Marie the Fallen
LegendarySuperNoob
I don't know if this card is broken but I know it would not be well liked (I hope that someone else has not used this card name or effect) smile
Living End - Continous Spell Card
Effect - to activate this card send one card from your hand and deck from play. As long as this card is on the field it cannot be destroyed or removed(except from it's own effect) by monster, spell or trap effect also as long as this card is on the field you cannot lose the duel under any cicumstances. At the end of you opponents end phase you must send the top two cards of your deck to the graveyard if you cannot the remove this card from the game and inflict damage to your opponent equal to amount of cards removed from play X 200.
Living End - Continous Spell Card
Effect - to activate this card send one card from your hand and deck from play. As long as this card is on the field it cannot be destroyed or removed(except from it's own effect) by monster, spell or trap effect also as long as this card is on the field you cannot lose the duel under any cicumstances. At the end of you opponents end phase you must send the top two cards of your deck to the graveyard if you cannot the remove this card from the game and inflict damage to your opponent equal to amount of cards removed from play X 200.
The wording needs to be edited to something like
Select one card from your hand and one card from your deck and remove them from play to activate this card. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of Monster, Spell or trap effect (except its own). As long as this card is in play you cannot lose the duel under any condition. At the end of your opponent's turn you must send the top 2 cards fromt he top of your deck to your graveyard, if you cannot this card is destroyed and you lose the duel.
Thanks for the rewording , but you forgot to mention the can't be removed from the field and when to remove the top two cards from the top of the deck from play. Also there is no effect damage that was intended for this card.(I forgot and put to the graveyard when I intended to make it removed from play for the top two cards, makes more sense with the effect damage.)
