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 Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 2:45 am
Owwin Zephyrkitty [Ignore this post]Owwin What could I do to make this more akin to Haru's and Monte's? This is the best shirt I could find for this hat. Do these shoes match? Mizu has matching shoes and Monte doesn't, but I think it would help with your Ranger. I'd also say that the Wingding would work better if it was black; your avi doesn't have a lot of white, so it stands out too much. Otherwise, the other two have bracelets and wings. Those are more towards the brown green tint of orange, I just don't like how it looks with the hat. Also I can see what you mean with the wingding. I was thinking about doing that. Thanks. EDIT: Shoot bracelets don't work with these gloves. Cuz I'm pretty sure you won't see it in the spam can.
Tis your Orange Ranger Change it in any way you deem necessary.
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 12:37 pm
*Looks back through posts*
So I have to rate...Owwin?
8/10
I like it, but it needs more orange. If there was any way to subtly mix orange in with the black in areas, I'd take it.
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Sharkbutt The Orgiastic Crew
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 12:44 pm
7//10
I like the overall idea, but it kinda seems disjointed....fragmenty. Know what I mean?
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 2:23 pm
0/10 White is mine! I WILL FIGHT YOU D<
6.5/10
I get the half-and-half idea, but it feels really unbalanced right now. You should either add more white to the top to make the contrast stronger, or add more white to the bottom and balance it more.
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 2:25 pm
Zephyrkitty 0/10 White is mine! I WILL FIGHT YOU D<6.5/10 I get the half-and-half idea, but it feels really unbalanced right now. You should either add more white to the top to make the contrast stronger, or add more white to the bottom and balance it more. *Skip me* I tried, But I can't find anything! gonk
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:31 pm
9/10. I think it is really great and matched and balanced but there is that little bit of red and it is just screaming at me.
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:56 pm
10/10
I can really see nothing to improve. And I do like how the colors match.
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 7:38 pm
9/10
That actually works incredibly well.
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Sharkbutt The Orgiastic Crew
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 11:11 pm
9/10, sexy. Cap's a little off but you probably already knew that.
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Posted: Mon Oct 11, 2010 1:34 am
9/10
YOU LOST A POINT FOR NOT CHOOSING AN EXISTING FACTION.
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problematic briefcase Crew
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Posted: Mon Oct 11, 2010 1:53 am
YEAH WELL YOU LOST ALL 10 FOR NOT CHOOSING COOKIE'S
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Posted: Mon Oct 11, 2010 1:58 am
Lady Psycho Sexy YEAH WELL YOU LOST ALL 10 FOR NOT CHOOSING COOKIE'S
WHAT? YES I- I MEAN, s**t.
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problematic briefcase Crew
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Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 3:53 am
9/10
Arms seem bare, but a great avi nonetheless.
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Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 2:38 pm
6/10. There is just so much going on, so much clutter and so many colors.
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Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2010 2:46 pm
8/10, the top needs more white. Maybe the White Wool Top? That way you still have room to add a shirt for layering if you so choose.
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