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 Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2012 2:05 am
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Full Name: Senri Inabi
Nickname: shiki
True Age: 17
Age Appeared:17
Birthdate: May 5
Gender: male for know
Ethnicity: Japanese
Blood Type: O+
Sexuality: Hetero
Height: 5' 4
Weight: 120
Eye Color: Greyish blue while normal, red when angry, and a mix when awakened
Hair Color: brown
Life View: i live for my people no matter the cost
Personality: Senri is usually impassive, and often detached to the rest of the quincy's e. He rarely expresses emotion, and may seem like he doesn't care about his surroundings. Because of his reserved nature, he keeps to himself, and never has much to say, but when he does it is noted in that he can be very blunt with his comments.Senri love for pocky,and often eats it. Laid back to the point of seeming apathetic, Senri does not have much of an interest in anything and possesses little motivation, although he is responsible about his modeling career and duties as a quincy. A follower by nature, he became quite attached to the quincy.
Likes:
-pocky (snack/ sweet)
-modeling
-resting
-being alone
-helping his mother
Dislikes
-enemies of the quicy
-bitter things
-leading people
Side: quincy
Rank:stern ritter
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Senri is the reancarnation or rebirth of his 200 year old great great grandfather Rido Inabi, though this is unknown to him and most if not all that know him as he Rido's spirit was mixed with his at birth which infact should have killed him and would have had not his parents used there own energy to not make the child overload. But in turn his father died and his mother very ill and weak. Shiki's mother was also a well-known former actress Along with a very powerful quincy, though is now a little unstable in health . it was also because of his mother that he was scouted as a model while visiting his mom while she was working as an actress at the age of six, and he himself is very skilled.
Senri was always taken care of by his mother until seven when her health became serious causing him to not only take care but earn money to keep his families funds from falling even though his family is quite rich. at the age of twelve Senri was trained by his mother to learn the way of the quincy and help him since during that time his powers had began to flow strongly causing the boy to loose control of his body in which Rido would take over.
Know at the age of seventeen Senri follows the quincies without question while still caring for his mother and keeping up with his modeling career still not knowing of his fate or true story of Rido Inabi
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Reiatsu Color: grey while normal, red when possessed
Reiryoku Level:
Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk:
• Air Dash:
• Hirenkyaku:
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Grappling: Practitioner Level
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• Quincy Archery:
• Quincy Marksmanship:
Reiryoku Techniques:
• Reishi Absorption:
Other Techniques:
• Dashing:
• Jumping:
Strengths:
• extremely good vision- Senri's eyes can follow high speed movement on a level in which is unnatural and is able to intercept attacks or movements with ease
• master swords man- even though he is a quincy Senri is a known swordsman and is usually seen with a sword
Weaknesses:
• Laziness- Senri is very lazy is prone to even sometimes allow himself to be hit just so as to not have to move
• Mother- Senri's mother is the thing he cares most for in the world and is himself willing to kill people for her safety
Fears:
• losing his mother
• loosing himself
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▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: The Bow
Cross Name: Alistaire (defender of man)
Cross Location:usually located at in shirt right hand/arm under his shirt sleeve or in his top pocket of his coat
Cross Appearance:cross
Weapon Type: Bow
Cross Type: chain
▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: True Weapon
True Weapon Name: Alistaire
True Weapon Type: bow
True Weapon Description: his energy forms a fairly long bow in his right hand with increased size as well as short energy blade at both ends of the energy bow, and at will lengthen to cover his right hand as a shield while still being able to fire his arrows
True Weapon Ability: Senri can fire up to 350 arrows per second each being able to reach speeds of up to 200 miles within seconds.
trail: Senri can shoot his energy arrows at the enemy at which point they will follow the enemy at high speed or even turn if not shot directly at the designated target or targets and will chase after the enemy with perfect perversion until they hit or are destroyed, up to 200 arrows can do this at once
spark: Senri can add a small spark of his own reishi to each shot of his arrows when he fires. Upon contact with a surface they explode by gathering and setting off spirit energy close to them using that small spark as well as the small reishi added, this can be used on 150 arrows at a time and when more then one make contact together they make a very large and powerful explosion. on average one arrow will cause one story and ten feet in span of damage. this attack can be used with trail
lightray shot: Senri fires of a extremely weak and small arrow arrow that is able to break the sound barrier causing a small round blast of air like that of a old day cannon to be seen and in doing so move at speeds unforeseeable to the naked eye, though only one can be fired at a time and it cannot be used with other moves like trail and spark.
