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Ferregar

PostPosted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 12:41 pm


Sure, if you want you can drink water, but as a Fallen I'd thought maybe you didn't have to.

As far as water attacks against you, yes, they would not only do one rank of damage more to you, but after being doused you wouldn't be able to use these elemental skills for a certain number of posts after (1 post minimum always, with an additional 1 or so depending on the rnak of the skill in comparison to Dante's own rank) without risk of doing D Rank damage of electrocution back on yourself.

Is this still sounding workable for you?
PostPosted: Sun Feb 12, 2012 12:50 pm


Ferregar
Sure, if you want you can drink water, but as a Fallen I'd thought maybe you didn't have to.

As far as water attacks against you, yes, they would not only do one rank of damage more to you, but after being doused you wouldn't be able to use these elemental skills for a certain number of posts after (1 post minimum always, with an additional 1 or so depending on the rnak of the skill in comparison to Dante's own rank) without risk of doing D Rank damage of electrocution back on yourself.

Is this still sounding workable for you?

Hmmm... I can agree with this providing the fact that they have to make my RPC completely doused, because it would be silly for me to do damage to myself if I was barely wet.

Spooky BLVK


Ferregar

PostPosted: Tue Feb 14, 2012 4:05 pm


Dante Cayenyne
Rpc Name: Really now?

Rpc Rank: Student

Link to profile: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=22152843#330022821

Link to customs thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21942285

Combative Talent or Non Combative: Combative

Talent Name: Cloud strike

Description: This talent gives Dante control over lightning. He can make several skills for the lightning technique, and can pass it on to others if desired. And the others can pass it on to others, until it is basically known to everybody.The drawback to this is the lightning takes so much focus on your body, it disables your element and replaces it with lightning. He can't be harmed by his own lightning.
((My lightning won't be as OP as Fen's, and I sure as hell won't be magnetizing anything.))

Skills:
Static Shock
rank: E
description: You fire a small zap of lightning from your hands. It is enough to give somebody a nasty shock.

Lightning Fist
rank: D-B
description: You punch forwards, lightning enveloping your fist. The damage of this depends on the rank of the energy put into it. At B rank, this makes 3rd degree burns on contact.

Lightning blade
rank: C
description: You make a blade of pure lightning that envelops your fist, capable of massive cutting and damage. This can pierce up to B ranked barriers.

Electro Charge
Rank: C
description: This skill allows you to charge up a weapon with lightning. This makes any cuts also have electrical burns.

Lightning Rocket
Rank: B
description: You fire a rocket of pure lightning energy at your foe. Upon contact, it explodes with the same force of a regular rocket.

Shocking Grasp
rank: B
description: You make your hands into literal tasers. For 5 posts, anything touched by your hands will feel as if they are being tased. If the caster's hands make contact with water during this skill its effects backfire, stunning him for the rest of the skill's duration.

Shock Collar
rank:A
description: You form a ring of electricity that must be physically set around the target's neck. This collar will only electrocute its wearer when the caster wills it to, but only once a post. This lasts for 4 posts, after which the collar must be physically charged by the caster for a whole post, or it will vanish. This skill has a 10 post cooldown.
Shackles is not plausible. I've revised it as above.

electro palm
rank:B-SS
description: This is a palm of pure lightning. However, unlike most of your lightning techniques, this lightning is more chaotic and dangerous. At B rank it is capable of smashing through walls and magical barriers equal to rank of energy spent when used.

Lightning Bolt
rank: B - S
A focused beam of electricity that penetrates through metals and conductive material up to steel (all stone and natural materials at S Rank), and electrifies any metal or water it makes contact with for one post (two posts at S Rank). Since metal is an excellent conductor of electricity, this is especially useful against heavily armored foes. This skill has a 6 post cooldown.


