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 Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:09 pm
G'night. I gotta go to bed. =w=
*hugs for everyone* See ya! <3
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:09 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:13 pm
Awesome Tree TtheHero Awesome Tree TtheHero Awesome Tree Shane-Cheshner It works either way, really. Aus: I JUST TOLD YOU SORRY D: T:“What are you talking about Chad? I dumped your pathetic little a** years ago. Why would I want to return to some has-been like you?”
Now how about the sentence where almighty is to be used?“What are you talking about Chad? I dumped your pathetic little a** years ago; why would I want to return to some has-been like yo-” I interrupt ed her, but not with words. Because this was the first time she came close enough, I wrapped my legs around her, bringing her head down to the floor with an almighty crack. The story's in the present tense though. Would it still be -ed?
No it wouldn't.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:14 pm
Regulust Awesome Tree TtheHero Awesome Tree TtheHero Hm... sounds good, sounds good. For more flow, try replacing the period with a semicolon.
Now how about the sentence where almighty is to be used? “What are you talking about Chad? I dumped your pathetic little a** years ago; why would I want to return to some has-been like yo-” I interrupt ed her, but not with words. Because this was the first time she came close enough, I wrapped my legs around her, bringing her head down to the floor with an almighty crack. The story's in the present tense though. Would it still be -ed?
No it wouldn't.Yeah. If it's present tense, no.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:25 pm
So then what about the word wrapped, eh? confused
The story may take place in the present, but when someone is narrating something, ergo telling what happened, you would have to use the suffix -ed or other past tense wording, when describing certain actions.
Humor me, which would sound better if you were describing something:
"I told her what happened"
or
"I tell her what happened"?
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:29 pm
Finished Devil Survivor until I start a New Game+.
The moral of Yuzu's ending is 'screwing destiny doesn't work'.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:31 pm
I agree with T on this one, guys.
You wouldn't say something like:
"Did you see th-"
I was interrupt by a scream from the neighboring room.
Instead you'd say:
"Did you see th-"
I was interrupted by a scream from the neighboring room.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:32 pm
TtheHero So then what about the word wrapped, eh? confused
The story may take place in the present, but when someone is narrating something, ergo telling what happened, you would have to use the suffix -ed or other past tense wording, when describing certain actions.
Humor me, which would sound better if you were describing something:
"I told her what happened"
or
"I tell her what happened"? "I told her what happened."
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:32 pm
Orphie I agree with T on this one, guys. You wouldn't say something like: "Did you see th-" I was interrupt by a scream from the neighboring room. Instead you'd say: "Did you see th-" I was interrupted by a scream from the neighboring room.
It depends on the sentence. rolleyes
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:35 pm
Regulust Orphie I agree with T on this one, guys. You wouldn't say something like: "Did you see th-" I was interrupt by a scream from the neighboring room. Instead you'd say: "Did you see th-" I was interrupted by a scream from the neighboring room.
It depends on the sentence. rolleyes No, not really. Interrupt is usually used for the future, isn't it? Like, "I'm going to interrupt their wedding." But if you're talking about something that just happened, or that's happening now, you'd be like, "You interrupted me." or "I'm interrupting your conversation, aren't I?"
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:41 pm
Changed. Also finished
http://s-dude.deviantart.com/art/Burn-You-Down-151177082
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:44 pm
Awesome Tree Changed. Also finished http://s-dude.deviantart.com/art/Burn-You-Down-151177082 Nvm. I have to take it off. sad
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:52 pm
Hyphens and ******** quotes? I just ******** said it was ampersand time. You guys can't do s**t right & you smell bad.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:54 pm
Is anyone else's inbox taking a LONG time to load? I hate when this happens.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 7:55 pm
Owwin Hyphens and ******** quotes? I just ******** said it was ampersand time. You guys can't do s**t right & you smell bad. Well excuse me for asking for help on my writing.
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