Trasfer: Senri puts his put his bow in his katana causing the weapon to become surrounded by a coat of reishi making it extremely sharp, Senri can then proceed to absorb reishi around him into his blade or his own reishi before firing it off as a beam, wave or slash
Golden/blood trail: Senri's most powerful attack in which he changes up his own reishi and reishi around him to fire off a incredibly fast and powerful wave of energy. though the attack will almost always deplete most of Senri's own reishi in turn off causing the massive damage the attack itself is a powerful missile of energy that flies through everything in its wake with intense speed giving little time to react even if you see it as it obtains speeds equal to his lightray shot, before finally or when Senri will it, exploding causing a massive explosion, while being controlled by Rido however this attack can be used up to five times and still have energy left to spare
Blood line: This occurs when Senri is overtaken by his ancestor Dido in which case all his attacks increase in both power and strength to almost twice the original state as well, his own strength and speed also increases, when this happens Senri's eyes will either become red in one and grey in the other or completely red and Rido can only stay in control for 5 post or six at the maximum before releasing Senri which will usually cause the boy to almost always feint or loose consciousness afterwords
▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: Quincy: Vollständig ( Quincy:Complete )
Vollständig Name: rebirth
Vollständig Enchantments: Senri's movement time, reaction, and strength greatly increase as well as his attacks
Vollständig Description: cuts open up along Senri's arms and bleed into his bow as Rido fuses or takes over Senri for the while in the fight
Vollständig Ability: Senri's Blood mixes with his power's doubling his strength
Blood arrow: All of Senri's attack become mixed with a single drop of his own blood which then from that one drop engulfs the arrow. as a result of the mixture of the reishi from his won blood and the arrow the destructive power of a single shot becomes very fast and strong while all looking as if there made of blood.
Blood blade: Senri's katana once more is fused with his bow as well as his blood as it becomes cover is a bright red riashi while having blood flow along it, with this all his attack are now made of blood when he swings it and can even be controlled from his blade as long as its the blood made by his reishi or his own blood.
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Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2012 12:25 pm
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Full Name: : Earnest James Butcher.
Nickname: Just goes by Butcher.
True Age: 345
Age Appeared: 25
Birthdate: 12/29
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: English
Blood Type: A positive.
Sexuality: Hetero
Height: 6'4"
Weight: 185 (Naked)
Eye Color: Black
Hair Color: Black
Life View: "I treat every day like a great day, if ye have to kill a c**t. Well, thats life."
Personality: Butcher is quite the arrogant man. Always with a smile upon his face and a cheerful attitude towards just about everything. He won't take s**t from anyone, and if that includes a superior he's quite willing to call them a horrible name and snap their arm if such a chance presents itself. He is a good all around guy to everyone he meets though, not one for starting an arguement. He just likes things that get finished. He also enjoys showing others how to do things they don't quite know how to do. With them being placed right at the expense of his amusement. usually calling all of what they do "Bollocks" Until they get it right. None the less, he'll show them how to get it done once and right. He's a clean freak, more so than he is about making the mess. He can be really intimidating while standing there being silent. But he's a charmer when he talks, especially when he talks right. He's a proper gentleman when needed, and a complete b*****d the rest of the time. And well, that suits Butcher just fine.
Likes:
Cleanlieness- It's next to Shinigami-ness.
Women.
English things.
Soccer.
Cities.
The Human World.
Swing tunes.(Music in general)
His mates in Seireitei.
Order.
Tea Time.
Social parties.
Alcohol.
Cigars.
Class.
Pranks.
Violence.
Killing.
torture.
Interrogation.
Dislikes
Quincy.
Hollows.
Irish people.
Septics (Americans)
The country side.
Cows.
Fat people.
Squads five and twelve.
People putting their hands on him.
Division: Squad Two.
Rank: Unseated
Side: Seireitei
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While most of the documents containing to Butchers past are covered in dried blood. This humble mans story began in the green Isle. He is from a country that the sun never set on. A small town called Winchester in Southern England. Butcher's father was a baker, and he never knew his mother. The oldest of six kids. Butchers dad enjoyed drinking and sleeping with the wives of the town. And often shook Butcher down for any coin he obtained working the three jobs he worked. Butcher flunked out of school due to lack of attention and began working to help the war effort around the time world war two broke out, making guns and candles to supply the troops, and to light the subways for the people hiding under ground. His life (Along with most of his familys) ended when a German bomber, blew up his town.
