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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 4:50 pm
Ok, thanks smile I'll post it in the village and start RPing then. Oh, I added a weapon in the profile. Look at it and tell me if it's ok. They are just 10 foot long chains that have 13 foot reach when my arms are extended.
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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 5:34 pm
well so long as it doesnt have some kind of crazy ability like shooting lightning, it doesn't need approval.
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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 7:30 pm
Kyuuketsuki Sora
http://th01.deviantart.net/fs32/300W/f/2008/219/b/d/____purple_girl_____by_larenn.jpg ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Main Information╫ Full Name: Sora Kyuuketsuki Nicknames: Kyuu-chan or Sora Age: 15 Birthdate: December 25th Gender: Female Village Sand Race: Japanese/Korean Rank: Academy Student Shinobi Profession: Infiltration/Medical Ninja Type/Class: Medical/Speed
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Bloodline/ Or Soul Demon: Current Bloodline Stage: Chakra Color: Black/Silver Chakra Level: Low Chakra Element: Medical
Battle Strength: long-range ninjutsu and genjutsu Battle Weakness: Anything physical (taijutsu)
Fights Won: 0 Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills: 1. 2. 3.
-Completed Missions- S Rank: A Rank: B Rank: C Rank: D Rank:
Organizations: ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Summoning infomation╫ Summoning Type: Boss Summoning: ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫ Headband Location: Neck Headband Style: Straight Headband Color: Black Flack Jacket Style: (Can I like... not have a jacket? Or is it required?) Flak Jacket Color:
Weapon Class:
Name of Weapon: Weapon Range: Special Abilities: Weapon Location:
Exploding Smoke Grenade=3 Makibishi= 20 Shuriken= 10 Light Bombs= 2
Kunai Holster Location: Left thigh (She likes to reach over her body for it) Kunai Holster Color: Black Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: Left thigh, next to the Kunai holster Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: Black Backpack Style: One Strap, over the shoulder Backpack Color: Silver with black lines Summoning Scroll Holster Location: On back, below backpack Summoning Scroll Holster Color: Silver
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Genjutsu
Taijutsu • • •
Taijutsu Style(s) • • •
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Character Description╫ Personality: Is usually serious most of the time and doesn't have much to say to others. Can be a bit cold towards others, but opens up once you get to know her. Nindo: "There's no such thing as perfection, but a hundred percent is close enough." Height: 5' 4'' Weight: 120 lbsl Original Eye Color: Teal-Blue
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Background Information╫ Sora was born to a kind family that didn't belong to any particular village. They were more or less on their own, away from others, living by themselves. She enjoyed the serenity of the mountain pass that she lived in, the blue skies and the lush valleys. But that all changed when some wandering rogue ninja came over to her house and destroyed everything, looting it all. Sora was only about four at the time, and was out at the creek by herself, swimming. When she came back, she was filled with hatred for all rogues, and knew at that moment that she needed to join a village. She went to the Sand, because that was the first village that she ended up at.
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Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2010 8:00 pm
BLacKeMoSAdneSS: alright a couple things
1. what is hoton? do you mean hyouton (ice release) or doton(earth release) if it's hyouton then you have to app for the bloodline, if it's doton that's fine, but you can only start with one element, and medical jutsus do count as an element in this guild
2. you do not start off with any jutsus except for the three starting ones given in the skeleton, also are the three jutsu that you listed actually in the guild? if they are customs please submit them to the custom jutsu sub-forum
3. Your weapon, when you say it's "like a boomerang" is it a boomerang or what, if it has any extraordinary abilities you will have to submit it to the custom weapons sub-forum, if it's just a boomerang don't worry about it though
And no you do not have to have a flak jacket unless you want one
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:06 am
Reitenmaru Kurochi ╫Main Information╫ Full Name: Reitenmaru Kiraku Nicknames: Rei Age: 19 Birthdate: November 27 Gender: Male Village Cloud Race: White Rank: Sannin Shinobi Profession: Protector- Reitenmaru may seem offensive to most by his jokes. Though, if you look at the good side of him, he is very protective and will try to protect his comrades at best try. Ninja Type: Taijutsu Specialist
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Bloodline/ Or Soul Demon: None Clan:None Current Bloodline Stage: None Chakra Color: Teal Chakra Control: Excellent Chakra Level: Low Chakra Element: Lightning, Fuuton and Katon
Battle Strength: Close Range(Overall Taijutsu) Battle Weakness: Hesitates on fighting with all will
Fights Won: 0 Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills:
