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 Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 3:13 pm
xXAnachronIsmEpsIceXx [ooc:] Wow, very convincing...... v.v Cinderwing smiled slightly. He shrugged. "I dunno. It just sounded like something to say, I guess," He meowed, looking at his paws. He paused for a few moments before sighing. "Well, I huess I'm thankful for you comforting me during my grievings for Shatteredfang and Birchshadow's deaths, and.......I dn't know," he meowed, looking up. He smiled. A voice made his ears twitch. Was that......Rainkit?! He hissed slightly, turning around. He called out. "Rainkit!" he yowled, careful not to screech in his....wait, Hauntedheart's ear. His tail twitched uneasily. ((Yeah I know. I deserve a grammy! biggrin ))
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 4:09 pm
 x x x▃▃▃ ▃▃ ▃ xxxONE MORExxDAY BEFORExxTHE STORMxxAT THExxBARRICADES OFxxFREEDOMx x x▃▃▃ ▃▃ ▃ xxxWHEN OURxxRANKS BEGINxxTO FORMxxWILL YOUxxTAKE YOURxxPLACE WITHxxMEx x x▃▃▃ ▃▃ ▃xxxTHE TIMExxIS NOWxxTHE DAYxxIS HERE╔════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════╗ ℰaℊℓℯsℴarXX┼XXNiℊℎtcℓanXX┼XXWarriℴrXX┼XXPrℴud, ℒℴyaℓ, Aℳbitiℴus ╚════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════╝  ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂x x x (LOL Bramblefire's post made me laugh XD)
[Eaglesoar followed Bramblefire slowly behind, limping as he dragged himself back to camp. He passed by the elder's den, only to catch snatches of Bramblefire's "attempted" Starclan conversation with Darkshadow.]
Mousebrain! Who's going to fall for that?
[However, when Darkshadow merely agreed, Eaglesoar relaxed. At least he now knew that the enemy Bramblefire was dealing with was at least as stupid as him. Which wasn't a bad thing, he guessed.] ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂ ▂▂ ▂ ▂▂ ▂▂▂x x x
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 4:34 pm
"I'll protect you until my last breath, and forevermore!"♋ G υ α я ɖ ɨ α и ӄ ɨ ʈ ♋ "Memory is the treasury
and guardian of all things."_______________________________________________ [Guardiankit opened his jaw, slightly stunned at his mother's astoundingly comforting words. It was strange, to witness the love of a spirit-cat, because at the same time she was feeling them, he was too. They were radiating off of her like beams from the sun, melting into his fur and filling him with unimaginable depth and clarity, and even redemption.
But there was something. Something there, forcing him down as a large boulder would crush him. He shuddered, and his big silver eyes grew round, a strange look coming into him.]
He let out a sort of choking sound, flinching a bit, before croaking, "But I killed you. I killed you, I killed you, I KILLED YOU!"
[Guardiankit shreeked, his eyes rolling in the back of his head. He fell to the floor, his mouth open in an etheral scream of pain. He threw his head back, letting out a silent wail of agony, before making a mad dash out of the medicine cat den towards the entrance.
He flew through the marsh, his paws drumming the mushy underground. His feet were fast and swift, and they did not betray him as he shot through the slop that was called NightClan. His breathing was labored, his eyes were wide, and he completely forgot about the mysterious monsters that had attacked his clanmates.]
((ROHKAY. uh. I forget who's attacking NightyClan, but Guardiankit needs to be attacked. CCC:
IF YOU FOLLOW HIM, prease lose him, or fall far behind him or something. D: Give him time to be attacked. I don't want to reveal what's about to happen. ;3 ))
_______________________________________________ I will repent for what I've done to you
my love, and we shall live anew
. : as the seasons give new life upon the world! : .
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 4:50 pm
   M a l e // F a t h e r // h a l f - d e a d L e a d e r / o f / N i g h t C l a n // L i v i n g S p i r i t // C u r s e d
[Fathom looked down at his daughter, his crimson eyes glittering with pain. He opened his mouth to answer her when a sudden searing pain shot through him. His eyes widened and he opened his jaw in surprise.
It felt as if his chest was caving in on him. The heart that he had that should have never existed beat wildly in his chest.