Butcher eventually made it to Rukon, where he began to learn and become a bit more educated. He often worked with local authorities catching thieving kids and petty robbers in the slummy districts. He showed great promise in catching people like he was playing hide-and-seek. One day Butcher went too far. A man who paraded around the district cutting up young children under the name "Butcher" decided to give our ol' English lad a bit of trouble. Butcher trapped "The Butcher" in a small tool shed and tortured him for months. Butcher was found out and he killed "The Butcher" and left. He was on good terms with a few of the Shinigami and was told he had the potential to join their ranks.
Butcher was an ace in combat and studies but god aweful at kido and bakudou. He gave up on that. He also began to show quite the knack for obtaining information. By any means. Butcher was mocked and taunted by the seniors who thought Butcher "Too big for his britches." Butcher took abuse from them for a while. Until a few pictures and evidence of lewd, strange, and all around unplesant sights of these were thrown in their faces. They quickly left the school. Butcher graduated rather swimmingly from Shinigami school and made his way to squad two where they hoped to use his "Talents" for things pretaining to the squad.
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Reiatsu Color: Golden
Reiryoku Level: Weak
Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Practitioner Level
• Air Dash: Practitioner Level
• Shunpo: No Skills
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Hakuda: Practitioner Level
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Known Swordsmanship Styles:
• Zanjutsu: Practitioner Level
• Kendo: Practitioner Level
Reiryoku Techniques:
• Kido Spells: Practitioner Level
• Reiryoku Gathering: Practitioner Level
Other Techniques:
• Dashing: Practitioner Level
• Jumping: Practitioner Level
Strengths:
• catching people and hiding
• Winning (at any cost.)
Weaknesses:
• Kids (Butcher just can't raise a hand to a child)
• Kidou and bakudou.
Fears:
• Deep water.
• worms. (can't stand them)
• Poltergiests.
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▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo
Zanpakuto Name: Kemuri
Zanpakuto Location: Never leaves his hand.
Zanpakuto Appearance: It's just a cane sword. With a wooden hilt and sheath
Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.: Kemuri
Zanpakuto Sword Type: Average Katana
Zanpakuto Element: Water
▬▬┤|Shikai Release
Shikai Name: Kemuri
Shikai Incantation: "Conceal, Kemuri"
Shikai Description: Kemuri doesn't change its form or shape at all upon release. It still is just a sword. It instead surrounds Butcher in a cloud of smoke that extends about a fifty feet from Butcher in every direction as well as follows Butcher everywhere he goes. The mist is too thick for anyone too see through, though since it's his own ability Butcher can see through this mist His over all movement is faster and any sound normally made by Butcher is silenced. Butcher can only release and keep his Zanpakutou released if he holds his sword. If dropped or disarmed, the mist dissipates.
Shikai Ability:
[1]Kemuri's wish: The form of Butchers shikai makes not a fancy sword or overly powerful saw. No, It simply surrounds Butcher on all sides with a thick, white mist. Completely concealing Butcher. Butcher is the middle of the mist, and the mist follows him around where ever he moves, and keeps him in the center. The mist cannot be seen through. [unlocked]
[3] [Rank 2]: Doubles the field of the mists range. Still keeping Butcher in the center of the mist. [Sealed]
[2]Kemuri's Gift: Butcher is completely masked in the mist in everything but smell. His footsteps while walking or running doesn't make any noise. He is also undetectable Rieryoku wise. His prescence is totally masked in his shikai. Butcher can also move at a faster pace inside of the mist, as opposed to outside of the mist. Also Butcher being inside of his own weapons Shikai, is able to see like the mist isn't even there.[unlocked]
[4] [Rank 2]:Butcher can move double the pace while inside of the mist and also gets a slight boost in power while inside of the mist. [sealed]
[5]Kemuri's embrace: While inside of the mist. Whoever is caught inside is slowly pulled towards the center of the mist where Butcher stays. while the weapon is released. The pull is so slight, whoever is caught in the pull, can hardly ever tell it's even happening. [Sealed]
[6] [Rank 2]: The pull of the mist is now strong enough to be noticed. Anyone with weaker reiryoku levels is pulled harder.[Sealed]
▬▬┤|Bankai Release
Bankai Name: Mugen Kemuri
Bankai Incantation: "Cover the land with your prescence, Mugen Kemuri"
Bankai Description: Mugen Kemuri is essentially a really, really big version of regular Kemuri. It's size extends up to about five hundred feet in every direction, and has all the same properties as the shikai. Inside of the mist, Butcher gains a bonus to his overall speed and strength. Putting him on par with any captain or vice-captain as a bankai would normally do. Butchers cane sword changes its form to a simple hatchet like a Butcher's trademark weapon of choice. It has similar abilities and a few differences.
