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 Posted: Wed Apr 17, 2013 2:35 pm
Valentine Valtieri Denied one hundred times over. There's no way you're getting such an overpowered talent so early. Actually...there's no way this would ever be approved, the way it works. ...Well i wasnt done tweaking it 1 and 2 thats how fencing works. The objective when in combat using a blade that thin is to sever arteries and attack vitals through the chain shirt. Theres never any real surface damage on a thrust with those weapons. However if your dead set on this I will respect your wishes.
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Posted: Wed Apr 17, 2013 2:41 pm
Holy Rinaku Valentine Valtieri Denied one hundred times over. There's no way you're getting such an overpowered talent so early. Actually...there's no way this would ever be approved, the way it works. ...Well i wasnt done tweaking it 1 and 2 thats how fencing works. The objective when in combat using a blade that thin is to sever arteries and attack vitals through the chain shirt. Theres never any real surface damage on a thrust with those weapons. However if your dead set on this I will respect your wishes. Make a style based on fencing, rather than a talent. What you're asking for is a OHKO at the very beginning of your life.
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Valentine Valtieri Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Apr 17, 2013 2:45 pm
Valentine Valtieri Holy Rinaku Valentine Valtieri Denied one hundred times over. There's no way you're getting such an overpowered talent so early. Actually...there's no way this would ever be approved, the way it works. ...Well i wasnt done tweaking it 1 and 2 thats how fencing works. The objective when in combat using a blade that thin is to sever arteries and attack vitals through the chain shirt. Theres never any real surface damage on a thrust with those weapons. However if your dead set on this I will respect your wishes. Make a style based on fencing, rather than a talent. What you're asking for is a OHKO at the very beginning of your life. I can submit one soon if that would be a better way.
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Posted: Wed Apr 17, 2013 3:03 pm
jwalker67 Ultima228 xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxѕρє¢ιαℓ тαℓєηт
Weapon Smithing
ηαмє | Kaze Ikazuchi
мαιη ѕтуℓє | None yet
¢υяяєηт ℓєνєℓ | 1
ωєαкηєѕѕ | Non-combat skill
σяιgιη | Having been trained in smithing from the age of 10, it is something that developed to him over time.
∂єѕ¢яιρтιση | It allows Kaze to craft weaponry of various metals available to him on the island, the most common being Iron or Steel. As I do not know the full kind of "setting" at this point I can only say that I would be able to offer Iron or Steel weaponry to people.
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Extract from another guild:
Taking out a mold he had prepared, he shaped the blade and it's length, 52 centimeters as exactly requested. The blade was relatively simple to make, as he folded and formed the steel, blow by blow, fold by fold the blade took shape. As he folded it Kiyo enhanced the weapon by strengthening his blows and flattening the blade and the creases in the fold. The process worked itself over another 34 times, for a total number of 35 folds in the blade. Then, he set it to cool, when it was formed, he worked the steel until it was almost ready to shatter, and placed the blade in a vat of cooled liquid silver. Just enough so that it would be absorbed into the blade, creating the mythril.
As the blade sat for an hour to form, Kiyo moved it to a special deep freezer, a way Norin had done Cold Steel that gave it a chilling touch. He placed it beside the golem as he locked the freezer once again and sat down.
These, were works of art.
"Gear is ready for Pick-Up
Kiyo Ikazuchi"
, as it would offer up a loophole for students of lower level to get a hold of weapons they usually would not be able to get through the Weapons Store. Also, as far as I know, there is no list of the various metals found on the island so that would leave your talent up for your own interpretation, leaving room for some major exploitation.
Ok, thats fair enough, I was unsure of this myself as I didn't know how well it would work or fit in the setting.
Thank you for letting me know ^_^
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Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2013 9:29 pm
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ηαмє | Jian'ao Daiyu Zhou [Teacher]
мαιη ѕтуℓє | Mister Hyde
¢υяяєηт ℓєνєℓ | Five
ωєαкηєѕѕ | Does not always work especially one with indomitable will or a deaf person for obvious reasons. If over used in one day due to there still being tension in her vocalizing membranes she could lose her voice for as long as a week. In the case of inducing fear, the element of surprise must be present. . .or it is nowhere near as effective (if at all)
σяιgιη | Jian'ao's thyroid cartilage and arytenoid cartilages, which control the openness and tension of the vocalizing membranes, are a bit similar to that of a big cat. the membrane tension being a bit looser than the average Homo sapien.