((Further skills will be submitted into the skills thread at a later date))

Rp Sample: GAH!!! Just think of it as a less OP version of Fen's lightning fist pleaaase crying

just re submitting it, as You guys never came out with the actual lightning element...
Edit: If you think it should go under the double talent where it consumes both talents, just let me know.

Alright, I have comments in bold within your quote, and some here.

- This talent will take up both your Combat and Non-combat slots
- Remember to edit in your new weaknesses
- I have provided Post Cool Downs for a few skilsl as an example, but
each of these skills MUST have a post cooldown for this talent to be accepted
- I removed Electric Nerve Rewrite because it is not balanced nor sensible (incapacitating electric affects to the body happen instantly; there is no delay), and make Lightning Beam / Blast the same skill
PostPosted: Tue Feb 14, 2012 10:08 pm


Ferregar
Dante Cayenyne
Rpc Name: Really now?

Rpc Rank: Student

Link to profile: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=22152843#330022821

Link to customs thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21942285

Combative Talent or Non Combative: Both slots

Talent Name: Cloud strike

weaknesses: Dante is now physically weak to water. Water sttacks are 1 rank higher in damage. He also cannot become completely submerged in water, or he will cause near lethal damage to himself. While wet, he does D rank damage each time a lightning skill is used.

Description: This talent gives Dante control over lightning. He can make several skills for the lightning technique, and can pass it on to others if desired. And the others can pass it on to others, until it is basically known to everybody.The drawback to this is the lightning takes so much focus on your body, it disables your element and replaces it with lightning. He can't be harmed by his own lightning.
((My lightning won't be as OP as Fen's, and I sure as hell won't be magnetizing anything.))

Skills:
Static Shock
rank: E
description: You fire a small zap of lightning from your hands. It is enough to give somebody a nasty shock. 1 post cooldown

Lightning Fist
rank: D-B
description: You punch forwards, lightning enveloping your fist. The damage of this depends on the rank of the energy put into it. At B rank, this makes 3rd degree burns on contact. 2 post cooldown

Lightning blade
rank: C
description: You make a blade of pure lightning that envelops your fist, capable of massive cutting and damage. This can pierce up to B ranked barriers. 3 post cooldown

Electro Charge
Rank: C
description: This skill allows you to charge up a weapon with lightning. This makes any cuts also have electrical burns. 3 post cooldown.

Lightning Rocket
Rank: B
description: You fire a rocket of pure lightning energy at your foe. Upon contact, it explodes with the same force of a regular rocket. 3 post cooldown

Shocking Grasp
rank: B
description: You make your hands into literal tasers. For 5 posts, anything touched by your hands will feel as if they are being tased. If the caster's hands make contact with water during this skill its effects backfire, stunning him for the rest of the skill's duration. 4 post cooldown

Shock Collar
rank:A
description: You form a ring of electricity that must be physically set around the target's neck. This collar will only electrocute its wearer when the caster wills it to, but only once a post. This lasts for 4 posts, after which the collar must be physically charged by the caster for a whole post, or it will vanish. This skill has a 10 post cooldown.
Shackles is not plausible. I've revised it as above.

electro palm
rank:B-SS
description: This is a palm of pure lightning. However, unlike most of your lightning techniques, this lightning is more chaotic and dangerous. At B rank it is capable of smashing through walls and magical barriers equal to rank of energy spent when used. 4 post cooldown

Lightning Bolt
rank: B - S
A focused beam of electricity that penetrates through metals and conductive material up to steel (all stone and natural materials at S Rank), and electrifies any metal or water it makes contact with for one post (two posts at S Rank). Since metal is an excellent conductor of electricity, this is especially useful against heavily armored foes. This skill has a 6 post cooldown.


((Further skills will be submitted into the skills thread at a later date))

Rp Sample: GAH!!! Just think of it as a less OP version of Fen's lightning fist pleaaase crying

just re submitting it, as You guys never came out with the actual lightning element...
Edit: If you think it should go under the double talent where it consumes both talents, just let me know.


