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Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 6:16 pm


Fan Fics AND Coffee?! You must be in Heaven!
PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2007 8:41 pm


ok here is chapter 4! this one is told through several people so pay attention or you might get konfuzed! lol xd i typed this on up on the spot. i hope yall like it.
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Chapter #4: Amber Alert!


~~Franks POV~~

Its lunch, Im in the cafeateria, but i got no money. All my cash is in my bag! maybe Mikey will loan my come cash. What perfect timing hes in the lunch line right now. score! "the buddy-ol-pal!" i said as i put my hand on his shoulder. "how much do you need?" mikey asked with a grin. I guess i must say that alot when I need money. Hmmmm.... "Just a dollar or two" i said shaking him a bit. "PLEEEEEEEEEAASE! WITH SUGAR AND-"
"OK" he yelled put 2 quarters in my hand.
"What ony 50 cents but I need more!!!" i whined
"I gave you some money yesterday to but pop rocks!"
"Oh yeah, you did"


THEY WERE IN MY BAG! Man, i need to find that girl!

"hey mikey, have you seen this girl?" I said as I showed him Creeds ID card.
"is it a amber alert?" he said with dumb smile
i just gave him a 'cmon r-tard' look.
"Yeah shes in my algebra class, she got into a arguement with some girl, that was picking on her, today." mikey said. "why?"
"We got our bags switched up while we were in the hall, long story." i tod him. can you tell me if you see her"
"of course"

Then i went to find some more cash. maybe Garerd, or Ray could float me a loan?

~~Mikeys POV~~

After Frank left, I desided the food the cafeateria was more gross looking than normal. If only they had a starbucks in the cafeateria.... But they didnt so i went to the vending mechines. Hmmmmm... Coke, Dr. Pepper, or Sun Kist? Ill go with Dr. Pepper. I got my quarters out of my pocket, and put then in the machine.
"Dr. Pepper please!" i said as i press the big Dr.Pepper button. "Hey, no soda?"

I got riped off!

I started to kick the machine with all my might! "stupid thing give me my money back!"

"no, no, you have to kick it like this!" a vioce said
just then a girl kicked the soda machine with kung-fu ! Then the machine spat out two dollars and 3 Dr.Peppers!
"SWEET!" I said, my vioce squeaked like it was changeing. haha. "here ya go" I gave her a soda in thanks for helping me.
"thank you" she said with a big sweet smile.

Then it hit me.

"wait, your Creed, right?" i said trying to make my voice not squeak.
"yeah"
she nodded
"my friend Frank wants to see you real quick"
"yeah, Iv been looking for him"
"Ill take you to him"
"ok"

We started down the hallway to go to Frank. I wonder how he met her. She is way cuter than in the ID picture...

~~ Creeds POV ~~

This cute guy that I helped in the hall knew Frank and know hes takinh me to him. We went to some lunch tables outside then i saw Frank sitting with a bunch of guy at a table.
"hey!" Mikey called
Frank looked over and saw us, the look on his face was price-less! He jumped from the table ran to us and took the bag as if he hadnt seen me or Mikey.
"POP ROCKS!" Frank screamed as he dug through the bag on the ground.
"um... Frank? I found Creed" Mikey said sheepishly
He stoped in the middle of hugging the bad of pop rocks and jumped up off the ground.
"haha ... uh.... hey i got your bag, follow me."
I nodded and he took me over to the table were he was sitting.
he handed me my bag and then he ripped open the bag of pop rocks. I looked into my bag and noticed he had eaten all my gum. thanks alot, Frank!
anyways
"Thank you, well I guess Ill see you" I waved and turned to walk away.
"well, you could hang with us for a while. I mean, if you want" Mikey said
I turned back to them and thought for a minute. "ok, whats up?" I said as i put down my stuff.

It turned out we that the group of guys and me had alot in commin. we all liked kickball, Garerd and I both loved art, Ray and I both loved video games, Mikey and I like to read magazines, and Frank and I both like to make others laugh! In the middle of Mikey and I trading comics the Bell rang, telling us to go back to class.
"How about we meet up after school?" I asked
they all agreed and Ray even told me he would give me a ride home!

ROCK ON!