*Note Special shinobi skills must be approved BEFORE posting your profile*
1. Mastered Magnetic Field Style 2. 3.
-Completed Missions- S Rank: A Rank: B Rank: C Rank: D Rank:
Organizations:
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Summoning infomation╫ Summoning Type: Boss Summoning: -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫Headband Location:Sewed on shirt's top/chest area Headband Style:Sewed/Custom Headband Color:Black Flack Jacket Style:Cloud Flak Jacket Color:Gray
Weapon Class:Sword
Name of Weapon:Katana Weapon Range: Standard Special Abilities:None Weapon Location: Back
Exploding Smoke Grenade=20 Makibishi=20 Shuriken=30 Light Bombs=15
Kunai Holster Location:Belt Kunai Holster Color:Black Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: Left Butt cheek Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color:Gray Backpack Style:One strip Backpack Color:Black Summoning Scroll Holster Location:Flack Jacket Summoning Scroll Holster Color: Gray
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Technique List╫ •Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu) •Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu) •Bushin no Jutsu (Clone Jutsu) •Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Jutsu) • •
Ninjutsu •Master of Lightning Element(All)
Fuuton -Wind Release razz ressure Damage -Wind Release:Wind Cutter Technique -Wind Release:Violent Wind Palm -Wind Levitation -Projectile Control Skill -Gale Surge -Wind Explosion -Projectile Deflection Blast -Propelling Winds -Spinning Shield of Winds -Armor of Wind -Wind Instantaneous Body Skill -Wind Release: Wind Dragon -Wind Release: Air Riding -Low Air Pressure Technique -Wind Sword -Wind Torpedo -Wind Explosion Clone
Katon -Fireproof Technique -Five -Hydra Technique -Longsword Technique -Fire Sealing -Fierce Flame Fist -True Hydra Technique -Blazing Clone Technique -Fire Transport Technique -Highest Ranking Fire Sealing -Pandemonium - - Genjutsu • • •
Taijutsu •Magnetic Force (Mastered) •Shuurai Tekken Do (Mastered) •
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╫Character Description╫
Personality:Funny, Calm, Sometimes serious Nindo:"Everyone has a small,weak string of hope.I won't let my string get cut." Height:173cm Weight:62kg. Original Eye Color:Icy Blue
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╫Background Information╫ Reitenmaru was a Shinobi of Cloud since from the start of his Shinobi Path. He was a cheerful child, such having a large amount of friends. Continuing to serve the Village as years passed, he would come up to his level where he is; the Sannin of Cloud. He was intent about Taijutsu, and such had been training under strong Shinobi of Cloud.
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 12:53 pm
just a few issues
1. Your chakra level would be low since you don't have a bloodline or clan
2. You can have up to three elements, of course if all you want is raiton that's fine too
3. I didn't see your app for the snake summoning, if you want to be a snake summoner you will have to app for it first
4. Jutsus: you have Raiton mastered which is correct, but you also can have up to 30 other jutsu either elemental or non, but of course if you would prefer to learn thme in the rp, that's fine too
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 12:57 pm
Lance Fulgurant just a few issues 1. Your chakra level would be low since you don't have a bloodline or clan 2. You can have up to three elements, of course if all you want is raiton that's fine too 3. I didn't see your app for the snake summoning, if you want to be a snake summoner you will have to app for it first 4. Jutsus: you have Raiton mastered which is correct, but you also can have up to 30 other jutsu either elemental or non, but of course if you would prefer to learn thme in the rp, that's fine too Alright, I got a few answers to every issue. 1.Alright, I'll change. 2.I thought only one, since I was Auto-Ranked, anyway I'll change it. 3.I didn't see a thread for it, so I just added it. 4.I'll change that also, thank you.
