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 Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 7:53 pm
Serina Victoria 
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Main Information╫
Full Name: Seras Victoria
Nicknames: Seras
Age: 14
Birthdate: July 12th
Gender: female
Villagerock
Race: American
Rank: academy student
Shinobi Profession: Assassination
Ninja Type/Class: Assassin and speed
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Major Infomation╫
Bloodline/ Or Soul Demon: Nanbi [tenshi said i could x3]
Current Bloodline Stage:
Chakra Color:
Chakra Level: High
Chakra Element:Lightnen and fire
Battle Strength: Killing, trackng enemies and speed
Battle Weakness:strategies and teamwork
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1.
2.
3.
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Summoning infomation╫
Summoning Type:
Boss Summoning:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫ Headband Location:arm
Headband Style: tied
Headband Color:black
Flack Jacket Style: none
Flak Jacket Color: none
Weapon Class:Katana
Name of Weapon:खून गुलाब पंखुड़ियों
Bleeding rose petals
Weapon Range: 10 yards[thrown] 3[handheld with speed]
Special Abilities: can help combine two elements together
Weapon Location: right waist
Exploding Smoke Grenade=4
Makibishi= 8
Shuriken= 6
Light Bombs=2
Kunai Holster Location:in pouch
Kunai Holster Color: black
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location:pouch
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: black
Backpack Style:
Backpack Color:
Summoning Scroll Holster Location:
Summoning Scroll Holster Color:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Technique List╫ Starting jutsu
*Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
*Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
*Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Character Description╫
Personality: Silent to anyone she is around
Nindo: "The world is my playground the people are my toys!"
Height: 5.0
Weight: 119
Original Eye Color:grey[blind]
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Background Information╫
A young dark compexered female, born and raised in the country of Iwagakure for most of her life. When she was born her parents found out she was blind but could make her way anywhere possible by hearing or feeling vibrations. She went to the village Iwa to train as a ninja but her parents thought it would be quite difficult for a blind girl to learn when she can't read without sight. She begged and begged them till they finally said yes and she traveled to Iwa as a academy student to train in on eof the toughest villages.
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 8:01 pm
Quote: I've changed her to academy Student and also I only posted what Elements she would have. I haven't posted up any Jutsu for the Elements so she hasn't learned anything, I only posted two elements to show you which ones I'll be using. Alright then, just put it in parentheses or put something next to it to signify that you can't use your second element yet, I just want it to be clear that you can't learn any jutsus for elements other than your primary element until you get to pick your second one at chunin Quote: For battle strength I didn't mention her being faster then anyone, she's just faster then normal because of her class and One Hit Critical means that her first strikes are always her most powerful. Well neither of your shinobi types actually make you faster, the assassin type makes you stealthier and the Tactician class gives you faster reaction time and allows you to learn jusu faster, so speed would not be a strength given by your shinobi type, as for the One hit critical I guess that's fine Quote: Shinobi skills... You have to apply to be Smart (Tactician) an Affective fighter with a weapon and flexible (Assassin)? That just seems kind weird because none of those are very special and they all match with her Ninja type/class. I've also removed the poison because I wouldn't ever use poison. But I'll change it to match her bloodline if what I have is still wrong. What I said is that shinobi special skills are not the skills "given by your bloodline/clan or shinobi type or anything like that", yes I realized that you have those skills, and no you don't have to app for those, but those aren't the kind of skills that that part of the skeleton is referring to, it would be things like "ability to make one-handed hand-seals with genjutsu" or something (not that a special skill like that would be approved), things that are unique about your character, not things that have to do with your shinobi type or anything like that so again, please make the necessary changes and I'll take a look at it
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 8:03 pm
Fireball-Kun Ah okay. Do I get rid of the basic Doton jutsu too? And I edited everything else. yes, once you change that it will be approved
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 8:05 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 8:11 pm
Fireball-Kun Kaze Arashi 
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Main Information╫
Full Name: Kaze Arashi
Nicknames: Shunny. Shun
Age: 13
Birth date: 4/21
Gender: Male
Village Iwagakure
Race: Asian /Indian
Rank: Academy Student
Shinobi Profession: N/A
Ninja Type/Class: Speed and Tactical
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Major Information╫
Bloodline/ or Soul Demon: Yonbi
Current Bloodline Stage: N/A
Chakra Color: Red/Silver
Chakra Level: High [Bijuu; Yonbi]
Chakra Element: Doton
Battle Strength: Tactics and speed attacks.