Bankai Ability:
[1]Mugen Kemuri's Musk: Butcher's strength and speed are doubled while in the mist, he is also muffled, almost exactly like the shikai form. Butcher makes no such noise inside of the mist, his footsteps are undetecteable while he is inside.
[4][Rank 2] Butchers strength and speed are enhanced even further while he stays in the mist, and he is now undetectable as far as his Rieryoku levels are concerned. Butcher is always the center of the mist. In addition, the mist doubles its size.
[2]Mugen Kemuri's Wrath: Mugen Kemuri initially takes the form of an axe, but that is not all that it is limited too. Mugen Kemuri can change its shape to accomidate any sort of torture device. And can take the shape of chains, rope, whips, bats, Brass knuckles. Any sort of painful handheld weapon Butcher so happens to want.
[3]Mugen Kemuri's Appetite: Mugen Kemuri Has the same pull that normal Kemuri. Drawing those who happen to be inside of the mist, towards Butcher. The pull is harder to resist the lower Rieryoku level you are. And if you're the same level rieryoku level or higher than Butcher, you will hardly notice you're even being pulled.[Sealed]
[5] Mugen Kemuri's speed: Anywhere In the mist Butcher is, he can show up and strike. By sheer means of becoming mist himself. But when ever he teleports to change places, his Rieryoku can be detected an instant before he appears. So right before he attacks, you can tell where he is.
[Sealed]
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Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2012 5:49 pm
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Full Name: Kenpachi Yamoto
Nickname: One Eyed Swordsman, Cyclops
True Age: 573
Age Appeared: 21
Birthdate: November 11th
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Japanese
Blood Type: O
Sexuality: Bisexual
Height: 202 cm (6'2")
Weight: 81 kg
Eye Color: Gray
Hair Color: Black and White
Life View: "If it can't try to kill you, it's boring. If you can't fight it, it's boring."
"Do your responsibilities, even if you hate them, and do it well, not half-assed."
Personality: Yamoto treats anything that's not related to combat boring and unnecessary of his attention, though he has a strong sense of duty that lets him do his Captain duties, even though he complains about it.
Likes:
Fighting
Training
Sparring
Winning
Sweets
Honesty
Dislikes
Unnecessary Work
Liars
Traitors
Losing
Bitter Things
Division: 11th
Rank: Captain (Approved by Diablo)
Side: Shinigami
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There wasn't anything special about Yamoto, five hundred seventy three years ago, he appeared in the district 79th district. Not necessarily the worst but it was next to the worst. He was immediately thrown into a world of chaos and death, very different from where he had died from. The young adult fought his way, tooth for a tooth, an eye for an eye, just to survive the brutal districts. He kept his surname of his family of where he came from, being of Japanese descent.
When he was alive, he was well a noble, but he was killed because of a bad blood between other nobles. Thrown into the cruel world of lower districts, he quickly made a name for himself, learning how to fight. Several years later, he came to be feared and infamous as the Shark, in any battle his enemies would be torn to shreds. His very presence would send people cowering. But . . . there was one man who always stood his ground when he faced Yamoto, meeting him eye to eye, the only one in two hundred years that Yamoto ever had respect for. The captain of the 11th Division. They talked, they sparred, the captain always ended up on top, defeating Yamoto and laughing at him.
Yamoto was an interesting person, his body was tough, made to endure hits but he was also very powerful, being able to use one hand to swing a heavy sword that was as tall as him, and capable of destroying buildings. Only one person was stronger than him but as a captain of the Gotei 13, he couldn't stay in the district all the time so Yamoto decided to follow him. For a time, he stayed out of trouble, causing trouble in a nicer law abiding area wouldn't be very good for him, no matter how much he liked to fight. But as the captain got busier, his patience wore thin.
Yamoto challenged the captain, they fought, but instead of the usual results, Yamoto won the challenge, killing the man. He didn't mean to kill him, but he had done so, in front of the men of Division 11. Not knowing what he had done, Yamoto was confused, the lieutenant at the time handed him the well worn coat, burying the body along with the other previous captains. They hated him at first, but they knew the unsaid law, the strongest is always the captain. Three hundred years later, Yamoto had accepted his role of being a captain of the Gotei 13, taking his responsibility seriously, always training, always getting stronger.