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 1:14 pm
(EDITED, you may delete this post afterwards)
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 1:17 pm
K it's fine, the summoning forum is near the bottom, it's called Summoning Lands
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:08 pm
Talyon Mikitali  ((Note: Her eyes are green and she wears a different outfit.)) -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Main Information╫Full Name: Talyon Mikitali. Nicknames: Taly or Miki. Age: 7. Birthdate: March 23. Gender: Female. Village Sunagakure, Hidden Sand Village. Race: Caucasian. Rank: Academy Student. Shinobi Profession: Unknown. Ninja Type/Class: Assassin and Tactician (In Training). ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Major Infomation╫Bloodline/ Or Soul Demon: N/A. Current Bloodline Stage: N/A. Chakra Color: Light Green. Chakra Level: Medium. Chakra Element: Wind/Air (Primary). Earth (Secondary).
Battle Strength: Battle Smart. Fast. Stealth and One Hit Critical. Battle Weakness: Long Range battle. Aerial Battle.
Fights Won: N/A. Fights Lost: N/A.
Shinobi Special Skills: 1. 2. 3.
-Completed Missions- S Rank: N/A. A Rank: N/A. B Rank: N/A. C Rank: N/A. D Rank: N/A.
Organizations: N/A. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Summoning infomation╫Summoning Type: N/A. Boss Summoning: N/A. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Shinobi Equipment Information:╫Headband Location: Will be Around Neck. Headband Style: Will be Scarf. Headband Color: Will be Black. Flack Jacket Style: N/A. Flak Jacket Color: N/A. Weapon Class: Scythe - Mid Range Bladed Weapon. (In Training).
Name of Weapon: Demon Bone - Killith. Weapon Range: Handle 2 Meters. Blade 1 and a Half Meters. Chain 8 Meters. Special Abilities: Is capable of speaking and moving on it's own. Is not capable of fighting on it's own. Weapon Location: Generally covered in black cloth on her back.
Exploding Smoke Grenade= N/A. Makibishi= N/A. Shuriken= N/A. Light Bombs= N/A.
Kunai Holster Location: Left Leg. Kunai Holster Color: Black. Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: Right Leg. Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: Black. Backpack Style: N/A. Backpack Color: N/A. Summoning Scroll Holster Location: N/A. Summoning Scroll Holster Color: N/A.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Technique List╫Ninjutsu -Non Elemental- *Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique) *Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique)
-Element = Fuuton/Wind- (Primary).
-Element = Doton/Earth- (Secondary).