∂єѕ¢яιρтιση | A deep, bellowing outburst of sound forced through an open mouth. Can be used to intimidate/scare certain animals and people or get the attention of others.
ѕαмρℓє | ”Now the first th-“ her eyes narrowed as the student started droning on about something she naturally did not want to pay attention to. . .more or less sass that was unnecessary. ”I don’t see why they stuck me with you ANYWAY.” the male student groaned. Clearly she was just there for his benefit. ”I can’t see why they stuck me with you either, especially with the attitude I’m getting.” her gender neutral voice replied with a sigh afterward. She already had to fight off the Hyde that tried to beat away at her mental barriers. . .and now this little ******** nugget was going to sass her. ’When can we get started, because you’re taking a REALLY long time.” Her brow began to twitch in irritation, completely upset but trying to not show it. ”Earth to fir-“ she advanced towards him with a purpose. Though she was shorter than this student, Jian’ao grabbed the collar of his shirt with her left hand, damn near tearing it off as she yanked him down to her level. ”What were you going to say?” she asked politely to see if he had the balls to say it again. A cocky smirk formed which was evidence of such. ”What I said was ‘Earth to firecr-‘” a thunderous roar left her mouth before he finished the insulting term. The element of surprise nearly caused this man to piss himself before the Chinese teacher; his legs going limp and if he were a cat his ears would have been pinned down. Her hand released him only to start talking again as if nothing happened. The student remained dumbfounded, nodding whenever she would ask a yes or no question. . .at least the ones that had any inclination that he were to say yes.
((Fen told meh to do this just to make sure it's passable))
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Posted: Mon Apr 29, 2013 4:17 pm
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Posted: Sat May 11, 2013 11:10 pm
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ηαмє | Samuel De luca Borisovitch
мαιη ѕтуℓє | Carbon Death
¢υяяєηт ℓєνєℓ | One
ωєαкηєѕѕ | If read wrong it can make Samuel react to a situation that may not happen, leaving him open for an attack.
σяιgιη [Tactical Analysis] Samuel developed this talent for physical combat from his father's training as a child. His ability to work past pain, keep a cool head, and suffer discomfort with little effect was a result of his father's military background and training. He learned where to strike, how hard, and to analyze a foe in order to out maneuver them.
∂єѕ¢яιρтιση | Samuel can read people like a book, the subtle twitch in their face, the movement of a leg back or forward. These are all indicators for him on possible attacks or counters so when an enemy throws a feint he can see through their illusion as clear as day, or strike preemptively when an enemy takes a step to kick or punch.
ѕαмρℓє | Samuel squared off to the Senior student, his blue eyes looking over the subtle twist of his rear foot. The kid was lanky but strong and he was breathing out deeply, his right leg inching back once again and Samuel carefully shifted his weight to his back foot. Most would say it came out of nowhere as the Muay Thai senior yanked his back leg forward, ready to slam his shin into Samuel's head with a lighting fast round house. However Samuel thrust his own front leg forward, driving the ball of his foot into the rising thigh of his enemy and stopping the kick dead in it's tracks! The preemptive strike surprised the kid, throwing him off balance and Samuel capitalized, letting his kick touch down just in front of the senior, then driving his back fist forward in a combo attack that drive his knuckles dead into the kids nose, sending him hurling back out cold!
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Posted: Sun May 12, 2013 10:14 pm
Denied, this talent can be too easily abused for me to allow it. It basically gives you an excuse to dodge nearly every attack an opponent tries to make, with no real limit or backlash, which leads to godmoding. Plus, this isn't really a unique talent. Reading an opponent's movements to better prepare for counters is something all professional fighters do anyways.
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Sun May 12, 2013 10:23 pm
Yeah but I was thinking of more in-dept tactical sense but I understand. Alas back to the drawing board I suppose.
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Posted: Fri Jun 21, 2013 2:09 pm
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ηαмє | Hades
мαιη ѕтуℓє | Hell's Grasp
¢υяяєηт ℓєνєℓ | 1
ωєαкηєѕѕ | Cannot recover Kai while in movement.
σяιgιη | When Hades turned 6 years old both of his parents were murdered, the person who committed the murders was someone with thick long white hair named Sesshomaru. He spared Hades telling him, if he wanted to know the truth about his parents and himself he would have to run and keep running until he finds Ludus Academy. At the age of 6 Hades never stopped running, he ran as fast as he could never slowing down. The years and years of trying to hone his talent is speed, he has such a speed that would make your eyes bleed. He is able to move at an incredible rate it almost makes it seem he is invsible at his fastest speed.