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Reiatsu Color: Crimson Red
Reiryoku Level: Very High
Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Advanced
• Air Dash: Advanced
• Shunpo: Advanced
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Hakuda: Expert
• Muay Thai - Advanced
Known Swordsmanship Styles:
• Zanjutsu: Expert
• Kendo: Advanced
Reiryoku Techniques:
• Kido Spells: Can't Use
• Reiryoku Gathering: Advanced
Other Techniques:
• Dashing: Advanced
• Jumping: Advanced
Strengths:
• Swordsmanship
• Hand to Hand Combat
Weaknesses:
• Bloodlust
• Not Able to use any kind of Kido
Fears:
• Defeat
• Caterpillars
• Inability to do Duty
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▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo
Zanpakuto Name: Shinku Same (Kurimuzonshāku or Crimson Shark)
Zanpakuto Location: Left Hip
Zanpakuto Appearance: Shinku Same
Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.: The Bandaged Man
Zanpakuto Sword Type: Katana
Zanpakuto Element: Fire
▬▬┤|Shikai Release
Shikai Name: Samekawa (Sharkskin)
Shikai Incantation: "Shred."
Shikai Description: The blade of the katana becomes serrated like a saw, causing any wounds that are made to become ripped and torn rather than a clean cut adding a sense of brutality and causing immense pain. The length of the blade stays the same, but the width and thickness of the blade grows by two centimeters.
Shikai Ability:
• Kiba o hikisaku (Tearing Fang) - Yamoto runs towards his target and slashes at the their torso, swings his arm once above his head and bring the blade down diagonally. The blade is serrated so it causes tearing of the flesh making the pain much more intense.
• Araumi (Riptide) - Yamoto swings his blade at his enemy's legs then
• Mikadzukikei (Crescent) - Yamoto swings his blade in a cresent shape. He starts from his feet, swings over his head, to behind him.
• Same Esa Kōgeki (Shark Bait Combo) - Yamoto punches with his left hand, steps forward and kicks, and then end with a over head swing with his blade down upon his opponent.
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Bankai Name: Nokogirihajō no hi (Serrated Fire)
Bankai Incantation: "Devour my foes, with teeth and flames."
"Eye for an eye, tooth for a tooth, let the flames burn all to ashes."
Bankai Description: The katana is no longer a katana, rather a large blade. The blade's edges are still serrated but now spew flames. The blade is tears rather than cuts. The flames will burn most materials to ashes and can cut through metals. The weakness of this is very cold water and ice in large amounts. The flames are useless if in a sub-zero temperature climate or in cold waters, in watery terrains, it could be used to Yamoto's advantage to turn the water into steam, making the area foggy/misty.
Bankai Ability:
• Hi kiba o hikisaku (Tearing Fire Fang) - Basically the same as Kiba o hikisaku but with an element of fire.
• Funka (Eruption) - Yamoto brings his blade above his head, pointed downwards, flames burst from the blade surrounding him, then sinks the blade into the ground causing a massive explosion. The longer he charges the attack, the stronger the explosion will be, has a high recoil if charged all the way (five minutes/posts), no recoil if not charged all the way.
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2012 12:08 pm
Sorry for the wait,
- Please remove all information in {brackets} they are not needed.
- If you are still going for a higher rank inform me and I will generate your skill/technique levels.
- Your True Quincy form is only achievable if you are in the group and hold a high position within that group. However you can leave it in for future ref. Simple label next to it: Not Achieved....
Please Quote me when these issues have been dealt with...
Sorry for the wait,
- Your Reiryoku level would Great
- The rest of your skills will be Generated by me:
Air Walk - Advance
Air Dash - Advance
Shunpo - Expert
Hakuda - Master
Zanjutsu - Master
Kendo - Expert
Kido - Novice
Reiryoku Gathering - Expert
Dashing - Master
Jumping - Adept
After these changes please Quote me!
Sorry for the wait,
- Please remove all {brackets} and information found within them.
- Also a minor error in the layout at the bottom, may have been caused when you removed a section. Please fix that.
- Please town down your overall Shikai. It is a bit too much to me. I completely understand the concept, however again it is a bit much to have a 100 foot wall of water.
- To add please give me more information about your Shikai techniques and the overall Shikai in greater details please.
- Bankai please put ((NOT ACHIEVED)) next to it please and please add more detail within the overall Bankai too. It seems to be lacking information about it in my sense of view.
Once you have done this please quote me to be reviewed again...
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2012 12:40 pm
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Full Name: Alexander Hartmann
Nickname: Alex, Al - san
True Age: 22
Age Appeared: 19 - 22
Birthdate: August 4th
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: American & German
Blood Type: AB-
Sexuality: Bi-sexual
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 182lbs
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Black
Life View:"Life is but an illusion created by man for man..."