Battle Weakness: Brute strength and multiple opponents.
Fights Won: 0
Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
1. N/A
2. N/A
3. N/A
-Completed Missions-
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
Organizations:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Summoning information╫
Summoning Type:
Boss Summoning:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Shinobi Equipment Information: ╫ Headband Location: N/A (Once he gets one, it will be over his forehead.)
Headband Style: Normal
Headband Color: Red
Flack Jacket Style: Sleeves
Flack Jacket Color: White
Weapon Class:
Name of Weapon:
Weapon Range:
Special Abilities:
Weapon Location:
Exploding Smoke Grenade =
Makibishi = 0
Shuriken = 10
Light Bombs = 3
Kunai Holster Location: Left shoulder
Kunai Holster Color: Red
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: Back of left leg
Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: Red
Backpack Style: On back
Backpack Color: Red
Summoning Scroll Holster Location: N/A
Summoning Scroll Holster Color: N/A
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Technique List╫ Starting jutsu
*Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
*Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
*Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Character Description╫
Personality: Shy, silent and bold when needed.
Nindo: "Always make friends they'll be your greatest allies in the Ninja World…A cruel world of death...”
Height: 5'7
Weight: 113
Original Eye Color: Silver/Grey.
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Kaze’s always been alone for his whole life. He’s a hard worker and he clings to life, although he is a ninja in training. –Still under construction–
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alright then APPROVED!!! go ahead and post your profile in the profile section of Iwagakure
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 10:19 pm
Lance Fulgurant BLacKeMoSAdneSS: alright a couple things 1. what is hoton? do you mean hyouton (ice release) or doton(earth release) if it's hyouton then you have to app for the bloodline, if it's doton that's fine, but you can only start with one element, and medical jutsus do count as an element in this guild 2. you do not start off with any jutsus except for the three starting ones given in the skeleton, also are the three jutsu that you listed actually in the guild? if they are customs please submit them to the custom jutsu sub-forum 3. Your weapon, when you say it's "like a boomerang" is it a boomerang or what, if it has any extraordinary abilities you will have to submit it to the custom weapons sub-forum, if it's just a boomerang don't worry about it though And no you do not have to have a flak jacket unless you want one Sorry 'bout that. I was half delirious writing this, so yeah. I really didn't mean to put hoton. No such thing, I am completely aware of that. Kanton was what I was actually aiming for. Fire style. But since medical is an element, then I really have no choice but to scratch that, don't I? The three starting jutsus weren't in my skeleton for some reason. Everytime I copied and pasted it, it never showed up. Weird, right? I'll get that fixed soon, don't worry. And my weapon isn't a boomerang, but everywhere I read said that my profile had to be accepted first. I'll get that done, right away. Sorry again.
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 5:56 am
It's not a problem at all, that's why we have this thread, so we can catch these things and make sure people's profiles are good
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 2:14 pm
Hmmmm.... I don't think this could be any worse... Not only is this a canon character, you also didn't use the character application.
Your not naruto, your not the nine tailed fox. You are fail.
Feel free to submit a real profile of an original character using our application from the first page and I would be more than happy to look it over.
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 5:36 pm
who are you talking too lothar?
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 5:55 pm
Someone posted a profile trying to be naruto. From the look of the style, I'd say it was from some Naruto Love guild or something.
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 6:00 pm
oh ok sweatdrop
PS: check mineeeeee!!
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 6:46 pm
Lance Fulgurant It's not a problem at all, that's why we have this thread, so we can catch these things and make sure people's profiles are good So... are we all good? Or is there something else I gotta do?
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 6:48 pm
Did you fix everything lance told you to fix?
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 6:52 pm
Yyyyyyyeah.... I'm pretty sure I did. I took off everything that I never got accepted in any other subforum, I changed my chakra style... Yeah, I did everything. (Sorry, rant moment)
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