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 Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2005 12:10 am
I liked the poems...Shadow's made me cry...maybe I'll post some..when I start writing them again..which should be soon. More peoms....poems! xd
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Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2005 5:01 am
O.o;; A lot of these poems are very depressing...
^^;; What ever happened to happy poems, or the works of art about natural wonders of the likes? Pfft, down the drain... sad It saddens me to see that this day an' age is so revolved on the pain and suffering of life. Rather than the good things at hand.
crying Poor people...
Humans have become so absorbed in their own loneliness and supposed "heartbreak" that they're blinded of the happiest things in life. In a sense, everyone is so... I odn't know how to say... I guess, so self-centered, they have to be with someone to make themself feel good... I mean I understand the pain that one can feel when a break up occurs, or losing on friend... But seriously, it shouldn't hurt as bad as most... Teenagers make it out to be. Lighten y'all. ^^;
There is happiness in everything, you've got to open your eyes to find it. And it's that sadness, pain, misery, and other negativity that are shielding you from seeing that.
=( I hope you people can try to find the inspiration to write happy things... Then I'd be so proud. ^^ I'd come online and read the poems everyday... heart
If Kuja were confident in his poems, he'd so post some up here for you all to see... 3nodding
^^ It'd make you cry with joy...
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Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2005 6:02 am
Heaven On Earth
Take my hand
And with it take my pain.
I've never felt this happy,
Never felt this sane.
I never thought, for one minute
That I'd deserve you.
But, in our brief spell together
You've shown me that I do.
You've taken me so far into ecstasy
So far from the fear.
And all you've had to do,
Is simply be near.
I didn't know I was lost,
Until you found me,
And I didn't know how much pain I was in,
Until you healed me.
You've seen parts of me
Others never see.
The hate, the pain, the fear, the loss.
You've seen me.
And still you love me.
Well, I love you too.
Heaven on Earth is real.
Heaven on Earth is you.
A nice Poem Just for Kujamaru (Well, It was written for my partner... but you know what I mean!).
It's just easier, I guess to write about sorrow and pain. Poetry also serves for an outlet of negative feelings so, usually poetry can be negative.
I'll root out some of my happier stuff for you all! wink
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Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2005 6:09 am
Distorted Image
In silence I can feel my mind trying to break free.
trying to tell me something.
I cannot hear it.
I cannot hear anything but it's distant murmur.
Words that are no longer legible to my ears.
A message?
Perhaps.
I cannot tell.
In my mind a long since spent image fills my eyes.
Distorted.
Like the world seen through tough frosted glass.
All I have is the image of colour.
Even that has begun to fade.
Slipping away as has the message.
All that I'm left with is a slight feeling.
Is it reassurance?
Or the common fear?
I cannot tell.
I feel uncertain.
A feeling I know well.
Am I destined to feel this way?
Every morning,
Upon waking?
Most probably.
But then,
So is all of my fellow race.
That's My most recent poem. Ever woken up feeling like you've dreamt something important, But can't remember it? That's what this ones about....
Can I have some feed back on it though? As this (Obviously) is a new style of writing for me
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Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2005 10:08 am
Mrs_Reaper Distorted ImageIn silence I can feel my mind trying to break free. trying to tell me something. I cannot hear it. I cannot hear anything but it's distant murmur. Words that are no longer legible to my ears. A message? Perhaps. I cannot tell. In my mind a long since spent image fills my eyes. Distorted. Like the world seen through tough frosted glass. All I have is the image of colour. Even that has begun to fade. Slipping away as has the message. All that I'm left with is a slight feeling. Is it reassurance? Or the common fear? I cannot tell. I feel uncertain. A feeling I know well. Am I destined to feel this way? Every morning, Upon waking? Most probably. But then, So is all of my fellow race. That's My most recent poem. Ever woken up feeling like you've dreamt something important, But can't remember it? That's what this ones about....
Can I have some feed back on it though? As this (Obviously) is a new style of writing for me *claps and amiles with a tear in her eye* I love it...nice job.. cry
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Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2005 10:09 am
Mrs_Reaper Shyzi Ao that sux. you really should get another gf if u still have feelings for that chick. the poem was 4w3$0m3n3$$. mrs reaper: jeez your poem is so deep. it was beautiful. I loved it. it's like.. coming from 2 different views. gorgeously written. heart i think it's the best poem on the page. just my opinion.
Shadow15, I could feel the feeling in the poem, and (Perversly?!?) Enjoyed the feeling coming off of it. **Sticks her thumbs up** I liked it xd Thanks. I liked your poetry,too. I have more but need to get them out in a little bit...but keep checkin' for more poems by me.. *holds up a "v" sign* razz
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Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2005 10:13 am
Lady Demonessa I liked the poems...Shadow's made me cry...maybe I'll post some..when I start writing them again..which should be soon. More peoms....poems! xd thanks for the compliment, they make me feel like somethin' even though I feel like nothin' right now without my girlfriend... crying I am glad you liked it.. whee
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Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2005 12:38 pm
Shadow15 Mrs_Reaper Shyzi Ao that sux. you really should get another gf if u still have feelings for that chick. the poem was 4w3$0m3n3$$. mrs reaper: jeez your poem is so deep. it was beautiful. I loved it. it's like.. coming from 2 different views. gorgeously written. heart i think it's the best poem on the page. just my opinion.