Personality: Alex is a rather calm, quiet, and collective individual. He would rather avoid conflicts than become overall engaged in them. Due to this people seem to mistaken him as a cold individual that has little to say to his allies or opponents. However it is rather the opposite, he would gladly engage in a chat if one would give him the chance to. Many of his fellow Quincy seem to avoid him based upon this, despite his best effort to inform them he is not what he appears. Another thing many have noticed is that he always seems to have some form of Ice Cream in his mouth, the reason unknown to even His Majesty. Despite rumors that is to keep him from speaking "improper" words which in the past he has had problems with.
In battle Alex will waste no time in confronting an opponent. However taking a battle seriously is another matter. He has been known to toy or underestimate his opponents which usually leads to his superiors having to order him to take fights more seriously than usual.
Likes:
Ice Cream
His Majesty
Fellow Quincy
Animals
Classical Music
Dislikes
Sour Things
Loud Places
Idiots
Shinigami
Hollows
Fullbringers
Neutral Quincy
Long Fights
Side: Vandenreich
Rank: Soldier
Insignia: None
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Alex was born in Germany upon an American Embassy, to his American mother and German father. It was decided upon his birth, despite his mother's disapproval for a bit that he would be a German citizen. As this happened it was right away that his spiritual powers where noticed as he seemed to sense and see things even at birth that others normally would not.
As Alex grew he noticed that there were alot of people that others could not notice. Along with creatures later identified to him as Hollows. As he noticed this his mother and father began to train him in the ways of the Quincy. First he began with the very basic of bows that is formed from the well known cross of the Quincy. Despite his struggle to learn his basic, it was found that he was extremely potent in it as he was able to split his fathers arrow ( a veteran Quincy ) in two with little effort. His father seemed to fear his potent spiritual energy and reishi gathering that she forbidden him engaging in combat.
However as Alex turned 17 his father was killed by shinigami that were still bitter over the war many decades ago. His mother was gravely wounded which in terms caused him to reveal that he was indeed a quincy himself. The moment he had fired upon the shinigami he would leave his path in the Human World behind. In which case, he did so, destroying the Shinigami that killed his father and even after seeking help took the life of his mother.
At the age of now 22 Alex seems to be calm, however his hatred and bitterness towards shinigami and their allies remains full. He wants to join his majesty and the many other quincy in destroying the Shinigami again to attempt a war that will cause destruction and death. Alex wants to show Fullbringers, Shinigami, Hollows, and more that Quincy are far above and will stop at nothing to gain power. Even if he has to fully break way from his Human World life to do so..
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Reiatsu Color: Tangerine
Reiryoku Level: Weak
Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Practitioner Level
• Air Dash: Practitioner Level
• Hirenkyaku: No Skills
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Grappling: Practitioner Level
• Tae-Kwan-Do : Practitioner Level
Known Weapon Styles:
• Quincy Archery: Practitioner Level
• Quincy Marksmanship: Practitioner Level
Reiryoku Techniques:
• Reishi Absorption: Practitioner Level
Other Techniques:
• Dashing: Practitioner Level
• Jumping: Practitioner Level
Strengths:
• Close to Mid Combat
• Agility based Moves
Weaknesses:
• Brute Strength
• Dragged Fights
Fears:
• Meaningless death
• Death by Shinigami hands
• Complete eradication of quincy
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▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: The Bow
Cross Name: Krallen der Habicht ( ホークスのタロン ; Talons of the Hawk )
Cross Location: Left Wrist
Cross Appearance: Bracelet
Weapon Type: Basic Quincy Bow
Cross Type: Bracelet
▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: True Weapon
True Weapon Name: Krallen der Großen Habicht ( お鷹の爪 ; Talons of the Great Hawk ) [ Not Achieved ]
True Weapon Type: Throwing Knives
True Weapon Description: Instead of using reishi to form a bow like those of normal Quincy that have learned the very basic. Alex uses condensed reishi to create multiple mid sized throwing knives. These knives are can be formed in his hands or in a radius of three to five [ 3 - 5 ] feet around his person. Alex is capable of creating up to twenty -to- thirty [ 20 - 30 ] of these knives at a time as long as he has a source of Reishi within or around his body.
True Weapon Ability:
Ragan ( 雨 ; Shower )
- Alex releases his weapon above that of his target or targets. When give them commend or name of the attack his blades of energy will rain down upon his target. This is usually done to surprise or catch the target off guard. However by no means are they unstoppable or unavoidable.
Steigen ( 翔る ; Soar )
- Alex will send his reishi knives at his opponents at full speed or as fast as they will go. This will cause the weapons to stab and cut into the target if they make contact. Because of the sear number of them it is difficult for opponents to block or avoid them all. However like any attack they can be blocked and avoided with some minor difficulties.