He choked a bit, staggering on his feet, and suddenly felt as if something was rapidly sucking away at him again. He let out a yowl of agony that only his daughter could hear.
Suddenly, he snapped his head back up. As he did so, his figure immediatly dimmed to the point where he was emitting no light at all and was more of a shadowy figure than a glowing spirit.
His eyes swept over to the clearing, wildly searching for the source of whatever just happened. He saw something streaking out of camp, and he suddenly felt the irresistable urge to chase after it.]
"I think," he whispered, panting, "I may have found a way, Silentkit."
[He shot forward without a further goodbye, his entire being set on catching that streak of gray. As he ran, each time his paws touched the ground, sparks flew from them in short, bright bursts. He bounded out of the nursery, his beautiful metallic pelt shimmering in the light.
Then he caught sight of a figure that almost stopped him in his tracks.
It was Leopardstorm. Her image sent chills through him, and the world seemed to slow down as he ran past her. But he did not stop to speak with her, or even glance at her-he only noticed her because he had to fly past her to follow the thing that had run away. As he passed, her warm scent hit him like a soft cloud. As he passed, he felt his fur rise in longing anticipation. As he passed, he felt his pelt softly sweep past hers, touching ever so gently against the tips of her fur.
This small touch almost crippled him in joyful pain, but he ran on, unable to fight the need to catch the thing he was chasing.
So he ran, his paws sending up strange sparks that only his daughter or another spirit could see, and his long limbs stretching their farthest to catch whatever was running away. ]  
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 5:21 pm
  ~ Let me d e v o u r you ~
Rip your life into meaningless shreds ................................................................................................................................................................................................. Lash
Destroy everything that you are!................................................................................................................................................................................................. Ominous
...But time is falling fast away
as the night turns into day
yet when the day turns into night
I will relinquish every light-
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(( For those who don't know, Blood is now wearing a fox skull on his face like a mask and has the teeth of animals covering his claws. He is mimicking BloodClan. |D ))
[Blood slinked into NightClan, his silvery pelt gently blowing in the cold breeze. He snickered, his crimson eyes glowing from the eyeholes of the skull like orbs of hatred.]
"Daddy's home," he whispered, letting out a sadistic grin.
[He quickly continued on his way, searching for trouble.]
*************
[Blood leapt up into a scraggly tree, his dark pelt melting in with the bark. However, the ivory-white bones glinted conspicuously in the light. He delved deeper into the branches, hiding as best he could.
Guardiankit came pelting into the clearing, his fur fluffed out and his eyes wide. He looked around wildly, gasping for air.
Oh no...I forgot all about those creatures that have been attacking us! What if I get hurt?! If big warriors like Tigerfang and Eaglesoar were hurt so easily, what'll become of me--?!
He plopped down at the roots of the scraggly tree, whimpering. He sniffled a little, feeling lost.
From up above him, the voice of Blood called out.]
"What are you doing all alone, little one?"
[Guardiankit looked up into the tree, his silver eyes wide with surprise.] ____________________________________________________________________________________
-slice you, dice you, on the stones
laugh and play with your bones
and when the sun chases me away
once more will come the day... I kill without any logical rhyme or reason....................................................................................................................................................................................................Obfuscate
I target everything that moves.................................................................................................................................................................................................Demon
I will destroy your entire world!...............................................................................................................................................................................................☣~ A little t a s t e is all it takes ~
6 more chances, fools...
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 5:29 pm
[ooc:] Dang, Timber, you got creative! =D I love his posting style! It's all like....awesome! And I love how you incorporate how many lives he has left in with it. (Mhmm, that's right! I was observant!)
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 5:32 pm
"I'll protect you until my last breath, and forevermore!"♋ G υ α я ɖ ɨ α и ӄ ɨ ʈ ♋ "Memory is the treasury
and guardian of all things."_______________________________________________
[There was pain.
Everywhere.
Seeping pain that collected under me like a burning fire.
It stuck to my fur and stained my pelt, flowing out of me like an unimaginable river.
I coughed a bit, feeling my last breaths wheezing out of me. My heart was softly beating, almost non-existant.
I opened my eyes, for they had been squeezed together in terror.
I looked into the eyes of the creature that had done this to me. They were deep crimson pools of glee and malice.]
"What are you?" I gurgled through the pain that was filling my mouth, and lungs.
