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 Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:19 pm
Shane-Cheshner God damn that was good. Bit of a "wat" at the ending, though. What did you finish?
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:20 pm
Awesome Tree Shane-Cheshner God damn that was good. Bit of a "wat" at the ending, though. Good wat, bad wat? Confused wat. white text: What, was he the android? What's this about a chemical? Also a surprised wat at the COMMUNISM WILL PREVAIL! part.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:21 pm
Zephyrkitty Shane-Cheshner God damn that was good. Bit of a "wat" at the ending, though. What did you finish? Aus's story. Aus: From the stories I've read of yours, it seems you write my favorite style of story, albeit toned down a bit.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:21 pm
Shane-Cheshner Awesome Tree Shane-Cheshner God damn that was good. Bit of a "wat" at the ending, though. Good wat, bad wat? Confused wat. white text: What, was he the android? What's this about a chemical? Also a surprised wat at the COMMUNISM WILL PREVAIL! part.White text. He was. The chemical key = chemical Elizabeth gave Chad on her cigarette. And I wanted to give a twist. Too much?
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:23 pm
Awesome Tree Shane-Cheshner Awesome Tree Shane-Cheshner God damn that was good. Bit of a "wat" at the ending, though. Good wat, bad wat? Confused wat. white text: What, was he the android? What's this about a chemical? Also a surprised wat at the COMMUNISM WILL PREVAIL! part.White text. He was. The chemical key = chemical Elizabeth gave Chad on her cigarette. And I wanted to give a twist. Too much?whayt teckst: So the chemical was the trigger for the explosion, I assume?
And yes, it was a good twist, now that I know what actually happened.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:25 pm
Shane-Cheshner Awesome Tree Shane-Cheshner Awesome Tree Shane-Cheshner God damn that was good. Bit of a "wat" at the ending, though. Good wat, bad wat? Confused wat. white text: What, was he the android? What's this about a chemical? Also a surprised wat at the COMMUNISM WILL PREVAIL! part.White text. He was. The chemical key = chemical Elizabeth gave Chad on her cigarette. And I wanted to give a twist. Too much?whayt teckst: So the chemical was the trigger for the explosion, I assume?
And yes, it was a good twist, now that I know what actually happened.White text: Why thanks. I put a decent amount of work into that story. Plus I think the band the song is based on has communism views so, yeah.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:27 pm
Awesome Tree Shane-Cheshner Awesome Tree Shane-Cheshner Awesome Tree Shane-Cheshner God damn that was good. Bit of a "wat" at the ending, though. Good wat, bad wat? Confused wat. white text: What, was he the android? What's this about a chemical? Also a surprised wat at the COMMUNISM WILL PREVAIL! part.White text. He was. The chemical key = chemical Elizabeth gave Chad on her cigarette. And I wanted to give a twist. Too much?whayt teckst: So the chemical was the trigger for the explosion, I assume?
And yes, it was a good twist, now that I know what actually happened.White text: Why thanks. I put a decent amount of work into that story. Plus I think the band the song is based on has communism views so, yeah.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:27 pm
Awesome Tree Shane-Cheshner Awesome Tree Shane-Cheshner Awesome Tree Shane-Cheshner God damn that was good. Bit of a "wat" at the ending, though. Good wat, bad wat? Confused wat. white text: What, was he the android? What's this about a chemical? Also a surprised wat at the COMMUNISM WILL PREVAIL! part.White text. He was. The chemical key = chemical Elizabeth gave Chad on her cigarette. And I wanted to give a twist. Too much?whayt teckst: So the chemical was the trigger for the explosion, I assume?
And yes, it was a good twist, now that I know what actually happened.White text: Why thanks. I put a decent amount of work into that story. Plus I think the band the song is based on has communism views so, yeah.Y'see, because hot glue looks like seme-- Oh...s**t, the white text is gone.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:28 pm
That was the most awesome thing ever & I really love that in the end the FBi agent WAS AN EXPLODING ANDROID! That is awesome. They should really watch who they hire. Good story.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:28 pm
TtheHero Awesome Tree Shane-Cheshner Awesome Tree Shane-Cheshner Confused wat. white text: What, was he the android? What's this about a chemical? Also a surprised wat at the COMMUNISM WILL PREVAIL! part.White text. He was. The chemical key = chemical Elizabeth gave Chad on her cigarette. And I wanted to give a twist. Too much?whayt teckst: So the chemical was the trigger for the explosion, I assume?
And yes, it was a good twist, now that I know what actually happened.White text: Why thanks. I put a decent amount of work into that story. Plus I think the band the song is based on has communism views so, yeah.Text white. Thanks. I'll fix up the problems with it later, but now I'm gonna get a hair cut.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:34 pm
Act 2 starts off pretty epicly.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:35 pm
Regulust Act 2 starts off pretty epicly. Act 2 of what?
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:36 pm
Owwin Regulust Act 2 starts off pretty epicly. Act 2 of what?
Dr. Horrible.
Also he gets a car to the head... he's gotta have like invincibility or something.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:37 pm
Regulust Owwin Regulust Act 2 starts off pretty epicly. Act 2 of what?
Dr. Horrible.
Also he gets a car to the head... he's gotta have like invincibility or something.Maybe he survived, because there's a doctor in the house.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 8:42 pm
Owwin Regulust Act 2 starts off pretty epicly. Act 2 of what?
Dr. Horrible.
Also he gets a car to the head... he's gotta have like invincibility or something.
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