Schreien ( 悲鳴 ; Screech )
- Alex as his blades surround his opponent from all sides as he holds and open palm up at them. When the blades have complete surround, Alex will clench his fist and the blades will fall or shot inward at the intended target. This is thought to be unavoidable, however there are several ways to block and avoid like any attack.
▬▬┤|Quincy Cross: Quincy: Vollständig ( Quincy: Complete )
Vollständig Name: Große Habicht des Lichts ( 光の大鷹 ; Great Hawk of Light )
Vollständig Enchantments: Not Yet Achieved
Vollständig Description: Not Yet Achieved
Vollständig Ability: Not Yet Achieved
None...
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▬▬┤|Your Technique List
▬▬┤|Quincy Techniques
• Basic Blut
• Blut Vene
• Blut Arterie
• Ransōtengai
• Keen Eyes
• Lock On
▬▬┤|Ginto Techniques
• None
▬▬┤|Custom Techniques
• None
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2012 1:17 pm
I appear to have been skipped due to my profile being on the last page. (Which is ironic since my character is supposed to be the invisible, easily forgotten type.)
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2012 3:48 pm
Sorry about that, Hmmmm, - Is that the only shikai ability? Are you not going to have overall branch the main ability off like techniques/ dances/ songs like some shinigami? If not that is your choice. - Your Shikai & Bankai needs an overall weakness, it seems to be extremely powerful. Like Aizen or Tousen's blade was to gain immunity of the his blades ability one had to touch the blade/ hilt in some way ( Shikai and Bankai ). - I have to deny your Bankai ability. In away it would seem a bit much to copy a techniques of others. Not only that it would cause too much of an issue that would create detest. I do apologize, I'm not targeting you...I'm currently thinking of the guild as a whole. Please quote me when you have made these changes or addressed them too me...
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2012 5:35 pm
Sorry for the wait,
- Please remove all {brackets} and information found within them.
- Also a minor error in the layout at the bottom, may have been caused when you removed a section. Please fix that.
- Please town down your overall Shikai. It is a bit too much to me. I completely understand the concept, however again it is a bit much to have a 100 foot wall of water.
- To add please give me more information about your Shikai techniques and the overall Shikai in greater details please.
- Bankai please put ((NOT ACHIEVED)) next to it please and please add more detail within the overall Bankai too. It seems to be lacking information about it in my sense of view.
Once you have done this please quote me to be reviewed again...I changed it up
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2012 7:49 pm
He has passed the sexiness test, but I'm not a profile mod heart
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2012 8:21 pm
Dainar Inferni Picture being drawn. ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Kenpachi Yamoto
Nickname: One Eyed Swordsman, Cyclops
True Age: 573
Age Appeared: 21
Birthdate: November 11th
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Japanese
Blood Type: O
Sexuality: Bisexual
Height: 202 cm (6'2")
Weight: 81 kg
Eye Color: Gray
Hair Color: Black and White
Life View: "If it can't try to kill you, it's boring. If you can't fight it, it's boring."
"Do your responsibilities, even if you hate them, and do it well, not half-assed."
Personality: Yamoto treats anything that's not related to combat boring and unnecessary of his attention, though he has a strong sense of duty that lets him do his Captain duties, even though he complains about it.
Likes:
Fighting
Training
Sparring
Winning
Sweets
Honesty
Dislikes
Unnecessary Work
Liars
Traitors
Losing
Bitter Things
Division: 11th
Rank: Captain (Approved by Diablo)
Side: Shinigami
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There wasn't anything special about Yamoto, five hundred seventy three years ago, he appeared in the district 79th district. Not necessarily the worst but it was next to the worst. He was immediately thrown into a world of chaos and death, very different from where he had died from. The young adult fought his way, tooth for a tooth, an eye for an eye, just to survive the brutal districts. He kept his surname of his family of where he came from, being of Japanese descent.
When he was alive, he was well a noble, but he was killed because of a bad blood between other nobles. Thrown into the cruel world of lower districts, he quickly made a name for himself, learning how to fight. Several years later, he came to be feared and infamous as the Shark, in any battle his enemies would be torn to shreds. His very presence would send people cowering. But . . . there was one man who always stood his ground when he faced Yamoto, meeting him eye to eye, the only one in two hundred years that Yamoto ever had respect for. The captain of the 11th Division. They talked, they sparred, the captain always ended up on top, defeating Yamoto and laughing at him.