[The creature cackled and leaned back, for it had been leaning over me, slowly dissecting me, prodding me with its unfathomably sharp claws and watching me scream in pain.]
It winked at me, a sadistic grin across its face, and said with blood-stained teeth, "My name is Blood."
[He leaned close again, sticking his face into mine.]
"Oh dear, you're bleeding so much for such a small kit!! How does all that blood fit into your tiny body? What's your secret?"
[He stared at me, seemingly interested. I spat in his face, rage building, but coughed again as more pain seeped out. I realized the pain was blood.
I was losing it fast.]
Shaking his head, he said, "How rude! Too bad I don't know the secrets that fill your beautiful blood. It would make it all the more delicious."
[I stared into his face. How could a creature have the face of a skull...? That was when I realized he was wearing a skull. So....what was underneath?
He shook his head roughly a few times, his skull flying off to reveal a hauntingly familiar face. I realized he smalled vaugely familiar. He smelled like Silentkit, like Sunkit...like me.]
"I'll tell you a secret," he whispered, glee filling his face. "I'm your father."
[I choked. My eyes widened in disbelief.
Leaning in closer, he uttered the words that rooted into my spirit like a diseased seed.]
"I killed Leopardstorm."
[I let out an enraged caterwaul. Somehow, I was suddenly able to move my mutilated body to lunge at him. I tore three deep scars into his eyes, ripping through his skin easily. He let out a cry of pain and snarled, leaping at me as I fell back down.
There was an explosion of pain on the back of my neck, and I felt a loud snapping sound resonate throughout my body.
And then there was silence.
Long, deep, agonizing silence.
And then there was a strange sensation that swept through me. It was almost as if I was being PUSHED out of my body.
I flew up. Up somewhere high, and far away from pain, agony, and...
Envykit.
I couldn't believe the she-kit was still on my mind, but just the thought of leaving her alone filled me with worry. However, I rushed upwards, hoping StarClan would welcome me with open hearts.]
(( RP'ing as Guardiankit in first person. I thought he deserved it, since this is his death post. )) _______________________________________________ I will repent for what I've done to you
my love, and we shall live anew
. : as the seasons give new life upon the world! : .
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 5:37 pm
 Dream as if
you'll live forever,
live as if you'll
die today
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx ȘTARҟCLOUD
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxWorry about your character,
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxnot your reputation because
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxyour character is who you
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxare & your reputation is
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxwhat cat's think you are
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[I padded around sniffing for Rainkit.
I would apologize for worrying Darkshadow.
I shouldn't have snapped like that.
But what he would want is for his kit to be found.]
"Rainkit?!!"
[I called]
"RAAAAIIIINNNNKITTT!!!!"
[I yowled louder.]xxx
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Nobody can go back and start a new beginning, but anyone can start today and make a new ending
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I want someone to love me
For who I am
I want someone to need me
Is that so bad
I wanna break our madness
But it's all I have
I want someone to love me
For who I am
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 5:41 pm
M a l e // F a t h e r // h a l f - d e a d L e a d e r / o f / N i g h t C l a n // L i v i n g S p i r i t // C u r s e d
[Fathom shot after the figure, but it was too fast. He felt his paws weakening. He stopped, gasping for air. Then he staggered forward, wondering why he was losing energy.
Then, somehow, he realized something.
I'm dying, he thought incredulously.
He staggered forward, desperately, as if he had to reach something. Quickly. Ever so quickly. Before it was too late...
Finally, the spirit-cat dragged his body towards the creature he'd been chasing. He recognized it as his mutilated son. He saw Blood peering over him, and felt rage seep through him.
But something happened. Blood whispered something, and Guardiankit-Fathom recognized his son now perfeclty-shot up at Blood. Blood screeched and shot forward, and Fathom realized he was about to deliver a kill-bite to the kit's neck.]
"NO!!!!" he screeched, lunging forward.
There was a moment of sudden silence.
And then he felt something sucking at him again. Pulling him forward. He screamed as he was sucked down, down...
And then he slammed into something small, furry, and extremely agonizing.]
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 5:52 pm
"It's too much to bear, but I've been given a second chance."♋ G υ α я ɖ ɨ α и ӄ ɨ ʈ ♋ "Memory is the treasury
and guardian of all things."_______________________________________________
[There was pain.