Shadow15, I could feel the feeling in the poem, and (Perversly?!?) Enjoyed the feeling coming off of it. **Sticks her thumbs up** I liked it xd Thanks. I liked your poetry,too. I have more but need to get them out in a little bit...but keep checkin' for more poems by me.. *holds up a "v" sign* razz
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Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2005 12:54 pm
Mrs_Reaper Shadow15 Mrs_Reaper Shyzi Ao that sux. you really should get another gf if u still have feelings for that chick. the poem was 4w3$0m3n3$$. mrs reaper: jeez your poem is so deep. it was beautiful. I loved it. it's like.. coming from 2 different views. gorgeously written. heart i think it's the best poem on the page. just my opinion.
Shadow15, I could feel the feeling in the poem, and (Perversly?!?) Enjoyed the feeling coming off of it. **Sticks her thumbs up** I liked it xd Thanks. I liked your poetry,too. I have more but need to get them out in a little bit...but keep checkin' for more poems by me.. *holds up a "v" sign* razz *smiles and hugs Mrs_Reaper8 So ya live in London? I am british, too somewhat but i live in Arizona..*sighs* Ya like tea right? I drinkk tea almost everyday. I have a fancy tea accusation and invite others over sometimes for tea. (I really do. xp ) My name is Mara by the way in real life that is. razz
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2005 3:22 am
Yeah, I love tea, but with the latest heat wave haven't had much of a chance to drink it. I work with tea and coffee (I'm a Barista when I'm working!) so I always have a large selection of both! My real Name's Rene (To rhyme with Bean! LOL) a lot of people pronounce it as French....
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2005 3:36 am
Ok, Here's two of the "Mother Nature" poems I wrote yesterday. I've managed to complete Earth and Air, and I'm hoping to pen down Fire and Water at some point today or tomorrow...
Mother Earth
I open my eyes and all I can see is chaos.
Chaos grown wild.
In my minds eye I can still see the forests.
The beauty of the mother reaching up to embrace me.
No more.
Now there is nothing but brick.
The loving mother cut back to prepare for industry.
Left disregarded,
no one claims this land now.
As I stand mourning her,
a single bee whirrs past me.
Following him with my gaze,
I see he's found purchase.
A small flower.
As wild and as beautiful as the mother herself.
And a smile crosses my lips.
For the mother isn't dead.
She's stretching her legs.
Reclaiming her land.
My Poisoned Love
I can feel her all about me.
Her breath on my neck.
Once so sweet.
Scented with wild flower and purity.
Now she breathes nothing but toxins.
My once precious angel.
Now seemingly a demon.
Did I do this to you?
My guardian, my love?
Was it I that pumped the evil into your breath?
Did I neglect to notice what we did?
How could I have ignored your cries?
And now, is my regret enough?
How can I restore you, my love?
Can you ever be restored?
But you have ceased to listen.
With good cause too.
If you had done this to me,
I would cease to listen to you.
Again, let me know what you think... even if you think I'm starting to abuse or dominate this thread!
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Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2005 9:29 pm
Title Pending.
My world is revolving around the promise of the futuristic lore.
The dream of closer reality.
Of better, and newer, and greater, than before.
But what if I don't like all that.
What if I'm an oldies fan, a recycle fanatic?
I can tell you right now I live for every day.
Not Just today, not just tommorow.
But yesterday too, that's important.
I'm still looking for that day when I'll find that true visionary they promised me. They promised me they'd come and show me their plans for the future as I dwell in the past.
Can you blame me?
I don't pity anyone who can.
After all, You can't expect me to go with the flow.
It's just not my deal, I assure you.
This is how it sound to make one more smart remark that turns into a run-on sentence capable of successfully boring all other until they're standing at their own graves, falling in with a last shuddering sigh.
The sigh, of the futuristic fairytales, may you rest, in a fluffy-clouded dream.
-W.M. (Meh)
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 8:57 pm
Mrs_Reaper Ok, Here's two of the "Mother Nature" poems I wrote yesterday. I've managed to complete Earth and Air, and I'm hoping to pen down Fire and Water at some point today or tomorrow... Mother EarthI open my eyes and all I can see is chaos. Chaos grown wild. In my minds eye I can still see the forests. The beauty of the mother reaching up to embrace me. No more. Now there is nothing but brick. The loving mother cut back to prepare for industry. Left disregarded, no one claims this land now. As I stand mourning her, a single bee whirrs past me. Following him with my gaze, I see he's found purchase. A small flower. As wild and as beautiful as the mother herself. And a smile crosses my lips. For the mother isn't dead. She's stretching her legs. Reclaiming her land. My Poisoned LoveI can feel her all about me. Her breath on my neck. Once so sweet. Scented with wild flower and purity. Now she breathes nothing but toxins. My once precious angel. Now seemingly a demon. Did I do this to you? My guardian, my love? Was it I that pumped the evil into your breath? Did I neglect to notice what we did? How could I have ignored your cries? And now, is my regret enough? How can I restore you, my love? Can you ever be restored? But you have ceased to listen. With good cause too. If you had done this to me, I would cease to listen to you. Again, let me know what you think... even if you think I'm starting to abuse or dominate this thread! Quite sad but great my dear poppet....I thought it was so deep and full of emotion. smile
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 9:55 am
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 10:09 am
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