Yamoto was an interesting person, his body was tough, made to endure hits but he was also very powerful, being able to use one hand to swing a heavy sword that was as tall as him, and capable of destroying buildings. Only one person was stronger than him but as a captain of the Gotei 13, he couldn't stay in the district all the time so Yamoto decided to follow him. For a time, he stayed out of trouble, causing trouble in a nicer law abiding area wouldn't be very good for him, no matter how much he liked to fight. But as the captain got busier, his patience wore thin.
Yamoto challenged the captain, they fought, but instead of the usual results, Yamoto won the challenge, killing the man. He didn't mean to kill him, but he had done so, in front of the men of Division 11. Not knowing what he had done, Yamoto was confused, the lieutenant at the time handed him the well worn coat, burying the body along with the other previous captains. They hated him at first, but they knew the unsaid law, the strongest is always the captain. Three hundred years later, Yamoto had accepted his role of being a captain of the Gotei 13, taking his responsibility seriously, always training, always getting stronger.
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Reiatsu Color: Crimson Red
Reiryoku Level: Great
Known Foot Techniques:
• Air Walk: Advanced
• Air Dash: Advanced
• Shunpo: Expert
Known Hand-to-Hand Styles:
• Hakuda: Master
• Muay Thai - Advanced
Known Swordsmanship Styles:
• Zanjutsu: Master
• Kendo: Expert
Reiryoku Techniques:
• Kido Spells: Can't Use
• Reiryoku Gathering: Expert
Other Techniques:
• Dashing: Master
• Jumping: Adept
Strengths:
• Swordsmanship
• Hand to Hand Combat
Weaknesses:
• Bloodlust
• Not Able to use any kind of Kido
Fears:
• Defeat
• Caterpillars
• Inability to do Duty
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▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo
Zanpakuto Name: Shinku Same (Kurimuzonshāku or Crimson Shark)
Zanpakuto Location: Left Hip
Zanpakuto Appearance: Shinku Same
Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.: The Bandaged Man
Zanpakuto Sword Type: Katana
Zanpakuto Element: Fire
▬▬┤|Shikai Release
Shikai Name: Samekawa (Sharkskin)
Shikai Incantation: "Shred."
Shikai Description: The blade of the katana becomes serrated like a saw, causing any wounds that are made to become ripped and torn rather than a clean cut adding a sense of brutality and causing immense pain. The length of the blade stays the same, but the width and thickness of the blade grows by two centimeters.
Shikai Ability:
• Kiba o hikisaku (Tearing Fang) - Yamoto runs towards his target and slashes at the their torso, swings his arm once above his head and bring the blade down diagonally. The blade is serrated so it causes tearing of the flesh making the pain much more intense.
• Araumi (Riptide) - Yamoto swings his blade at his enemy's legs then
• Mikadzukikei (Crescent) - Yamoto swings his blade in a cresent shape. He starts from his feet, swings over his head, to behind him.
• Same Esa Kōgeki (Shark Bait Combo) - Yamoto punches with his left hand, steps forward and kicks, and then end with a over head swing with his blade down upon his opponent.
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▬▬┤|Bankai Release
Bankai Name: Nokogirihajō no hi (Serrated Fire)
Bankai Incantation: "Devour my foes, with teeth and flames."
"Eye for an eye, tooth for a tooth, let the flames burn all to ashes."
Bankai Description: The katana is no longer a katana, rather a large blade. The blade's edges are still serrated but now spew flames. The blade is tears rather than cuts. The flames will burn most materials to ashes and can cut through metals. The weakness of this is very cold water and ice in large amounts. The flames are useless if in a sub-zero temperature climate or in cold waters, in watery terrains, it could be used to Yamoto's advantage to turn the water into steam, making the area foggy/misty.
Bankai Ability:
• Hi kiba o hikisaku (Tearing Fire Fang) - Basically the same as Kiba o hikisaku but with an element of fire.
• Funka (Eruption) - Yamoto brings his blade above his head, pointed downwards, flames burst from the blade surrounding him, then sinks the blade into the ground causing a massive explosion. The longer he charges the attack, the stronger the explosion will be, has a high recoil if charged all the way (five minutes/posts), no recoil if not charged all the way.
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2012 8:24 pm
Approved, however other Admins can overrule me.... Also I will promote you to crew to make changes needed to the 11th Division area...
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2012 8:58 pm
Yes im still in the group( im still in the group right rain? eek ) and is it my Vollständig and true weapon, or just one? and ok ill remove the brackets right away
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2012 9:22 pm
eskuse me surprised I made the edits. (Not trying to be a pain in the arse mad )
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2012 9:28 pm
I saw I was going over profiles in another guild please give me time.... You have a few errors in the layout itself. Please fix that them and after that you are approved
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