Minielf
New look! A tie, a school coat and some sunnies! Rate me nras!
oh mah GOd!! what happened to you!! i likes the colours, they are nice very robust colours
3nodding uuumm there's just one problem. so lets start from the top:
number one you have no flow what so ever, the colours don't really go well together, they just tend to clash
sweatdrop they are really really good colours and items, but they just don't seem to go well together.
your balance is actually alright. i like how you have balanced the bulkyness of the coat with the guitar. that's actually really well done, those coats are really nice, but most people don't balance them out well, so yea good job on that.
your character is alright too, i think it's because of the little tie
whee i likes that little tie. but yea your character is good, probably will be better if you had better flow.
i know you're going for the school boy look, there are many different school boy looks out there. you could do the bus driver look (short shorts long socks) or like long pants and blazer (mah favourite school boy look
whee ) either way a school boy has a uniform, there for i suggest for this out fit you choose some colours you like and make them work. for example blue and white, they go well together and it's easy to find a large variety of items in those colours that go well together, this will also give you extra flow.
i don't know why you have that blue head thing. those things are really hard to match up with and it doesn't really do anything for your avvie. i like the hair but, that's really nice and the sunnies can stay, they make you look hot.
ok the tie is a good idea, stick with that, i suggest maybe a white shirt (unless that is the nice white shirt which actually looks blue
sweatdrop forgive me if it is) and a pair of matching shorts. i suggest perhaps grey?? or like black even, actually darker coloured pants would be better because shorts on that coat don't really look that good. i say maybe a pair of faded jeans, they cost like 550g. and the shoes are ok but i think we can go better with them.
the guitar isn't doing any real harm so it can stay if you want, maybe you should try some colours that go well with it, i say blues and whites and greys.
3nodding also we don't really need the coat. you're probably better off geting a shorter jacket or something.
other than that it's ok, just a bit of shoppping around, that above should be like a base to your avvie, and then you should add random things to it like a rose to create flow and character along with the red tie and other things like that.
3nodding if you wanna look at good examples of flow, trjn is one, so is tweak, wellzy is a good one too, nathan's avvie is really nice and streek is really great for flow
3nodding a word of advice, keep the hell away from teh avatar thread they will kill you. so all of that being said i gives you 3/10!!