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thats chapter 4 for ya! i update soon. whee

carrieXchaos


I_am_his_Boo

PostPosted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 5:14 am


Great Update. More Please
PostPosted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 5:58 am


Yay! An update! More please.

[x] Natasha [x]


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 7:19 am


MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PostPosted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 5:01 pm


im sorry ill get to a update soon sweatdrop i havnt had time latly...

carrieXchaos


iRawrablez

PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 7:04 am


UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!......please 3nodding
PostPosted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 10:34 pm


ok heres my update! Bob comes in
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Chapter #5


About a couple of days later after they met...

~~ Garerd's POV ~~

Mikey and I were standing by the flag pole after school, waiting for the others.
"Can we give Creed a ride home?" asked mikey "she told me she walks to school and back, that must really suck."
"You'll have to ask Ray he's the one with the car" I answered.
"ok"
We stood there for a few minutes waiting, then Creed and Frank walked up.
"hey, whats up?" Creed said with a smile
"nothing really, we were waiting for yall and Ray." I said
"hey guys" Ray said as he walked up.
"Ray, can you give Creed a ride home with us?" Mikey asked
"I would be glad to" Ray said "but we'r going to stop by a friends house"
"OK! Thank you! but really I can walk home-"
but before she could finish her sentence they Frank and I grabed her arms and pulled her to the car.
"Geez! we gave you a invite, We want you to come with us!" Frank siad as he pushed me into the car.
"Ok! OK! but if you ask me this looks more like a kidnapping than a invitation for a ride home" Creed said.

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We pulled up to a house a short distance from the school.
"so who lives here anyways?" Creed asked
"owr friend Bob, he's been sick so we are gonna check up on him" Ray told her.
"oOOOoo"
The group let themslves in and walking in through the kichen to the living room. There lie Bob on the couch, with a bunch of pillows and blankets.

~~ Bobs POV ~~~

Man, Im burning up. My Fever must be back up... Why is there so much crap on TV during school? its all soup opras...

Just then all my friends from school walked in. Gared, Mikey, Ray, and Frank... and some really hot girl. YES! the ultament get well present woohoo!

"Hey Bob, how are ya?" Garerd said.
"ok, why did yall come?" I said "and said yall could come in here!"
"we wanted to check on you, it was Frank's idea" Mikey said as he pionted at Frank
"oooh well ok, so how much homework do I have?'
"a whole crap load"
"...damn..."
"so how is your fever?"
"fine"
"doubt it" said Mikey as he walked into the other room to find a thermoniter.
"so... who is she?" I asked
"Im Creed" the girl said

After that, they all made me more comfortablke, even though I told them I was fine. They made me soup, got me a drink, put in a movie, gave me meds and we visited till I fell asleep. That was only because Ray started to talk about what I missed at school... That Creed girl is really cool. She stoped Mikey and Frank from giving me the wrong pilles, I count that as nice. My fever is gone now, maybe Ill be able to go to school tomorow.

~~Creeds POV~~

Bob fell asleep so we all left. He seems to try to act all tough like 'I take crap from no one!' but we were just trying to help. He was still nice though... Mikey and Frank nearly killed him. they tried to give him the wrong meds so I hav=d to step in. What if I wasnt there? Fwoo!

~~ threed Person POV~~~

From then on Garerd, Frank, Mikey, Bob, Ray, and Creed became Best Friends. They all stood up for each other and kept a look out for each other. This was the most solid group of friend Creed had ever been in to her it was all to good to be true. Could that be the down fall of the group?
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I know thing are slow moving right now but things will heat up, I promise! this is my 1st fanfic to so have mercey lol. but i hoped yall liked it.

carrieXchaos


iRawrablez

PostPosted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 2:22 pm


Nice update!!!! i enjoyed it!!! mrgreen mrgreen heart
PostPosted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 9:29 am


Love it update more please.