Everywhere.
That was the first thing Guardiankit remembered when he woke up.
He felt like it had been moons. He slowly opened his eyes, letting out a moan. There was blood everywhere-it stuck to his pelt and pooled under him.
He looked down, confused. Where was the blood coming from? He had no wounds...
He looked up. There was the figure of a bloody cat staring at him in horror. Guardiankit stood on shaky legs, wobbling a bit.]
"U-Uhm, sir? You...you're bleeding, I think."
[The cat screamed, backing away from him in fear.]
"NO!" it hissed wildly, "stay back, you-you-DEMON!"
[Guardiankit froze, aghast.]
"There's no way you can be alive! I killed you! I killed you! I KILLED YOU!"
[Guardiankit tilted his head. Those words seemed familiar. But he shook his head, disregarding the thought.]
"Uh, sorry mister, but you're crazy," he muttered, beginning to walk away on shaky legs, feeling like it was all a dream.
The other cat began to rock, seemingly terrified, and moaned, "I cut you, I slashed you, I sliced you into ruby ribbons...and you just...got up and walked away..."
[The cat shuttered. Guardiankit quickened his pace, swiftly moving away.
*******
Blood rocked on his paws, his eyes wide.
So. That...was not supposed...
Suddenly, he realizd what had happened. He shook his head frustratedly.
Curse you, StarClan!
He quickly began to leave, then turned his head, calling after the kit he really had killed.]
"It's gonna be hard to have to start over as a kit again. But I think you'll manage it...won't you, Fathom?"
***********
[Guardiankit glanced back at the cat. Fathom. It was a cool name, but it had nothing to do with him, so he just snorted and walked away, stepping with renewed vigor. The other cat quickly ran away, and Guardiankit disregarded him for a loony.
Around his pelt were areas where the fur was cut, almost as if it had been shaved off during a gruesome battle. But, where the scars should have been, pale white skin rested instead, stained with blood that should have come from the wound if it had been there.
Guardiankit was unaware of these "invisible" scars, and padded cheerfully into camp, also ignorant of his bloody state.] _______________________________________________ I will repent for what I've done to you
my love, and we shall live anew
. : as the seasons give new life upon the world! : .
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 5:59 pm
xXAnachronIsmEpsIceXx [ooc:] Dang, Timber, you got creative! =D I love his posting style! It's all like....awesome! And I love how you incorporate how many lives he has left in with it. (Mhmm, that's right! I was observant!) (( Luls thanks. Blood's post took me an hour to code. ;; YOU SNEAKY FOX. ;D RUH RUH, I feel bad RP'ing with myself, but i suddenly had abrilliant idea, so i just RP'd until someone interrupted, which nobody did..so I kept going till I finished. LUL <333 I tried ta make it obviously obvious what happened. >< OH YEAH, for those whodontknow, Fathom was actually a really important figure to the Clans. He was suppsoed to be the evilly evil villain like Tigerstar, but I ended up fallin in love with him, and wanting him to be good, resulting in the "second evil soul" thing. |D But for those who may be wondering, he is in actuality a main character for the storyline who will also come into play in the second series. ;3 That's why there's so much intricate importance to him. I normally try not to make my characters more important than members' characters. ;; The whole Galestar becoming leader thing was a fluke that I did not plan. xD" okay rant over. D: OH WAIT BTW LEO, Leopardstorm can recognize a change in Guardiankit. ;3 And when she returns to StarClan, she'll find someone waiting for her... D: ))
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 6:13 pm
((I'm reaaallllyyy confused.. Did Guardiankit die, and then Fathom took over his body? Or is Guardiankit still alive and Fathoms a ghost cat.))
