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 Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 9:55 am
The Other Cheek
Why did they say
all those things about you
Never seeing past the surface
or what was really true
They thought it was all in fun
it's pretty obvious they were wrong
they took away your sense of self
they took away your song
But in all of this you sat
enduring until the last
Letting each word cut right to the bone
while you simply smiled and let them pass
I wish i could be like you
to turn the other cheek
but I can't simply let it go
I will always speak.
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Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 10:45 am
A Tempting Heartache For A Lie.
Lipstick bruses upon crushed lips.
Smiles that let lies caressly slip.
Simple hugs and kisses that say I love you.
The same innocent smiles and kisses proving lies to be true.
A backhanded slap across the heart.
Words that obiviouly tear hearts apart.
A lovers lost choice of words.
Voices snaping like piano cords.
Tears falling without grace.
Lies unravling at the sight of your guilty face.
Blood soaked tears falling thru your eyes.
All because of your crule lies.
Bruses from your decite.
Breathlessly hurt from your defeat.
A terrible end to love.
A sadd discuse for a wing above.
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Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 4:12 pm
LIFEspring The Other CheekWhy did they say all those things about you Never seeing past the surface or what was really true They thought it was all in fun it's pretty obvious they were wrong they took away your sense of self they took away your song But in all of this you sat enduring until the last Letting each word cut right to the bone while you simply smiled and let them pass I wish i could be like you to turn the other cheek but I can't simply let it go I will always speak. really nice poem...reminds me of. myself. cry
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Posted: Sat May 21, 2005 6:51 pm
You kept on forcing me
Right until I made you leave
But with you, you took my heart
I knew you'd just run off with it
Without a reason to huff and spit
as to why things didn't work out for us
I blamed it all on you
But the whole time it was me
I put myself through this misery
And you brought me right back through it
Without a clue
without a hint
Your soul turned stone
and my heart turned to flint.
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Posted: Sun May 29, 2005 11:31 pm
A tear drop fell from my eyes tonight
I can't believe you made me cry
I want you to be no one to me
But I can't no matter how hard I try.
Maybe it's just me tonight
and the moon has effected me too
Or maybe it's just a simple fact
Im trying not to be in love with you.
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Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 10:51 am
First let me say ive had a good time reading the poems here. I liked alot of them. I havent written in a while so heres an old one.
What are you thinking about
Are you thinking about how you hurt me?
What did you think about when we were dating.
Did you think of how you hated me?
I flip through the channels on the tv screen.
Are you watching the same thing I am?
Im surfing the web, and doing Bolt stuff.
Are you logged on too?
Im excited about the weekend.
What will you be doing?
Im wondering when this love will go away.
You seemed to have mastered that,
How did you do it?
How could you pretend you didnt know me?
Our favorite song comes on the radio.
Do you hear it?
Funny that our favorite song was a break up song.
Do you laugh at it.
Does it make you think of me?
Im living in your world and I cant seem to take it back.
Your in every outfit I wear,
The ones I wore to certain things we did.
Your in the food I eat,
The ones you told me you liked or didnt like.
Your in my mind always,
When I go to the movies I search the seats for you.
When I go to the mall,
Your always there somewhere watching me but I cant see you.
Make me stop going crazy.
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Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 10:56 am
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Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 11:02 am
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 4:29 am
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 4:56 am
Shattered
I'm looking in the shatterd mirror,
Only to see my shattered face.
Or maybe it's just my fear,
But this seems far beyond my pace.
I'm lieing here and feeling,
Restless tonight,
Thinking about my shattered life.
"Why do you care?!",
I scream at my Shatterd-self.
But my heart is far more shattered
Than me; Forever
Broken in eternity.
My hert and ears
Crave to hear the
Three small words
.......I love you.
By: Camryn Leah Draik ( Ptobably more to come)
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Posted: Thu Jun 23, 2005 10:19 am
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 1:37 pm
Here's one but I have a couple better ones:
Missing You With Every Passing Day
How do I tell you,
that I really miss you so,
without getting in trouble,
or letting everyone know?
I may tell you I have been fine,
and that I am alright
but that isn't the truth because,
I cry and think of you all night.
Why is our love a crime,
if love is what we say,
but we don't tell anyone,
instead we hide it day by day.
I know I may sound stupid,
and ridiculous for what feellings I say,
but I really, really love you,
and I miss you so much on every passing day.
What do ya people think? It is about my love in real life and her mom found out and banned us from seeing each other, pretty crazy huh? crying
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 11:28 pm
that sux. you really should get another gf if u still have feelings for that chick. the poem was 4w3$0m3n3$$.
mrs reaper: jeez your poem is so deep. it was beautiful. I loved it. it's like.. coming from 2 different views. gorgeously written. heart i think it's the best poem on the page. just my opinion.
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 11:31 pm
Shyzi Ao that sux. you really should get another gf if u still have feelings for that chick. the poem was 4w3$0m3n3$$. mrs reaper: jeez your poem is so deep. it was beautiful. I loved it. it's like.. coming from 2 different views. gorgeously written. heart i think it's the best poem on the page. just my opinion. I just want a gaian g/f but I will always love my real g/f with all my heart and nobody can change that but us..So no matter what..I love her. wink heart
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Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2005 12:06 am
Shyzi Ao that sux. you really should get another gf if u still have feelings for that chick. the poem was 4w3$0m3n3$$. mrs reaper: jeez your poem is so deep. it was beautiful. I loved it. it's like.. coming from 2 different views. gorgeously written. heart i think it's the best poem on the page. just my opinion.
Shadow15, I could feel the feeling in the poem, and (Perversly?!?) Enjoyed the feeling coming off of it. **Sticks her thumbs up** I liked it xd
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