Alright, I have comments in bold within your quote, and some here.

- This talent will take up both your Combat and Non-combat slots
- Remember to edit in your new weaknesses
- I have provided Post Cool Downs for a few skilsl as an example, but
each of these skills MUST have a post cooldown for this talent to be accepted
- I removed Electric Nerve Rewrite because it is not balanced nor sensible (incapacitating electric affects to the body happen instantly; there is no delay), and make Lightning Beam / Blast the same skill
edited

Spooky BLVK


Spooky BLVK

PostPosted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 7:52 am


Ferregar

Can I get a final approval on this, my good man?
PostPosted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 7:59 am


Dante Cayenyne
Ferregar

Can I get a final approval on this, my good man?

Repost the talent submission with all the changes made, and I'll look it over.

Ferregar


Spooky BLVK

PostPosted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 9:29 am


Dante Cayenyne
Ferregar
Dante Cayenyne
Rpc Name: Really now?

Rpc Rank: Student

Link to profile: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=22152843#330022821

Link to customs thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21942285

Combative Talent or Non Combative: Both slots

Talent Name: Cloud strike

weaknesses: Dante is now physically weak to water. Water sttacks are 1 rank higher in damage. He also cannot become completely submerged in water, or he will cause near lethal damage to himself. While wet, he does D rank damage each time a lightning skill is used.

Description: This talent gives Dante control over lightning. He can make several skills for the lightning technique, and can pass it on to others if desired. And the others can pass it on to others, until it is basically known to everybody.The drawback to this is the lightning takes so much focus on your body, it disables your element and replaces it with lightning. He can't be harmed by his own lightning.
((My lightning won't be as OP as Fen's, and I sure as hell won't be magnetizing anything.))

Skills:
Static Shock
rank: E
description: You fire a small zap of lightning from your hands. It is enough to give somebody a nasty shock. 1 post cooldown

Lightning Fist
rank: D-B
description: You punch forwards, lightning enveloping your fist. The damage of this depends on the rank of the energy put into it. At B rank, this makes 3rd degree burns on contact. 2 post cooldown

Lightning blade
rank: C
description: You make a blade of pure lightning that envelops your fist, capable of massive cutting and damage. This can pierce up to B ranked barriers. 3 post cooldown

Electro Charge
Rank: C
description: This skill allows you to charge up a weapon with lightning. This makes any cuts also have electrical burns. 3 post cooldown.

Lightning Rocket
Rank: B
description: You fire a rocket of pure lightning energy at your foe. Upon contact, it explodes with the same force of a regular rocket. 3 post cooldown

Shocking Grasp
rank: B
description: You make your hands into literal tasers. For 5 posts, anything touched by your hands will feel as if they are being tased. If the caster's hands make contact with water during this skill its effects backfire, stunning him for the rest of the skill's duration. 4 post cooldown

Shock Collar
rank:A
description: You form a ring of electricity that must be physically set around the target's neck. This collar will only electrocute its wearer when the caster wills it to, but only once a post. This lasts for 4 posts, after which the collar must be physically charged by the caster for a whole post, or it will vanish. This skill has a 10 post cooldown.

electro palm
rank:B-SS
description: This is a palm of pure lightning. However, unlike most of your lightning techniques, this lightning is more chaotic and dangerous. At B rank it is capable of smashing through walls and magical barriers equal to rank of energy spent when used. 4 post cooldown

Lightning Bolt
rank: B - S
A focused beam of electricity that penetrates through metals and conductive material up to steel (all stone and natural materials at S Rank), and electrifies any metal or water it makes contact with for one post (two posts at S Rank). Since metal is an excellent conductor of electricity, this is especially useful against heavily armored foes. This skill has a 6 post cooldown.


((Further skills will be submitted into the skills thread at a later date))

Rp Sample: GAH!!! Just think of it as a less OP version of Fen's lightning fist pleaaase crying

just re submitting it, as You guys never came out with the actual lightning element...
Edit: If you think it should go under the double talent where it consumes both talents, just let me know.


