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 Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 9:38 pm
Damn! This guy sounds fun, in the "I want my character to meet yours so you can annoy 'im." kind of way. Very well thought out!
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 8:42 am
Peter sounds like he'd be very very interesting in this setting xD;;
His profile seems well developed, and the Nue seems to be a good match for him =O *thumbs up!* <3
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 9:08 am
Thanks, you two. Happy to hear it! :'D
And what have we here? A Peter mule. What fun are Mules? Next up is a decent portrait or something. Pencils and Papers, Ahoy!
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Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2007 12:25 pm
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 2:15 pm
Hi Iee! You offered to trade crits, so here you are. No worries about taking your time, either :3
The one thing I'd really like to see is appearance ^^ Would you be against adding a description of how he looks? You do have ref pics - and they help - but I guess it's the specifics that really bring a character together visually in your mind. Like their posture, the way they keep their hair, the state of their hands, etc.
What does he think of other people? Well, if he even thinks of them at all XD This is just a curiosity thing. If he actually got the hint that they were upset at the way he was treating him, would he care or just be like, 'i'm better than you, so whatever' or even none of the above.
Trying to think of suggestions on this one is tough, dang it. Peter is a great, great character and it sounds like he'd spice up the RP quite a lot xd Conflicts ahoy! I'd like to read over the thread once again and see if there's anything else, but right now it looks good. <3
Oh, one more thing. Another suggestion. The elements you chose are pretty self-explanatory, but if you're ever bored and feel like adding more stuff to your thread, you could always explain why you chose 'em~
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2007 7:40 pm
:] I thank you kindly for taking me up on that offer as well. I've been fishing for things to touch up on, and you've definitely given me some ideas of what to do and what to add into this thread. I'll definitely be adding in a physical description section to the profile, and see if I can't touch up on Peter's reactions in the personality post, because that's always fun to work on. The Element idea is awesome too! -glees- Some fun stuff to add. Really. Thank you for throwing those ideas in my direction! Gives me some good stuff to work with!
Conflicts ahoy, alright! xd Juicy, tender, and scrumptious conflict.
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Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 7:20 am
There we go now, everything updated. -whistles-
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Posted: Fri Jul 06, 2007 6:47 pm
Great job on the seal! biggrin
And thanks for the appearance description. *thumbs up* 'twas fun to read xD
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