N/A. Genjutsu N/A. Taijutsu N/A. Taijutsu Style(s) N/A. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------╫Character Description╫ Personality: Talyon is a bit of everything. She's a headstrong girl with an attitude. Often times she's hyperactive energetic and outgoing, she's also honest and doesn't hold back so asking her personal questions can be tricky because Talyon always tells the truth and if you don't want to hear it then don't ask. Talyon's not a shy girl but she can be in certain situations. Talyon is a bright girl but not always up to date, she's often confused by people and their actions, she is in words a dumb smart person. During battle talyon is calm and collected she's professional and is always looking out for others. Talyon is caring but not to all. Talyon is also capable of being annoying to crude to evil. Nindo: "Live your life like yout never going to live it again." Height: 3'8'' Weight: 70-80lbs. Original Eye Color: Green. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
╫Background Information╫
Born and raised within Sunagakure of the Hidden Sand Village. Talyon was the only child born to her parents, who were not ninja's but worked within the medical facilities. Talyon entered into the academy to train in the ways of the ninja. A couple weeks after she entered the academy Talyon wondered in the desert playing with her friends. As they played Talyon ended up falling into a hole within the sand and had fallen into a kind of cavern, inside the cavern was nothing but a large scythe weapon. Talyon took the weapon and is now training to use it. All the secretes of the blade are known to Talyon even though she doesn't understand at the moment. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 7:10 pm
did you actually use our profile skeleton? anyway, you have several problems
1. you start off as an academy student first of all
2. you start off with only one element
3. for battle strength you would not really be any faster than anyone else, and I'm not even really sure what "One hit critical means", you would have stealth as a strength though
4. shinobi special skills: you have to ask for these and it wouldn't be things given by your bloodline/clan or shinobi type or anything like that, it's skills unique to the character itself, also any poison coating you want for weapons will have to be apped for in the custom weapons forum
5. jutsus: you will only start off with the three basic jutsu given in the profile skeleton
alright so go ahead and make the necessary changes and i'll take another look
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 7:38 pm
Kaze Arashi  ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Main Information╫ Full Name: Kaze Arashi Nicknames: Shunny. Shun Age: 13 Birth date: 4/21 Gender: Male Village Iwagakure Race: Asian /Indian Rank: Academy Student Shinobi Profession: N/A Ninja Type/Class: Speed and Tactical
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Bloodline/ or Soul Demon: Yonbi Current Bloodline Stage: N/A Chakra Color: Red/Silver Chakra Level: High [Bijuu; Yonbi] Chakra Element: Doton
Battle Strength: Tactics and speed attacks. Battle Weakness: Brute strength and multiple opponents.
Fights Won: 0 Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills: 1. N/A 2. N/A 3. N/A
-Completed Missions- S Rank: A Rank: B Rank: C Rank: D Rank:
Organizations:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Summoning information╫ Summoning Type: Boss Summoning: ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Shinobi Equipment Information: ╫ Headband Location: N/A (Once he gets one, it will be over his forehead.) Headband Style: Normal Headband Color: Red Flack Jacket Style: Sleeves Flack Jacket Color: White
Weapon Class:
Name of Weapon: Weapon Range: Special Abilities: Weapon Location:
Exploding Smoke Grenade = Makibishi = 0 Shuriken = 10 Light Bombs = 3
Kunai Holster Location: Left shoulder Kunai Holster Color: Red Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: Back of left leg Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: Red Backpack Style: On back Backpack Color: Red Summoning Scroll Holster Location: N/A Summoning Scroll Holster Color: N/A
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Technique List╫ Starting jutsu *Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Technique) *Kawarimi No Jutsu (Body Switch Technique) *Bunshin no jutsu (clone technique)
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s)
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Character Description╫ Personality: Shy, silent and bold when needed. Nindo: "Always make friends they'll be your greatest allies in the Ninja World…A cruel world of death...” Height: 5'7 Weight: 113 Original Eye Color: Silver/Grey.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Background Information╫ Kaze’s always been alone for his whole life. He’s a hard worker and he clings to life, although he is a ninja in training. –Still under construction–
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 7:39 pm
Lance Fulgurant did you actually use our profile skeleton? anyway, you have several problems 1. you start off as an academy student first of all 2. you start off with only one element 3. for battle strength you would not really be any faster than anyone else, and I'm not even really sure what "One hit critical means", you would have stealth as a strength though 4. shinobi special skills: you have to ask for these and it wouldn't be things given by your bloodline/clan or shinobi type or anything like that, it's skills unique to the character itself, also any poison coating you want for weapons will have to be apped for in the custom weapons forum 5. jutsus: you will only start off with the three basic jutsu given in the profile skeleton alright so go ahead and make the necessary changes and i'll take another look Yes I used the Profile Skeleton. All I did was change the middle half so it wasn't centered. It just makes it look cleaner.