I_am_his_Boo


iRawrablez

PostPosted: Mon Jul 16, 2007 6:08 pm


HURRY UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE.........POST ANOTHER NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! crying crying crying crying crying crying cry crying gonk xp
PostPosted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 9:38 am


sorry iv been grounded and on vacation too. but im back so ill update very soon sweatdrop

carrieXchaos


Ieros Baby567

PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 7:55 am


Okay, you said in the beggining that you were dyslexic? I detect none of that my dear you seem just as good as any of us. From now on you are totally cool because it's like you've over come the dyslexia so yeah...
PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:17 pm


FINALY! i have time to update lol. sorry it took me so long iv been busy

setting after school, by the flag pole
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Chapter #6


"WHAT DO YOU MEAN THE CARS BROKEN!?"
"it just craped out this morning, sorry." ray told frank "why are you freaking out anyway?"
"my favorite show comes on in 10 minutes!"
"oh.... that sucks. what is it? cops?"
"no its Hamtar-" Frank stoped talking
"Hamtaro?! you were freaking out because you were gonna miss Hamtaro?!"
"... er I was gonna record it for a friend, okay?"
"right, whatever"
"ITS TRUE!!!"
"prove it"
"FINE!"
"you dont have to yell, you know."
"IM NOT YELLING!"
"yes you are"
"hello, why are yall yelling?" Cree said as she put down her bag.
~~Franks POV~~

Crees might watch hamtaro!
"hey cree, Im sorry but im not going to be able to record hamtaro for you seeing rays car isnt working right" I said to cree. this better work or ill never live this down!
"thats Okay" Cree said with a grin. maybe she was use to me using her as a cover up. Ray slaped this hand to his forehead almost to say 'damn you frank'
"so what do we do know?" I asked
"I guess we take the bus home: Ray siad with a frug"
"the bus left to minutes ago" Cree said looking at the clock on her phone. Ray then again slapped his hand on his forhead.

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After a few minutes of waiting Bob, Mikey and Gerard showed up. We told them we didnt have a ride home and we began to debate what to do.

"we could go to the arcade, it only, like, a block away and a shortcut through a alley" Ray suggested
"Nah, I dont think any of us have enough money" Bob said
"comic book store?" Garerd said
"again... no money" I said
"my house?" Cree said.
we all agreed. Cree called her mom and asked her to let us come over. after begginf for a few minutes her mom agreed and picked us all up.

Crees moms name was Scarlet. It was kinda ironic because her car and her shirt was red. we all piled into her small dented car and drove to a near by appartment complex.

"COOL! they got a pool!" bob siad
"and a hot tub" Mikey added as they got out of the car

~~~ Crees POV ~~~

OH MY GOD! MIKEY AND BOB IN BATHING SUITS ?! they must be so pale! Iv never seen then wear shorts before and iv only rarely seen them wear short sleaves! Gerard started to laugh at the face i was making.

"cmon" mom said

we led them to the elevater and we all got in except for me. I have a phobia of elevaters. ever since I got traped in one when I was 9. I just cant stand being in one now. I get shaky and my heart starts to race, THE WORKS!

so I climbed 4 storys of stairs TOTALY WORTH IT! and met up with the others who were already in my families apartment, being served snacks by my mom.

"you climbed up 5 stories of stairs?" Gerard said as I walking in from the hall
"yep"
"why?"
"I hate elevaters"
"oh"
"can we play guitar hero?" Ray asked
"sure" I responded but the game had already turned on by bob
"help yourself" I added
"do you have Dungeons and dragons?" gerard asked
"yeah" i nodded
"can I be the dungeon master?!" Mikey said
"y-yeah" i nodded again
"YESSSSSS!" mikey siad with a fist up in the air. I went over to the closet to pull out the ADVANCED Dungeons and Dragons/
"awesome, advanced D&D. even better." Mikey said with now Two fists up in the air
"Can I play?" Ray pleaded
"of coarse" I said
"can I go to the tavern?" ray said Mikey then placed his head on the table in greaf
" YES Ray, you can go to the Tavern"
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this chapter purpose was strictly for laughs ha ha
Franky likes hamtaro WHO KNEW!

carrieXchaos


carrieXchaos

PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 2:20 pm


Ieros Baby567
Okay, you said in the beggining that you were dyslexic? I detect none of that my dear you seem just as good as any of us. From now on you are totally cool because it's like you've over come the dyslexia so yeah...


its because im not writting the story for yall to see. my notes for writting the story are Horrible! lol but im happy it doesnt show to much on the web. YAY! people who think im coool: 1 *random crowd goes wild*
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