... ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂x x x
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 3:05 pm
(( Thanks guys, but it wasn't the type of language I was concerned about. It was whether Leopard should say it or not, since it's a foreign word to cats. xD And Zann: Actually, I never swear. Not at all. But since I went to school in California, it was sooo friggin' bad it wasn't even funny. Every other word was some swear word, I just wanted to strangle the people! xDD ))
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Leopardstreak Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 3:14 pm
(Well, true, cats don't really know what a b*****d is, but oh well XD
*hides* I think I'll be one of those people you'd want to strangle XD The number of times I say "FML" or "f**k this s**t" in a day is uncountable... *cowers*
I WILL DELETE THIS POST LATER TO HIDE IT FROM...very nice people who refuse to swear. Which definitely is not me.)
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 3:21 pm
 BRAMBLEFIRE Starclan, forever my enemy... ((Actually, I babysit for a job so.. Yeah.. Anyways when I was in 5th grade I was cursing way too much.. Then I stopped..))
[Bramblefire then exited the abandoned warriors den. He padded up to his brother.]"Wow, Darkshadow is stupid. He fell for it! He fell for it!"[Bramblefire got all excited.] But the dark forest, forever be my friend...
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ll oceanic_shimmer ll Crew
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 3:44 pm
x x x▃▃▃ ▃▃ ▃ xxxONE MORExxDAY BEFORExxTHE STORMxxAT THExxBARRICADES OFxxFREEDOMx x x▃▃▃ ▃▃ ▃ xxxWHEN OURxxRANKS BEGINxxTO FORMxxWILL YOUxxTAKE YOURxxPLACE WITHxxMEx x x▃▃▃ ▃▃ ▃xxxTHE TIMExxIS NOWxxTHE DAYxxIS HERE╔════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════╗ ℰaℊℓℯsℴarXX┼XXNiℊℎtcℓanXX┼XXWarriℴrXX┼XXPrℴud, ℒℴyaℓ, Aℳbitiℴus ╚════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════╝ ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂x x x [Eaglesoar looked at Bramblefire in mock surprise, sarcasm dancing in his green hues.]
"Wow, wonders of wonders, he was actually as stupid as you? I can't believe you'd actually try that...still, at least there's someone more mousebrained than you, which is good to know I suppose."
[He raised one paw and lightly cuffed Bramblefire over the ear, giving him a gentle reminder not to get ahead of himself and jump into trouble again.]
(He's like the big tough brother who tries to act mean but is actually really nice XD) ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂x x x
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 4:19 pm
Ducky
"Of course!" [Ducky chirped, blinking out a few stray rays of light.] "Whadda you wanna do today?" [She asked skeptically, twiddling her claws. She stuck out her tongue at the outside world. 'That's for making Marcy sigh!' ] "It's awfully bright out anyway. It would just hurt our eyes. It's better in here, where we. Can remain with good sight." [She stated this out promptly, before settling down. She returned to the question.] "So.... Whadda you wanna do today?"
I think she would have the ability to say it, no matter if it's foreign... But that's the past I guess.
I replace those words with freaking potato or something. What the marbles. Honey Sugar Iced Tea.
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 4:58 pm
MarcyXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXI had a d r e a m my l i f e would be
So d i f f e r e n t from this h e l l I'm living
So d i f f e r e n t now from what it s e e m e d
Now life has k i l l e d the dream I d r e a m e dXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXNightclan Kit [Marcy raised her shoulders in a shrug. (?) Then she jumped up, her tail waggling.] "You wanna practice our fighting moves? We want to be ready for when we become apprentices!" [She crouched down, stalking towards a leaf. She stopped in front of it, her tail high. She raised a paw and slapped it down on the leaf, creating a funny sound. Marcy giggled.] "Hey Ducky! Try this!" [she squealed, slapping the leaf with her paw again.] ▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 4:59 pm
 The dark thought of ones mind... ☾Shadow☾ +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ [Shadow padded away from Eaglesoar who was now talking to someone else. H padded to the edge and Nightclan and looked down at his paws. He felt weak being in this cat body, but he forgot he was apart of Brokensoul. Shadow let out a low growl as Brokensoul began to take over.] So you overpowered me huh? Hehheh...well good luck with all the death in Nightclan... Shadow thought slyly as he began to lose control.]
[Brokensoul took a deep breath as he fell back in control again, he was happy. He felt confused with what Shadow said before he took over. Brokensoul shook the thought away and padded over to Eaglesoar, even though Shadow had already talked to him. He meowed questioningly.] ["What's going on? Everyone seems on edge lately..." [Brokensoul wrapped his tail around his paws, waiting for Eaglesoar to respond.]+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ can change you...
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ll oceanic_shimmer ll Crew
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 5:02 pm
BRAMBLEFIRE Starclan, forever my enemy... "Eh.. Don't worry.. It won't happen again.. Maybe."[Bramblefire had said the 'maybe' to himself. He hoped his brother hadn't heard him.]"And still, easy on the ear!"
((Sorry about the late reply.. I had write a reewaaalllllyyyy long essay.. Plus, I hear a wolf howling..)) But the dark forest, forever be my friend...
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 5:21 pm
Ducky
"Perfect!" [Ducky grinned and ducked down low with Marcy, her position practically identical to her friend's.] "Kay, I'm going in!" [She cried, going low down, as she slowly stalked a vibrant red leaf. One. Two. Three. Ducky let out an excited whimper as she *whomped* down onto the lead, it's weak exterior crumbling into a million pieces.] "This is so....Great a awesomeish!" [Ducky purred, stumbling over her words.] "Again?"
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Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2010 6:17 pm
S i l e n t k i t
[Silentkit glanced up as her father yowled and opened her mouth to speak but he beat her to it. What did he mean? What way had he found? She wnated to ask him but Fathom had already left her side. The white kit let out a gasp and tried to follow him, but she couldn't make it to her feet no matter how hard she tried.] "No! Daddy come back! Don't leave me!" she cried, still trying to stand. [Where had he gone? What if he was gone forever? He didn't even say goodbye, just like her mother! Had she done soemthing wrong? But she was going to help him, she just needed to know how! He couldn't just leave her here! Silentkit buried her head into her pelt, letting out soft cries. She was alone, all alone. Gaurdiankit was too busy with Envykit and Sunkit was off somewhere with Rainkit. Who did she have? Silentkit closed her eyes and tried to fall asleep.]
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