∂єѕ¢яιρтιση | Able to move at a faster rate than most humans due to the intense running he endured when he was a child and till today.
ѕαмρℓє |
Hades was walking down Ludus Academy heading towards his class, then he heard a scream. Running quickly he found a girl on the floor knocked out, and another male student running in the opposite direction. He would then turn around to see Hades wink at him, and started running away. Hades quickly went to the girl and picked her up, she would then speak to him slowly.
''H-Hurry catch him ...his going to kill my brother''she replied softly before fainting.
He dropped his backpack and started to stretch, quickly flexing every single muscle in his body. Quietly he braced himself in his running stance, right leg infront of the left leg and thighs spread apart nicely. Then he started to run, it was amazing to watch this kid run. As if he was there a moment ago, or he wasn't Hades disappeared quickly catching up to the male student leaving a trail of wind behind him. He wasn't godly fast, but he did exceed normal humans speed and in there eyes they might not be able to catch up. He met the student he wasn't to far behind, he quickly passed him in seconds.
'Who the hell are you? If its a fight you want come get it'' he said while smirking.
The male student started to unleash a fury of blows heading towards Hades, but it doesn't matter how strong you are, if you cant touch your opponent then wants the point? Hades would quickly dodge his opponents attack easily, his fist weren't in a close enough distance and weren't moving fast enough.
Taking this chance Hades quickly unleashed his own blows of martial arts, landing all of them. The male student then himself fainted and Hades then called a teacher to sort this problem out.
(Sorry its short and bitter sweet but im on my Ipod and I'm tired lol)
OOC: 1 speed faster than regular students at level 1, each time he progresses he gets faster.
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Sat Jun 22, 2013 5:10 pm
Denied. At most I can allow your character to be one level faster, but that would only make you slightly faster than your competition. Also you'd need an actual weakness, like that you cannot recover any Ki while moving because of the extra effort it takes you to move faster.
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Posted: Sat Jun 22, 2013 8:46 pm
Accepted, add the specifics to your profile.
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 22, 2013 10:16 am
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ηαмє | Saleria
мαιη ѕтуℓє | Hell's Grasp(Pending)
¢υяяєηт ℓєνєℓ | 1
ωєαкηєѕѕ | Entering this form may be easy, but the exit drains her of all of her energy, leaving her open to a variety of attacks for a single post. Even after the post, she will be required to rest back at her down to restore her own energy. This lasts for a total of a week in rp and irl.
σяιgιη | Learning Hell's Grasp Stage one
∂єѕ¢яιρтιση |
The Fury of Flames(Black): As a being that has to hold back all of her emotions of reality, she is allowing entrance and exit of a darker side. But that becomes active when her father figure is coming to harm. This is a temporary mode that requires half the user's energy to start off at. This form wears off after 4 posts from the initial activation. She is capable of summoning a double handed Battle Ax for a few strikes, made out of sharpened stone. She is capable of also knowing Photographic Memory, allowing her to learn stage hand to hand fighting styles with a less post required.
ѕαмρℓє | "How.....How DARE YOU HURT MY FATHER!" Saleria glares at her foe as she slowly lifts into the air, the oxygen around her glowing as she was taking more in. She begins to take in massive amounts of heated energy until flames surrounded her aura, turning it black. The moment they turned black, she had a heartless stare at the man before her that knocked out her father. She didn't even utter a word as she swung her hand out and charged at her foe, striking the first foe in the heart as energy shot through her hand. In the next instance, she charged at her foe, faster than she was previously as she blasted her foes with quick strikes of her palms to force them away. The next one blocked her Lion upper strike, but she was doing more as she chained it with her other palm to her elbow, forcing it through and breaking the guard, hitting him in the chin and sending him flying in the process. The man flew backwards onto his back unconscious before she charged at the last man standing, hitting him with her Superior Lion upper as well. She had sent the man flying before she jumped up high, summoning up a flame Ax as she spun forward. She slammed her Ax onto the foe, cutting him in two, as she soon phased into two appearances, hitting both foe halves with the Violent fists. She desummoned her fire ax before she returned to her original flame color before she phased into essence of fire, returning to her father.
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Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2013 9:53 pm
Denied. You should wait until your character is at least level 6 before applying for a talent like this.
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Fist of the Bro Star Captain
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Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2013 9:54 pm
Fist of the Bro Star Denied. You should wait until your character is at least level 6 before applying for a talent like this. Works for me!
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