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 6:18 pm
ll oceanic_shimmer ll ((I'm reaaallllyyy confused.. Did Guardiankit die, and then Fathom took over his body? Or is Guardiankit still alive and Fathoms a ghost cat.)) ((Guardiankit is dead and Fathom is in his body. biggrin Unfortunately, since Guardiankit's body is still alive, he's in the same state as his father was. ;; He isn't technically dead... But he's allowed into StarClan because a) he didn't practically kill his mate/unsuccessfully prevent her death and b) he's too little to feel like StarClan won't accept him. Fathom's own guilt kept him from StarClan, but Guardiankit's pure, unstained belief and faith in StarClan grants him access to them. But only from a distance. >> He's never fully in StarClan, just in their borders. Like stuck in Limbo, but he can travel farther than Fathom can. |D He can go fully into StarClan, but he can't live there. asdadfadsf explanation. o3o))
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 6:22 pm
Winged Timberwolf ll oceanic_shimmer ll ((I'm reaaallllyyy confused.. Did Guardiankit die, and then Fathom took over his body? Or is Guardiankit still alive and Fathoms a ghost cat.)) ((Guardiankit is dead and Fathom is in his body. biggrin Unfortunately, since Guardiankit's body is still alive, he's in the same state as his father was. ;; He isn't technically dead... But he's allowed into StarClan because a) he didn't practically kill his mate/unsuccessfully prevent her death and b) he's too little to feel like StarClan won't accept him. Fathom's own guilt kept him from StarClan, but Guardiankit's pure, unstained belief and faith in StarClan grants him access to them. But only from a distance. >> He's never fully in StarClan, just in their borders. Like stuck in Limbo, but he can travel farther than Fathom can. |D He can go fully into StarClan, but he can't live there. asdadfadsf explanation. o3o)) ((Awww D': Al that happened while I was babysitting? Stupid job.. Yay for Guardiankit! And Fathom.))
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Leopardstreak Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 6:31 pm
 "You believe those seeking the truth, but doubt those who find it. ________________________________________ (( Mkay, so Guardiankit is nao StarClan? Jus' makin' sure! ))
[Leopardstorm took a startled step backwards, then vigourously shook her head. She opened her jaws to answer when her beloved kit pelted away, and she was about to dash after him when- when. . . When she felt it. The spark of exhiliration when a battle started. The spark of seeing her kits. The excitement. The adrenaline. A feeling that was so far long gone in the darkest depths of her soul was reignited. Love, for the first time since she had died, she felt love again. But she hadn't seen what exactly had sparked it, yet she wanted to. But that would have to wait. Leopardstorm had other business.]
[The golden bengal set her jaw, and pelted out of camp, her starry paws carrying her so fast it was as if she was flying. Her silver eyes cold, her ears flat, she ran through the forest, avoiding trees and bushes. She couldn't stay long- she had to get back to StarClan. She pushed onward, and stopped abruptly when she smelt blood. Her blood. The blood that Blood had spilled in her, the blood that had wrenched her heart more than anything else could. But there was something else. Someone's else's scent in it too. Something vaguely familiar, something sweet. . .]
[ Fathom. It was Fathom. Not Blood, but Fathom. Her mate, her true love. Sudden realization hit her. It wasn't Fathom who killed her- it was all Blood. The trace of kindness was replaced by coldness and cruelty in those malicious crimson orbs. Fathom had broken free of Blood before he killed her. The she-cat was wrong all along! Leopardstorm realized that it was Fathom's pelt that had sparked the feeling. He had been there all along!]
[Leopardstorm broke through the bushes, skidding on freshly spilt blood. Her silver eyes widened in horror as she spotted the mutilated body of her son, and her silver eyes hardened in cold malice as she spotted Blood. She stalked forward, her silver eyes cold and heartless, the same as when she had seen Blood's eyes for the last time. She growled, her starry pelt lightened in he moonlight. She circled, her lips pulled back into a snarl.]
"Blood. My, my, you're back. And I see you haven't varied your killing methods. Mutilated me, mutilated my son. What are you trying to gain? StarClan will never accept you. And the Dark Forest? You're too mangy and cruel to even make it there. I'm guessing you're to be abandoned between worlds, which is exactly what you deserve, you foxhearted b*****d," Leopardstorm spat, using a word that she had seen Twolegs use, and recogized it by sound. She knew Twolegs seemed to take offense to it, but what about cats?
[Leopardstorm could see the fear in Blood's eyes. But it was there even before she had showed up. She was going to go to the limits to kill this cat. Whatever the limit be, she would push it. He took her mate. He took her son. He took her life. He took her kits' father AND mother from them. How much more heartbreak could this cat cause?]
(( I'm not sure about the whole 'b*****d' thing. Let me know if you guys don't like it, and I will change it immediately. C: )) ________________________________________  
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