Alright, I have comments in bold within your quote, and some here.

- This talent will take up both your Combat and Non-combat slots
- Remember to edit in your new weaknesses
- I have provided Post Cool Downs for a few skilsl as an example, but
each of these skills MUST have a post cooldown for this talent to be accepted
- I removed Electric Nerve Rewrite because it is not balanced nor sensible (incapacitating electric affects to the body happen instantly; there is no delay), and make Lightning Beam / Blast the same skill

edited
Ferregar

edited
PostPosted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:10 am


Dante Cayenyne
Dante Cayenyne
Ferregar
Dante Cayenyne
Rpc Name: Really now?

Rpc Rank: Student

Link to profile: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=22152843#330022821

Link to customs thread: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=21942285

Combative Talent or Non Combative: Both slots

Talent Name: Cloud strike

weaknesses: Dante is now physically weak to water. Water sttacks are 1 rank higher in damage. He also cannot become completely submerged in water, or he will cause near lethal damage to himself. While wet, he does D rank damage each time a lightning skill is used.

Description: This talent gives Dante control over lightning. He can make several skills for the lightning technique, and can pass it on to others if desired. And the others can pass it on to others, until it is basically known to everybody.The drawback to this is the lightning takes so much focus on your body, it disables your element and replaces it with lightning. He can't be harmed by his own lightning.
((My lightning won't be as OP as Fen's, and I sure as hell won't be magnetizing anything.))

Skills:
Static Shock
rank: E
description: You fire a small zap of lightning from your hands. It is enough to give somebody a nasty shock. 1 post cooldown

Lightning Fist
rank: D-B
description: You punch forwards, lightning enveloping your fist. The damage of this depends on the rank of the energy put into it. At B rank, this makes 3rd degree burns on contact. 2 post cooldown

Lightning blade
rank: C
description: You make a blade of pure lightning that envelops your fist, capable of massive cutting and damage. This can pierce up to B ranked barriers. 3 post cooldown

Electro Charge
Rank: C
description: This skill allows you to charge up a weapon with lightning. This makes any cuts also have electrical burns. 3 post cooldown.

Lightning Rocket
Rank: B
description: You fire a rocket of pure lightning energy at your foe. Upon contact, it explodes with the same force of a regular rocket. 3 post cooldown

Shocking Grasp
rank: B
description: You make your hands into literal tasers. For 5 posts, anything touched by your hands will feel as if they are being tased. If the caster's hands make contact with water during this skill its effects backfire, stunning him for the rest of the skill's duration. 4 post cooldown

Shock Collar
rank:A
description: You form a ring of electricity that must be physically set around the target's neck. This collar will only electrocute its wearer when the caster wills it to, but only once a post. This lasts for 4 posts, after which the collar must be physically charged by the caster for a whole post, or it will vanish. This skill has a 10 post cooldown.

electro palm
rank:B-SS
description: This is a palm of pure lightning. However, unlike most of your lightning techniques, this lightning is more chaotic and dangerous. At B rank it is capable of smashing through walls and magical barriers equal to rank of energy spent when used. 4 post cooldown

Lightning Bolt
rank: B - S
A focused beam of electricity that penetrates through metals and conductive material up to steel (all stone and natural materials at S Rank), and electrifies any metal or water it makes contact with for one post (two posts at S Rank). Since metal is an excellent conductor of electricity, this is especially useful against heavily armored foes. This skill has a 6 post cooldown.


((Further skills will be submitted into the skills thread at a later date))

Rp Sample: GAH!!! Just think of it as a less OP version of Fen's lightning fist pleaaase crying

just re submitting it, as You guys never came out with the actual lightning element...
Edit: If you think it should go under the double talent where it consumes both talents, just let me know.


Alright, I have comments in bold within your quote, and some here.