I've changed her to academy Student and also I only posted what Elements she would have. I haven't posted up any Jutsu for the Elements so she hasn't learned anything, I only posted two elements to show you which ones I'll be using.
For battle strength I didn't mention her being faster then anyone, she's just faster then normal because of her class and One Hit Critical means that her first strikes are always her most powerful.
Shinobi skills... You have to apply to be Smart (Tactician) an Affective fighter with a weapon and flexible (Assassin)? That just seems kind weird because none of those are very special and they all match with her Ninja type/class. I've also removed the poison because I wouldn't ever use poison. But I'll change it to match her bloodline if what I have is still wrong.
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 7:46 pm
Fireball-Kun Kaze Arashi  ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Main Information╫ Full Name: Kaze Arashi Nicknames: Shunny. Shun Age: 13 Birth date: 4/21 Gender: Male Village Iwagakure Race: Asian /Indian Rank: Academy Student Shinobi Profession: N/A Ninja Type/Class: Speed and Tactical
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Bloodline/ or Soul Demon: Yonbi Current Bloodline Stage: N/A Chakra Color: Red/Silver Chakra Level: Medium [Bijuu; Yonbi] Chakra Element: Doton
Battle Strength: Tactics and speed attacks. Battle Weakness: Brute strength and multiple opponents.
Fights Won: 0 Fights Lost: 0
Shinobi Special Skills: 1. N/A 2. N/A 3. N/A
-Completed Missions- S Rank: A Rank: B Rank: C Rank: D Rank:
Organizations:
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Summoning information╫ Summoning Type: Boss Summoning: ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Shinobi Equipment Information: ╫ Headband Location: N/A (Once he gets one, it will be over his forehead.) Headband Style: Normal Headband Color: Red Flack Jacket Style: Sleeves Flack Jacket Color: White
Weapon Class:
Name of Weapon: Weapon Range: Special Abilities: Weapon Location:
Exploding Smoke Grenade = Makibishi = 0 Shuriken = 10 Light Bombs = 3
Kunai Holster Location: Left shoulder Kunai Holster Color: Red Shuriken and Bomb Holster Location: Back of left leg Shuriken and Bomb Holster Color: Red Backpack Style: On back Backpack Color: Red Summoning Scroll Holster Location: N/A Summoning Scroll Holster Color: N/A
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Doton Earth Release ______________________________
Basic Doton Jutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Taijutsu Style(s) Ishi no Karada Taijutsu (Stone Body Taijutsu) Official Stone Taijutsu Style Stage 1 Rank: Academy
Stances: None
Techniques:
Tsuruhashihijishou (Pickaxe Elbow) Requirements: None Description: The only complicated move the Shinobi is capable of at this stage. An elbow attack that is delivered downwards or backwards. Often combined in a combo.
Shoushitsu (Rising Knee) Requirement: None Description: The user brings his knee upwards to knock the air out of the enemy’s stomach and to make the enemy more vulnerable and open for a new and more powerful attack.
Hourakushou (Cave-in Palm) Requirement: None Description: A basic Taijutsu attack. Similar to how a Hyuuga attacks with a gentle fist attack, the Yama-Ken user rams his open palm forward to hit the enemy’s chest and belly. A direct hit can knock the air out of the opponent.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Character Description╫ Personality: Shy, silent and bold when needed. Nindo: "Always make friends they'll be your greatest allies in the Ninja World…A cruel world of death...” Height: 5'7 Weight: 113 Original Eye Color: Silver/Grey.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ╫Background Information╫ Kaze’s always been alone for his whole life. He’s a hard worker and he clings to life, although he is a ninja in training. –Still under construction–
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- only a few issues: 1. your chakra level would actually be high, all demon hosts and bloodline/clan heads have high level chakra 2. you also do not start off knowing any taijutsu styles, though you can choose to start off with the three starting jutsu on the profile skeleton
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 7:51 pm
Ah okay. Do I get rid of the basic Doton jutsu too? And I edited everything else.
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