- This talent will take up both your Combat and Non-combat slots
- Remember to edit in your new weaknesses
- I have provided Post Cool Downs for a few skilsl as an example, but
each of these skills MUST have a post cooldown for this talent to be accepted
- I removed Electric Nerve Rewrite because it is not balanced nor sensible (incapacitating electric affects to the body happen instantly; there is no delay), and make Lightning Beam / Blast the same skill

edited
Ferregar

edited

Okay, before I approve this I want to make on thing clear. When the Lightning Element is developed, the powers you gain from your talent are separate from it. You will not gain those skills in addition to those you have provided. Are you okay with that? If yes, then this is approved and you may proceed.

Ferregar


Spooky BLVK

PostPosted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:26 am


Ferregar

Umm... I think I understand what your saying, but would you mind rephrasing it? From what it reads, it looks like your saying I can't submit custom skills for it? Or are you saying that I don't auto learn the skills? Sorry, the wording just really has me confused. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:44 am


No worries Dante. What I'm saying is that we (Crew) is currently developing the Lightning Secondary Element for standard use. These skills will NOT be affiliated with your Lightning talent, and your character will not have the ability to learn these skills. You may submit custom skills, but be aware that this talent is to be utilized as an Element. You will not be allowed to exceed the number of skills made available to the other elements once they've been updated(give or take a couple)

IS this more clear?

Ferregar


Spooky BLVK

PostPosted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 11:53 am


Ferregar
No worries Dante. What I'm saying is that we (Crew) is currently developing the Lightning Secondary Element for standard use. These skills will NOT be affiliated with your Lightning talent, and your character will not have the ability to learn these skills. You may submit custom skills, but be aware that this talent is to be utilized as an Element. You will not be allowed to exceed the number of skills made available to the other elements once they've been updated(give or take a couple)

IS this more clear?

Now it makes perfect sense. I agree, and understand now. I'm assuming it's now approved, and shall go post this into my customs thread.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 11:58 am


Dante Cayenyne
Ferregar
No worries Dante. What I'm saying is that we (Crew) is currently developing the Lightning Secondary Element for standard use. These skills will NOT be affiliated with your Lightning talent, and your character will not have the ability to learn these skills. You may submit custom skills, but be aware that this talent is to be utilized as an Element. You will not be allowed to exceed the number of skills made available to the other elements once they've been updated(give or take a couple)

IS this more clear?

Now it makes perfect sense. I agree, and understand now. I'm assuming it's now approved, and shall go post this into my customs thread.

Indeed it is! You're all set 3nodding

Ferregar


Chilling2

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 08, 2012 11:11 pm


Rpc Name: Kora Summer (gold)

Rpc Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=22152841

Your Customs Thread:

Rpc Rank: Master

Combative Talent or Non Combative: combative

Talent Name: A Fighter but also a healer

Description: When Kora was back in Axiom she was once a high rank cleric. Now form being dragged to Rykros she hold a different class. Still holding the holy blessings, she still remembered only the few spells from the cleric skills. Cure and reviviscence are the only thing she knows very well beside normal healing. The Purification of the Soul spell shall be let alone to the advance Clerics that she is no longer is one, for bringing a person back is good enough.

Skills: Cure Poison, Reviviscence

Rp Sample: Kora can fight back now, this is her new calling. Sword slash to each other, making sparks flying all around them, Having a difficult time to even catch up. Sadly, she was out matched by this person and was thrown back a few feet off the ground, landing off to the side. Through out this battle, she discovered a traveler was killed right after the person ran away. He was just not a criminal, he was a murder! No help of it but to save the pore man since the killer have escaped with grate speed...

Kora healed up the wound than cast the spell to bring the innocent soul back to life. She felt her whole body been drain away from using such a high level skill. Once the man awake, he seam to be drained too from the sudden death experience. We both took a few second to gather some strength back and stood back to our feet. The man thanked the young woman to saved him even though he haven't asked for it. She is only grateful that he is alright and no other life was taken away. Kora swore she'll capture that murder and finally put him to Justis.
PostPosted: Fri Mar 09, 2012 10:29 am


Chilling2
Rpc Name: Kora Summer (gold)

Rpc Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=22152841

Your Customs Thread:

Rpc Rank: Master

Combative Talent or Non Combative: combative

Talent Name: A Fighter but also a healer

Description: When Kora was back in Axiom she was once a high rank cleric. Now form being dragged to Rykros she hold a different class. Still holding the holy blessings, she still remembered only the few spells from the cleric skills. Cure and reviviscence are the only thing she knows very well beside normal healing. The Purification of the Soul spell shall be let alone to the advance Clerics that she is no longer is one, for bringing a person back is good enough.

Skills: Cure Poison, Reviviscence

Rp Sample: Kora can fight back now, this is her new calling. Sword slash to each other, making sparks flying all around them, Having a difficult time to even catch up. Sadly, she was out matched by this person and was thrown back a few feet off the ground, landing off to the side. Through out this battle, she discovered a traveler was killed right after the person ran away. He was just not a criminal, he was a murder! No help of it but to save the pore man since the killer have escaped with grate speed...

Kora healed up the wound than cast the spell to bring the innocent soul back to life. She felt her whole body been drain away from using such a high level skill. Once the man awake, he seam to be drained too from the sudden death experience. We both took a few second to gather some strength back and stood back to our feet. The man thanked the young woman to saved him even though he haven't asked for it. She is only grateful that he is alright and no other life was taken away. Kora swore she'll capture that murder and finally put him to Justis.

I'm not to sure about this one... your talent gives you access to another class' skills, which isn't very balanced.

Would you instead consider changing Kora into a Cleric completely? We can work out the details with Jacky, and transfer the number of skills you have, rank by rank, into learned Cleric abilities. I think that is a much more viable option than this talent.

Ferregar


Chilling2

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 10, 2012 1:08 am


Ferregar
Chilling2
Rpc Name: Kora Summer (gold)

Rpc Profile Link: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=22152841

Your Customs Thread:

Rpc Rank: Master

Combative Talent or Non Combative: combative

Talent Name: A Fighter but also a healer

Description: When Kora was back in Axiom she was once a high rank cleric. Now form being dragged to Rykros she hold a different class. Still holding the holy blessings, she still remembered only the few spells from the cleric skills. Cure and reviviscence are the only thing she knows very well beside normal healing. The Purification of the Soul spell shall be let alone to the advance Clerics that she is no longer is one, for bringing a person back is good enough.

Skills: Cure Poison, Reviviscence

Rp Sample: Kora can fight back now, this is her new calling. Sword slash to each other, making sparks flying all around them, Having a difficult time to even catch up. Sadly, she was out matched by this person and was thrown back a few feet off the ground, landing off to the side. Through out this battle, she discovered a traveler was killed right after the person ran away. He was just not a criminal, he was a murder! No help of it but to save the pore man since the killer have escaped with grate speed...

Kora healed up the wound than cast the spell to bring the innocent soul back to life. She felt her whole body been drain away from using such a high level skill. Once the man awake, he seam to be drained too from the sudden death experience. We both took a few second to gather some strength back and stood back to our feet. The man thanked the young woman to saved him even though he haven't asked for it. She is only grateful that he is alright and no other life was taken away. Kora swore she'll capture that murder and finally put him to Justis.

I'm not to sure about this one... your talent gives you access to another class' skills, which isn't very balanced.

Would you instead consider changing Kora into a Cleric completely? We can work out the details with Jacky, and transfer the number of skills you have, rank by rank, into learned Cleric abilities. I think that is a much more viable option than this talent.

FFFFFFFFFF-Fine! I'll have her go back being a cleric! Can't think anything else that will make her slightly bad a**. User Image
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